Unit 2 写作与听力专项训练 2025-2026学年译林版八年级英语上册

Unit 2 School life

写作

佳作赏析

[经典例题]

为了更好地开展课后活动，班主任向全班同学征求改进的意见。假设你是李言，请你代表全班同学给班主任写一封信，提出一些改进的意见。内容如下：

1. 每月开展一次篮球训练；

2. 增加传统文化相关内容；

3. 建立兴趣小组，如绘画或音乐等。

要求：

1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 短文必须包括所有的信息，适当增加细节内容；

3. 词数不少于90，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。

[高分范文]

Dear Class Teacher,

①I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-class activities in our class.

② First, I would like to suggest adding more sports-related activities. For example, we could have basketball training once a month. ③This can not only build our physical strength but also cultivate teamwork spirit. Moreover, it will be great to organize some cultural events, like a Chinese poetry recitation competition. This way, we can enrich our knowledge about traditional culture. Finally, I have a suggestion for setting up interest groups according to students' hobbies, such as a painting group or a music group.

④I hope you will find my suggestions useful and helpful.

Best wishes,

Li Yan

[名师点评]

短文以“校园生活”为主题，要求学生对课后活动提出改进的意见，包括课后活动的内容及作用等。

① 短文第一段用一句话概括写信的目的；

② 过渡词first、moreover、finally的使用使短文层次分明；

③ 短语“not only...but also...”的使用体现了作者扎实的基本功；

④ 结尾句使用了宾语从句，表达了个人的观点，做到首尾呼应，使短文结构合理。

 

素材积累

[开头句]

1. I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-class activities.

2. I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.

 

[中间句]

1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables.

2. I think it will be a good idea to organize some cultural events.

 

[结尾句]

1. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.

2. I am looking forward to more colourful school life.

 

[名言警句]

1. Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言辞。

2. Birds of a feather flock together. 物以类聚，人以群分。

 

写作演练

[小试身手]

近期你校的餐厅将会进行改善，假设你是王军，代表你们班同学给校长写一封信，就改善学校餐厅提出几点建议，内容如下：

1. 增加食物的多样性；

2. 改善就餐氛围，如播放音乐等；

3. 提升餐厅工作人员的服务质量。

 

要求：

1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 短文必须包括所有的信息，适当增加细节内容；

3. 不少于90词，已给出部分不计入总词数。

 

[思路点拨]

① 人称：以第一人称为主；② 时态：以一般现在时为主；③ 写作时要注意顺序，先从食物、就餐氛围、餐厅员工的服务三个方面提出建议，最后希望个人的建议有帮助。

 

[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]

Dear Headmaster,

I am writing this letter to _________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,

Wang Jun