内容正文:
中考英语作文训练--活动类(将来时)
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”.
人称:we
时态: 将来时
Step1:审好题
Step2:开好头----关键的开头句子要写对:
We will have the activity at the
old people’s home next Friday afternoon.
接下来全凭发挥
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you
to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts
make the world warm”.
高分句型:3. At last, there will be a talent show.
Step3:重点先----先从活动入手,把活动写丰富些
活动:1.We’ll help the old to clean their rooms.
拓展 :2.Then we’ll have a talk with them.
高分句型:We’ll tell them something interesting
so that they can feel happy and comfortable.
活动:1.We’ll help the old to clean their rooms.
拓展:We’ll meet at the gate of our school at 8:00 a.m.
拓展: As soon as we reach the old people’s home,
we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first.
Step4:润文章---加入时间线索,使事件连贯起来
高分句型:3. At last, there will be a talent show.
拓展 :2.Then we’ll have a talk with them.
高分句型:We’ll tell them something interesting
so that they can feel happy and comfortable.
Step5:补要点---检查题目,适当补充
1.Besides, remember to take a camera to take photos.
2.活动的意义:
I’m sure you can learn a lot from the activity.
Dear Peter ,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”.
We will have the activity at the old people’s home in our neighborhood next Friday afternoon. We’ll meet at the gate of our school at 8:00 a.m. As soon as we reach the old people’s home, we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first. Then we’ll have a talk with them. We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable. At last, there will be a talent show. Besides, remember to take a camera to take photos.
I’m sure you can learn a lot from the activity.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step6:修文章,分段走,书写工整。
中考作文评分标准
第一档(13-15 分): 能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法;语言准确、丰富、流畅,富有个性和 说服力;基本无语法错误;
第二档(9-12 分): 能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法;行文比较自然,但语言表达较平淡, 个性化和说服力较一般,且存在少量语法错误;
第三档(5-8 分): 观点表述不够鲜明,比较缺乏说服力;同时各种语言用法错误较多;
第四档(0-4 分): 内容比较空洞或不切题,词汇和句式用法错误很多。
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