Unit 7 Writing课件2025-2026学年沪教版七年级英语下册

该初中英语课件围绕“介绍敬佩的人”写作主题，通过头脑风暴问题引导学生思考榜样特质，结合思维导图分析范文结构，搭建从词汇积累到思维激活再到写作实践的学习支架，帮助学生掌握人物身份、事迹成就、敬佩原因的写作框架。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、文化意识与思维品质培养，以张桂梅、苏翊鸣为实例，通过范文拆解、词汇句型激活及Post-writing检查清单，采用“输入-分析-输出-反馈”教学模式。学生能提升写作逻辑与表达能力，教师可直接使用完整资源高效开展教学。

Unit 7 Role models of our time Key question What makes a role model of our time? New phrases sugar pill chief engineer 糖丸 总工程师 Brainstorming What questions will you ask if you want to know about your deskmate’s role model? Lead in How to write about the person we admire? Pre-writing Decide who you want to write about. Here are some ideas. The person I admire most He / She can be someone you care for, respect or love. Step 1 Work in groups. Read the article, and use a mind map to analyse the structure of it. Pre-writing I admire Zhang Guimei most, a devoted teacher and principle. Zhang wanted to help girls from poor families get a proper education. So, it took Zhang six years and lots of hard work to build a free public high school for girls in the mountains. Although she is poor and suffers from serious health problems, she still insists on running the school. Thanks to her, around 2,000 girls from poor families have taken the college entrance examination and realized their university dreams. Zhang gave the girls in the mountains the chance to see the world outside. In 2021, Zhang was awarded the July 1st Medal — an award for outstanding members of the CPC. She is truly a role model of our time. Step 2 While-writing Complete the mind map Step2 built a free public high school for girls in the mountains helped about 2,000 girls realize their university dreams outstanding; devoted; gave the girls in the mountains the chance to see the world outside I admire Zhang Guimei most, a devoted teacher and principle. Zhang wanted to help girls from poor families get a proper education. So, it took Zhang six years and lots of hard work to build a free public high school for girls in the mountains. Although she is poor and suffers from serious health problems, she still insists on running the school. Thanks to her, around 2,000 girls from poor families have taken the college entrance examination and realized their university dreams. Zhang gave the girls in the mountains the chance to see the world outside. In 2021, Zhang was awarded the July 1st Medal—an award for outstanding members of the CPC. She is truly a role model of our time. An opening sentence A concluding sentence Pay attention to the structure. Para 1: 点明人物 + 身份 Para 2: 主要事迹 + 成就 Para 3: 敬佩原因 + 感悟 / 评价 Step3 1. The person (人称)? 2. The tense (时态)? 3. How many paragraphs? What do you need to pay attention to before writing? 1. The third person 2. Simple present tense & Simple past tense 3. Three paragraphs While-writing Step 4 Step 4 Step 5 Opening（开头）: The person I admire most is ________, a ________. Body（中间）: He/She ________. Although ________, he/she ________. Thanks to him/her, ________. Ending（结尾）: He/She is truly a role model. His/Her story inspires me to ________. Linking words（连接词） and, but, so, although, thanks to, however Useful expressions（万能句型） Step 5 Step 6 写作任务 1. 审题 人称： 第三人称（用 he/his） 时态： 一般过去时（写过去的努力、获奖）+ 一般现在时（评价、影响） 内容要点： ✅ 身份 ✅ 性格品质 ✅ 主要成就 ✅ 评价 / 敬佩原因 Step 5 Step 6 写作任务 2. 列提纲（Make an outline） Para 1（开头）： 点明人物身份 Para 2（主体）： 性格 + 努力 + 成就 Para 3（结尾）： 评价 + 个人感悟 3. 词汇激活（Activate your words） 职业相关 单板滑雪运动员：a Chinese ____________ 奥运冠军：Olympic ____________ 金牌得主：gold ____________   品质与努力 努力的：____________ 永不放弃：never ____________ 多年的练习：years of ____________ 面对困难：face ____________ 克服困难：____________ difficulties Step 6 写作任务 snowboarder champion medalist hardworking gave up practice difficulties overcome 3. 词汇激活（Activate your words） 成就与影响 赢得金牌：____________ a gold medal 创造历史：____________ history 第一位：the ____________ 激励某人做某事：____________ sb. to do sth. 实现目标：make amazing things ____________ Step 6 写作任务 won made First inspire happen 3. 词汇激活（Activate your words） 句型激活（挖空仿写） 开头句型 The person I admire most is Su Yiming, a great Chinese ____________. 主体句型 What I admire most is not just his Olympic gold medal, but his ____________ and strong heart. Even when he was tired or hurt, he never ____________. He not only won the gold medal… but also ____________ as China’s first Olympic snowboarding champion. After becoming famous, he ____________ training/practising hard. Step 6 写作任务 snowboarder hard work gave up made history kept 3. 词汇激活（Activate your words） 句型激活（挖空仿写） 结尾句型 His story teaches me that… you can make amazing things ____________. He makes me believe that I can also ____________ difficulties. He inspires me to work hard… no matter the ____________. Step 6 写作任务 happen overcome challenges ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ Check and revise. Post-writing ✓ Step 7 Tick (✔) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. The person I admire most The person I admire most is Su Yiming, a great Chinese snowboarder. What I admire most is not just his Olympic gold medal, but his hard work and strong heart. Even when he was tired or hurt, he never gave up. He won a gold medal at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and is the first Chinese gold medalist in snowboarding at the Winter Olympics. After becoming famous, he kept training. His story teaches me that if you really want something and are willing to work very hard for it, you can make amazing things happen. He makes me believe that I can also overcome difficulties in my own life if I try hard enough. 基础版范文 The person I admire most The person I admire most is Su Yiming, a great Chinese snowboarder. What I admire most is not just his Olympic gold medal, but how he spent many years working hard for his dream. Even when things were difficult, he never stopped trying. He not only won the gold medal at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics but also made history as China’s first Olympic snowboarding champion. After becoming famous, he continued practising hard and lived a simple life. The fact that he did this through years of practice teaches me how important it is to keep going. His life is a powerful lesson for all young people like me. Whenever I think about my future, I remember his story. He inspires me to work hard for meaningful things, no matter the challenges. 进阶版范文 Thank you! 20 null 2024 2481.6335 null 2024 3631.0261 $