体育比赛人际温情道德互助类读后续写 -Evan 只用了1.5英里，虽然没有赢，但赢得了掌声 讲义-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑构建、人物情感刻画及高级语言表达等考查要求，通过原文分析表、故事山模型等梳理文本结构与冲突线索，结合考点梳理、方法指导、真题训练三环节，帮助学生建立从理解到创作的续写思维体系。 资料突出核心素养导向，融合语言能力培养（如高级词汇替换、地道搭配积累）与思维品质提升（情节框架设计、冲突解决策略），设计“续写逻辑框架”“情绪表达语句分析”等教学活动，提供分层范文与即时反馈，助力学生高效掌握续写技巧，为教师把控复习节奏提供系统指导。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 金太阳·江西省2025-2026学年高三下学期2月开学素养训练（26-289C）英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny autumn morning in Iowa. The cool autumn wind swept across the rolling hills of Iowa City High(无灵主语句), where the annual cross-country meet(想起来我给你们说过的这个词了吗、) was about to begin. The crowd lined the muddy trail, coaches barked last-minute instructions, and runners warmed up their bodies, their breaths visible in the cool morning air.(独立主格，描写运动场状态) Among them was Evan Hansen(完全倒装句), a quiet but determined sophomore, who had trained for months for this race. The school coach, Mr. Skay, patted his shoulder and said, “Believe in yourself and run well!” Evan nodded, “Sure, I will!” Bang! The race began. Runners surged forward. But after just a few minutes, Evan noticed something odd(adj做补语). Near him was another runner(无灵主语句), Adam Todd, from a different school. Adam had epilepsy (癫痫) and autism (孤独症), and sometimes he felt confused in noisy places. Today, the sound of an ambulance made him lose his way. As the race began, Adam turned and walked into the trees. Evan noticed that Adam was missing. Evan hesitated. He knew the rules(进一步塑造冲突): stay on course, keep pace, win the race. But something told him to stop(无灵主语句). He stopped running and looked around. Soon, he saw Adam walking alone, looking lost(现在分词做伴随动作). Evan did not think twice. He turned and ran back. “Adam!” Evan called out, slowing down(现在分词做伴随动作). Adam didn’t respond. His eyes were glazed, his steps unsteady(独立主格). Evan jogged back and gently approached him. “Hey, man, I’m Evan. You’re off the trail. Want me to help you get back?” Adam looked at him, confused but calm(adj做补语). Without waiting for an answer, Evan took his hand—not out of pity, but out of trust. “I’ll run with you,” Evan said, his voice steady(独立主格). “Together.” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: For the next 1.5 miles, Evan walked and jogged beside Adam. Paragraph 2: Adam crossed the line first. 金太阳·江西省2025-2026学年高三下学期2月开学素养训练（26-289C）英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny autumn morning in Iowa. The cool autumn wind swept across the rolling hills of Iowa City High, where the annual cross-country meet was about to begin. The crowd lined the muddy trail, coaches barked last-minute instructions, and runners warmed up their bodies, their breaths visible in the cool morning air. Among them was Evan Hansen, a quiet but determined sophomore, who had trained for months for this race. The school coach, Mr. Skay, patted his shoulder and said, “Believe in yourself and run well!” Evan nodded, “Sure, I will!” Bang! The race began. Runners surged forward. But after just a few minutes, Evan noticed something odd. Near him was another runner, Adam Todd, from a different school. Adam had epilepsy (癫痫) and autism (孤独症), and sometimes he felt confused in noisy places. Today, the sound of an ambulance made him lose his way. As the race began, Adam