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该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写专题，覆盖情节逻辑构建、情感发展脉络、文化传承表达等高考核心考点，按“文本分析—续写策略—语料积累—真题演练”逻辑架构知识点，通过考点梳理、方法指导、分层训练等环节，帮助学生建立从理解到表达的完整解题思路。 讲义特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，创新采用“伏笔回扣+情感渐进”教学策略，如通过苏格拉底式提问引导学生分析人物心理转变，设计默写仿写练习夯实动作、环境描写语料，有效提升学生文化意识与应考能力，为教师把控复习节奏提供系统教学支持。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 哈尔滨市四月高考一模 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jade was a 16-year-old Chinese girl who had lived in the US since she was a toddler. Her parents had always insisted on celebrating traditional Chinese festivals, no matter how busy their lives were. But Jade had never really understood why. To her, these festivals meant boring preparations, strange-tasting food, and missing out on fun plans with her American friends(伏笔). Mid-Autumn Festival was approaching. Early that morning, Jade’s mom was up at dawn, bustling around the kitchen(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The scent of osmanthus cake and braised pork filled the house(无灵主语句). On the dining table, there were mooncakes of different flavors. Jade frowned as she glanced at the spread. She had already made plans to have fun with her friends. “Mom, I can’t stay for the Mid-Autumn celebration,” Jade said, slinging her backpack over her shoulder. “My friends are waiting for me.” Her mom wiped her hands on her apron and sat down beside Jade. Instead of scolding her, Mom took out an old photo album from the cabinet. Inside were pictures of her and Dad(完全倒装句) when they first moved to the US—young, smiling, standing in front of a small apartment (后置定语)with a mooncake in their hands. “This festival isn’t just about mooncakes and lanterns(伏笔),” Mom said, her voice gentle(独立主格). “When I was a little girl in Guangzhou, every Mid-Autumn, my family would gather on the rooftop. We’d eat mooncakes, drink chrysanthemum tea, and stare at the full moon(动作串). Back then, I thought it was just a fun night. But when I moved here, far away from my parents, the moon became a link to my hometown. No matter where we are, the same moon shines over us and our family in China. Celebrating this festival is our way of keeping that connection alive.” Mom closed the photo album and patted Jade’s hand. “You don’t have to stay if you don’t want to. Go have fun with your friends.” Jade stared at her mom’s face, seeing the faint glimmer of homesickness in her eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. 哈尔滨市四月高考一模 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jade was a 16-year-old Chinese girl who had lived in the US since she was a toddler. Her parents had always insisted on celebrating traditional Chinese festivals, no matter how busy their lives were. But Jade had never really understood why. To her, these festivals meant boring preparations, strange-tasting food, and missing out on fun plans with her American friends. Mid-Autumn Festival was approaching. Early that morning, Jade’s mom was up at dawn, bustling around the kitchen. The scent of osmanthus cake and braised pork filled the house. On the dining table, there were mooncakes of different flavors. Jade frowned as she glanced at the spread. She had already made plans to have fun with her friends. “Mom, I can’t stay for the Mid-Autumn celebration,” Jade said, slinging her backpack over her shoulder. “My friends are waiting for me.” Her mom wiped her hands on her apron and sat down beside Jade. Instead of scolding her, Mom took out an old photo album from the cabinet. Inside were pictures of her and Dad when they first moved to the US—young, smiling, standing in front of a small apartment with a mooncake in their hands. “This festival isn’t just about mooncakes and lanterns,” Mom said, her voice gentle. “When I was a little girl in Guangzhou, every Mid-Autumn, my family would gather on the rooftop. We’d eat mooncakes, drink chrysanthemum tea, and stare at the full moon. Back then, I thought it was just a fun night. But when I moved here, far away from my parents, the moon became a link to my hometown. No matter where we are, the same moon shines over us and our family in China. Celebrating this festival is our way of keeping that connection alive.” Mom closed the photo album and patted Jade’s hand. “You don’t have to stay if you don’t want to. Go have fun with your friends.” Jade stared at her mom’s face, seeing the faint glimmer of homesickness in her eyes. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. Part 1 一、文章类型判断与续写总体分析 1. 文章类型分类 分类维度 类型 题材类型 家庭亲情/文化认同类 文化主题 跨文化身份认同类 情感主线 “不理解→理解→认同”成长型 冲突类型 青春期价值观冲突 叙事模式 生活故事类（温情治愈型） 核心主题 文化传承、亲情连接、乡愁与身份认同 二、读后续写核心构思思路 （一）续写核心任务 续写的真正任务不是“写过节”，而是：写 Jade 如何从“抗拒传统节日”到“理解父母情感”，最终主动融入家庭文化氛围。 因此： · 外在线索：中秋节 · 内在主线：情感认同变化 · 真正高潮：心理转变而非事件本身 三、续写结构布局 Paragraph 1 的核心功能 段首句：Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. 这一句已经给出： · 人物态度转变开始 · 她决定留下 · 第一段必须承接“情感变化” 第一段应该写什么？ 推荐结构： 层次 内容 ① 行为转变 Jade 留下来帮妈妈准备 ② 细节互动 做月饼/摆桌子/挂灯笼 ③ 情感推进 Jade 开始理解父母 ④ 第一段结尾 气氛变温暖，引出夜晚赏月 第一段不能写什么？ ❌ 不要突然煽情哭泣 ❌ 不要直接“我终于明白中华文化伟大” ❌ 不要写朋友来电话冲突过大 ❌ 不要新增人物解决问题 四、第二段核心布局 Paragraph 2 段首句： As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. 这一句意味着： · 时间跳跃到夜晚 · 家庭团聚场景正式形成 · 情感高潮即将到来 第二段应该完成什么？ 核心任务：从“理解父母”升级到“主动认同文化与家庭纽带”。 推荐结构： 层次 内容 ① 环境描写 月光、夜空、安静氛围 ② 家庭互动 吃月饼、聊天、赏月 ③ 情感触发 Jade 想起母亲的话 ④ 内心顿悟 明白“同一轮月亮”的意义 ⑤ 升华结尾 主动表达以后愿意一起过节 五、高分续写的关键技巧 1. “物”要反复回扣 本文核心道具： 道具 象征意义 月亮 家庭连接、乡愁 月饼 文化传承 相册 回忆与情感纽带 桂花糕/菊花茶 中国传统氛围 2. 情感转变必须“渐进” 错误写法：Jade suddenly realized everything. 正确方式： 阶段 情感 开头 犹豫 中间 被触动 后面 开始理解 结尾 主动认同 3. 注意“美国成长背景” Jade不是中国本土学生。 所以她：不会突然变得“特别传统” · 不会突然文化觉醒 · 她的转变应当自然、温和、生活化 高考最喜欢：“小情感中的真实变化” 六、伏笔与回扣分析（非常重要） 原文伏笔 续写回扣方式 moon became a link to my hometown Jade看月亮时真正理解 same moon shines over us 结尾升华必须回扣 photo album Jade再次翻看/想到照片 Mom didn’t force her Jade因此产生愧疚与感动 strange-tasting food Jade主动尝试月饼 homesickness in Mom’s eyes Jade开始理解移民父母 七、高考阅卷最喜欢的情节推进 最优逻辑链： 留下来 → 帮忙准备 → 感受节日氛围 → 观察父母 → 想起母亲的话 → 赏月 → 情感顿悟 → 主动认同 八、续写中的高级设计技巧 1. “动作体现情感”比直接抒情高级 不要总写：❌ Jade was deeply moved. 改成：✅ Jade carefully arranged the mooncakes beside the tea cups. 动作更高级。 2. 用环境推动情感 例如： · 银色月光 · 秋日晚风 · 温暖灯光 · 安静夜空 这些都能推动温情氛围。 3. 结尾一定要“留余温” 高分结尾特点： · 不喊口号 · 不生硬升华 · 用细节收尾 例如： Jade leaned gently against her mother, gazing at the same bright moon above them. 这种结尾最有高级感。 九、故事核心脉络与关键线索分析 （一）故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 Jade不理解中国传统节日 发展 母亲讲述中秋对移民家庭的意义 转折 Jade看到母亲的乡愁 续写发展 Jade留下参与家庭活动 高潮 赏月时理解“连接”意义 结尾 认同家庭文化与亲情 十、关键线索梳理 类型 内容 人物 Jade、Mom、Dad 核心道具 月亮、月饼、相册、菊花茶 情感基调 温暖、细腻、含蓄 核心冲突 青春期文化疏离 续写伏笔 same moon / homesickness / photo album 主题方向 家庭纽带与文化认同 十一、文本深度分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Jade叛逆但并非冷漠 “boring preparations” 人物刻画 母亲温柔包容 “Instead of scolding her” 情感层次 从抗拒到触动 “faint glimmer of homesickness” 关键情节点 母亲拿出相册 “Mom took out an old photo album” 关键情节点 母亲讲述故乡记忆 “the moon became a link to my hometown” 语言特色 细腻温情型 大量生活化描写 关键词分析 moon 家庭与故乡连接 关键词分析 mooncakes 传统文化象征 心理描写 Jade开始动摇 “Jade stared at her mom’s face” 动作描写 母亲擦手坐下 “wiped her hands on her apron” 环境描写 食物香味营造节日氛围 “The scent of osmanthus cake...” 隐含主题 移民家庭文化传承 “keeping that connection alive” 情感转折 母亲不强迫反而打动Jade “You don’t have to stay” 空间转换 厨房→阳台 为赏月做铺垫 时间过渡 白天→夜晚 对应情感升华 十二、苏格拉底式提问 （一）人物情感分析 1. Jade一开始为什么讨厌中秋节？ 2. 她真正讨厌的是食物还是“被迫参与”？ 3. 母亲为什么没有责备她？ 4. 母亲的话中哪一句最容易触动Jade？ 5. Jade看到母亲眼中的乡愁时会想到什么？ （二）续写情节推进 1. Jade留下后第一件事最可能做什么？ 2. 她会如何慢慢参与节日活动？ 3. 哪些细节可以体现她态度变化？ 4. 夜晚赏月时家庭会做什么？ 5. Jade会如何重新理解“同一轮月亮”？ （三）伏笔回扣训练 1. 如何回扣photo album？ 2. 如何回扣“same moon shines over us”？ 3. 如何让“月亮”成为情感象征？ 4. 为什么“母亲不强迫”反而更有力量？ 5. 哪些环境描写可以烘托团圆感？ （四）结尾升华思考 1. Jade最后会不会直接道歉？ 2. 她更可能用“语言”还是“动作”表达变化？ 3. 什么样的结尾最自然？ 4. 如何避免“假大空”升华？ 5. 如果你来写最后一句，会怎样体现“文化认同”？ Part 2 读后续写语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 Jade slowly set her backpack down beside the door. Jade慢慢把书包放在门边。 She reached for a mooncake and took a cautious bite. 她伸手拿起一块月饼，小心地咬了一口。 Mom gently arranged the mooncakes on a porcelain plate. 妈妈轻轻地把月饼摆放在瓷盘上。 Jade helped hang the paper lanterns along the balcony railing. Jade帮忙把纸灯笼挂在阳台栏杆上。 Her fingers brushed against the old photo album. 她的手指轻轻划过那本旧相册。 Dad poured steaming chrysanthemum tea into tiny cups. 爸爸把热腾腾的菊花茶倒进小茶杯里。 Jade leaned quietly against the balcony door. Jade安静地倚靠在阳台门旁。 She glanced up at the bright full moon hanging in the sky. 她抬头望向高挂夜空的明月。 Mom tucked a loose strand of hair behind Jade’s ear. 妈妈轻轻把Jade耳边散落的头发拨到后面。 Jade wrapped her arms around her mother tightly. Jade紧紧抱住了妈妈。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 A wave of guilt suddenly washed over Jade. 一阵愧疚突然涌上Jade心头。 Jade felt her heart soften at her mother’s words. 听到妈妈的话，Jade的心软了下来。 For the first time, she understood her mother’s homesickness. 她第一次理解了妈妈的思乡之情。 Jade found herself reconsidering the meaning of the festival. Jade发现自己重新思考这个节日的意义。 Her mother’s gentle voice lingered in her mind. 妈妈温柔的话语萦绕在她脑海中。 Jade suddenly realized how much this tradition mattered to her parents. Jade突然意识到这个传统对父母有多重要。 A warm feeling slowly spread through her chest. 一股温暖缓缓涌上心头。 She no longer saw the celebration as a burden. 她不再把庆祝活动视为负担。 Jade felt connected to her family in a way she never had before. Jade第一次如此深切地感受到与家人的连接。 The sight of the full moon filled her with unexpected peace. 那轮满月让她心中生出意想不到的平静。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 The silver moonlight flooded the quiet balcony. 银色月光洒满了安静的阳台。 A cool autumn breeze drifted through the night air. 秋日凉风轻轻掠过夜空。 The soft glow of lanterns warmed the dark evening. 灯笼柔和的光点亮了夜晚。 The scent of osmanthus floated gently in the air. 桂花香气在空气中轻轻飘散。 The moon hung high above the city like a glowing pearl. 月亮高悬城市上空，宛如发光的珍珠。 Laughter echoed softly across the balcony. 笑声轻轻回荡在阳台上。 The night sky was deep and clear, dotted with stars. 夜空深邃澄澈，点缀着繁星。 Warm light spilled from the kitchen windows. 温暖的灯光从厨房窗户洒出。 The entire apartment was filled with a peaceful festive atmosphere. 