内容正文:
两套应用文+两套读后续写作文指导
1.应用文
(学中国人喝热水,邮件)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信询问近来国外社交平台兴起的“学中国人喝热水”的养生风潮。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)喝热水的益处; (2)其他中式养生方式。
注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
一、写作思路(审题+行文逻辑)
1. 开篇:回应来信,点明国外兴起“学中国人喝热水”的养生潮流,自然切入话题。
2. 主体:阐述喝热水的养生益处(促进循环、暖胃驱寒、缓解疲劳)+介绍其他典型中式养生方式(太极、草本茶饮、泡脚、早睡等)。
3.结尾:简单总结中式养生理念,发出互动,收束全文。
字数控制:80词左右,句式简洁,要点齐全。
二、核心主题词块
1. 喝热水相关
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• 养生潮流:health-preserving trend
• 促进血液循环:improve blood circulation
• 暖胃:warm/soothe the stomach
• 缓解疲劳:relieve tiredness
• 驱寒:drive off coldness
• 驱寒暖胃: warm the interior of the stomach /dispel cold from the stomach
2. 中式养生方式
• 太极拳:Tai Chi
• 草本茶:herbal tea
• 身心放松:relax body and mind
• 维持身体平衡:keep physical balance
• 菊花枸杞茶:chrysanthemum and wolfberry tea
• 泡脚:soak one’s feet/ have a hot foot soak/ do foot bathing/ bathe one’s feet in hot water
3. 理念表达
• 传统养生理念:traditional wellness concepts
• 调节身体机能:regulate body function
三、高分句型
1. 开篇引入句
I’m delighted to receive your letter asking about the popular health-preserving trend of drinking hot water in China.很高兴收到你的来信,询问在中国流行的喝热水养生潮流。
2. 益处表达句
Drinking hot water can not only warm your body but also improve blood circulation effectively.
喝热水不仅能暖身,还能有效促进血液循环。
3. 并列介绍句
Apart from drinking hot water, there are other typical Chinese ways to keep healthy.
除了喝热水,还有其他典型的中式养生方式。
4. 结尾总结句
These gentle practices help people maintain a balanced state of health.
这些温和的养生方式有助于人们维持健康的平衡状态。
四、范文(1)
Dear Tom,
Hello! How’s everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter about the trend of drinking hot water for health.
Drinking hot water brings many benefits. It warms the stomach, improves blood circulation and relieves tiredness, which is widely valued in Chinese daily life. Besides, we also have other healthy habits. Doing Tai Chi helps relax our body, and drinking herbal tea is another popular way to keep fit.
These traditional ways help people stay healthy gently.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文(2)
Dear Tom,
Hello! I'm glad you're interested in the "drinking hot water" trend!
Drinking hot water helps warm the body, improve circulation, and soothe the stomach, especially in cold weather or when you're tired. Apart from drinking hot water, we also have other classic Chinese wellness habits. Soaking feet in hot water before bedtime helps promote blood circulation and soothe tired muscles. It is especially effective in cold weather to warm the whole body.
These gentle ways help people stay healthy naturally. Would you like to try any of them?
Yours,
Li Hua
1.读后续写
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Dollar Less, A Lesson More
It was just another Tuesday evening. Johnson entered the familiar neighborhood supermarket, picked up his usual groceries, and headed to the counter. Mrs. Chen, the warm-hearted owner who had
been running the store for two decades, greeted him with a smile. As she rang up the total, she glanced at the amount and said kindly,“Let's make it a dollar less today." Grateful and pleasantly surprised, Johnson thanked her and, instead of rushing off as usual, stayed for a brief chat.
They talked about the weather and the neighborhood-ordinary topics for an ordinary evening. Suddenly, Mrs. Chen raised her hand to her temple, her expression tightening. Before Johnson could ask if she was all right, she collapsed forward, unconscious behind the counter.
Johnson's heart raced. He called out-no one else was in the store. With shaking hands, he called emergency services. The operator's voice was calm but urgent,“Check if she's breathing. ” Following the instructions, Johnson leaned close, watching for the rise and fall of Mrs. Chen's chest. There was none. Johnson's panic erupted, but the voice on the phone remained steady. "She needs CPR. I'll guide you.”
