内容正文:
AI禁用令
-- 两种立场完整呈现
本篇亮点
✅ 核心观点:时代变了——AI禁不住,关键不是“用不用”,而是“怎么用”
✅ 两种立场完整呈现:支持禁用(传统视角)vs 反对禁用(时代视角)
✅ 五大板块词库:AI写作特点+写作真正目的+依赖AI的坏处+合理使用AI的好处+真实经历感受
✅ 思维路径对比:两种立场各五步走,学生选哪个都有框架
✅ 四篇范文分层:基础版+高分版,每种立场各两篇,逐级升级
✅ 高分版范文融入八大高级语法结构:无灵主语、倒装、独立主格、强调句、非谓语、定语从句、名词化表达、排比
原题回顾
假定你是李华,针对近期部分学生依赖AI完成英文写作任务的现象,外教Jason拟发布一条规定:禁用AI写作。请给Jason写一封邮件,内容包括:(1)你对此规定的看法;(2)结合自身经历说明理由。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
时代变了:这道题的核心
我们这一代人接受的教育是:自己写,不能抄,不能作弊。
但AI不是抄,不是作弊。它是一个工具。
就像当年计算器出现的时候,很多人说“学生不能再用手算了,会退化”。但现在,计算器是数学课的标准工具。AI也是一样。
问题的关键不是“用不用AI”,而是怎么用AI。
如果你用AI替代思考 → 你会失去写作能力
如果你用AI辅助表达 → 你能写出更好的文章
禁是禁不住的。与其一刀切禁止,不如教学生正确使用——让AI当陪练,不当代笔。
话题词库(五大板块)
板块一:AI写作的特点
中文
英文
一键生成
generate with one click / produce in seconds
语法正确、结构完整
grammatically correct, structurally complete
千篇一律、毫无个性
look all the same / soulless and generic
缺乏个人风格与温度
lack personal style and warmth
是算法的产物,不是思想的结晶
the product of algorithms, not of human thought
跳过思考过程
skip the thinking process / bypass the struggle
表面高效,实则捷径
seemingly efficient, but actually a shortcut
可以帮你组织语言
help you organize your language
但不能代替你的思想
but cannot replace your thinking
板块二:学生写作的真正目的
中文
英文
组织思路、梳理想法
organize one's thoughts / sort out one's mind
表达自己的声音
express one's own voice
从错误中学习
learn from mistakes
锻炼逻辑思维与批判性思维
develop logical thinking and critical thinking
写作是与自己的对话
Writing is a conversation with oneself.
写作是思想的锤炼
Writing is the exercise of the mind.
笨拙但真实,比完美但空洞更重要
awkward but authentic matters more than perfect but hollow
板块三:依赖AI的坏处(失去什么)
中文
英文
失去独立思考能力
lose the ability to think independently
组织思路的能力退化
the ability to organize thoughts declines
没有AI就不会写了
find oneself at a complete loss without AI
失去了自己独特的声音
lose one's own unique voice and style
不是在学习,而是在逃避
not learning — hiding
板块四:合理使用AI的好处(得到什么)
中文
英文
帮助我检查语法错误
help me check grammar mistakes
提供更地道的表达方式
offer more natural expressions
让我看到自己写作的薄弱环节
help me see my weaknesses in writing
不断提问、不断修改
keep asking and revising
这也是一种思辨的形成
this is also a form of critical thinking
让AI当你的陪练,而不是代笔
let AI be your practice partner, not your ghostwriter
板块五:真实经历感受
中文
英文
我曾经完全依赖AI
I once relied completely on AI.
我的文章很完美,但不像我写的
My essays were perfect, but they didn't sound like me.
我猛然意识到——我一直在逃避
It hit me — I had been hiding.
现在我先自己写,再用AI修改
Now I write my draft first, then use AI to revise.
想法是我的,AI帮我组织语言
The ideas are mine; AI helps me organize them.
这是我自己吃过的亏
I've learned this the hard way.
思维路径:两种立场怎么想
立场A:支持禁用(传统视角)
核心逻辑:依赖AI → 能力退化 → 应该禁止
步骤
内容
① 表态
I support banning AI writing tools.
② 原因
This rule protects our writing ability.
③ 自身经历
I once relied on AI. My writing got worse.
④ 觉醒
A bad grade taught me a lesson.
⑤ 总结
Writing is about thinking, not just producing sentences.
立场B:反对禁用(时代视角)
核心逻辑:AI是工具 → 看你怎么用 → 禁止不如引导
步骤
内容
① 表态
I understand your concern, but a ban may not be necessary.
② 原因
AI can be a useful learning tool if used properly.
③ 自身经历
I write my draft first, then use AI to revise.
④ 好处
AI helps me find my weaknesses and learn.
⑤ 总结
AI organizes language, but the ideas are mine.
✨ 立场A:支持禁用派(两篇范文)
范文A1·基础版(100词)
Dear Jason,
I'm writing to support your decision to ban students from using AI to finish English writing tasks.
From my perspective, this rule will benefit our long-term English learning. My own experience proves that relying too much on AI does great harm to our writing ability. Last semester, I often turned to AI for my English essays and I could finish the tasks easily. However, the awful score on the final exam taught me a hard lesson. It turned out that over-reliance on AI greatly weakened my practical writing competence.
Writing is not just about producing correct sentences ,but it's about expressing your own ideas. I believe that with your guidance, we can improve our writing by practicing, not by taking shortcuts.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文A2·高分版(110词)
Dear Jason,
I'm writing to share my wholehearted support for the new rule banning AI writing tools. Never has a school rule struck such a deep chord with me.
I've been there myself. There was a time when I relied heavily on AI for every English essay, thinking I was saving precious time. The AI-generated work seemed flawless — grammatically perfect, structurally polished . Yet a hollow feeling crept in, growing stronger with each assignment. My vocabulary, once rich, had shrunk to a shadow of itself. Words failed me when I tried to organize my own thoughts. It was at that point that I realized I had lost writing skills as well as my ability to think independently.
What the rule protects is not academic honesty alone. It safeguards something far more precious: our right to struggle, to make mistakes, and to find our own voice in the process. Thank you for taking this step.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高级语法结构标注:
倒装句:Never has a school rule struck such a deep chord with me.
非谓语作状语:thinking I was saving precious time
无灵主语:a hollow feeling crept in
独立主格:growing stronger with each assignment
无灵主语+隐喻:Words failed me
强调句:It was at that point that I realized...
名词化表达:not just writing skills, but my ability to think independently
强调句+排比:What the rule protects is not... It safeguards... our right to struggle, to make mistakes, and to find our own voice
✨ 立场B:合理使用派(两篇范文)
范文B1·基础版(108词)
Dear Jason,
I'm writing to share my opinion on your decision to ban all AI writing tools.
I fully understand your concern about students' lazy learning. However, a total ban might bring more disadvantages than benefits to most diligent students. The question is not whether to use AI, but how to use it.
In my writing practice, I always complete my drafts independently to ensure my own ideas and logical thinking come first. Afterwards, I use AI to revise inappropriate word choices and fix grammar problems, which helps me spot my real weaknesses and improve naturally. AI can help organize your language, but it cannot replace your thinking.
Therefore, it may not be necessary to completely ban AI writing tools. Instead, we can use AI as a helper under your guidance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文B2·高分版(115词)
Dear Jason,
I'm writing to share my thoughts on the proposed ban of AI writing tools. While I fully understand your concern, I believe a complete ban may not be the wisest answer.
The real question is not whether we use AI, but how we use it. If used as a ghostwriter, it robs us of our voice, but used as a practice partner, it sharpens our skills. My own experience bears this out. I always write my first draft entirely on my own despite messy sentences, awkward phrases However, that struggle is where my thinking takes shape. Only then do I turn to AI, using it to polish my language and identify patterns of mistakes I would never have spotted alone. The ideas remain mine; AI simply helps them shine.
Perhaps what we need is not a ban, but a lesson in how to use AI wisely — as a tool, not a crutch. I would be happy to share more of my practice if you are interested.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高级语法结构标注:
让步状语从句:While I fully understand your concern
排比+对比结构:Used as a ghostwriter, it robs us...; used as a practice partner, it sharpens...
名词化表达:that struggle is where my thinking takes shape
倒装句:Only then do I turn to AI
定语从句:patterns of mistakes I would never have spotted alone
无灵主语:The ideas remain mine; AI simply helps them shine
对比收束:as a tool, not a crutch
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