整个公寓弥漫着宁静温馨的节日气氛。 Under the bright moon, everything seemed calm and beautiful. 在明月下，一切都显得宁静而美好。 四、高频普通词高级替换 （一）“看”类替换 普通词 高级替换 场景 look at gaze at 深情凝视 look at glance at 快速看 look at stare at 出神凝望 look at peer at 仔细看 look at fix one’s eyes on 专注盯着 （二）“说”类替换 普通词 高级替换 场景 say whisper 轻声说 say murmur 喃喃低语 say remark 评论 say respond 回应 say reassure 安慰地说 （三）“开心”类替换 普通词 高级替换 场景 happy delighted 非常开心 happy overjoyed 欣喜若狂 happy content 满足平静 happy cheerful 愉快轻松 happy warm-hearted 内心温暖 （四）“难过”类替换 普通词 高级替换 场景 sad heartbroken 心碎 sad downcast 情绪低落 sad sorrowful 悲伤 sad emotional 感动复杂 sad homesick 思乡 （五）“走”类替换 普通词 高级替换 场景 walk wander 漫步 walk pace 来回踱步 walk step toward 走向 walk head for 朝……走去 walk make one’s way to 前往 五、地道搭配与固定表达积累 搭配 含义 用法解析 a wave of guilt washed over sb 一阵愧疚涌上心头 情绪描写高频 be lost in thought 陷入沉思 心理描写 linger in one’s mind 萦绕脑海 回忆类 be filled with 充满 环境/情绪 soften one’s heart 使内心柔软 情感转变 keep the connection alive 保持联系 主题升华 under the moonlight 在月光下 环境描写 share a quiet moment 共度宁静时刻 温情场景 gather around the table 围坐桌旁 家庭主题 feel a sense of belonging 感到归属感 文化认同 六、词法与搭配现象解析 1. wash over 内容 解析 短语 wash over sb 含义 （情绪）涌上心头 特点 拟人化表达，非常地道 例句： · A sense of warmth washed over Jade. · Relief washed over him instantly. 2. linger in one’s mind 内容 解析 linger 徘徊；久久不散 搭配 linger in one’s mind/memory 例句： · Her mother’s words lingered in Jade’s mind. · The scene lingered in his memory for years. 3. be lost in thought 内容 解析 lost 并非“丢失”，而是“沉浸” in thought 在思考中 例句： · Jade stood by the window, lost in thought. · He seemed completely lost in thought. 七、可积累高频语料 短语 中文 近义词 反义词 homesick 思乡的 nostalgic, longing carefree reunion 团聚 gathering separation comforting 令人安慰的 soothing disturbing precious 珍贵的 valuable worthless heartfelt 发自内心的 sincere insincere 八、重点词汇深度积累 单词/短语 词义 近义词 反义词 例句1 例句2 homesickness 思乡 nostalgia indifference Homesickness filled her eyes. He struggled with homesickness abroad. reunion 团聚 gathering farewell The festival symbolized reunion. Family reunion meant everything to her. sentimental 感性的 emotional rational Jade became sentimental under the moonlight. The old photos made him sentimental. bond 联系纽带 connection distance The moon became a bond between generations. Family bonds grew stronger that night. cherish 珍惜 treasure ignore Jade began to cherish the tradition. We should cherish family moments. 九、高分万能句式积累 （一）情绪描写句式 句式 示例 A wave of + 情绪 + washed over sb A wave of warmth washed over Jade. Sb felt a sense of + 名词 She felt a sense of belonging. It suddenly dawned on sb that... It suddenly dawned on Jade that traditions carried love. （二）环境烘托句式 句式 示例 The moon/light/wind + 动词 The moonlight streamed onto the balcony. The air was filled with... The air was filled with the scent of tea. （三）结尾升华句式 句式 示例 For the first time, sb realized that... For the first time, Jade realized the meaning of home. Under the bright moon, sb understood... Under the bright moon, she understood her mother completely. It was not merely..., but... It was not merely a festival, but a connection to family. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. She stood quietly by the kitchen door, watching her mother carefully shape the mooncakes(现在分词短语做伴随动作) while soft steam rose from the pots. A strange feeling crept into her heart(无灵主语句). “Need any help?” she asked awkwardly. Her mother looked surprised at first, but soon smiled warmly and handed her a plate of osmanthus cakes. As they worked side by side, Mom began telling her funny childhood stories about celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival on the rooftop in Guangzhou. Jade found herself listening more attentively than ever before. Later, she even helped Dad hang a few red lanterns along the balcony railing. The apartment gradually filled with laughter and the comforting scent of food. When everything was finally ready, the sky outside had already darkened into deep blue. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. Silver moonlight poured gently over the table(无灵主语句), where mooncakes and steaming tea gave off a familiar warmth. Jade looked up at the round moon and suddenly remembered her mother’s words — “the same moon shines over us.” For the first time, she truly understood what her mother had meant. The festival was never simply about food or traditions. Instead, it carried memories, homesickness, and love that stretched across oceans. A wave of guilt and tenderness washed over her(无灵主语句)as she realized how lonely her parents must have felt after leaving China years ago. Quietly, Jade leaned against her mother’s shoulder and whispered, “Next year, I want to celebrate with you again.” Hearing that(现在分词短语做伴随动作), her mother smiled silently, her eyes shining brighter than the moon above them(独立主格). Version 2 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. Instead of rushing out the door, she slowly walked back into the kitchen, where her mother was arranging mooncakes on delicate plates. Without saying much, Jade rolled up her sleeves and began helping set the table. Her mother glanced at her with quiet surprise, while Dad chuckled softly from the living room. As the afternoon passed, Jade helped hang lanterns, carry dishes, and prepare tea(动作串). At first, everything still felt unfamiliar to her, but gradually the apartment became warmer and livelier. What surprised her most was how relaxed and happy her parents looked during the preparations. Tonight, surrounded by the scent of osmanthus and soft laughter(过去分词短语做方式状语), they seemed completely different. Before long, the last lantern was hung, and the bright full moon slowly appeared outside the balcony window. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. A cool autumn breeze drifted through the night air(无灵主语句) as Jade picked up a mooncake and took another bite, finding it sweeter(现在分词短语做伴随动作) than she remembered. Her parents chatted quietly about old memories in Guangzhou, and Jade listened silently beside them. Looking at the bright moon hanging above the city(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she suddenly felt connected to something she had ignored for years. The moon shining over them was also shining over their relatives far away in China. That thought filled her heart with unexpected warmth(无灵主语句). Jade finally realized why her parents had insisted on keeping these traditions alive despite their busy lives. They were trying to hold on to a piece of home. Smiling softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Jade poured more tea for her parents, while the peaceful moonlight wrapped the family in gentle