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Located in the beautiful Blue Ridge Mountains, Asheville, North Carolina, is more than just a scenic town. It is a place defined by a unique spirit of community, where artists, musicians, and people from all walks of life come together, creating an atmosphere of support and kindness. This sense of belonging is what makes Asheville special, a home where people look out for one another.
In 2005, Molly and Tom Smith made an adventurous attempt, moving from busy San Francisco to Asheville with their young daughter, Aria. The transition was challenging. Shortly after arriving, feeling uncertain, they attended a local folk festival. Molly watched as little Aria immediately ran to hug another girl, and the two spent the evening dancing freely in the diverse crowd. “They spent the entire night dancing in each other’s arms,” Molly remembered. “Surrounding them was a community square dance. I thought, this is why we’re here.” This warmth made them determined to stay.
The kindness they experienced as newcomers was heartwarming. When they faced challenges of settling down, neighbors they had just met showed up unasked to help them unpack boxes and shared home-cooked meals. This warm welcome made Molly feel she had found a true home. Inspired by this supportive environment, the Smiths eventually opened an Indian restaurant, Chai Pani, which became a beloved local spot. And it was their way of contributing to the town that had embraced (接纳) them.
For nearly two decades, life in Asheville was peaceful. But on September 27, 2024, Hurricane Helene struck. The storm hit with terrible wind and heavy rain, turning gentle streams into wild rivers that destroyed homes and roads. Asheville awoke to absolute ruin. Trees and power lines were down everywhere. The once lively River Arts District was submerged (淹没) under 20 feet of water. All facilities — power, cell service, running water — were gone. The town was completely cut off from the outside world. However, the Smiths’ restaurant, Chai Pani, survived.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为 150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Faced with this crisis, the Smiths knew they had to act.
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Encouraged by the Smiths’ generosity, other people took actions as well.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
Asheville was a warm and supportive community town--- _________________ --- The Smiths moved to Asheville and were warmly welcomed--- _________________ --- The Smiths opened a restaurant to give back to the town--- _________________ --- Hurricane Helene destroyed the whole town completely--- _________________
4. 细节问答
What kind of town is Asheville? :___________________________________
Why did the Smiths decide to settle down in Asheville?:_________________________________
How did the local neighbors help the Smiths when they first moved here?:________________________________________________
What did the Smiths do to repay the town’s kindness?:__________________________________________
What severe damage did Hurricane Helene bring to Asheville?:_____________________________________________
What lucky thing happened to the Smiths? _________________________________________________
What is the core spirit of the town? ________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
Asheville是一座充满互助温情、邻里友善的小镇→_________________ →Smith一家从旧金山迁居至此,被当地人的善意打动、决定定居→_________________ →为回馈小镇的接纳与温暖,夫妇二人开设餐厅回馈社区→小镇常年安宁美好→_________________ →飓风重创小镇,设施尽毁、城镇与世隔绝,唯有Smith的餐厅幸免于难→(续写)Smith一家挺身而出,开放餐厅救助灾民→(续写)善意传递,全镇居民互助自救,共渡难关
6.情感线
The Smiths:uncertain and unfamiliar→___________→grateful and warm→___________→shocked and sorrowful→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
温情励志类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Faced with this crisis, the Smiths knew they had to act.
衔接句1——What did the Smiths do to help the disaster-stricken people?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Encouraged by the Smiths’ generosity, other people took actions as well.
衔接句2——How did locals help each other? What was the final result and reflection?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:面对危机,Smith一家深知自己必须行动起来。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:受到Smith一家善举的鼓舞,其他人也纷纷行动起来。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写(学生作答区)
Faced with this crisis, the Smiths knew they had to act.
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Encouraged by the Smiths’ generosity, other people took actions as well.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
The Smiths(懂得感恩、善良慷慨、勇于担当、回馈社区的暖心一家人);local residents(淳朴友善、守望相助、团结互助的小镇居民)
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
Asheville was a warm and supportive community town--- The town features mutual kindness and a strong sense of belonging --- The Smiths moved to Asheville and were warmly welcomed--- They were touched by local warmth and chose to settle permanently --- The Smiths opened a restaurant to give back to the town---They maintained peaceful life and repaid the community’s kindness --- Hurricane Helene destroyed the whole town completely--- Only the Smiths’ restaurant survived the disaster
4. 细节问答(标准答案)
What kind of town is Asheville?:It is a scenic town with a warm, supportive atmosphere and a strong spirit of mutual help and community belonging.
Why did the Smiths decide to settle down in Asheville?:They were deeply touched by the town’s warm atmosphere and people’s kindness.
How did the local neighbors help the Smiths when they first moved here?:Unfamiliar neighbors helped them unpack boxes and shared home-cooked meals to help them settle down.
What did the Smiths do to repay the town’s kindness?:They opened a local Indian restaurant to contribute to and give back to the warm community.
What severe damage did Hurricane Helene bring to Asheville?:It destroyed homes and roads, submerged scenic areas, cut off all public facilities and isolated the town from the outside world.
What lucky thing happened to the Smiths?:Their restaurant survived the fierce hurricane when the whole town fell into ruin.
What is the core spirit of the town?:Mutual support, kindness, dedication and community solidarity.
What does the story tell us?:Kindness is a cycle. The warmth we receive from others deserves sincere repayment, and unity and love can help people overcome any disaster.
5.情节线
Asheville是一座充满互助温情、邻里友善的小镇→小镇氛围温暖包容,充满归属感与善意→Smith一家从旧金山迁居至此,被当地人的善意打动、决定定居→初来乍到的一家人收获邻里无私帮助,顺利扎根→为回馈小镇的接纳与温暖,夫妇二人开设餐厅回馈社区→小镇常年安宁美好→突如其来的飓风重创小镇,家园尽毁、交通通讯全部中断→飓风重创小镇,设施尽毁、城镇与世隔绝,唯有Smith的餐厅幸免于难→(续写)Smith一家挺身而出,开放餐厅救助灾民→(续写)善意传递,全镇居民互助自救,共渡难关
6.情感线
The Smiths:uncertain and unfamiliar→touched and grateful→grateful and warm→peaceful and content→shocked and sorrowful→responsible and determined(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:北卡罗来纳州的阿什维尔小镇以温暖互助的社区精神闻名,初来此地的史密斯一家被邻里善意接纳并扎根生活,多年后飓风突袭摧毁小镇,幸存餐厅的主人挺身而出回馈善意,带动全镇守望相助、共抗灾难。
英文:The warm and supportive town of Asheville embraced the Smith family when they moved here. Years later, struck by a destructive hurricane, the town fell into ruin, and the grateful Smiths chose to give back, spreading kindness and inspiring the whole town to unite and help each other.
8. 句式积累(原文经典句式)
定语从句:It is a place defined by a unique spirit of community, where people look out for one another.
状语从句:When they faced challenges of settling down, neighbors showed up unasked to help them.
非谓语动词:The storm hit with terrible wind and heavy rain, turning gentle streams into wild rivers.
宾语从句:I thought, this is why we’re here.
并列句:All facilities — power, cell service, running water — were gone, and the town was completely cut off.
9. 本文主题
温情励志类:善意双向奔赴、温暖循环传递,团结与感恩是对抗灾难最强大的力量,守望相助方能共渡难关。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1衔接:The Smiths opened their restaurant to provide free food and water for homeless victims, doing their utmost to help people get through the tough time.
Paragraph 2衔接:Local residents joined hands to clear ruins, rescue neighbors and share supplies, making the spirit of mutual help shine brightly in the disaster.
三.段落续写框架
第一段框架
①Smith夫妇决定开放幸存餐厅,无偿救助受灾居民;②全力制作食物、提供物资,安抚无助的灾民;③用实际行动回馈当年小镇给予的温暖。
第二段框架
①居民被一家人的善举深深鼓舞,纷纷主动出力互助;②大家携手清理废墟、帮扶邻里、共享物资;③善意循环传递,温情凝聚力量,众人齐心共渡灾难。
四、标准续写范文(150词左右,贴合高考评分标准)
Faced with this crisis, the Smiths knew they had to act. Grateful for the town’s years of kindness, they decided to open their surviving restaurant to help disaster victims. They worked tirelessly to prepare free food and clean water for homeless residents trapped in the isolated town. Without hesitation, they offered shelter and comfort to those who had lost their homes. What they did was their sincere way to repay the warmth Asheville had given them over the past two decades.
Encouraged by the Smiths’ generosity, other people took actions as well. Residents volunteered to clear fallen trees and ruins, rescue trapped neighbors and share their limited supplies. Though the disaster brought huge destruction, the whole town united closely. The mutual-help spirit of Asheville bloomed brightly in the hardship. It was love, gratitude and unity that turned the desperate situation warm and gave people strength to rebuild their beloved hometown.
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