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外研版新教材八年级英语下册 Unit1-6作文专项训练试卷 考试时间:90分钟 满分:100分 班级:_ 姓名:_ 得分:_ 注意事项 1. 本试卷分为单元专项写作、综合话题写作两部分,共9道写作题; 2. 所有作文严格按照对应词数、时态、格式要求写作,超出或不足词数酌情扣分; 3. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名、地名等个人信息; 4. 要求书写工整、语句通顺、逻辑清晰,可适当拓展细节丰富内容。 一、单元专项写作题(每单元1题,共6题,每题7分,满分42分) 1. Unit 1 The secrets of happiness(幸福密码 宾语从句+感悟表达专项) 核心考点:宾语从句(陈述语序)、感悟类表达、幸福观点阐述、一般现在时为主 题目:幸福藏在生活点滴中,每个人都有自己的幸福秘诀。请以 The Secrets of Happiness 为题,谈谈你理解的幸福、获取幸福的方式以及幸福带给你的意义。 写作要求:熟练运用宾语从句阐述观点;时态统一规范;词数80词左右;要点齐全、逻辑清晰、主题积极。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2. Unit 2 Go for it!(勇敢追梦 情态动词+励志表达专项) 核心考点:情态动词(should/must/can)、鼓励类句型、个人梦想与奋斗、坚持与成长话题 题目:人生贵在坚持,勇于拼搏方能圆梦。请以Go for Your Dreams 为题,介绍你的梦想、追梦路上的困难,以及你为梦想坚持奋斗的做法与感悟。 写作要求:正确使用单元情态动词句型;句式丰富多样;词数80词左右;内容励志、无语法错误、语句流畅。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 3. Unit 3 Food matters(饮食真谛 被动语态+健康建议专项) 核心考点:一般现在时被动语态、健康饮食词汇、饮食利弊分析、提建议句型 题目:饮食关乎健康,良好的饮食习惯是健康的基础。请以 Food Matters a Lot 为题,介绍健康食物的重要性、不良饮食的危害,并给出合理的健康饮食建议。 写作要求:灵活运用被动语态句型;时态准确;词数80词左右;要点完整、说理清晰、贴合主题。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 4. Unit 4 The art of having fun(休闲之道 动词不定式+平衡生活专项) 核心考点:动词不定式作宾语/目的状语、劳逸结合表达、课余生活规划、观点阐述 题目:合理休闲是生活的智慧,能助力学习、治愈生活。请以 The Art of Having Fun 为题,谈谈你对休闲的看法、你的健康休闲方式,以及休闲对学习和生活的帮助。 写作要求:大量运用不定式核心句型;时态以一般现在时为主;词数80词左右;逻辑连贯、内容充实。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 5. Unit 5 Amazing nature(奇妙自然 定语从句+景物升华专项) 核心考点:that/which定语从句、自然景物描写、自然之美、人与自然和谐共处话题 题目:大自然神奇瑰丽,孕育万物生机。请以 Amazing Nature 为题,描写大自然的奇妙景色,阐述自然对人类的意义,以及我们保护自然的责任。 写作要求:熟练运用定语从句修饰景物;时态统一;词数80词左右;描写细腻、主旨深刻、句式高级。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 6. Unit 6 Hitting the road(即刻出发 现在完成时+旅途叙事专项) 核心考点:现在完成时、旅途经历叙事、出行感悟、见闻与收获表达 题目:在路上,遇见美好、收获成长。请以 Hitting the Road 为题,分享一次你难忘的出行或旅行经历,介绍旅途见闻、过程以及你的成长感悟。 写作要求:正确运用现在完成时结合一般过去时叙事;时态切换准确;词数80词左右;叙事完整、情感真挚。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 二、综合话题写作题(共3题,满分58分) 融合2024外研版八下Unit1-6全册核心考点,适配期末统考、真题题型 7. 综合话题一:心怀热爱,逐光而行(U1+U2+U4 融合) 题目:幸福源于坚守,奋斗成就成长,合理的生活节奏让人生更精彩。请以 My Wonderful Growing Life 为题,结合你的幸福观、追梦态度、劳逸结合的生活方式,介绍你的积极成长之路。 写作要点:1. 简述自己理解的幸福;2. 面对困难勇敢追梦、坚持努力的做法;3. 合理休闲、平衡学习与生活的方式;4. 成长感悟。 写作要求:词数90词左右,融合宾语从句、情态动词、不定式等核心句型,时态准确、逻辑严谨、无语法错误。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 8. 综合话题二:敬畏自然,守护健康(U3+U5 融合) 题目:健康饮食守护身心,美丽自然滋养生活。请以 Nature and Health 为题,介绍健康饮食的重要性、自然的奇妙美好,以及青少年守护健康、保护自然的责任与做法。 写作要点:1. 阐述饮食对健康的重要意义;2. 赞美自然的奇妙与珍贵;3. 介绍自己的健康习惯与护自然行动;4. 主题升华。 写作要求:词数90词左右,熟练运用被动语态、定语从句,要点齐全、句式丰富、主旨积极向上。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 9. 综合话题三:行路求知,遇见成长(U1+U5+U6 融合 书信) 题目:假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom对你的旅行生活很感兴趣。请你给他写一封书信,分享一次你的旅行经历,介绍旅途所见的自然美景、出行体验、收获的幸福与成长。 写作要点:1. 礼貌问候、点明写信目的;2. 介绍旅行经历、自然美景与旅途体验;3. 分享旅行带来的幸福感悟与成长收获;4. 结尾祝福、发出邀请。 写作要求:书信格式规范;词数90词左右(首尾不计词数);综合运用现在完成时、定语从句、宾语从句,句式高级、时态精准。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 三、新版标准满分范文 1. The Secrets of Happiness(Unit 1) Nowadays, many people spend their lives looking for happiness and often wonder what the real secrets of happiness are. In my opinion, true happiness has nothing to do with money or expensive things. It lies in simple, warm and ordinary moments in our daily life that we usually ignore. I firmly believe that helping others sincerely is one of the best secrets of happiness. Whenever I help my classmates work out difficult study problems or take the initiative to do housework for my tired parents, I can feel great warmth and satisfaction in my heart. Meanwhile, I think keeping a positive attitude is also very important. No matter what troubles and difficulties we meet in study and life, we should never complain and