Time seemed to stretch at once. Placing his hands on Mrs. Chen's chest, between the ribs(肋骨),Johnson began compressions(按压)to the rhythm of the operator's count. Between sets, he delivered rescue breaths, his own breath quick with fear and effort. He kept thinking," I must save her life." After what felt like forever, faint breathing came from Mrs. Chen. Her breathing gradually steadied, though her eyes remained closed. Soon, the screaming of an ambulance flooded the quiet street, and medical staff took over. Thanks to Johnson's timely first aid and the doctors' subsequent intensive treatment, the lady pulled through and was in stable condition.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
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原文梗概
顾客Johnson在超市购物时,店主陈女士主动少收其一美元。交谈途中陈女士突然晕倒,Johnson立刻实施心肺复苏,成功挽救了她的生命。后续救治中,陈女士因急救出现肋骨骨折,Johnson一度陷入自责,最终在医生的解释与陈女士的感谢中释怀,读懂了这份善意双向奔赴的深刻人生道理。
一、解题思路(情节逻辑链)
1. 承接原文:原文结尾是陈女士脱离危险,续写第一段开头给定“医生发现陈女士肋骨因CPR骨折”,需先写约翰逊的愧疚心理,再通过医生解释化解他的自责,完成第一段叙事。
2. 推进情节:第二段开头给定“陈女士苏醒后想见约翰逊”,设计两人病房见面场景,以陈女士的感谢呼应前文“少收一美元”的善意伏笔。
3. 扣题收尾:紧扣标题 A Dollar Less, A Lesson More,将“一美元的善意”与“救人的善举”关联,完成主题升华,总词数控制在150词左右。
二、矛盾冲突与化解
核心矛盾
约翰逊因CPR导致陈女士肋骨骨折,陷入自我怀疑与愧疚,担心自己的急救行为反而伤害了恩人。
矛盾化解
1. 医生告知:肋骨骨折是有效心肺复苏的正常结果,若无他的及时施救,陈女士早已失去生命;
2. 陈女士苏醒后不仅没有责怪,反而真诚致谢,彻底解开约翰逊的心结。
三、主题升华
标题A Dollar Less, A Lesson More 的核心含义是:少收的一美元,看似是微小的善意让步,却带来了远超金钱价值的人生一课。
标题拆解
A Dollar Less:指陈女士少收的那一美元,是故事里具体的善意细节,也是情节的伏笔。
A Lesson More:指约翰逊因这一美元的善意,在危难时刻选择挺身而出救人,也在经历波折后明白“善意是双向传递的”这一人生道理。
本文围绕善意的双向传递展开:陈女士日常少收一美元的微小善意,在危难时刻收获了约翰逊舍身救人的回报。升华主旨:善意从来不是单向付出,小小的温暖终会汇聚成拯救生命的力量,救人的经历也让我们收获超越课本的人生一课。
四、核心词块&高分句型
(1)主题词块
• 心肺复苏导致肋骨骨折:suffer broken ribs from CPR
• 满心愧疚:be overwhelmed with guilt
• 有效的急救措施:effective first aid
• 生死边缘:on the edge of death
• 紧紧握住双手:clasp one’s hands tightly
• 双向的善意:mutual kindness
• 超越金钱的价值:value beyond money
(2)高分句型
1. 心理描写句
Upon hearing the news, Johnson was seized by intense guilt, fearing that he had brought extra suffering to the kind lady. 听到消息后,约翰逊满心愧疚,担心自己给这位善良的女士增添了额外痛苦。
2. 医生解释句
The doctor comforted him that broken ribs were a common byproduct of successful CPR, without which Mrs. Chen could never have survived.
医生安慰他,肋骨骨折是成功心肺复苏的常见副作用,没有他的操作,陈女士绝无生还可能。
3. 情感升华句
The one-dollar discount turned out to be a seed of kindness that bloomed into a life-saving miracle.
那一美元的折扣,最终化作善意的种子,绽放出拯救生命的奇迹。
五、范文
Later, a doctor found Mrs. Chen's ribs broken during the CPR. Seeing this, Johnson was seized by intense guilt and self-blame. He thought his rescue efforts had hurt the weak elderly lady, bringing her extra suffering on top of her severe illness. He was trapped in worry, regretting that his improper first aid might have made things worse. Fortunately, the doctor patiently comforted him, explaining that rib fractures are a normal and unavoidable consequence of effective CPR. It proved his resuscitation was forceful and standard. The doctor added that without his timely and brave rescue, Mrs. Chen could never have survived the crisis. Johnson’s stress slowly faded away, yet he still felt uneasy about facing the kind old lady.
When Mrs. Chen was fully awake, she asked to see Johnson. After regaining consciousness, the elderly lady immediately wanted to thank the young man who had saved her life. The moment Johnson stepped into the ward, she tightly held his hands, with tears of gratitude rolling down her cheeks. She expressed sincere thanks to him and recalled the one-dollar discount she had given him before. At that moment, Johnson was profoundly touched and realized that kindness had truly come full circle. A dollar less, a lesson more. The small favor was a precious reminder that even tiny acts of kindness can generate powerful courage to save lives. This valuable lesson would forever be engraved in his heart.
2.应用文
(通知 高铁站“涉外服务岗”支援服务活动)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,鉴于本市外国游客增多,校英文报将在每周六组织高铁站“涉外服务岗”志愿服务活动。请你用英文写一则通知,内容包括:
(1)服务内容;
(2)报名要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Notice
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一、写作思路(通知类应用文逻辑)
1. 标题+开篇背景:使用标准通知标题 Notice,点明活动目的——因外籍游客增多,校英文报将在高铁站开展每周六涉外志愿活动。
2. 主体:服务内容(清晰列出志愿工作:指路答疑、票务咨询、日常翻译、协助解决出行难题)+报名要求(说明报名条件:英语流利、性格友善、周六可参与服务;同时补充报名渠道与截止日期)
3. 结尾落款:规范书写发布单位,符合英文通知格式;全文控制在80词左右。
二、核心主题词块
1. 活动背景与目的
• 涉外志愿服务:foreign-related volunteer service
• 高铁站:high-speed railway station
• 帮助外籍游客:assist foreign tourists
• 提升出行体验:improve travelling experience
2. 服务内容
• 指引方向:give directions
• 票务咨询:provide ticket information
• 基础翻译:offer basic translation
• 解决出行问题:deal with travel problems
3. 报名条件
• 熟练掌握英语:have a good command of English
• 性格外向友善:outgoing and friendly
• 有空参与活动:be available on Saturdays
• 报名:sign up for the activity
三、高分万能句型(通知专用)
1. 开篇引入句
To help the increasing foreign visitors in our city, we will launch a volunteer service program at the high-speed railway station every Saturday.
为帮助本市日益增多的外籍游客,我们将于每周六在高铁站开展志愿服务项目。
2. 服务内容介绍句
Volunteers are expected to offer practical help, such as giving directions and providing translation for tourists. 志愿者需提供实用帮助,例如为游客指路和翻译。
3. 报名要求说明句
Anyone who is fluent in English and available on Saturdays is qualified for this activity.
任何英语流利、周六有空的同学均可参与本次活动。
4. 报名截止句
Please sign up at the school English newspaper office by this Friday.
请于本周五前在校英文报办公室报名。
四、范文(1)
Notice
Nowadays, an increasing number of foreign visitors come to travel around our city. To offer them convenient help, our school English newspaper will hold weekly volunteer work at the high-speed railway station every Saturday.
Volunteers need to guide visitors on the way, share relevant ticket information and provide basic translation service. Students who speak fluent English, have an outgoing personality and are free on Saturdays are welcome. Please register at our office before this Friday.
We sincerely expect your active participation.
The School English Newspaper
范文(2)
Notice
As more foreign tourists pay visits to our city, our school English newspaper will start a volunteer service activity at the high-speed railway station each Saturday.
Volunteers will take charge of road guidance, ticket inquiry and daily language assistance. If you master proficient English and possess a friendly, warm character, you can sign up at the office by this Friday.
This is a precious and rewarding experience. We hope you can join us actively.
The School English Newspaper
2.读后续写
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The rise of short video platforms has given ordinary people like me a new way to reach wide audiences by documenting real life, from countryside landscapes and handmade crafts to daily work routines. Inspired by the wave of grassroots storytelling, I left my boring three-year urban office job and returned to my hometown to pursue mushroom farming, intending both to build a modest rural business and to share the process with viewers online.
I spent six months preparing. During that time, I installed temperature- and humidity-stable greenhouses, completed professional mushroom-cultivation courses online, consulted experienced local growers, and selected high-quality, locally adapted varieties suited to my microclimate. Only when systems and schedules seemed reliable did I launch my small farm. I carefully logged environmental data, kept daily records, and invested my savings and small loans, aware that the small-scale farming demanded patience and careful attention. Friends expressed doubts, yet online supporters urged me on, drawn to my sincerity and the promise of fresh, seasonal, locally grown produce and long-term market stability. I began posting regular short videos documenting routine tasks-laying beds, adjusting greenhouse conditions, and cooking simple meals with fresh produce from my plot-always explaining what I was doing in plain, humble language.
My down-to-earth manner and steady uploads quickly attracted a loyal following. Viewers said my footage offered a calm contrast to the busy city life, and many tuned in daily for updates. As my account gained likes and subscribers, encouragement boosted my confidence, and I refined both cultivation methods and online storytelling.
Then trouble struck. Beds that should have been growing strongly stopped developing; several beds began to go bad, turning gray and lifeless. Depressed and anxious, I recorded a late-night appeal beside the failing beds, my face tired but resolute. "Why have my mushrooms stopped growing?”I asked. "I've tried my best to take care of them. I really need help from anyone who knows about mushroom farming-please give me some advice."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
To my surprise, the video soon spread widely online._________________________________________
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蘑菇种植短视频原文梗概
主人公辞去城市工作返乡创业,借助短视频记录蘑菇种植的全过程,凭借真诚收获了大量粉丝。可精心培育的蘑菇突然大面积枯萎,陷入焦虑的主人公录制求助视频发布上网,由此开启了后续获得专业帮助、走出困境的故事。
(一) 写作思路
1. 第一段开头:To my surprise, the video soon spread widely online.
承接原文中作者的求助视频,写视频走红后得到的反馈:收到大量网友留言,其中包括专业蘑菇种植专家的回复,专家指出了可能的问题(比如通风不足、土壤酸碱度失衡),作者既惊喜又忐忑。
可以加入细节,比如作者连夜整理专家的建议,对比自己的种植记录,找到问题所在。
2. 第二段开头:With the experts' guidance, the farm recovered.
写作者根据建议调整种植方式,蘑菇逐渐恢复生长,收获了第一批优质蘑菇。
结合短视频主题,写作者更新视频分享恢复过程,粉丝增长,同时呼应开头的“分享过程与观众互动”,升华主题:真诚求助与双向交流让自己的创业之路更温暖。
(二)矛盾冲突与化解
• 矛盾冲突:作者辛苦筹备的蘑菇种植遭遇失败,濒临崩溃,只能通过视频求助。
• 化解:求助视频意外走红,得到专业人士的指导,解决了种植难题,农场恢复生机,同时也收获了更多观众的支持。
(三)主题升华
这篇短文的核心是普通人通过短视频记录真实生活、在困境中与观众双向成长。作者逃离城市返乡创业,用真诚的记录获得关注,又在挫折中通过网络求助获得帮助,最终不仅实现了创业目标,也传递了“真诚分享、互助成长”的温暖力量。
(四)主题词块与句型
主题词块
• 短视频平台:short video platforms
• 蘑菇种植:mushroom farming
• 通风不足:poor ventilation
• 土壤酸碱度:soil pH level
• 恢复生机:recover vitality
• 真诚求助:sincere appeal
• 双向成长:mutual growth
高分句型
1. To my surprise, the video soon spread widely online, drawing thousands of comments from viewers near and far.(承上启下,写出视频传播后的反响)
2. Among the replies were several from experienced mushroom farmers, who pointed out that the problem might lie in inadequate air circulation and improper soil pH. (体现专业人士的帮助,推动情节发展)
3. With the experts' guidance, the farm recovered, and I finally harvested my first batch of plump, healthy mushrooms months later.(呼应开头的创业目标,完成情节闭环)
4. This experience taught me that sharing both successes and struggles online can build a bridge of support between creators and audiences.(升华主题,点明短视频带来的温暖联结)
(五)范文
To my surprise, the video soon spread widely online. Within days, it gained over 100,000 views and hundreds of comments. Among them, several professional mushroom farmers left detailed advice, pointing out that poor ventilation and slightly acidic soil might have caused the stunted growth. One even shared a step-by-step guide to adjusting the greenhouse environment. My eyes filled with tears as I read the messages, feeling less alone in my struggle.
With the experts' guidance, the farm recovered. I immediately improved the ventilation system and adjusted the soil pH according to the suggestions. Weeks later, tiny white buds appeared on the beds, and soon I harvested my first batch of plump, fragrant mushrooms. I posted a follow-up video showing the progress, thanking the viewers for their help. My audience grew even larger, and many commented that my story inspired them to keep going through their own challenges. What started as a desperate appeal turned into a heartwarming example of online kindness and support.
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