silence(无灵主语句). Version 3 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. She lowered her eyes, feeling slightly ashamed of leaving so impatiently moments earlier(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Her mother said nothing, only turning back to the kitchen with a gentle smile. After a brief silence, Jade quietly followed her in and began helping cut fruit and arrange the dishes. As she flipped through the old photo album again, she noticed how young her parents had looked in those early pictures, standing in front of their tiny apartment with forced but hopeful smiles.(现在分词短语做后置定语) Suddenly, Jade could almost imagine how difficult it must have been for them to build a new life in a foreign country. The festival, she realized, was perhaps the only thing that made them feel closer to home. Outside the window, the evening deepened, and a pale golden moon slowly climbed above the buildings. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. The soft lantern light mixed beautifully with the silver glow of the moon, creating a peaceful atmosphere(现在分词短语做结果状语) Jade had never truly noticed before. Holding a cup of warm chrysanthemum tea in her hands(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she listened to her parents talk about family gatherings back in Guangzhou. This time, instead of feeling bored, she felt strangely comforted. The moon above them no longer seemed like an ordinary moon. It became a quiet bridge connecting different countries, different generations, and the people who loved one another. Jade suddenly understood that traditions were not meant to trap her in the past, but to remind people where they came from and who they belonged to. Looking at her parents’ smiling faces(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Jade felt a deep sense of belonging slowly settle into her heart. 地道搭配与替换表达 普通表达 高级替换 场景 very warm comforting / heartwarming 温情氛围 looked at gazed at / stared at 情感描写 understood realized / recognized 顿悟 happy content / delighted 家庭氛围 connection bond / link 主题升华 family gathering family reunion 节日主题 homesick nostalgic 思乡主题 情绪描写亮点词汇 词汇/短语 中文 同义替换 a wave of guilt washed over her 愧疚涌上心头 be overwhelmed by guilt her heart softened 内心柔软下来 be deeply touched a sense of belonging 归属感 emotional connection feel connected to 感受到联系 bond with warmth spread through her chest 心中涌起温暖 be filled with warmth 动作描写亮点词汇 表达 中文 升级替换 roll up her sleeves 挽起袖子 prepare to help arrange the dishes 摆放餐具 lay out the dishes lean against one’s shoulder 靠着肩膀 rest against pour tea 倒茶 fill the cups with tea hang lanterns 挂灯笼 put up lanterns 可积累高分语料 语料 用法 例句 linger in one’s mind 萦绕脑海 Her mother’s words lingered in her mind. be lost in thought 陷入沉思 Jade stood there, lost in thought. flood over 情绪涌来 Relief flooded over her. under the silver moonlight 月光环境描写 Under the silver moonlight, the family chatted quietly. bridge the distance 拉近距离 The festival bridged the distance between home and abroad. 高级词汇联想积累 核心词 同义词 联想词 homesickness nostalgia hometown, memory reunion gathering togetherness tradition custom heritage connection bond belonging comfort warmth peace 高分句式仿写积累 句式 示例 It was not merely..., but... It was not merely a festival, but a bridge to home. For the first time, sb realized that... For the first time, Jade realized the meaning of tradition. A wave of... washed over sb A wave of tenderness washed over her. Sb found oneself doing... Jade found herself listening carefully. The sight of... reminded sb of... The sight of the moon reminded her of her mother’s words. 参考答案： Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. She walked over to the dining table and picked up a mooncake. Taking a small bite(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she found it wasn't as bad as she had thought. She then sat beside her mom, and they started to chat about the old days in Guangzhou. Jade listened intently as her mom shared stories of her childhood Mid-Autumn Festivals, feeling a new understanding and connection to the tradition(现在分词短语做伴随动作). As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. The soft moonlight cast a warm glow over them. Jade looked up at the bright moon and thought about her grandparents in China. She realized that even though they were far apart, they were all under the same moon. She held her mom's hand tightly and said, "I'm glad we celebrated this festival together, Mom." Her mom smiled, a tear of joy in her eye(独立主格). 练习题包（默写与仿写） 第一部分：原文值得积累句子默写（15句） 根据中文和英文提示，补全空缺的词汇或短语。 她妈妈天不亮就起床了，在厨房里忙碌着。 Her mom was up at dawn, ____________ around the kitchen. 桂花糕和红烧肉的味道充满了整个房子。 The scent of osmanthus cake and braised pork ____________ the house. 杰德看着摆出来的这些东西，皱起了眉头。 Jade ____________ as she glanced at the spread. 她妈妈在围裙上擦了擦手，在杰德旁边坐下。 Her mom ____________ on her apron and sat down beside Jade. 妈妈从柜子里拿出一本旧相册。 Mom ____________ an old photo album from the cabinet. 里面是她和爸爸刚来美国时的照片——年轻、面带微笑。 Inside were pictures of her and Dad when they first moved to the US—young, ____________. 这个节日不仅仅是月饼和灯笼的事。 This festival isn’t just ____________ mooncakes and lanterns. 我以为那只是一个有趣的夜晚。 Back then, I thought it was just a ____________. 月亮成了我连接故乡的纽带。 The moon became a ____________ to my hometown. 无论我们在哪里，同一轮月亮都照耀着我们和我们在中国的家人。 No matter where we are, the same moon ____________ over us and our family in China. 庆祝这个节日是我们保持这种联系的方式。 Celebrating this festival is our way of ____________ that connection ____________. 妈妈合上相册，拍了拍杰德的手。 Mom closed the photo album and ____________ Jade’s hand. 杰德盯着妈妈的脸，看到她眼中隐约的思乡之情。 Jade ____________ her mom’s face, seeing the faint ____________ of homesickness in her eyes. 杰德犹豫了一会儿，然后放下了背包。 Jade ____________ for a moment, and then ____________ her backpack. 月亮高高地挂在天空中。 The moon ____________ high in the sky. 第二部分：中译英句子默写（12句） 根据中文意思和关键词提示，写出完整英文句子。 杰德走向她的母亲，在她旁边坐下。（walk toward, sit down beside） “我能帮忙吗？”她轻声问道，声音里带着一丝不确定。（help, whisper, uncertainty） 母亲笑了，眼睛弯成了月牙形。（smile, eyes, crescent moon） 杰德拿起刀，小心翼翼地把月饼切成小块。（pick up, carefully, slice） 切着切着，她抬头看了一眼母亲，发现母亲正在温柔地看着她。（look up, find, gaze at） 她的心里涌起一种奇怪的感觉——一种她以前从未有过的温暖。（rise, strange feeling, never had before） 月亮升起来了，一家人在阳台上坐在一起。（rise, sit together, balcony） 母亲指着天空中那轮明亮的圆月，什么也没说。（point at, bright full moon, without a word） 杰德盯着月亮，想象着大洋彼岸的外婆此刻也在抬头看。（stare at, imagine, the other side of the ocean） 她伸出手臂，轻轻地搂住了母亲的肩膀。（reach out, gently, wrap around） 那一刻，杰德终于明白了中秋节的真正意义。（at that moment, understand, true meaning） 重要的从来不是食物，而是身边坐着的人。（never about, the person, sit beside） 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写语料库默写（10句） 根据中文提示和部分英文，补全空缺内容。 动作描写： 她________（轻轻拍了拍）the table and stood up. He ________（用手指穿过）his hair, looking frustrated. She ________（咬住）her lower lip, trying not to cry. 环境描写： The moonlight ________（透过窗户照进来），casting a silver glow on the floor. The warm light of the lantern ________（摇曳）gently in the night breeze. Steam ________（升起）from the cup of tea, carrying the sweet scent of chrysanthemum. 心理描写： A strange warmth ________（涌上她的心头），one she had never felt before. She felt a sudden urge to ________（伸手触摸）the moon, as if it could bring her closer to home. Her heart ________（揪了一下）as she saw the tired lines on her mother’s face. For the first time, she ________（感到一种归属感）to this tradition she had once rejected. 第四部分：高级句式仿写（6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 Looking at her mother’s face, Jade felt a tug in her heart. 闻着桂花茶的香气，杰德感到前所未有的平静。 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 A strange feeling rose in her chest, warming her from inside. 一种强烈的愧疚感涌上她的心头，让她的脸一下子红了。 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 Soft and hesitant, her voice broke the silence. 温柔而坚定，母亲的话像月光一样洒在杰德心上。 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 The moon shining brightly above, the family sat in peaceful silence. 灯笼温暖地亮着，杰德和母亲并肩坐在一起，看着月亮。 句式5：强调句 It was not until that moment that she understood the meaning of home. 正是那轮圆月让杰德想起了妈妈眼中的那一丝乡愁。 句式6：递进句 She didn’t just stay; she chose to belong. 她不只是放下了背包；她放下了她的抵触和误解。 参考答案 第一部分：原文默写 bustling 2. filled 3. frowned 4. wiped her hands 5. took out 6. smiling 7. about 8. fun night 9. link 10. shines 11. keeping, alive 12. patted 13. stared at, glimmer 14. hesitated, dropped off 15. rose 第二部分：中译英 Jade walked toward her mother and sat down beside her. “Can I help?” she whispered, her voice tinged with uncertainty. Her mother smiled, her eyes curving into crescent moons. Jade picked up the knife and carefully sliced the mooncake into small pieces. While cutting, she looked up and found her mother gazing at her gently. A strange feeling rose in her heart — a warmth she had never felt before. The moon rose high in the sky, and the family sat together on the balcony. Her mother pointed at the bright full moon in the sky without saying a word. Jade stared at the moon, imagining her grandmother on the other side of the ocean also looking up. She reached out her arm and gently wrapped it around her mother’s shoulder. At that moment, Jade finally understood the true meaning of the Mid-Autumn Festival. It was never about the food, but the person sitting beside you. 第三部分：语料库 patted 2. ran his fingers through 3. bit 4. streamed through the window 5. flickered 6. rose 7. rose in her heart 8. reach out and touch 9. clenched 10. felt a sense of belonging 第四部分：句式仿写 Smelling the fragrance of chrysanthemum tea, Jade felt a sense of peace she had never known. A strong sense of guilt rose in her heart, flushing her face red. Gentle and firm, her mother’s words fell on Jade’s heart like moonlight. The lantern glowing warmly, Jade and her mother sat side by side, watching the moon. It was the bright full moon that reminded Jade of the glimmer of homesickness in her mother’s eyes. She didn’t just drop off her backpack; she dropped off her resistance and misunderstanding. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $