Unit4 Writing 课件 2025-2026学年沪教版（五四制） 英语六年级下册

该初中英语课件围绕“天气与旅行”主题，核心知识点包括邮件写作要素（问候、正文、结束语、签名）及旅行建议（最佳时间、天气、活动、小贴士）。课堂从伦敦热门打卡地切入，以Lisa给Yiming的回信为真实语料，引导学生学习邮件结构和建议表达，再过渡到上海旅行建议写作，构建“输入-内化-输出”的学习支架。 其亮点在于以真实邮件情境为载体，融合语言能力（如用“你可以……”“记得……”等多样句式表达建议）、文化意识（对比伦敦晚春与上海春秋气候）和思维品质（分析最佳旅行时间）。采用“语料输入-结构分析-实践输出”教学方法，提供写作checklist，助力学生提升跨文化沟通能力，教师可高效开展情境化教学。

Unit 4 Weather and travel Weather and our lives 1 Big Ben Buckingham Palace double-decker bus deck (n.) the popular check-in spots the British Museum the London Eye Yiming plans to visit London with his parents several weeks later. So he wrote an email to his friend Lisa to know about some tips for travelling in London. Here is Lisa’s reply (回信). To: From: Subject: Hi, Yiming! How are you doing these days? You asked about the best time to visit London last time. For me, it’s late spring. It’s usually quite sunny, and not too hot in this season. You can visit Big Ben and travel on a red double-decker bus. Remember to take your umbrella with you because it rains in London from time to time. I’d love to see your hometown one day. Would the summer holidays be a good time to visit you? Write soon! Best regards, Lisa Yiming Lisa Best time to visit London 4 5 Why did Lisa write this email to Yiming? Because she wanted to tell Yiming about the best time to visit London. Who sent the email? Who received it? Lisa sent it and Yiming received it. receive an email/ a letter Match the elements (要素) of an email with the correct parts. Greeting Body Closing Signature A B C D regards /rɪˈɡɑːdz/ n. 致意；问候 Greeting: How’s everything going these days? Is everything OK these days? Other expressions Closing: Best regards Take care! All the best! (Best wishes) Many thanks! To: From: Subject: Hi, Yiming! How are you doing these days? You asked about the best time to visit London last time. For me, it’s late spring. It’s usually quite sunny, and not too hot in this season. You can visit Big Ben and travel on a red double-decker bus. Remember to take your umbrella with you because it rains in London from time to time. I’d love to see your hometown one day. Would the summer holidays be a good time to visit you? Write soon! Best regards, Lisa Yiming Lisa Best time to visit London late (adj.) 迟的；晚的；末期的； early (adj.) 早的；早期的； now and then Lisa’s wish Don’t forget to ... soon (adv.) 马上；很快；不久； Lisa’s wish to visit Yiming’s hometown 7 To: From: Subject: Hi, Yiming! How are you doing these days? You asked about the best time to visit London last time. For me, it’s late spring. It’s usually quite sunny, and not too hot in this season. You can visit Big Ben and travel on a red double-decker bus. Remember to take your umbrella with you because it rains in London from time to time. I’d love to see your hometown one day. Would the summer holidays be a good time to visit you? Write soon! Best regards, Lisa Yiming Lisa Best time to visit London a popular check-in spot in London enjoy the beautiful views of the roads and streets in London a popular check-in spot? the best way to enjoy the local views of the city? 8 To: From: Subject: Hi, Yiming! How are you doing these days? You asked about the best time to visit London last time. For me, it’s late spring. It’s usually quite sunny, and not too hot in this season. You can visit Big Ben and travel on a red double-decker bus. Remember to take your umbrella with you because it rains in London from time to time. I’d love to see your hometown one day. Would the summer holidays be a good time to visit you? Write soon! Best regards, Lisa Yiming Lisa Best time to visit London What other tips may Yiming want to get about the weather in London? tip1: take umbrella with you all the time tip2: wear some light clothes (jacket or coat) It’s usually around 15℃ to 20℃ in late Spring. 9 late spring Best time Weather Activities Tips usually sunny, not too hot visit Big Ben travel on a red double-decker bus Tip 1: Do something that best show the local views in London. take an umbrella Tip 2: Give tips on the local weather in London. wear light clothes (jackets or coats) around 15℃ to 20℃ Read again and answer questions. How does Lisa talk about activities and give tips? By using “You can …” and imperatives (祈使句). Why not do…? It’s adj./n. to do … … is a great place to do ... Don’t forget to do … You should do … Tip 3: Use different sentences and phrases to give tips. Give a friendly offer (提议) or wish … Tip 4: Say something to show you’re thinking about the recipient (收信人). 8 How to give a friend some tips about visiting your hometown in an email? Greeting Body Closing Signature Structure Content best time weather activities tips *offer/wish It’s … in … It’s + adj./n. + to do …/You can do …/… Remember to do …/Don’t forget to do …/You should do …/… Language How to help Yiming to give Lisa some tips about visiting Shanghai in an email? I’d love to see your hometown one day. Would the summer holidays be a good time to visit you? Write soon! tips for the best time for Lisa to visit Shanghai tips for travellng in summer holidays (A good time or not?) Now please plan your writing by completing the outline of the content. It’s task one on your worksheet. 设计目的：让学生根据所学列出写作框架 13 What’s the best time for Lisa to visit Shanghai? Is the summer holidays a good time for travelling in Shanghai? Not a good time !!! Too hot for a British girl! the best time: in late October or early November the 2nd best time: in Spring Now please plan your writing by completing the outline of the content. It’s task one on your worksheet. 设计目的：让学生根据所学列出写作框架 15 Outline (大纲) 18~22℃ in late October; usually cool & windy have a citywalk in Wukang Road; enjoy the night views of the city in the Bund; enjoy the yellow fallen leaves and take photos with them in Yu Garden; ... ... take Didi (滴滴打车) to have a tour; take a bus tour; wear ... wind coat (风衣)；jackets; jeans; hat; ... Now please plan your writing by completing the outline of the content. It’s task one on your worksheet. 设计目的：让学生根据所学列出写作框架 20 Best time to visit Shanghai *Best time Weather Activities Tips for traveliing and clothes *Reasons for not visiting Shanghai in Summer holidays 21 Help Yiming to write a reply to Lisa’s email. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Checklist Did I include a greeting, a body, a closing and a signature? Did I write about the best time, the weather, the activities and the tips? Did I use different expressions to give suggestions? Did I show I was thinking about Lisa? Now it’s time for you to write a reply to Lisa’s email based on your outline. Here is the checklist for you. Let’s start. 设计目的：指导学生根据框架结构按照checklist的提示进行写作。 21 Lavf61.7.100 Packed by Bilibili XCoder v2.0.2 Lavf61.7.100 Packed by Bilibili XCoder v2.0.2 $