should keep a sunny mind to face everything. In a word, small kindness, positive attitudes and grateful hearts are the real secrets of happiness. These fine qualities make our ordinary life warm, colorful and full of joy all the time. 2. Go for Your Dreams(Unit 2) Everyone has unique dreams in their heart, and dreams are the driving force that pushes us to move forward. We must hold fast to our dreams and go for them bravely in spite of difficulties. As we all know, no valuable dream can come true easily without continuous hard work and perseverance. My biggest dream is to become a responsible and useful person to society in the future. To realize my dream, I should listen carefully in class and study hard every day. When I meet difficult problems and heavy study pressure, I must not give up easily. I can learn from my mistakes, sum up experience and keep improving myself little by little. Even when I feel tired and stressed, I will keep a strong will and stick to my goals. I strongly believe that hard work never fails. As long as I keep trying and never quit, my dream will definitely come true one day. 3. Food Matters a Lot(Unit 3) As the saying goes, food matters a lot to everyone’s physical and mental health. Our daily diet is closely connected with our physical condition and study state. Nutritious and healthy food can provide us with enough energy for study and exercise, while junk food and unhealthy eating habits are extremely harmful to our bodies. Fresh vegetables and seasonal fruits are eaten by most healthy students every day. They are rich in various vitamins and nutrients that keep our bodies strong and energetic. Junk food such as fried snacks and sugary drinks should not be eaten too often, as it may cause many potential health problems. We are supposed to keep a balanced diet and have three meals regularly. Good eating habits are always regarded as the simplest and most effective way to keep fit. In short, we must pay close attention to our daily diet and develop good eating habits to protect our health all the time. 4. The Art of Having Fun(Unit 4) As middle school students with heavy study tasks, it is extremely important for us to master the art of having fun. Proper and healthy relaxation can effectively help us reduce study pressure, relax our tired minds and improve our study efficiency. I always choose positive and healthy ways to relax in my spare time. I like to read different kinds of books to enrich my mind and broaden my horizons. I also keep doing outdoor sports to stay healthy. I try my best to avoid wasting too much time on meaningless online games. To balance study and rest well, I always make a reasonable plan for my spare time. Proper relaxation helps me study better and live a happier life. Therefore, knowing how to have fun wisely and healthily is an essential skill that helps us grow better during our teenage years. 5. Amazing Nature(Unit 5) Nature is the most amazing and precious gift that the earth gives to all living things on the planet. It is full of magical scenery and endless vitality, bringing beauty and energy to the whole world all year round. The green mountains that stand around our city are tall and magnificent. The clear lakes and blooming colorful flowers make the whole world lively and gorgeous. The fresh air that comes from dense forests always makes us feel relaxed and comfortable after long hours of busy study. Most importantly, nature provides us with clean water, delicious food and fresh air, which are basic necessities for our life. Nature is so amazing and invaluable to every one of us. We must cherish and protect it carefully and learn to live in perfect harmony with nature forever. 