turned and walked into the trees. Evan noticed that Adam was missing. Evan hesitated. He knew the rules: stay on course, keep pace, win the race. But something told him to stop. He stopped running and looked around. Soon, he saw Adam walking alone, looking lost. Evan did not think twice. He turned and ran back. “Adam!” Evan called out, slowing down. Adam didn’t respond. His eyes were glazed, his steps unsteady. Evan jogged back and gently approached him. “Hey, man, I’m Evan. You’re off the trail. Want me to help you get back?” Adam looked at him, confused but calm. Without waiting for an answer, Evan took his hand—not out of pity, but out of trust. “I’ll run with you,” Evan said, his voice steady. “Together.” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: For the next 1.5 miles, Evan walked and jogged beside Adam. Paragraph 2: Adam crossed the line first. 一、读后续写类型与续写构思 1. 文章类型判断 分类角度 类型 说明 主题类型 体育比赛/人际温情互助类 主人公在比赛中做出道德选择 情节结构 事件冲突型 “比赛目标 vs 帮助他人”产生冲突 情感主题 善良、体育精神、责任 强调体育精神和人性关怀 叙事模式 助人为乐型故事 主人公放弃成绩帮助他人 核心主题： 善良与体育精神比比赛名次更重要（Kindness and sportsmanship matter more than winning） 二、续写整体构思 1. 两段续写结构设计 段落 情节任务 内容设计 Paragraph1 陪跑与帮助 Evan陪伴Adam跑完比赛，给予鼓励，帮助他回到赛道 Paragraph2 冲线与升华 Adam先冲线，Evan最后完成比赛，观众与教练被感动 2. 续写框架设计 结构步骤 内容 开端 Evan陪Adam慢跑，耐心引导 发展 Adam逐渐恢复状态 高潮 Adam冲过终点 结局 Evan最后完成比赛，赢得尊重 3. 续写实施 技巧 运用方式 动作描写 jog, guide, slow down, hold hand 心理描写 hesitation, determination 对话描写 encouragement 环境呼应 cheering crowd 主题升华 kindness over victory 4. 承接原文注意事项 注意点 说明 不新增人物 仅限Evan、Adam、观众、教练 逻辑合理 Evan陪跑但仍完成比赛 情节自然 Adam逐渐恢复状态 呼应主题 体育精神与善良 三、故事山 故事阶段 内容 Exposition 开端 比赛开始，介绍Evan Rising Action 上升 Adam迷路 Conflict 冲突 Evan是否继续比赛 Climax 高潮 Evan决定帮助Adam Falling Action 下降 Evan陪Adam回到赛道 Resolution 结局 Adam冲线，Evan完成比赛 四、原文分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Evan善良坚定 Among them was Evan Hansen, a quiet but determined sophomore. 情感层次 紧张→犹豫→坚定 Evan hesitated. 关键情节点 Adam迷路 Adam turned and walked into the trees. 语言特色 简洁直接，叙事性强 Bang! The race began. 关键词分析 race / lost / help / together I’ll run with you…Together. 心理描写 Evan的道德选择 He knew the rules… But something told him to stop. 动作描写 观察、回头帮助 He turned and ran back. 环境描写 秋天赛场 The cool autumn wind swept across the rolling hills. 隐含主题 体育精神高于胜负 Evan放弃比赛帮助Adam 情感转折 从比赛竞争到帮助他人 He stopped running. 空间转换 赛道→树林 walked into the trees 时间过渡 比赛开始后的几分钟 after just a few minutes 五、情绪表达语句分析 1. 反映心情的句子 情绪 原文句子 紧张 The race began. Runners surged forward. 犹豫 Evan hesitated. 决心 But something told him to stop. 善意 Want me to help you get back? 2. 动作描写句子 动作类型 原文句子 观察 Evan noticed something odd. 停止 He stopped running. 回头 He turned and ran back. 帮助 Evan took his hand. 六、关键情节转折点 转折点 原文句子 作用 比赛开始 Bang! The race began. 情节启动 Adam迷路 Adam turned and walked into the trees. 冲突产生 Evan犹豫 Evan hesitated. 内心冲突 Evan决定帮助 He turned and ran back. 情节高潮 七、伏笔与冲突分析 1. 伏笔 伏笔 作用 Adam有自闭症 解释迷路原因 Evan性格安静坚定 为帮助他人埋伏笔 教练鼓励 暗示比赛重要 2. 冲突 冲突类型 内容 外部冲突 比赛规则 vs 帮助他人 内部冲突 Evan是否放弃成绩 八、隐含线索 隐含线索 含义 Adam迷路 需要帮助 Evan停下 人性选择 一起跑 团结与信任 九、续写解决方案 情节问题 解决方式 Adam迷路 Evan陪跑 Adam状态不稳 Evan鼓励 比赛结果 Adam先冲线 情感升华 观众鼓掌 十、续写逻辑框架 Paragraph 情节结构 具体内容 P1 陪伴与恢复 Evan陪Adam跑，鼓励他回到赛道 P2 冲线与升华 Adam先冲线，Evan最后完成比赛 主题升华句： Sometimes the true victory is not crossing the finish line first, but helping someone else reach it. 12、 动作、心理、环境描写及词汇、短语 1 动作描写 Evan slowed his pace and glanced around anxiously. Evan放慢了步伐，焦急地环顾四周。 He turned around and ran back along the muddy trail. 他转身沿着泥泞的小路跑了回去。 Evan gently placed his hand on Adam’s shoulder. Evan轻轻把手放在Adam的肩膀上。 He guided Adam step by step back to the trail. 他一步步引导Adam回到赛道。 The two boys jogged side by side through the woods. 两个男孩并肩慢跑穿过树林。 Evan kept his pace slow to match Adam’s steps. Evan放慢速度配合Adam的步伐。 Adam stumbled slightly but quickly regained his balance. Adam微微踉跄，但很快稳住了身体。 Evan pointed toward the distant finish line. Evan指向远处的终点线。 The runners rushed past them like a stream. 其他跑者像一股洪流从他们身边冲过。 With a final effort, Adam crossed the finish line. 在最后的努力下，Adam冲过了终点线。 2 心理描写 Evan felt a sudden wave of hesitation. Evan突然感到一阵犹豫。 A quiet voice inside him told him to stop. 他内心有个声音告诉他停下来。 For a moment, he struggled with his decision. 有那么一刻，他为自己的决定而挣扎。 Seeing Adam’s confused eyes, Evan’s heart softened. 看到Adam迷茫的眼神，Evan的心软了。 He knew helping Adam mattered more than winning. 他知道帮助Adam比赢得比赛更重要。 A sense of responsibility filled his heart. 一种责任感充满了他的内心。 Evan felt proud of the choice he had made. Evan为自己选择感到自豪。 Adam seemed calmer with Evan beside him. 有Evan在身边，Adam显得平静多了。 The cheers from the crowd warmed Evan’s heart. 观众的欢呼温暖了Evan的心。 At that moment, Evan realized the true meaning of sportsmanship. 那一刻，Evan意识到体育精神的真正含义。 3 环境描写 The cool autumn wind brushed gently across the hills. 凉爽的秋风轻轻拂过山丘。 Fallen leaves scattered across the muddy trail. 落叶散落在泥泞的小路上。 The morning sun shone brightly in the clear sky. 清晨的阳光在晴朗的天空中闪耀。 The woods stood quiet and peaceful. 树林安静而祥和。 The distant cheers echoed across the field. 远处的欢呼声在赛场上回荡。 The trail twisted through the trees like a narrow ribbon. 赛道像一条细带蜿蜒穿过树林。 The crisp air filled their lungs as they ran. 清新的空气充满他们的肺部。 The finish line came into view beyond the hill. 终点线出现在山坡的另一边。 The crowd burst into applause. 人群爆发出热烈掌声。 The golden sunlight covered the field. 金色阳光洒满赛场。 词汇高级替换 1 表示“跑”的高级表达 run →dash/sprint/jog/race/charge 例句 He sprinted toward the finish line. 2 表示“看”的高级表达 look →glance/stare/spot/notice/scan 例句 Evan glanced around for Adam. 3 表示“帮助”的高级表达 help →assist/aid/support/guide/lend a hand 例句 He guided Adam back to the trail. 4 表示“紧张”的高级表达 nervous →anxious/uneasy/restless/tense/worried 例句 Evan felt uneasy about leaving Adam alone. 5 表示“开心”的高级表达 happy →delighted/relieved/joyful/pleased/thrilled 例句 Evan felt relieved when Adam smiled. 地道搭配与表达 1 surge forward 含义向前猛冲 解析surge 本义是“浪潮涌动”，常用于人群运动。 例句 The runners surged forward as the race began. 2 lose one’s way 含义迷路 例Adam lost his way in the woods. 3 slow one’s pace 含义放慢速度 例句Evan slowed his pace to walk beside Adam. 4 side by side 含义并肩 例句They ran side by side along the trail. 5 cross the finish line 含义冲过终点 例句Adam crossed the finish line with Evan beside him. 词汇积累（高频续写词汇） 1 hesitation 词性n. 含义犹豫 近义词 doubt uncertainty indecision 反义词determination/confidence 例句 He paused in hesitation. 他犹豫地停了一下。 Without hesitation, Evan ran back. Evan毫不犹豫地跑了回去。 2 confused词性adj.含义困惑的 近义词 puzzled/bewildered/lost 反义词 clear/certain 例句 Adam looked confused. Adam看起来很困惑。 She felt confused in the noisy crowd. 在嘈杂的人群中她感到迷茫。 3 steady 词性adj.含义稳定的 近义词firm/stable/balanced 反义词unsteady/shaky 例句 His voice was calm and steady. 他的声音平静而稳定。 She took steady steps forward. 她稳步向前走。 4 encourage 词性v. 含义鼓励 近义词inspire/support/motivate 反义词discourage/例句 Evan encouraged Adam to keep going. Evan鼓励Adam继续跑。 Her teacher encouraged her to try again. 老师鼓励她再试一次。 5 trust 词性n./v. 含义信任 近义词belief/confidence/faith 反义词doubt/suspicion 例句 Adam held Evan’s hand in trust. Adam带着信任握住了Evan的手。 Trust is important between friends. 信任在朋友之间很重要。 Without hesitation, Evan turned back. A sense of responsibility filled his heart. Seeing Adam’s confused expression, Evan slowed down. They moved forward step by step. At that moment, Evan realized what truly mattered. 13、 Possible Versions Paragraph 1 For the next 1.5 miles, Evan walked and jogged beside Adam. He kept his voice calm and steady, gently reminding(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Adam where the trail turned and where the ground grew slippery. What mattered now was helping Adam find his rhythm again. Step by step, Adam’s breathing slowed, and the confusion in his eyes gradually faded. The cool wind brushed across the woods as fallen leaves crunched beneath their shoes. Occasionally Evan pointed forward, saying softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “We’re getting closer.” Hearing that(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Adam nodded and continued moving forward. When the finish line finally came into view and the distant cheers reached them, Evan slowed down and smiled at Adam. With quiet determination, he gently urged Adam to run the last few steps ahead of him. Paragraph 2 Adam crossed the line first. For a second, there was silence, and then the crowd burst into applause that rolled across the field like thunder. Evan followed a moment later, breathing heavily but smiling with relief(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Adam looked around, still a little unsure(adj做补语), until Evan raised his hand in celebration. Seeing this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), the crowd cheered even louder. Some teammates rushed forward, clapping them on the shoulders(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Standing near the finish line(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mr. Skay watched the scene with shining eyes. Later he said quietly that moments like this were the reason he had loved coaching for so many years. Evan had not won the race, yet the warmth of the cheers around him made him realize something deeper. Winning might bring a medal, but helping someone finish the race brought a kind of pride that lasted far longer. 地道搭配 keep one’s voice calm find one’s rhythm come into view burst into applause rush forward 情绪描写亮点 confusion faded smiling with relief quiet determination pride that lasted 动作描写亮点 jog beside point forward urge someone ahead raise someone’s hand rush forward 语料升级替换 run → jog / sprint / dash help → assist / guide / support look → glance / gaze / spot happy → relieved / delighted 例句 He dashed toward the finish line. She guided the child across the street. Evan glanced back to check on Adam. The crowd felt relieved when Adam finished. Version 2 Paragraph 1 For the next 1.5 miles, Evan walked and jogged beside Adam. Keeping one hand lightly on Adam’s arm, he guided him through the twisting trail that wound between the trees. At first Adam’s steps were uncertain, but Evan spoke to him gently, encouraging him to keep moving(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Gradually Adam began to match Evan’s pace, and the panic and confusion on his face slowly faded away(无灵主语句). The golden autumn sunlight filtered through the branches(无灵主语句), lighting their path(现在分词做结果状语). When the distant finish line finally appeared beyond the hill, the sound of cheering drifted toward them. Evan slowed slightly and looked at Adam with a warm smile. “You can do this,” he said softly, letting Adam move a step in front(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as they approached the final stretch. Paragraph 2 Adam crossed the line first. The moment he did, the crowd erupted into loud cheers and applause(赛场环境描写). Evan arrived just behind him, his chest rising and falling(独立主格) as he caught his breath. Adam turned back, and for the first time that day a confident smile spread across his face(无灵主语句). Seeing this(现在分词做伴随动作), Evan felt a quiet satisfaction fill his heart. Nearby, Mr. Skay nodded proudly, clearly moved by(过去分词做结果状语) what he had witnessed. Later he would tell the team that races were not only about speed but also about character. On that unforgettable autumn morning, Evan discovered that true victory was sometimes found not in winning, but in helping someone else reach the finish line. 地道搭配 match someone’s pace fade away drift toward erupt into cheers catch one’s breath 情绪描写亮点 panic faded quiet satisfaction confident smile admiration in the crowd’s eyes 动作描写亮点 guide someone through slow slightly move a step in front turn back nod proudly 升级词汇 slow → ease / reduce pace cheer → applaud / roar smile → beam / grin 例句 She eased her pace to help her friend. The audience applauded loudly. He beamed with pride. 地道搭配 pull away remain patient regain confidence come into sight lift someone’s arm 情绪描写亮点 stay calm regain confidence unexpectedly light hide his pride 动作描写亮点 point to the trail motion for someone to run cross the line lift someone’s arm stand looking around 高分语料积累 encourage → inspire / motivate confidence → belief / assurance pride → honor / satisfaction 例句 His words inspired Adam to keep going. She regained her confidence after the mistake. The coach felt great pride in his players. 官方：For the next 1.5 miles, Evan walked and jogged beside Adam. Evan held Adam's hand and guided him back to the right path. Adam began to relax. "Thank you," he said quietly. "No problem," Evan replied. "We're in this together." As they came close to the finish line, the crowd saw them. At first, people were quiet. Then, they began to clap. Some even cried. Evan's teammates ran to join them. They cheered loudly, "Go, Adam! Go, Evan!" When they reached the last part of the race, Evan gently pushed Adam ahead. "You go first," he said. "You finished it by yourself." Adam crossed the line first. The crowd cheered with joy. Evan smiled and raised Adam's hand in the air. Later, Evan said, "I wanted him to be in front of me. He did it. I'm proud of him. Winning feels nice. But helping someone finish feels better." Mr. Skay watched with pride. "That was one of the best moments in my 30 years of coaching," he said. "Evan showed what real sportsmanship is." Evan didn't win the race that day. But he won something more important—the respect and love of everyone there. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $