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Unit 8 Making a Difference 写作导学
写作目标
本单元的写作话题为"有所作为 (Making a Difference)",核心在于运用现在完成时(Present Perfect Tense)及其与for和since的连用,来描述志愿服务的经历、持续的时间以及对他人的影响。你需要学会如何申请加入志愿者组织,如何描述自己已经积累的志愿服务时长,并阐述帮助他人带来的积极改变。重点体现"赠人玫瑰,手有余香"的主题。
素材积累
志愿者活动名词 (Volunteer Activities)
· clean up (清理)
· give directions (指路)
· guide visitors (引导游客)
· plant trees (植树)
· pick up waste (捡垃圾)
· sort waste (分类垃圾)
· care for the elderly (照顾老人)
· feed animals (喂养动物)
· look after sick animals (照顾生病的动物)
· collect donations (募集捐赠物)
· provide information (提供信息)
· teach children life skills (教孩子生活技能)
· visit museums (参观博物馆)
· work at nursing homes (在养老院工作)
· volunteer at animal shelters (在动物收容所做志愿者)
组织与地点 (Organizations & Places)
· animal shelter (动物收容所)
· nursing home (养老院)
· community center (社区中心)
· museum (博物馆)
· hospital (医院)
· park (公园)
· school (学校)
· environmental organization (环保组织)
· sports organization (体育组织)
时间表达与频度 (Time & Duration)
· for two years (长达两年)
· since last year (从去年开始)
· since 2024 (从2024年开始)
· for three months (长达三个月)
· since the summer holidays started (从暑假开始)
· how long (多久)
· once a week (每周一次)
· every weekend (每个周末)
描述感受与品质 (Feelings & Qualities)
· lonely (孤独的)
· special (特别的)
· poor condition (状况不佳)
· in need (有需要的)
· helpful (有帮助的)
· kind (善良的)
· friendly (友好的)
· active (活跃的)
· meaningful (有意义的)
· tired (累的)
· happy (开心的)
· proud (自豪的)
· useful (有用的)
· valuable (宝贵的)
句型积累
询问/描述持续时间 (How long)
· How long have you been a volunteer? (你做志愿者多久了?)
· I have been a volunteer for two years. (我做志愿者两年了。)
· She has worked at the nursing home since last August. (她从去年八月起就在养老院工作。)
· We have cleaned up the park for three hours. (我们清理公园已经三个小时了。)
申请志愿者工作 (Applying)
· I would like to sign up as a volunteer. (我想报名成为一名志愿者。)
· I want to make a difference in my community. (我想在我的社区里有所作为。)
· I am good at... / I have experience in... (我擅长…… / 我有……方面的经验。)
· I can work on weekends. (我可以在周末工作。)
阐述帮助的意义 (The Meaning of Helping)
· Helping others makes me feel happy. (帮助别人让我感到快乐。)
· Every animal is special and needs love. (每只动物都是特别的,都需要关爱。)
· We must care for the elderly. (我们必须关心老人。)
· Volunteering is a good way to make new friends. (志愿服务是结交新朋友的好方法。)
开头句、中间句、结尾句积累
开头句 (Beginning)
· I am writing to apply for the volunteer position. (我写信是为了申请这个志愿者职位。)
· Let me tell you about my volunteer experience. (让我告诉你我的志愿者经历。)
· I want to help out in my free time. (我想在空闲时间帮忙。)
中间句 (Body)
· 描述经历: I have been a volunteer at the animal shelter for two years. I clean the cages and feed the animals.
· 描述时长: I have worked with the elderly since last summer. I exercise with them and talk to them.
· 描述感受: Although the work is tiring, I feel very happy because I can help others.
· 描述技能: I am good at communicating with people. I can guide visitors in the museum.
结尾句 (Ending)
· I hope I can join you and make a difference. (希望我能加入你们,有所作为。)
· Thank you for your consideration. (感谢您的考虑。)
· I am looking forward to your reply. (期待您的回复。)
谋篇布局
写作步骤
内容提示
开头 (Beginning)
引出话题:1. 直接表明写信目的(申请志愿者)。2. 或者通过一个场景引入(看到招募广告/想为社区做贡献)。
中间 (Body)
具体描述:1. 经历与技能:运用现在完成时(have/has + done)描述自己已经做过哪些志愿工作。2. 时间与频度:运用for和since描述持续的时间。3. 细节补充:描述在志愿服务中具体做什么(如:打扫、陪伴、引导)。
结尾 (Ending)
总结与呼吁:1. 总结帮助他人的意义(It makes me feel...)。2. 表达希望加入的愿望(I hope...)。
经典例题
你的学校正在招募学生志愿者(Student Volunteers)去国际学生中心服务。请你给负责老师写一封邮件,申请加入。
审题指导
· 体裁: 电子邮件(应用文)
· 人称: 第一人称(I)
· 时态: 一般现在时(描述现状、意愿)+ 现在完成时(描述过往经历)
· 要点: 申请意愿、过往志愿经历(时长、内容)、个人技能/优势、希望加入的理由
初级范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the student volunteer position. I want to help international students.
I have been a volunteer at my neighbourhood sports club for one year. I help children learn basketball skills. I am good at basketball and I am friendly to others. I can teach them how to play basketball and how to keep safe during the game.
I hope I can join you and make a difference. Thank you for your consideration.
Best wishes,
[Your Name]
高级范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the student volunteer position. I have always wanted to help international students feel at home in our city.
I have been a volunteer at the Longzi Lake Park for six months. I guide visitors and help keep the park clean. I have picked up waste and sorted it into different bins. I also help old people exercise in the park. I am patient and kind, and I enjoy talking with different people. I believe I can help international students learn about our local culture and make new friends.
I hope I can join your team and make a difference in our community. I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
[Your Name]
名师指导
· 时态辨析: 注意区分一般过去时(I visited the old people last week)和现在完成时(I have visited the old people for a year)。本单元重点是"持续"的状态,多用现在完成时。
· for vs. since: for后面接时间段(for two hours, for a week);since后面接时间点或从句(since 2024, since I was a child)。
· 动词搭配: 注意区分take care of(照顾)和look after(照顾),两者可以互换;make a difference(有所作为)是本单元的核心短语,不要写错。
· 情感升华: 在结尾处,不要只说"I like it",试着用"I feel proud to help others"或"It is meaningful to volunteer"来提升文章档次。
小试身手
你的朋友Lily想成立一个"爱护流浪动物"的志愿者小组,请你给她写一封邮件,表达你想加入的意愿,并分享你过去照顾动物的经历。
参考范文
Dear Lily,
I am writing to express my interest in your volunteer group. I really want to help homeless animals.
I have been a volunteer at an animal shelter since last year. I have fed the animals and cleaned their cages. I have also taken care of sick animals. I am good at taking care of animals because I have a dog at home. I know how to make them feel loved and safe.
I hope I can join your group and make a difference for these poor animals. Please let me know if you need any help.
Best wishes,
[Your Name]
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