6. Hitting the Road(Unit 6) Hitting the road and traveling is a wonderful way to enrich our life experience and gain valuable growth. I have taken several fantastic trips since I was a child, and these precious experiences have left warm memories in my mind. Last summer holiday, I went to a beautiful natural scenic spot with my parents. We traveled by car and enjoyed the charming scenery along the way. We saw rolling green mountains, clear running rivers and various lovely plants and flowers during the trip. This unforgettable trip has taught me that the world is full of hidden beauty waiting for us to discover and appreciate. In fact, every trip on the road is a new experience for learning and growth. I truly love hitting the road and exploring the wonderful unknown world in my spare time. 7. My Wonderful Growing Life(综合一) My teenage life is full of warm happiness and positive passion. I keep a positive and serious attitude towards my study and daily life and move forward steadily every day. I truly believe that real happiness comes from continuous efforts and a positive attitude towards life. In my study and life, I always stick to my goals and go for my dreams bravely. Whenever I meet challenges, I never give up easily. In my spare time, I master the art of having fun to balance my busy study. I often read useful books and do healthy sports to relax myself effectively. These good habits help me grow up healthily and happily. I will keep working hard and maintain this positive state to make my future life more wonderful and meaningful. 8. Nature and Health(综合二) Good physical health and a beautiful natural environment are the most precious treasures in our daily life. They bring us endless energy and joy, so we should always cherish and protect them with our best efforts. Nutritious and healthy food is needed by our body every day to keep us energetic and active. I keep a regular and balanced diet and stay away from all kinds of junk food to protect my health. At the same time, I am deeply attracted by the amazing beauty of nature. The fresh air and beautiful scenery provided by nature can completely relax my tired mind after busy school study. I often take a walk in the park to get close to nature in my free time. In the future, I will keep my healthy eating habits and try my best to protect the natural environment around me, so that I can enjoy a healthier and better life all the time. 9. Wonderful Trip Experience(综合三 书信) Dear Tom, How is everything going recently? I’m glad to receive your letter and share my wonderful trip experience with you. I have just returned from a short but unforgettable trip to a quiet mountain village. The natural scenery there is extremely amazing and attractive. The green mountains surrounding the whole village are tall and lush, and the running river in the village is clear and clean. We walked slowly around the village, enjoyed the fresh natural air and appreciated the peaceful village scenery. This fantastic trip has made me realize how beautiful nature is and has brought me great happiness and relaxation. I think traveling not only enriches my knowledge and broadens my horizons but also helps me grow up gradually. I sincerely welcome you to China and experience such beautiful scenery with me next time! Yours, Li Hua 四、作文评分标准 一档(优秀):紧扣主题,要点齐全,时态准确,语句通顺,无语法错误,词数达标,书写工整(得分分值的85% - 100%)。 二档(良好):主题明确,要点基本齐全,语法错误较少,语句较为通顺,词数基本达标,书写规范(得分分值的70% - 84%)。 三档(合格):贴合主题,部分要点缺失,有少量语法错误,语句基本通顺,词数偏差不大(得分分值的60% - 69%)。 四档(待提升):偏离主题、要点大量缺失,语法错误较多,语句不通顺,词数严重不足(得分分值60%以下)。 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $