Unit 6 Living with nature 单元话题（自然和谐共生）写作满分范文12篇-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“自然和谐共生”主题，分基础、进阶、综合三层次系统训练写作能力，覆盖多样文体与核心话题，助力语言能力与文化意识提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础入门训练|4篇|提示问题式写作，聚焦动物保护、自然重要性等基础话题|从具体保护对象、日常行动切入，构建“现象-意义-行动”基础写作逻辑| |进阶拓展训练|4篇|应用文体写作（邮件、论坛帖子、演讲稿），融入单元词汇与跨文化沟通|在基础逻辑上增加情感表达与建议合理性分析，提升思维品质| |能力综合实践|4篇|复杂任务写作（低碳生活演讲、投稿、记叙文），结合真实情境与价值判断|整合多维度知识，从个人到社会层面深化“和谐共生”认知，发展学习能力|

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语期末复习系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语期末复习系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Living with nature 单元话题（自然和谐共生）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假设你是李华，你校将以“Protecting Animals, Living in Harmony（和谐）”为主题举办英语征文大赛。请你据以下提示问题，从保护对象、保护意义、日常行动等方面，写一篇短文投稿。 1. Which kind of animals do you care about most and why? 2. Why is it important to live in harmony with them? 3. What small things can we do to protect animals in our daily life? 4. Something more about your ideas. 注意：词数100词左右（开头已给出的词不计入总词数）。 Protecting Animals, Living In Harmony Animals are our friends, and living in harmony with them is the key to a beautiful world. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Protecting Animals, Living in Harmony     Animals are our friends, and living in harmony with them is the key to a beautiful world.     Among all animals, I care about stray cats and dogs most. They are homeless and often go hungry, but they are still gentle to people. It is important to live in harmony with them because every animal plays a role in nature. Protecting them helps keep the balance of our ecosystem.     In daily life, we can do many small things. We should never hurt them, and refuse to buy products made from wild animals. We can also tell our friends and family the importance of animal protection. Let’s work together to protect animals, and we will live in a warmer and more harmonious world. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：议论性记叙文，用一般现在时为主   明确要点：动物的重要性，最关注的流浪动物（处境、特质），保护动物的具体做法   确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：语言简洁明了，突出“和谐共处”的核心，贴合主题不偏离   [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：总起句，点明动物是人类朋友，与动物和谐共处是美好世界的关键   主体段：重点介绍最关注的流浪动物（处境、特质），说明与动物和谐共处的重要性   结尾段：提出保护动物的具体做法，发出呼吁，升华“共建温暖和谐世界”的主题   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：动物的重要性及关注的流浪动物   关注对象：stray cats and dogs/wild animals   处境描述：homeless/go hungry/lonely/in danger   动物特质：gentle/friendly/lovely   重要意义：play a role in nature/keep the balance of our ecosystem/protect biodiversity/enrich our life   要点二：保护动物的具体做法   核心原则：never hurt them/care for them/respect them   具体行动：refuse to buy products made from wild animals/tell friends and family the importance of animal protection/feed stray animals properly/call for more people to join in 最终愿景：live in a warmer and more harmonious world/build a harmonious relationship between humans and animals 2．绿水青山就是金山银山 (Green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver)，这说明保护自然的重要性。假如你是李华，请根据下面内容要点提示，以Let’s Protect Nature为题写一篇英语短文，参加学校的英语演讲比赛。 内容要点： 1. 保护自然的重要性：大自然提供给我们清新的空气、充足的食物和丰富的资源 (resource)； 2. 大自然所面临的问题：水资源被污染 (pollute)、森林面积大量减少、人们猎杀许多野生动物； 3. 呼吁：保护自然，与自然和谐 (friendly) 相处。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文80词左右。 Let’s Protect Nature ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Let’s Protect Nature Hello, everyone! As we all know, green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver. It is very important for us to protect nature. Nature provides us with clean air, enough food and rich resources. But now nature faces serious problems. Water is polluted, the area of forests is becoming smaller and smaller, and people kill a lot of wild animals. It is time for us to take action to protect nature. Let people and nature be friendly to each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用题干给出的“绿水青山就是金山银山(Green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver)”引出保护大自然的重要性。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“保护大自然的重要性”、“大自然所面临的问题”方面开展写作，涵盖所提示的内容要点。 第三步，书写结语。呼吁人们一起保护大自然。 [亮点词汇] ① As we all know 众所周知 ② provide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物 ③ rich resources 丰富的资源 ④ take action 采取行动 ⑤ be friendly to 对……友好 [高分句型] ① It is very important for us to protect nature.（It is + adj. for sb. to do sth.句型） ② It is time for us to take action to protect nature.（It is time for sb. to do sth.句型） ③ Let people and nature be friendly to each other.（Let引导的祈使句） 3．今年4月22号是世界地球日，珍爱地球、人与自然和谐相处是今年的主题。节约资源，保护环境是每个公民义不容辞的责任，作为中学生的我们应从学校、家庭入手，从我做起，从小事做起，让家和学校更环保，更美丽。 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Things I can do to make my ________ greener and more beautiful” （请以“我可以做些什么让我的________更环保更美丽”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1．What resources can you save? 2．What can you do to protect the environment? （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Things I can do to make my school greener and more beautiful We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it. As for the students, everyone must do something to protect the school environment. First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately. What’s more, I will use cloth shopping bags instead of plastic bags to go shopping. Finally, I will use both sides of the paper as much as possible. In a word, I will try my best to protect the school environment. I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示和话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全标题； 第二步，介绍你如何让学校环境更环保更美丽； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②what’s more而且 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] ①We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it.（原因状语从句） ②First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately.（时间状语从句） ③I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live.（宾语从句） 4．每年的6月5日是世界环境日。今年的世界环境日的中国主题是“人与自然和谐共生”。为配合今年的环保主题活动，请你以“Better Environment, Better Life”为题，写一篇90字环保征文 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。要点如下： 环境问题 政府要求人们怎么做？ 青少年应该怎么做？ 1. drop litter everywhere 2. rivers, lakes, polluted 3. air pollution causes illnesses 4. influence on people’s daily life 1. walk to work or… instead of… 2. save water by… 3. keep public places clean 4. develop a healthy lifestyle 1. … 2. … 要求：(1)内容包括所提供的要点； (2)文中不要提及真实姓名、学校等信息；(3)作为青少年，请你补充1—2点你的个人做法。 Better Environment, Better Life Pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Better Environment, Better Life Pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. Litter is dropped everywhere, so rivers and lakes are polluted. What’s worse, air pollution causes health problems. Pollution has a great influence on people’s daily life. Protecting the environment is everyone’s duty. The government asks people to drive cars less often and save as much water as possible. People are told to keep public places clean. Besides, it’s important for people to develop a green life. As teenagers, we can go to school on foot or by bike every day. And we can reuse water and make full use of water. To live a better life, we should try our best to have a better environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍环境问题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍政府要求人们怎么做。 第三步，介绍青少年应该怎么做。 [亮点词汇] ①has a great influence on对……影响很大 ②as…as possible尽可能 ③try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事 [高分句型] ① The government asks people to drive cars less often and save as much water as possible.（and连接的句子） ②To live a better life, we should try our best to have a better environment.（动词不定式作目的状语） 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目要对可爱的动物进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家了解动物，保护动物，与大自然和谐相处。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What’s your favourite animal? Where do they live? 2. What do they look like? What can they do? 3. How can we live in harmony (和谐) with them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear my friends, As we all know, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear my friends, As we all know, animals are our friends and an important part of nature. My favorite animal is the giant panda. They mainly live in the mountains of Sichuan, China. Giant pandas look really cute with their black and white fur. They have round faces and big black eyes, just like wearing a pair of sunglasses. They are good at climbing trees and can also swim well. To live in harmony with them, we should protect their living environment. Let’s work together to keep these lovely animals safe and happy. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括最喜欢的动物、它们的生活环境、外貌特征、能力以及我们如何与它们和谐相处。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，使演讲稿更加生动有趣。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及动物是自然的重要部分，引出自己最喜欢的动物——大熊猫，为后文的介绍做铺垫； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从大熊猫的生活环境、外貌特征、能力三个方面进行详细介绍，使听众对大熊猫有更全面的了解； 第三步，书写结语。提出保护大熊猫及其生活环境的建议，并呼吁大家共同努力，保护这些可爱的动物，与它们和谐相处。 [亮点词汇] ①mainly live in主要生活在 ②look cute看起来可爱 ③be good at擅长 ④live in harmony with与……和谐相处 ⑤work together共同努力 [高分句型] ①To live in harmony with them, we should protect their living environment.（动词不定式作目的状语） 6．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike在新闻上看到最近世界各地频繁发生地震和火山爆发，他感到非常害怕，写信向你询问如何应对自然灾害。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 安抚他的情绪（自然灾害虽然可怕，但我们可以做好准备）； 2. 提出应对建议（如：学习急救知识、准备应急包、关注官方预警等）； 3. 表达希望（人类与自然和谐共处）。要求： 1. 词数100~120词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 包含所有要点，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 至少使用3个本单元词汇（如temper, warning, destroy, calm, protect等）。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about the natural disasters in the news. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about the natural disasters in the news. Natural disasters are terrible, but we don’t need to be too scared. We can make enough preparations to protect ourselves. Here are some useful suggestions. First, learn basic first-aid skills to deal with sudden dangers. This is necessary. Second, prepare an emergency bag with the necessary daily things. Third, pay attention to official warning messages in advance, which can help us avoid being destroyed by disasters. These small actions help protect us from being hurt or even destroyed by disasters. Besides, if humans live in peace with nature, natural disasters will become less frequent. Don’t be too anxious. We can face nature wisely. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：邮件，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含三个方面——安抚情绪、提出应对建议、表达希望 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）和第二人称（you） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数100~120；至少使用3个本单元词汇 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：承接已给开头，安抚情绪 第二段：提出具体应对建议 第三段：表达希望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：安抚情绪 承认现实：Natural disasters are terrible/It’s normal to feel scared等 安慰鼓励：we don’t need to be too scared/we can make preparations to protect ourselves/with proper preparations, we can...等 要点二：应对建议 建议：learn basic first-aid skills to deal with sudden dangers/prepare an emergency bag/pay attention to official warning messages in advance/watch the news in time等 要点三：表达希望 希望内容：live in peace with nature/humans and nature can live in harmony/natural disasters will happen less often等 7．假设你是李辉。本周学校英语论坛的讨论主题为“人与自然和谐共生”。请结合自己的实际和要点提示，写一个帖子发布在论坛上。 要点如下：（1）介绍一种你喜欢的动物或者植物； （2）说说它们与人类的联系及我们应该怎样对待它们。 注意：（1）词数为70左右； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear friends, The topic “We should live with nature in harmony” is very popular on the forum. I’d like to share my opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear friends, The topic “We should live with nature in harmony” is very popular on the forum. I’d like to share my opinions. My favorite is the bamboo. It grows fast and strong, providing us with clean air and useful materials. In Chinese culture, bamboo symbolizes strength and flexibility, just like the spirit we need to live in harmony with nature. To protect plants like bamboo, we should avoid cutting them randomly and support reforestation. By respecting every plant, we make our world greener and healthier. Let’s cherish nature together. Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括介绍一种喜欢的动物或植物、它们与人类的联系以及我们应该如何对待它们。例文没有遗漏这些要点，并适当添加了细节，如竹子的象征意义，使行文更加连贯和丰富。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头直接引用了论坛的主题，并表明了分享个人观点的意愿，即“I’d like to share my opinions.”，从而引出了重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从竹子的特性、与人类的联系以及我们应该如何对待它们三个方面进行了详细阐述； 第三步，书写结语。结尾表达了共同珍惜自然的愿望，即“Let’s cherish nature together.”，与开头相呼应，使整篇文章结构完整。 [亮点词汇] ①symbolizes象征 ②flexibility灵活性 ③reforestation植树造林 [高分句型] ①It grows fast and strong, providing us with clean air and useful materials.（现在分词作结果状语） ②In Chinese culture, bamboo symbolizes strength and flexibility, just like the spirit we need to live in harmony with nature.（比喻的修辞手法） 8．地球是人类的家园，动物是人类的朋友。人与自然应该和谐相处。假如你是学生Tom，请你以“Protect the Earth and Love Animals”为题写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全体师生积极行动，构建人类与自然命运共同体。 要点提示： 1. 我叫Tom，是八年级一班的学生，喜欢自然界，对湿地感兴趣；最喜欢冬季，因为我喜欢堆雪人。 2. 人们砍伐树木和森林，导致野生动物生存空间越来越少。 3. 由于人类的活动，地球变脏、变暖，自然灾害多发。 4. 政府应该制定法律、采取措施来保护野生动物和环境。 5. 我们学生应该栽更多的树木：知道保护动物的重要性；不要吃野生动物，也不要乱扔垃圾。 要求： 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥。 2. 表达中不得提及真实的姓名和校名等相关信息。 3. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 【答案】 例文 Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals. My name is Tom, from Class 1, Grade 8. I love nature, especially wetlands. Winter is my favorite season because I enjoy making snowmen. However, I feel sad seeing people cut down trees and forests, leaving less space for wild animals. Human activities also make Earth dirtier and warmer, causing more natural disasters. The government should make laws and take action to protect wildlife and the environment. As students, we can plant more trees, understand the importance of protecting animals, avoid eating wild animals, and never litter. Let’s work together to build a community where humans and nature live in harmony. That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并表达对自然的热爱； 第二步，根据题干的要点，说明当前环境问题； 第三步，提出政府与学生应采取的行动，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①especially尤其 ②disasters灾害 [高分句型] ①Winter is my favorite season because I enjoy making snowmen.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） ②Let’s work together to build a community where humans and nature live in harmony.（祈使句，运用了where引导的定语从句） 能力综合实践4篇 9．中国式现代化是人与自然和谐共生的现代化，绿色低碳是中国式现代化的底色。为大力弘扬绿色低碳的理念，学校英语俱乐部开展以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇80~100词的演讲稿，参加比赛。 What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life? Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this goal. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life? Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help achieve this goal. Firstly, we can plant trees to block wind and prevent soil erosion, which helps protect the environment. We should also save water by reusing it and save electricity by turning off lights and appliances when they’re not in use. For travel, choosing public transport or biking instead of driving alone can greatly reduce carbon emissions. Besides, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic ones when shopping and recycle waste materials to reduce pollution. Let’s take action now and contribute to a greener future! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文（演讲稿形式），用一般现在时为主 明确要点：植树（作用）、节约能源（节约用水、节约用电）、更环保的出行方式、减少浪费（使用布袋、回收利用） 确定人称：第一人称（I/we/our） 注意事项：演讲稿格式，围绕“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”主题展开 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：引出话题，表明每个人都能为实现低碳生活目标出份力 主体段：分别从植树、节约能源、环保出行、减少浪费四个方面阐述做法 结尾段：呼吁大家行动起来，共创绿色未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：植树 植树作用：plant trees to block wind and prevent soil erosion（植树防风固土）；protect the environment（保护环境） 拓展表达：Trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.（树木能吸收二氧化碳并释放氧气） 要点二：节约能源 节约用水：save water by reusing it（通过重复用水来节约用水） 拓展表达：We can collect rainwater for watering plants.（我们可以收集雨水来浇花） 节约用电：save electricity by turning off lights and appliances when they’re not in use（不用时关灯和电器来节约用电） 拓展表达：We should unplug chargers when they are not charging.（不充电时应该拔掉充电器） 要点三：更环保的出行方式 出行方式：choosing public transport or biking instead of driving alone（选择公共交通或骑自行车而不是独自开车） 拓展表达：We can also walk for short distances.（短距离我们也可以步行） 作用效果：reduce carbon emissions（减少碳排放） 拓展表达：cut down on air pollution（减少空气污染） 要点四：减少浪费 使用布袋：use cloth bags instead of plastic ones when shopping（购物时用布袋代替塑料袋） 拓展表达：Cloth bags are reusable and eco-friendly.（布袋可重复使用且环保） 回收利用：recycle waste materials to reduce pollution（回收利用废料来减少污染） 拓展表达：We can sort garbage for recycling.（我们可以对垃圾进行分类以便回收利用） 结尾呼吁句型： Let’s take action now and contribute to a greener future!（让我们现在行动起来，为绿色未来贡献力量！） It’s time for us to do something to protect our planet.（是我们为保护地球做些事情的时候了。） 10．假设你所在的学校正在开展“保护自然，从我做起”的主题活动，请你以一名中学生的身份，写一篇短文分享动植物对人类的重要性，并提出与自然和谐共生的建议。 写作要点：(1)动植物的重要性：如提供食物、净化空气、维持生态平衡。 (2)人类与自然的关系：依赖自然生存，需保护环境。 (3)和谐共生的方法：节约资源、减少污染、参与环保活动。 写作要求：(1)不得使用真实的姓名或学校名。 (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。包含具体例子(如蜜蜂授粉、树木净化空气等)。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，结构清晰。 (4)词数约100词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                      Protecting Nature, Starting from Me     Plants and animals are very important to humans. They provide us with food, clean the air, and keep the balance of nature. For example, bees help flowers grow by carrying pollen, and trees make the air fresher.     We depend on nature to live, so we must protect the environment. To live in harmony with nature, we should save resources, reduce pollution, and take part in environmental activities. For instance, we can use less water, stop littering, and join tree-planting events.      Let’s take action now to make our world a better place! 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”，表达客观事实和建议； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖动植物重要性、人类与自然的关系、和谐共生的方法，并举例说明。 【写作步骤】第一步：开门见山说明动植物的重要性，并列举具体例子（蜜蜂授粉、树木净化空气）； 第二步：强调人类依赖自然，需保护环境，过渡到建议部分； 第三步：提出具体建议（节约资源、减少污染、参与活动），结尾呼吁行动。 【亮点词汇】① provide提供 ② keep...clean保持……清洁 ③ take part in参与 【高分句型】① Bees help flowers grow by carrying pollen.（运用动名词短语作方式状语） ② We depend on nature to live, so we must protect the environment.（运用so连接因果复合句） ③ To live in harmony with nature, we should save resources...（运用不定式作目的状语） 11．在云南西双版纳，Isabel亲眼目睹了亚洲象与人类和谐共处的场景，深受触动。然而，世界上很多地区的大象却面临生存危机。假如你是Isabel，请以“Protecting the Elephant”为题，向China Daily投稿，结合以下要点，写一篇文章呼吁大家共同保护大象。 Protecting the Elephant Looks long trunks (象鼻) /large ears/... Abilities swim/draw pictures/... Problems kill them for their ivory/... Solutions (解决方案) governments: make laws organizations: ... students: ... 要求： 1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Protecting the Elephant I am glad to see elephants live peacefully with people in Xishuangbanna. But elephants are in danger in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Protecting the Elephant I am glad to see elephants live peacefully with people in Xishuangbanna. But elephants are in danger in the world. Elephants are amazing. They have long trunks and large ears. They can even swim and draw pictures. However, people kill them for their ivory, which makes their numbers drop rapidly. To protect elephants, governments should make strict laws. Organizations can raise public awareness. As students, we can spread knowledge about elephant protection and refuse ivory products. Let’s work together to save these lovely animals! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点需涵盖大象外观、能力、面临问题、保护方案，需完整呈现表格信息，适当补充细节，突出呼吁保护大象核心。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出大象生存现状，开启对保护大象的呼吁。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从大象特征、面临问题以及保护方案三方面进行阐述。 第三步，书写结语。呼吁行动，强化主题。 [亮点词汇] ①long trunks长象鼻 ②ivory象牙 ③drop rapidly快速减少 ④make strict laws制定严格法律 ⑤raise public awareness提高公众意识 ⑥refuse ivory products拒绝象牙制品 [高分句型] However, people kill them for their ivory, which makes their numbers drop rapidly. (which引导定语从句) Let’s work together to save these lovely animals! (祈使句) 12．大自然是生命的摇篮，人类与动植物共同构成了和谐的生态家园。在成长过程中，总有某种植物或动物曾带给你惊喜的瞬间、温暖的陪伴，成为你心中的偏爱。请以“我最喜欢的______”为题（横线上补充植物或动物）写一篇短文。写作提示： 1．清晰描述你与它第一次相遇的场景（如时间、地点、它的模样，以及你当时的感受）； 2．选取一次印象深刻的相处事件，体现它带给你的惊喜或感动； 3．结合自身思考，说说未来你会如何更好地呵护它、与它和谐相处。 写作要求： 1．先将题目补充完整，文体为记叙文； 2．内容真实具体，情感真挚，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名； 4．词数80词左右。 My favourite ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My favourite cat I met a little white cat near my home last spring. It looked thin but had bright blue eyes. I felt sorry for it and gave it some food. One rainy day, I found it waiting at my door. It meowed softly as if saying hello. This surprised and warmed my heart. Now, I plan to feed it regularly and build a small house for it. I will also tell friends to be kind to animals. We should live in harmony with nature. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，主题为“我最喜欢的猫”； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括第一次相遇的场景、一次印象深刻的相处事件以及未来如何更好地呵护它、与它和谐相处。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I met a little white cat near my home last spring”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“相遇场景、印象深刻的事件”等方面重点介绍与猫的相处情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“未来会更好地呵护猫，与它和谐相处”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①regularly 定期地 ②as if 好像 ③live in harmony with 与……和谐相处 [高分句型] ①It meowed softly as if saying hello.（as if引导方式状语从句） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语期末复习系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语期末复习系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Living with nature 单元话题（自然和谐共生）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假设你是李华，你校将以“Protecting Animals, Living in Harmony（和谐）”为主题举办英语征文大赛。请你据以下提示问题，从保护对象、保护意义、日常行动等方面，写一篇短文投稿。 1. Which kind of animals do you care about most and why? 2. Why is it important to live in harmony with them? 3. What small things can we do to protect animals in our daily life? 4. Something more about your ideas. 注意：词数100词左右（开头已给出的词不计入总词数）。 Protecting Animals, Living In Harmony Animals are our friends, and living in harmony with them is the key to a beautiful world. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．绿水青山就是金山银山 (Green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver)，这说明保护自然的重要性。假如你是李华，请根据下面内容要点提示，以Let’s Protect Nature为题写一篇英语短文，参加学校的英语演讲比赛。 内容要点： 1. 保护自然的重要性：大自然提供给我们清新的空气、充足的食物和丰富的资源 (resource)； 2. 大自然所面临的问题：水资源被污染 (pollute)、森林面积大量减少、人们猎杀许多野生动物； 3. 呼吁：保护自然，与自然和谐 (friendly) 相处。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文80词左右。 Let’s Protect Nature ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．今年4月22号是世界地球日，珍爱地球、人与自然和谐相处是今年的主题。节约资源，保护环境是每个公民义不容辞的责任，作为中学生的我们应从学校、家庭入手，从我做起，从小事做起，让家和学校更环保，更美丽。 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Things I can do to make my ________ greener and more beautiful” （请以“我可以做些什么让我的________更环保更美丽”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1．What resources can you save? 2．What can you do to protect the environment? （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．每年的6月5日是世界环境日。今年的世界环境日的中国主题是“人与自然和谐共生”。为配合今年的环保主题活动，请你以“Better Environment, Better Life”为题，写一篇90字环保征文 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。要点如下： 环境问题 政府要求人们怎么做？ 青少年应该怎么做？ 1. drop litter everywhere 2. rivers, lakes, polluted 3. air pollution causes illnesses 4. influence on people’s daily life 1. walk to work or… instead of… 2. save water by… 3. keep public places clean 4. develop a healthy lifestyle 1. … 2. … 要求：(1)内容包括所提供的要点； (2)文中不要提及真实姓名、学校等信息；(3)作为青少年，请你补充1—2点你的个人做法。 Better Environment, Better Life Pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目要对可爱的动物进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家了解动物，保护动物，与大自然和谐相处。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What’s your favourite animal? Where do they live? 2. What do they look like? What can they do? 3. How can we live in harmony (和谐) with them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear my friends, As we all know, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike在新闻上看到最近世界各地频繁发生地震和火山爆发，他感到非常害怕，写信向你询问如何应对自然灾害。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 安抚他的情绪（自然灾害虽然可怕，但我们可以做好准备）； 2. 提出应对建议（如：学习急救知识、准备应急包、关注官方预警等）； 3. 表达希望（人类与自然和谐共处）。要求： 1. 词数100~120词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 包含所有要点，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 至少使用3个本单元词汇（如temper, warning, destroy, calm, protect等）。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about the natural disasters in the news. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假设你是李辉。本周学校英语论坛的讨论主题为“人与自然和谐共生”。请结合自己的实际和要点提示，写一个帖子发布在论坛上。 要点如下：（1）介绍一种你喜欢的动物或者植物； （2）说说它们与人类的联系及我们应该怎样对待它们。 注意：（1）词数为70左右； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear friends, The topic “We should live with nature in harmony” is very popular on the forum. I’d like to share my opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．地球是人类的家园，动物是人类的朋友。人与自然应该和谐相处。假如你是学生Tom，请你以“Protect the Earth and Love Animals”为题写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全体师生积极行动，构建人类与自然命运共同体。 要点提示： 1. 我叫Tom，是八年级一班的学生，喜欢自然界，对湿地感兴趣；最喜欢冬季，因为我喜欢堆雪人。 2. 人们砍伐树木和森林，导致野生动物生存空间越来越少。 3. 由于人类的活动，地球变脏、变暖，自然灾害多发。 4. 政府应该制定法律、采取措施来保护野生动物和环境。 5. 我们学生应该栽更多的树木：知道保护动物的重要性；不要吃野生动物，也不要乱扔垃圾。 要求： 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥。 2. 表达中不得提及真实的姓名和校名等相关信息。 3. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 能力综合实践4篇 9．中国式现代化是人与自然和谐共生的现代化，绿色低碳是中国式现代化的底色。为大力弘扬绿色低碳的理念，学校英语俱乐部开展以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇80~100词的演讲稿，参加比赛。 What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life? Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this goal. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你所在的学校正在开展“保护自然，从我做起”的主题活动，请你以一名中学生的身份，写一篇短文分享动植物对人类的重要性，并提出与自然和谐共生的建议。 写作要点：(1)动植物的重要性：如提供食物、净化空气、维持生态平衡。 (2)人类与自然的关系：依赖自然生存，需保护环境。 (3)和谐共生的方法：节约资源、减少污染、参与环保活动。 写作要求：(1)不得使用真实的姓名或学校名。 (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。包含具体例子(如蜜蜂授粉、树木净化空气等)。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，结构清晰。 (4)词数约100词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．在云南西双版纳，Isabel亲眼目睹了亚洲象与人类和谐共处的场景，深受触动。然而，世界上很多地区的大象却面临生存危机。假如你是Isabel，请以“Protecting the Elephant”为题，向China Daily投稿，结合以下要点，写一篇文章呼吁大家共同保护大象。 Protecting the Elephant Looks long trunks (象鼻) /large ears/... Abilities swim/draw pictures/... Problems kill them for their ivory/... Solutions (解决方案) governments: make laws organizations: ... students: ... 要求： 1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Protecting the Elephant I am glad to see elephants live peacefully with people in Xishuangbanna. But elephants are in danger in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．大自然是生命的摇篮，人类与动植物共同构成了和谐的生态家园。在成长过程中，总有某种植物或动物曾带给你惊喜的瞬间、温暖的陪伴，成为你心中的偏爱。请以“我最喜欢的______”为题（横线上补充植物或动物）写一篇短文。写作提示： 1．清晰描述你与它第一次相遇的场景（如时间、地点、它的模样，以及你当时的感受）； 2．选取一次印象深刻的相处事件，体现它带给你的惊喜或感动； 3．结合自身思考，说说未来你会如何更好地呵护它、与它和谐相处。 写作要求： 1．先将题目补充完整，文体为记叙文； 2．内容真实具体，情感真挚，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名； 4．词数80词左右。 My favourite ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $