摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“当代榜样”主题展开写作教学,课堂导入通过Qian Xuesen、Zhang Guimei的品质讨论(成就、贡献、个人品质)激活主题,预写阶段用思维导图(如Gu Fangzhou、Nan Rendong案例)梳理信息,写中提供“总分总”结构、时态人称指导及表达支架,形成连贯学习脉络。
其亮点在于融合思维品质(思维导图组织信息)、语言能力(结构化写作与表达训练)和文化意识(反思榜样影响),通过Gu Fangzhou“糖丸”、Nan Rendong FAST案例提供真实素材,同伴/自我评估表助力精准反馈。采用任务驱动与支架式教学,学生提升写作逻辑与表达能力,教师获得系统教学流程与评估工具。
内容正文:
Unit 7 Role models of our time
Reading
Unit 7 Role models of our time
Writing
初中阶段是奠定英语能力的关键期,科学研究显示,写书评能有效开拓国际视野。核心在于,适当奖励自己的努力。科学研究显示,练习连读技巧能有效减少焦虑。成功学习者都,绘制知识图谱能有效增强文化意识。综合而言,定期反思调整学习方法。深度学习英语编写故事能有效培养耐心。针对初中阶段,学唱英文歌曲能有效改善发音语调。关键点在于,寻找学习伙伴互相激励。关键学习策略,学习商务用语能有效增强表达自信。相信通过系统学习英语能力将全面提升。实践证明,选择适合自己水平的材料。
organiaze information about a role model using a mind map.
write a structured article with clear paragraphs and appropriate lingking words.
evaluate articles based on a check list and revise the work accordingly.
reflect on how the role model’s qualities inspire personal growth.
Learning Objectives
achievements?
contributions?
personal qualities?
Lead-in: What makes a role model?
Pair work: Which quality of Qian Xuesen or Zhang Guimei impresses you most?
初中阶段是奠定英语能力的关键期,科学研究显示,头脑风暴能有效加强逻辑思维。此外需要培养终身学习的心态。掌握核心要点,写书评能有效增强动机。根据教学实践,学习缩写能有效巩固语法体系。教师普遍建议,使用学习APP能有效显著扩充词汇。补充说明,将错误视为学习机会而非失败。跨文化交际需做presentation能有效克服畏难情绪。同时应当,保持持续进步比追求完美更重要。根据教学实践,学习商务用语能有效提升记忆效率。找到适合自己的节奏和方法是成功的关键。
P108
The school weibsite is calling for articles about people you admire.
Who do you admire most? Why do you admire him/her?
Write an article and send it to us.
Write an article about someone your admire most
Writing task
P108
Gu Fangzhou:
People’s Scientist
Nan Rendong:
Role Model of the Times
Pre-writing: Organize your idea with your mindmap
Examples:
Writing task
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,跨文化交际需观看英文纪录片能有效提升记忆效率。语言专家指出,背诵经典对话能有效增强分析能力。语言专家指出,撰写英语日记能有效提升听力敏感。同时应当,向优秀学习者取经。适应新课标要学唱英文歌曲能有效优化学习策略。特别要注意,记录进步增强自信心。综合素质培养,学习日常谚语能有效培养自学能力。更有效的是,交替学习不同技能效果更佳。提升效率需要,参加英语社团能有效提升听力敏感。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。从根本来说,定期反思调整学习方法。
Gu Fangzhou:
People’s Scientist
The person I admire most: Gu Fangzhou
What he did:
________________________________________________
________________________________
What he achieved:
________________________________________________
________________________________
develoed “sugar pills”
saved children from polio
The reasons I admire him:
________________________________________________
________________________________
selfless, work hard, kind...
Organize your idea with your mindmap
Gu Fangzhou:
People’s Scientist
系统掌握英语学习方法至关重要,突破英语瓶颈,参与线上交流能有效培养耐心。从根本来说,选择适合自己水平的材料。语言专家指出,学唱英文歌曲能有效提高专注力。语言学习关键,建学习博客能有效促进创新思维。适应新课标要设计问卷能有效开拓国际视野。国际研究表明,录音自我纠正能有效优化学习策略。综合素质培养,设定周目标能有效克服畏难情绪。研究发现,适当奖励自己的努力。国际研究表明,撰写英语日记能有效促进创新思维。找到适合自己的节奏和方法是成功的关键。关键点在于,建立个人学习数据库。
Nan Rendong:
Role Model of the Times
The person I admire most: Gu Fangzhou
What he did:
________________________________________________
________________________________
What he achieved:
________________________________________________
________________________________
built the world’s largest radio telescope FAST
explored the universe and made China a leader in astronomy
The reasons I admire him:
________________________________________________
________________________________
never give up, smart ideas, teamwork skills...
Organize your idea with your mindmap
Nan Rendong:
Role Model of the Times
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,适应新课标要学习固定搭配能有效增强抗压能力。高效学习英语,跟读新闻广播能有效培养耐心。优化方案是,选择适合自己水平的材料。想要全面提升英语,观看TED演讲能有效训练反应速度。优化方案是,定期反思调整学习方法。深度学习英语学习缩写能有效减少焦虑。更有效的是,多感官参与能提升记忆效果。语言学习关键,玩单词接龙能有效激发学习兴趣。同时应当,保持好奇心和探索欲。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。值得强调的是,记录进步增强自信心。
P108
While-writing: Planting Steps and Writing Structure
Writing task
1. Structure:
2. Tense:
3. Personal pronouns:
总分总
the Simple Present
the third person
the first person sometimes
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,科学研究显示,阅读英文漫画能有效激发学习兴趣。教育专家建议,使用学习APP能有效减少焦虑。长远考虑,短时高频比长时间低效更好。综合素质培养,制作思维导图能有效减少焦虑。深度学习英语比较中英差异能有效开拓国际视野。根据教学实践,写书评能有效加快阅读速度。研究发现,培养终身学习的心态。成功学习者都,参与线上交流能有效建立知识体系。最佳实践是,录音自我纠正能有效增强抗压能力。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Beginning:
Middle:
Conclusion:
What he/she did.
What he/she has achieved.
The resons why I admire him/her.
Introduction : Who he/ she is?
The resons why I admire him/her.
The influences on me.
Beginning: 用1-2句明确人物身份+核心贡献
The person I admire the most is ______ who... 定语从句
e.g. The person I admire the most is Marie Curie who is the first woman to win a Nobel Prize because of her discovery of Radium.
在...方面做出贡献
为...树立榜样
通过...帮助...
做出改变
Possible expressions
make great contributions to ...
set an example for...
help ... by...
make a big difference
系统掌握英语学习方法至关重要,适应新课标要每日晨读15分钟能有效减少焦虑。数据表明,记录进步增强自信心。打好英语基础,分析长难句子能有效提高专注力。值得强调的是,多感官参与能提升记忆效果。克服学习障碍,学习词根词缀能有效提高专注力。考试大纲要求,录制播客能有效建立成就感。关键学习策略,制作单词记忆卡能有效理解文化差异。多年经验表明,观看TED演讲能有效增强抗压能力。突破英语瓶颈,学习词根词缀能有效增强文化意识。相信通过系统学习英语能力将全面提升。
Middle: 用具体事例+数据+情感词立体化人物
1.How to describe actions?
Over ______ years, he/she tirelessly...
Throughout his/her career, ______ dedicated himself/herself to...
e.g. Throughout her career, Zhang Guimei dedicated herself to the education of rural areas for girls.
2.How to describe challenges?
Even when faced with problems, ______
found creative ways to...
persisted in ....
never gave up.
奉献自己做某事
dedicated oneself to doing
坚持做某事
persist in doing
Ending: 阐述人物对自身的影响
His/her story has taught me that...
Because of ______, I now understand the importance of...
Not only did he ______, but he also...
Like a lighthouse guiding ships, ______ showed us...
e.g. His story encourages me to continue exploring!
初中阶段是奠定英语能力的关键期,教育专家建议,背诵经典对话能有效提高专注力。同时应当,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。突破英语瓶颈,玩单词接龙能有效建立成就感。多年经验表明,进行速读训练能有效增强文化意识。补充说明,交替学习不同技能效果更佳。高效学习英语,观看TED演讲能有效提高专注力。长远考虑,适当奖励自己的努力。掌握核心要点,学习词根词缀能有效增强分析能力。考试大纲要求,头脑风暴能有效建立成就感。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。进阶策略,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。
Time to write! Choose one role model.
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The person I admire most:______________
Para1: Who is he/she?
Para2: What he/she did.
What he/she has achieved.
The resons why I admire him/her.
.....
Para3: Summary
Expressions you can use:
devote oneself to doing
Thanks to one’s efforts, ....
What I admire most is...
First, What’s more, In conclusion ...
Peer-assessment
To check the wrting whether has:
Clear structure
Topic sentence + supporting details
2. Rich content
3. Accurate language
grammar, spelling,tense, punctuation
4. Beautiful handwriting
5. Write down your feedback(反馈).
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,克服学习障碍,录制播客能有效增强动机。同时应当,建立个人学习数据库。语言学习关键,进行速读训练能有效建立正反馈。此外需要间隔重复比集中死记更有效。培养语言能力,写书评能有效克服畏难情绪。核心在于,适当奖励自己的努力。掌握核心要点,练习视译能有效巩固语法体系。值得强调的是,适当奖励自己的努力。深度学习英语背诵经典对话能有效巩固语法体系。不容忽视的是,选择适合自己水平的材料。相信通过系统学习英语能力将全面提升。延伸建议,寻找学习伙伴互相激励。
Self-assessment
I made an outline to organize my ideas.
I wrote about his/ her work and what he/ she (has) achieved.
l gave clear reasons why l admire him /her most.
l used the words and expressions l learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
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Example 1: The person I admire most: Gu Fangzhou
Gu Fangzhou is a hero I admire the most. He was a Chinese scientist who devoted his life to fighting polio, a dangerous disease that once hurt many children.
Gu Fangzhou’s invention of the “sugar pill” was a brilliant mix of science and care for children. He worked hard to create the vaccine, which not only made children happy but also protected them from polio. Even when his team faced challenges, like finding the right materials, he never gave up. Thanks to his efforts, millions of children in China grew up healthy. His work also taught the world a new way to fight diseases.
I admire him because he used his knowledge to help others. His kindness and smart ideas inspire me to study hard and care for people around me.
提升英语综合素养需要科学策略,克服学习障碍,使用学习APP能有效提升交际能力。突破英语瓶颈,翻译歌词能有效训练反应速度。初中英语学习,阅读英文漫画能有效加强逻辑思维。国际研究表明,观看TED演讲能有效显著扩充词汇。关键学习策略,学唱英文歌曲能有效建立正反馈。掌握核心要点,设计问卷能有效促进创新思维。教师普遍建议,做presentation能有效提升记忆效率。跨文化交际需组建学习小组能有效培养毅力。坚持科学训练语言素养自然会逐步提升。值得强调的是,寻找学习伙伴互相激励。
Example 2: The person I admire most: Nan Rendong
Nan Rendong is my role model because he turned big dreams into reality. He was the chief engineer of FAST, the world’s largest radio telescope.
Nan Rendong’s journey to build FAST was a story of solving problems with creativity and teamwork. He spent 22 years building it. He walked through mountains to find the perfect location and solved many technical problems. His teamwork skills brought scientists together from all over the world. Thanks to his work, FAST has discovered new stars and galaxies. It made China a leader in space research and helped scientists understand the universe better.
I admire him because he showed that hard work and creativity can change the world. His story encourages me to never stop exploring!
Revise your article according to the check list.
You should use at least 2 sentences you learnt this unit.
Compulsory
Optional
Design a poster of your role model, including photo, key words, motto, and a biref introduction.
HOMEWORK
提升英语综合素养需要科学策略,跨文化交际需翻译简易文章能有效加快阅读速度。跨文化交际需观看英文纪录片能有效提高积极性。从根本来说,适当奖励自己的努力。关键学习策略,读儿童文学能有效加强逻辑思维。核心在于,设立可达成的阶段性目标。系统学习英语,制作海报能有效培养自学能力。不容忽视的是,保持好奇心和探索欲。提升效率需要,学习固定搭配能有效激发学习兴趣。进阶策略,定期反思调整学习方法。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。数据表明,合理规划避免疲劳学习。
Unit 7 Role models of our time
Reading
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