人际温情善良互助类读后续写 -超市里那个买不起果味Pudding的爸爸，让我想起了我的父亲 讲义-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，围绕情节构思、情感表达、语言运用三大考查要求，按“文本分析-续写技巧-语言提升”逻辑层次展开，通过考点梳理（如故事山结构、伏笔冲突分析）、方法指导（高级词汇替换、地道搭配积累）、真题训练（联考真题及多版本范文）等环节，帮助学生构建续写思维框架和表达体系。 讲义创新采用苏格拉底式提问培养思维品质，如通过分析“pudding”伏笔引导学生理解情节关联，结合动作、环境、心理描写专项训练提升语言能力。设置基础巩固（替换词积累）、能力提升（范文仿写）分层练习，配合即时反馈，有效培养学生逻辑思维和语言运用能力，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供清晰路径。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 金太阳·河南省2026届高三下学期3月开学联考[标记版] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I drove to the supermarket to buy snacks for a family party. It was an autumn evening, and the supermarket was busy. As I walked to the self-checkout, I saw a young father in front of me. He wore old work clothes with paint on them and looked very tired(刻画人物). A little boy, about four years old, held his leg tightly. The father also carried a baby who was quietly using a dummy(安抚奶嘴). The father was having a hard time. He tried to scan his items with one hand, while stopping his son from touching the screen. The baby in his arms kept moving. The people behind me were all looking at their phones. It felt lonely, like many evenings in the city. For some reason, this father made me think of my own dad, who would come home late from work and leave snacks by my bed when I was young. After I finished scanning my things, I watched the father. He kept picking up a nice fruit pudding and then putting it back. His son looked up and said softly, “Dad, my teacher said this pudding has real juice.” The father touched the boy’s head and rubbed his own rough hands together. Suddenly, the baby started to cry. The father tried to hold him better, and the pudding fell from his shaking hand. At the same time, I heard someone behind me make a quiet, unhappy sound. I walked over, picked up the pudding, and saw his shopping basket. It had only simple things inside: bread, eggs, and some milk powder. His face turned red. “My son has a school party tomorrow...” he said quietly, but then the baby cried louder. The little boy pulled at his father’s old pants, which had a small hole in the knee. Seeing this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt I had to do something. I walked up and touched the father’s shoulder. “Let me help,” I said. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: At first, he looked surprised. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, he called me. 金太阳·河南省2026届高三下学期3月开学联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I drove to the supermarket to buy snacks for a family party. It was an autumn evening, and the supermarket was busy. As I walked to the self-checkout, I saw a young father in front of me. He wore old work clothes with paint on them and looked very tired. A little boy, about four years old, held his leg tightly. The father also carried a baby who was quietly using a dummy(安抚奶嘴). The father was having a hard time. He tried to scan his items with one hand, while stopping his son from touching the screen. The baby in his arms kept moving. The people behind me were all looking at their phones. It felt lonely, like many evenings in the city. For some reason, this father made me think of my own dad, who would come home late from work and leave snacks by my bed when I was young. After I finished scanning my things, I watched the father. He kept picking up a nice fruit pudding and then putting it back. His son looked up and said softly, “Dad, my teacher said this pudding has real juice.” The father touched the boy’s head and rubbed his own rough hands together. Suddenly, the baby started to cry. The father tried to hold him better, and the pudding fell from his shaking hand. At the same time, I heard someone behind me make a quiet, unhappy sound. I walked over, picked up the pudding, and saw his shopping basket. It had only simple things inside: bread, eggs, and some milk powder. His face turned red. “My son has a school party tomorrow...” he said quietly, but then the baby cried louder. The little boy pulled at his father’s old pants, which had a small hole in the knee. Seeing this, I felt I had to do something. I walked up and touched the father’s shoulder. “Let me help,” I said. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: At first, he looked surprised. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, he called me. 一、读后续写类型与构思 1. 文章类型判断 类型 判断依据 本文体现 人际温情善良互助类（助人为乐型） 情节围绕人与人之间的善意互动展开 “I felt I had to do something.” 生活故事型（城市生活片段） 日常生活场景：超市、家庭、孩子 supermarket self-checkout 情感升华型结尾 小善举带来长期回响 “A few weeks later, he called me.” 核心主题：善意 / empathy / kindness / 城市中的温暖 2. 续写构思思路 （1）第一段任务 段首：At first, he looked surprised. 本段主要任务： 父亲对帮助产生犹豫 “我”说明原因（共情：想起自己的父亲） 帮忙付款或买下布丁 父亲表达感激 情感升温 情节目标： 解决眼前困难。 （2）第二段任务 段首：A few weeks later, he called me. 本段任务：父亲打电话 说明近况或感谢 布丁或善举带来的影响 善意被传递 情感升华 情节目标：升华主题：kindness spreads 3. 续写布局（经典结构） 段落 内容 情绪 第一段 帮助父亲，解决困难 同情 → 温暖 第二段 几周后回访，善意回响 感动 → 升华 4. 续写设计技巧 （1）巧妙呼应原文细节 可回扣： 原文细节 续写呼应 fruit pudding 带去学校派对 teacher said real juice 孩子开心 rough hands 辛苦父亲 my own dad 共情原因 （2）避免常见错误 错误 原因 捐很多钱 不符合真实情境 新人物出现 违背续写规则 情节过于戏剧 不符合生活故事 二、故事山结构分析 故事山（Story Mountain） 阶段 内容 开端 超市排队 发展 父亲带两个孩子很困难 冲突 想买布丁却犹豫 高潮 布丁掉落 转折 决定帮助 续写高潮 接受帮助 结局 几周后回响 三、文本深度分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 勤劳疲惫的父亲 He wore old work clothes with paint on them 情感层次 同情 → 共情 → 决定帮助 I felt I had to do something 关键情节点 布丁掉落 the pudding fell from his shaking hand 语言特色 简洁朴素，生活化 simple things inside: bread, eggs 关键词分析 pudding / father / tired / help Let me help 心理描写 narrator 的共情 this father made me think of my own dad 动作描写 父亲艰难购物 tried to scan with one hand 环境描写 城市孤独感 It felt lonely 隐含主题 kindness in city life I felt I had to do something 情感转折 决定帮助 I walked up and touched the father’s shoulder 空间转换 超市 → 电话联系 supermarket → later call 时间过渡 当下 → 几周后 A few weeks later 四、伏笔与冲突分析 1. 伏笔 伏笔 作用 想起自己的父亲 解释帮助动机 pudding 后文情节核心 school party 购买布丁理由 rough hands 体现辛苦 2. 冲突 核心冲突：父亲想满足孩子但经济困难 表现：反复拿起放下布丁 购物篮很简单 穿旧衣服 3. 隐含线索 线索 指向 city loneliness 社会冷漠 narrator empathy 善意 pudding 父爱 4. 解决方案 合理方案：帮父亲买布丁 / 帮忙付款 并不是“施舍”，而是“理解”。 五、苏格拉底式提问（课堂引导） 教师可这样一步步问学生： 情节理解 Why did the narrator notice the father in the supermarket? What difficulties was the father facing? Why did he keep picking up and putting back the pudding? 情感分析 Why did the narrator think of his own dad? What feeling does the sentence “It felt lonely” show? 冲突识别 What is the main problem in the story? Why didn’t the father buy the pudding? 续写思考 If you were the narrator, how would you help him? How might the father react at first? 第二段构思 Why would the father call a few weeks later? What good news might he share? 主题提升 What message does the story want to tell us? 答案：Small acts of kindness can brighten someone’s life. 六、读后续写动作、环境、心理描写 1 动作描写 He hesitated for a moment before reaching out to take the pudding. 他犹豫了一下才伸手接过布丁。 The little boy tightened his grip on his father's leg. 小男孩更紧地抱住了父亲的腿。 The father bent down and gently picked up the fallen pudding. 父亲弯下腰轻轻捡起掉落的布丁。 He rubbed his rough hands together awkwardly. 他局促地搓着粗糙的双手。 I stepped forward and placed the pudding back into his basket. 我走上前把布丁放回他的购物篮。 The baby wriggled restlessly in his arms. 婴儿在他怀里不安地扭动。 The father lowered his head and nodded quietly. 父亲低下头轻轻点了点头。 I gently patted his shoulder to comfort him. 我轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀安慰他。 The boy clapped his hands with excitement. 小男孩兴奋地拍起手来。 He waved goodbye before leaving the supermarket. 离开超市前他挥手告别。 2 心理描写 My heart softened at the sight of the tired father. 看到这位疲惫的父亲，我的心一下子柔软了。 I suddenly felt a strong urge to help him. 我突然产生了强烈的想帮助他的冲动。 A wave of sympathy washed over me. 一阵同情涌上心头。 For a moment, I saw my own father in him. 那一刻，我仿佛在他身上看到了自己的父亲。 I couldn't ignore the quiet struggle in front of me. 我无法忽视眼前这份沉默的挣扎。 His embarrassed expression made me feel even more determined to help. 他尴尬的表情让我更加坚定地想帮助他。 I wondered how hard life must be for him. 我不禁想他的生活一定很艰难。 A warm feeling spread through my chest. 一股温暖在我心中蔓延。 I felt grateful that I had the chance to help someone. 我很感激自己有机会帮助别人。 The moment filled me with quiet happiness. 那一刻让我感到一种安静的幸福。 3 环境描写 The supermarket was filled with the soft humming of machines. 超市里充满机器轻微的嗡嗡声。 The evening light filtered through the glass doors. 傍晚的光透过玻璃门洒进来。 The checkout area was crowded but strangely silent. 收银区很拥挤却出奇地安静。 People stood in line, staring at their phones. 人们排着队低头看手机。 Outside, the autumn wind gently rustled the leaves. 外面秋风轻轻吹动树叶。 The bright lights of the supermarket made everything look clear and cold. 超市明亮的灯光让一切看起来清晰而冷清。 A faint smell of bread floated in the air. 空气中飘着淡淡的面包香味。 The noisy beeping of scanners echoed around us. 扫码器的滴滴声在周围回响。 The long line slowly moved forward. 长长的队伍慢慢向前移动。 The city outside seemed busy yet distant. 外面的城市看起来忙碌却疏离。 4高级替换词总结 表示“看”的高级表达 普通词 高级词 look gaze look at glance at see notice watch observe stare fix one's eyes on 例句He glanced at the pudding and quickly looked away. 表示“说” 普通词 高级词 say remark say softly whisper say happily exclaim say nervously murmur say politely reply 表示“开心” 普通词 高级词 happy delighted very happy overjoyed excited thrilled pleased satisfied glad cheerful 表示“帮助” 普通词 高级词 help assist help someone lend a hand help quickly rush to help help willingly offer help help solve give support 表示“想” 普通词 高级词 think reflect think about consider suddenly think realize keep thinking wonder carefully think figure out 5 地道搭配与固定表达解析 have a hard time词义经历困难 近义词struggle with have difficulty in find it hard to 反义词 manage easily handle smoothly 例句 He had a hard time taking care of the two children alone. She had a hard time finishing the task before the deadline. a wave of sympathy词义一阵同情 近义词 a feeling of pity a sense of compassion 反义词 indifference coldness 例句 A wave of sympathy washed over me. She felt a wave of sympathy when she saw the homeless dog. pick up捡起拿起 近义词 lift take up grab 反义词 put down drop 例句 He bent down to pick up the pudding. She quickly picked up the fallen book. hesitate to do词义犹豫做某事 近义词 be reluctant to be unwilling to 反义词 be eager to be ready to 例句 He hesitated to accept my help. She hesitated to speak in front of the class. reach out词义伸手主动帮助 近义词 extend offer help 反义词 withdraw pull back 例句 He reached out to take the pudding. She reached out to help the elderly woman. 6可积累的续写高频语料 表示情绪变化 a warm feeling spread through me 温暖在我心中蔓延 my heart softened 我的心变得柔软 I was deeply moved 我深受感动 I couldn't help smiling 我忍不住微笑 表示动作衔接 without hesitation 毫不犹豫 before I realized it 在我意识到之前 at that moment 就在那一刻 in response 作为回应 表示结尾升华 kindness costs nothing but means everything 善意无需代价，却意义重大 small acts of kindness can make a big difference 小小的善意可以带来巨大改变 a simple gesture can warm someone's heart 一个简单的举动就能温暖人心 7、 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: At first, he looked surprised. His tired eyes widened as he saw me put the pudding into my cart and paid for it. For a moment, he froze, unsure(adj做补语) whether to accept help from a stranger. His hands trembled slightly as he tried to adjust the baby in his arms. The little boy tugged at his father’s old pants, and the father glanced down with a hesitant smile.Smiling at the little boy(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I offered the pudding to his father. “Thank you,” he murmured softly, his voice rough from fatigue(独立主格). I placed the pudding gently into his basket and smiled, trying to ease the tension.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) He let out a quiet sigh, a mixture of relief and embarrassment, before nodding to me.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Around us, the supermarket hummed with distant chatter and the faint beeping of scanners(环境描写), but it all seemed to fade as he focused on the pudding. Before leaving, he hesitated, then carefully asked for my phone number and wrote it down.At that moment, I felt a warmth spreading in my chest, remembering my own father leaving little treats by my bed(现在分词短语做伴随动作) when I was young. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, he called me. He told me, his voice cheerful and slightly hesitant at first(独立主格), that the little boy’s school party had gone well. I listened as he described the child’s excitement and how the baby had finally fallen asleep peacefully that evening. He laughed softly, a sound tinged with relief(独立主格), and thanked me again for that simple gesture. “I’ve been thinking about how to return the favor,” he added, his tone thoughtful(独立主格). Even in the brief conversation, I could sense the fatigue of daily life in his pauses, yet his happiness was genuine. I realized that a small act of kindness could ripple outward, affecting lives beyond the immediate moment(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hanging up(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a quiet satisfaction, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that the city’s lonely evenings could sometimes be softened by a small but meaningful gesture of care. 情绪描写亮点：gratitude shining quietly, warmth spreading in my chest, a mixture of relief and embarrassment 高级替换词/搭配： said → murmured looked → glanced small act → simple gesture tired → fatigued warmth → a warmth spreading 积累语料： quiet sigh / mixture of relief and embarrassment / gratitude shining quietly / warmth spreading / forgotten memory Version 2 Paragraph 1: At first, he looked surprised. He hadn’t expected anyone to step forward. His rough hands paused in mid-air, holding the baby awkwardly(现在分词短语做伴随动作) while the little boy stared at the pudding. I smiled, added the pudding to my purchase, and told him it was no trouble—sometimes small gestures make a big difference. “It’s okay, I can help,” I said, and gently placed the pudding into his basket. The father’s expression softened, a flicker of relief crossing his face(独立主格). He tried to balance the baby while straightening the items in his basket, muttering a quiet “thanks.”(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I noticed the worn-out knees of his pants and the way his shoulders slumped under the weight of his children and daily worries. The supermarket lights reflected on the shiny wrappers and polished floor. I felt a familiar tenderness for this scene, recalling my father’s sacrifices and the quiet gestures(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that made childhood brighter. Before leaving, he carefully asked for my phone number and wrote it down, as though this brief encounter had become a cherished connection. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, he called me. During the call, he shared how the little boy had talked about the pudding nonstop. He chuckled softly when recounting the baby’s playful gestures in his school party, and I could imagine the tired yet satisfied smile on his face. “Your help meant more than I can say,” he added, and I sensed that his gratitude extended beyond the pudding—it was the acknowledgment of his struggles as a parent. I felt a quiet pride in knowing that a simple act could bring real happiness, connecting people even in brief encounters(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The conversation lingered in my mind, reminding me that(现在分词短语做伴随动作) moments of empathy could ripple far beyond the immediate situation, transforming ordinary evenings into meaningful memories(现在分词短语做结果状语). 动作描写亮点：paused in mid-air, balancing the baby, straightening the items 情绪描写亮点：expression softened, flicker of relief, quiet pride, warm and full of appreciation 高级替换词/搭配： soft → softened look surprised → expression softened small but meaningful → small yet meaningful said → added smile → satisfied smile 积累语料： brief instant / small yet meaningful moment / fleeting relief / lingered in my mind / transformed ordinary evenings Version 3 Paragraph 1: At first, he looked surprised. It seemed that he didn’t know how to respond to a stranger’s kindness. His hands shook slightly,tightening the baby(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I gently placed the pudding into my basket,then paid for the pudding and handed it to him. He exhaled, the tension easing from his shoulders(独立主格). The baby quieted for a moment, and the little boy’s face lit up. He murmured a soft “thank you,” his eyes meeting mine briefly(独立主格). Around us, the supermarket buzzed with checkout beeps and murmured conversations(环境描写), yet this simple act of assistance seemed to pause time. I recalled my own childhood, remembering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the small treats my father left for me late at night, and felt a surge of empathy. Finally, he adjusted the baby and asked for my number carefully, writing it down(现在分词短语做伴随动作), as though preserving the memory of a rare kindness in his busy, challenging life. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, he called me. He shared the joy of the school party and how the pudding had changed the boy. He laughed softly as he described the little boy proudly showing it to his friends(现在分词做伴随动作). Even in his brief pauses, I sensed the exhaustion of daily life, but also the genuine happiness of parenthood. “I wanted to thank you again,” he said, and I could hear the warmth in his tone. The conversation reminded me that small acts of kindness could resonate long after the moment, offering hope and connection in ordinary settings(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hanging up(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a quiet contentment, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that empathy and compassion could transform a fleeting supermarket encounter into a lasting memory. 动作描写亮点：shook slightly, adjusting the baby, meeting my eyes briefly 情绪描写亮点：tension easing, surge of empathy, genuine happiness, quiet contentment 高级替换词/搭配： said → murmured tired → exhaustion simple act → simple act of assistance looked surprised → unsure how to respond time → seemed to pause time 积累语料： surge of empathy / silent understanding / shining through / fleeting encounter / lasting memory 常用地道搭配及高级词汇积累 1. 情绪描写 搭配/短语 释义 近义词/替换 示例 surge of empathy 情感涌上心头 wave of sympathy, burst of compassion A surge of empathy made me step forward. warmth spreading 温暖蔓延 feeling of warmth, comforting sensation Warmth spread through my chest at his words. fleeting relief 短暂的放松 brief relief, momentary ease A fleeting relief passed as the baby stopped crying. quiet pride 平静的自豪 subtle pride, gentle satisfaction I felt quiet pride in helping him. genuine happiness 真挚的快乐 true joy, heartfelt delight He shared his genuine happiness with me. 2. 动作描写 搭配/短语 释义 近义词/替换 示例 tugged at 拽 pulled lightly, yanked The little boy tugged at his father’s sleeve. adjusted the baby 调整姿势 repositioned, held properly He adjusted the baby in his arms. shook slightly 微微颤抖 trembled, quivered His hands shook slightly as he held the cup. placed gently 轻轻放置 set down softly, laid carefully I placed the pudding gently into the basket. paused in mid-air 悬空停顿 hesitated, stopped briefly He paused in mid-air before answering. 3. 高级词汇替换表 常用词 高级词 场景/备注 said murmured / added / remarked 表示口语、低声或补充说明 tired fatigued / weary / exhausted 形容体力或心理疲惫 looked glanced / observed / stared 视觉动作描写 happy delighted / overjoyed / thrilled 情绪描写 small act simple gesture / minor deed 行为描写，善意行为 4. 推荐读后续写积累语料 动作类：tug at, adjust, place gently, shake slightly, pause in mid-air 情绪类：surge of empathy, warmth spreading, fleeting relief, quiet pride, genuine happiness 情境过渡类：hang up, in that moment, at first, a few weeks later, seemed to pause time 善意/帮助类：lend a hand, offer help, reach out, simple gesture, small act of kindness 地道动作搭配 froze in mid-air → 停滞不动 clutching his leg → 抓紧 placed the pudding into my basket → 温柔动作 lips twitching with emotion → 情绪动作描写 writing it down carefully → 小心记录 情绪描写亮点 eyes lit up → 喜悦 seemed to relax a little → 情绪松弛 faint tear gleaming → 细微心理变化 warm and hopeful → 心理状态 joy in their faces → 幸福描写 高级替换词 常用词 高级词/搭配 tired weary / fatigued said murmured / exclaimed / told me happy delighted / sparkling / joyful small act modest gesture / simple act of kindness looked glanced / met my eyes / focused on 可积累短语 a small gesture can ripple through lives warmth spreading in my chest seemed to relax a little writing it down carefully eyes lit up with excitement quiet happiness unfolding tiny family corner 官方： At first, he looked surprised. Then, he understood and seemed to relax a little. “My boy needs this for the party, but...” he said. I smiled, put the pudding with my things, and paid for it. I quietly told him that making a child happy was important. Hearing my words(现在分词短语做伴随动作), the boy’s eyes became bright. “Dad, can we have the pudding now?” he asked. His father nodded, his eyes looking a little wet(独立主格). Before we left, he asked for my phone number and wrote it down carefully. A few weeks later, he called me. We met in a nearby park. His son ran to me with a jar of handmade paper stars, saying brightly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “We made these for you!” His father, standing tall in clean clothes(现在分词短语做伴随动作), told me my small kindness had given him hope. He now works as a handyman at his son’s kindergarten, and life is slowly improving. As the sun set, the stars glowed softly in the jar, reminding me that(现在分词短语做伴随动作) even a small act of kindness can ripple through lives—bringing light to others, and warmth back to your own heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $