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专题10 书面表达
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津滨海新·期末)
上海合作组织 (SCO) 将于2025年秋季在天津召开。作为天津人,为了更好地迎接会议召开,营造一个干净整洁,文明和谐的社会环境,过去的几个月里人们在社区组织下陆续开展了一系列志愿服务活动。
要点如下:
(1) 帮助打扫街道,清除垃圾。
(2) 砍掉小区里的枯树,种上新树苗。
(3) 在墙上画上壁画,使环境更美丽。
(4) 修理坏掉的路灯,确保夜间出行安全。
(5) 引导交通,并帮助老人搬运重物。
(6) 你的想法……
要求:
(1) 词数:80~100个。
(2) 题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:(1) 清除 remove (2) 壁画 mural (3) 路灯 street lamp
To welcome the SCO meeting, communities (社区) carried out a lot of volunteer activities to create a clean, tidy, and harmonious (和谐的) environment.
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津部分区·期末)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jill想了解你的爱好。请你根据以下提示,给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示:
(1)你和父母都喜欢旅行。
(2)每年夏天你们都会去旅行。
(3)你们看过大海,登过高山,去过城市,也去过农村。
(4)祖国的山美、水美、人更美。
(5)你认为……
要求:
(1)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)语言通顺,要点齐全,条理清楚,书写规范。
(3)词数:80-100。
Dear Jill,
Here is something about my hobby.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·南开区·期末)
假如你是学生李华,学校广播站开展竞选英语主持人的活动,请你根据以下信息要点,写一封英文自荐信,申请做一名学校广播站的英语主持人。
要点:
(1) 喜欢听流行音乐,尤其是英文歌曲;
(2) 在小学有过当主持人的经验,例如,主持过访谈节目,演唱比赛和班会活动;
(3) 热爱阅读和写作,经常通过写作与他人交流;
(4) 曾经去香港参加英文演讲比赛,并获得一等奖;
(5) 我将会……
参考词汇:
主持人host 英文演讲an English speech
要求:
①词数80—100左右,
②开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,
③要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear teachers,
I am a student from Grade Eight. I’d like to become one of the English hosts of the school broadcasting station.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·西青区·期末)
科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解服务。假如你是李华,你是一名八年级学生,你希望成为一名讲解员,请按照以下提示和要求写一封自荐信。
提示:
2. 已经学习英语10年了;
3. 周末喜欢观看英文电影,阅读英文书籍,并能与他人用英语交谈;
4. 从小就对科学感兴趣,读过很多科学类图书:
5. 性格外向,有耐心:
6. 我相信……
要求:
7. 80词左右:
8. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
9. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:外向的outgoing
Dear sir/ madam,
I’d like to become one of your guides.
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I would be thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津55中·期末)
用英文讲述一个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。
(1) 上周日晚上,你在海河边散步。当时游人很多。
(2) 你发现一个小女孩在哭。她与父母走散了。
(3) 你一边安慰她一边打电话报警。
(4) 警察最终找到了她的父母。
(5) 她的父母非常感谢你。
(6) 你认为……
参考词汇:安慰 comfort 海河 Haihe River
要求:
(1) 词数:80—100个。
(2) 注意开头的衔接。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Last Sunday evening,
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·河北区·期末)
假如你是李华,上个月你去北京参加了京剧活动营。你的英国笔友Kevin对此很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,介绍你参加此次活动的相关经历。
(1)你在北京五天时间,参加了京剧活动营,学习了演唱京剧的技能。
(2)活动营的老师们受过良好的培训,并且经验丰富。
(3)你们以小组进行学习,有很多表演京剧的机会。
(4)你从中获得学习京剧的乐趣,同时传承中华文化。
(5) 你希望……
参考词汇:表演 perform
传承 pass down
要求:
(1) 词数:70~90词。
(2)邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Kevin,
How are you? I have a wonderful experience to share with you.
Last month, I
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Please tell me something interesting about you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·河东区·期末)
假设你是来自英国的交换生Peter,去年来到天津体验中国文化。请根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你到目前为止的经历及感受。
要点提示:1. 曾去过天津的很多地方。比如,海河非常美。
2. 曾参观过天津博物馆和美术馆。天津人都为自己城市的文化感到骄傲。
3. 曾品尝过各种美食,非常好吃。
4. 你的感受。
具体要求:1. 必须包括以上全部内容。2. 不少于60词。
参考词汇:海河Haihe River 美术馆art gallery
I’m Peter from England and I came to Tianjin to experience Chinese culture last year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·河西区·期末)
旅游能让人忘却烦恼和忧愁,使人心情愉快,能让你的性格变得开朗活泼,还能开阔视野,锻炼身体,广交朋友,请用英语分享你的某次旅行经历及旅行中的感悟。
内容要点:
2. 介绍旅行的时间、地点和出行方式;
3. 旅行地的介绍,如:你游玩的景点、印象深刻的活动、品尝的美食……
4. 你对这次经历的感悟,如旅行的注意事项或意义等。
注意:
5. 词数80左右,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
6. 短文须包含全部要点,可以适当发挥;
7. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I had a wonderful trip to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·红桥区·期末)
假如你是李华,五月份你参加了学校组织的研学实践活动,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,描述这次活动。
2. 我和同学们一起种了番茄苗,老师给我们拍了照。
3. 我们学会了包饺子。
4. 老师教我们包饺子时,处处欢声笑语。
5. 在老师的帮助下,我亲手制作了一把木头梳子。
6. 我认为劳动最光荣。
参考词汇:番茄苗tomato seedlings木头梳子wooden comb劳动最光荣Work is a matter of honor.
要求:
7. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
8. 词数:60个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
9. 书写工整占1分。
Hands-on research activities
Last month, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题10 书面表达
Passage 1
To welcome the SCO meeting, communities (社区) carried out a lot of volunteer activities to create a clean, tidy, and harmonious (和谐的) environment.
First of all, people worked together to clean the streets and remove litter. They cut down the dead trees and planted small young trees in the neighbourhood. What’s more, they painted murals on the wall to make the environment more beautiful. Workers repaired the broken street lamps to keep people safe when they go out at night. Volunteers guided traffic and helped old people with heavy things. Through these activities, our environment has become cleaner and people around us are more friendly to each other.
We are proud to show our city’s spirit to the world! I hope the SCO meeting in Tianjin will be very successful.
Passage 2
Dear Jill,
Here is something about my hobby.
My hobby is traveling. My parents and I all like traveling. Every summer we will go on a trip. We have seen the sea, climbed the mountains, visited cities and been to the countryside. Different places have different scenery. The mountains, rivers and people in our motherland are all beautiful.
I think traveling can not only open my eyes but also make me relaxed.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
Dear teachers,
I am a student from Grade Eight. I’d like to become one of the English hosts of the school broadcasting station.
I have previous hosting experience from primary school. I hosted various events like talk-shows, singing contests and class gatherings, which sharpened my hosting skills. I’m also fond of reading and writing, and I often communicate with others via my writings.
I once took part in an English speech competition in Hong Kong and won the first prize.
If I get the chance, I’ll design engaging programs to help students learn English in an interesting way.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
Passage 4
Dear sir/madam,
I’d like to become one of your guides.
I’ve been learning English for 10 years and have strong communication skills. On weekends, I enjoy watching English movies, reading English books, and having conversations in English. Since childhood, I’ve been passionate about science and have read numerous science books. As an outgoing and patient person, I can explain complex concepts clearly to visitors of all ages.
I believe my language ability, scientific knowledge, and friendly personality make me a qualified candidate. If I am chosen, I’ll prepare thoroughly and serve visitors with enthusiasm.
I would be thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
Last Sunday evening, I was taking a walk along the Haihe River. There were many tourists around, enjoying the beautiful night view.
Suddenly, I noticed a little girl sitting on a bench, crying loudly. I went over and asked her what was wrong. She told me she had got separated from her parents. I tried to comfort her by telling funny stories, and at the same time, I called the police.
Soon, two policemen arrived. With the information the girl provided, they quickly contacted her parents. When the parents rushed over and saw their daughter, they were so relieved and thanked me repeatedly.
I think helping others not only brings happiness to them but also makes me feel good. It’s a meaningful experience.
Passage 2
Dear Kevin,
How are you? I have a wonderful experience to share with you.
Last month, I took part in a Beijing Opera Camp in Beijing for five days and learned lots of skills in performing the Beijing Opera.
The teachers there were well trained and had plenty of experience. We studied in small groups, so we had many chances to perform the Beijing Opera. It was great to take turns sharing our performances with others.
At the camp, I not only improved my performing skills but also gained the pleasure from learning Beijing Opera. At the same time, we passed down the traditional Chinese culture as well. It was truly an unforgettable experience for me! I really hope you can try it too!
Please tell me something interesting about you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
I’m Peter from England and I came to Tianjin to experience Chinese culture last year. I’ve visited many places here. Haihe River is really beautiful, especially at night. I also visited Tianjin Museum and the art gallery, where I found Tianjin people are proud of their city’s culture. I am fond of the local food. Living here makes me feel warm, and I’ve learned so much about Chinese traditions. I hope to explore more of Tianjin!
Passage 4
I had a wonderful trip to Qingdao with my parents last summer holiday. We left at 10:00 in the morning by train. The weather was perfect, and we were all excited.
At noon, we had a picnic and enjoyed some delicious seafood. In the afternoon, we went to the beach to fly kites, play the guitar, and sing songs. After dinner, we took a walk by the sea and enjoyed the beautiful sights. Besides, we took lots of photos to remember this special moment. As we were on the beach, we noticed how clean it was. Everyone helped collect the litter, including me. It’s really important to protect our environment. My hope in doing so is to let more people enjoy the lovely place.
I had a wonderful time and will never forget this trip.
Passage 5
Hands-on research activities
Last month, I joined our school’s hands-on research activities. First, my classmates and I worked together to plant tomato seedlings, and teachers took photos of us. Then, we learned how to make dumplings. When teachers taught us, the room was full of laughter. Finally, with a teacher’s help, I made a wooden comb in person. I was proud of these hands-on experiences because I believe work is a matter of honor. These happy memories will stay with me forever.
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专题10 书面表达
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津滨海新·期末)
上海合作组织 (SCO) 将于2025年秋季在天津召开。作为天津人,为了更好地迎接会议召开,营造一个干净整洁,文明和谐的社会环境,过去的几个月里人们在社区组织下陆续开展了一系列志愿服务活动。
要点如下:
(1) 帮助打扫街道,清除垃圾。
(2) 砍掉小区里的枯树,种上新树苗。
(3) 在墙上画上壁画,使环境更美丽。
(4) 修理坏掉的路灯,确保夜间出行安全。
(5) 引导交通,并帮助老人搬运重物。
(6) 你的想法……
要求:
(1) 词数:80~100个。
(2) 题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:(1) 清除 remove (2) 壁画 mural (3) 路灯 street lamp
To welcome the SCO meeting, communities (社区) carried out a lot of volunteer activities to create a clean, tidy, and harmonious (和谐的) environment.
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【答案】
To welcome the SCO meeting, communities (社区) carried out a lot of volunteer activities to create a clean, tidy, and harmonious (和谐的) environment.
First of all, people worked together to clean the streets and remove litter. They cut down the dead trees and planted small young trees in the neighbourhood. What’s more, they painted murals on the wall to make the environment more beautiful. Workers repaired the broken street lamps to keep people safe when they go out at night. Volunteers guided traffic and helped old people with heavy things. Through these activities, our environment has become cleaner and people around us are more friendly to each other.
We are proud to show our city’s spirit to the world! I hope the SCO meeting in Tianjin will be very successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:介绍人们在社区进行的志愿服务活动;
第三步:介绍自己对志愿服务活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①worked together 共同工作
②cut down砍倒
③What’s more另外
④keep people safe保护人们的安全
⑤each other彼此
[高分句型]
①Workers repaired the broken street lamps to keep people safe when they go out at night. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope the SCO meeting in Tianjin will be very successful. (省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·天津部分区·期末)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jill想了解你的爱好。请你根据以下提示,给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示:
(1)你和父母都喜欢旅行。
(2)每年夏天你们都会去旅行。
(3)你们看过大海,登过高山,去过城市,也去过农村。
(4)祖国的山美、水美、人更美。
(5)你认为……
要求:
(1)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)语言通顺,要点齐全,条理清楚,书写规范。
(3)词数:80-100。
Dear Jill,
Here is something about my hobby.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jill,
Here is something about my hobby.
My hobby is traveling. My parents and I all like traveling. Every summer we will go on a trip. We have seen the sea, climbed the mountains, visited cities and been to the countryside. Different places have different scenery. The mountains, rivers and people in our motherland are all beautiful.
I think traveling can not only open my eyes but also make me relaxed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写一篇电子邮件。
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作时必须包括提示内容,并根据要求适当增加细节,但要注意语句通顺、意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍自己的爱好。
第二步,具体介绍自己的旅行活动及去过的地方。
第三步,介绍自己对旅行爱好的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①go on a trip进行旅行
②not only… but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①We have seen the sea, climbed the mountains, visited cities and been to the countryside.(现在完成时态)
②I think traveling can not only open my eyes but also make me relaxed.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·南开区·期末)
假如你是学生李华,学校广播站开展竞选英语主持人的活动,请你根据以下信息要点,写一封英文自荐信,申请做一名学校广播站的英语主持人。
要点:
(1) 喜欢听流行音乐,尤其是英文歌曲;
(2) 在小学有过当主持人的经验,例如,主持过访谈节目,演唱比赛和班会活动;
(3) 热爱阅读和写作,经常通过写作与他人交流;
(4) 曾经去香港参加英文演讲比赛,并获得一等奖;
(5) 我将会……
参考词汇:
主持人host 英文演讲an English speech
要求:
①词数80—100左右,
②开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,
③要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear teachers,
I am a student from Grade Eight. I’d like to become one of the English hosts of the school broadcasting station.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear teachers,
I am a student from Grade Eight. I’d like to become one of the English hosts of the school broadcasting station.
I have previous hosting experience from primary school. I hosted various events like talk-shows, singing contests and class gatherings, which sharpened my hosting skills. I’m also fond of reading and writing, and I often communicate with others via my writings.
I once took part in an English speech competition in Hong Kong and won the first prize.
If I get the chance, I’ll design engaging programs to help students learn English in an interesting way.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示:考生应注意要点齐全,并适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表达想要成为学校广播站英语主持人的意愿,引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的主持经验,展示自己的兴趣爱好和沟通能力,然后描述自己的获奖经历,以证明自己的英语能力和演讲水平。
第三步,书写结语。表达期待回复,进行情感收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①previous以前的,先前的
②sharpen提升,加强
③engaging吸引人的,有趣的
[高分句型]
①I hosted various events like talk-shows, singing contests and class gatherings, which sharpened my hosting skills. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②If I get the chance, I’ll design engaging programs to help students learn English in an interesting way. (If引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·西青区·期末)
科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解服务。假如你是李华,你是一名八年级学生,你希望成为一名讲解员,请按照以下提示和要求写一封自荐信。
提示:
2. 已经学习英语10年了;
3. 周末喜欢观看英文电影,阅读英文书籍,并能与他人用英语交谈;
4. 从小就对科学感兴趣,读过很多科学类图书:
5. 性格外向,有耐心:
6. 我相信……
要求:
7. 80词左右:
8. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
9. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:外向的outgoing
Dear sir/ madam,
I’d like to become one of your guides.
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I would be thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear sir/madam,
I’d like to become one of your guides.
I’ve been learning English for 10 years and have strong communication skills. On weekends, I enjoy watching English movies, reading English books, and having conversations in English. Since childhood, I’ve been passionate about science and have read numerous science books. As an outgoing and patient person, I can explain complex concepts clearly to visitors of all ages.
I believe my language ability, scientific knowledge, and friendly personality make me a qualified candidate. If I am chosen, I’ll prepare thoroughly and serve visitors with enthusiasm.
I would be thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封书信作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:根据提示写作,注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:介绍自己能胜任讲解员的原因,包括学习英语的时间、兴趣爱好、性格等;
第三步:表示对自己能够胜任讲解员抱有信心;
第四步:承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①have strong communication skills有较强的沟通能力
②been passionate about对某事充满热情
③of all ages所有年龄段的
④serve visitors with enthusiasm热情为游客服务
[高分句型]
①I believe my language ability, scientific knowledge, and friendly personality make me a qualified candidate. (省略that的宾语从句)
②If I am chosen, I’ll prepare thoroughly and serve visitors with enthusiasm. (If引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 1
(24-25八年级下·天津55中·期末)
用英文讲述一个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。
(1) 上周日晚上,你在海河边散步。当时游人很多。
(2) 你发现一个小女孩在哭。她与父母走散了。
(3) 你一边安慰她一边打电话报警。
(4) 警察最终找到了她的父母。
(5) 她的父母非常感谢你。
(6) 你认为……
参考词汇:安慰 comfort 海河 Haihe River
要求:
(1) 词数:80—100个。
(2) 注意开头的衔接。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Last Sunday evening,
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【答案】
Last Sunday evening, I was taking a walk along the Haihe River. There were many tourists around, enjoying the beautiful night view.
Suddenly, I noticed a little girl sitting on a bench, crying loudly. I went over and asked her what was wrong. She told me she had got separated from her parents. I tried to comfort her by telling funny stories, and at the same time, I called the police.
Soon, two policemen arrived. With the information the girl provided, they quickly contacted her parents. When the parents rushed over and saw their daughter, they were so relieved and thanked me repeatedly.
I think helping others not only brings happiness to them but also makes me feel good. It’s a meaningful experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要使用“过去进行时”和“一般过去时”以及“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头通过描述上周日晚在海河散步的场景引入,为后续事件的发生铺垫背景;
第二步,具体阐述。详细叙述事件的经过——发现问题、采取行动、事件解决,展现事件的细节和发展;
第三步,以个人感悟收尾,说明帮助他人既给对方带来快乐,也让自己感觉良好。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk 散步
②along the Haihe River 沿着海河
③enjoy the beautiful night view 欣赏美丽的夜景
④get separated from 与……分离
[高分句型]
①She told me she had got separated from her parents.(宾语从句)
②I think helping others not only brings happiness to them but also makes me feel good.(not only...but also...连接两个并列的谓语部分)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级下·河北区·期末)
假如你是李华,上个月你去北京参加了京剧活动营。你的英国笔友Kevin对此很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,介绍你参加此次活动的相关经历。
(1)你在北京五天时间,参加了京剧活动营,学习了演唱京剧的技能。
(2)活动营的老师们受过良好的培训,并且经验丰富。
(3)你们以小组进行学习,有很多表演京剧的机会。
(4)你从中获得学习京剧的乐趣,同时传承中华文化。
(5) 你希望……
参考词汇:表演 perform
传承 pass down
要求:
(1) 词数:70~90词。
(2)邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Kevin,
How are you? I have a wonderful experience to share with you.
Last month, I
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Please tell me something interesting about you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Kevin,
How are you? I have a wonderful experience to share with you.
Last month, I took part in a Beijing Opera Camp in Beijing for five days and learned lots of skills in performing the Beijing Opera.
The teachers there were well trained and had plenty of experience. We studied in small groups, so we had many chances to perform the Beijing Opera. It was great to take turns sharing our performances with others.
At the camp, I not only improved my performing skills but also gained the pleasure from learning Beijing Opera. At the same time, we passed down the traditional Chinese culture as well. It was truly an unforgettable experience for me! I really hope you can try it too!
Please tell me something interesting about you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先介绍自己上个月去北京参加了5天的京剧活动营,引出下文;
第二步,结合要点提示具体介绍京剧活动营里的相关情况,例如老师专业经验丰富、小组学习与表演机会等;
第三步,表达学习京剧的乐趣和收获,同时也希望Kevin能有机会体验京剧。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②Beijing Opera Camp 京剧活动营
③well trained 训练有素的
④plenty of 大量的
⑤have chances to do sth. 有机会做某事
⑥take turns 轮流
⑦unforgettable experience 难忘的经历
[高分句型]
①We studied in small groups, so we had many chances to perform the Beijing Opera. (so连接的并列句)
②At the camp, I not only improved my performing skills but also developed the pleasure of the Beijing Opera. (not only...but also句型)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级下·河东区·期末)
假设你是来自英国的交换生Peter,去年来到天津体验中国文化。请根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你到目前为止的经历及感受。
要点提示:1. 曾去过天津的很多地方。比如,海河非常美。
2. 曾参观过天津博物馆和美术馆。天津人都为自己城市的文化感到骄傲。
3. 曾品尝过各种美食,非常好吃。
4. 你的感受。
具体要求:1. 必须包括以上全部内容。2. 不少于60词。
参考词汇:海河Haihe River 美术馆art gallery
I’m Peter from England and I came to Tianjin to experience Chinese culture last year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m Peter from England and I came to Tianjin to experience Chinese culture last year. I’ve visited many places here. Haihe River is really beautiful, especially at night. I also visited Tianjin Museum and the art gallery, where I found Tianjin people are proud of their city’s culture. I am fond of the local food. Living here makes me feel warm, and I’ve learned so much about Chinese traditions. I hope to explore more of Tianjin!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己去天津游玩的经历;
第二步,介绍天津的景点和美食,以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at night在晚上
②be proud of 为……感到骄傲
⑤learn about 了解
[高分句型]
I also visited Tianjin Museum and the art gallery, where I found Tianjin people are proud of their city’s culture.(定语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·河西区·期末)
旅游能让人忘却烦恼和忧愁,使人心情愉快,能让你的性格变得开朗活泼,还能开阔视野,锻炼身体,广交朋友,请用英语分享你的某次旅行经历及旅行中的感悟。
内容要点:
2. 介绍旅行的时间、地点和出行方式;
3. 旅行地的介绍,如:你游玩的景点、印象深刻的活动、品尝的美食……
4. 你对这次经历的感悟,如旅行的注意事项或意义等。
注意:
5. 词数80左右,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
6. 短文须包含全部要点,可以适当发挥;
7. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I had a wonderful trip to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I had a wonderful trip to Qingdao with my parents last summer holiday. We left at 10:00 in the morning by train. The weather was perfect, and we were all excited.
At noon, we had a picnic and enjoyed some delicious seafood. In the afternoon, we went to the beach to fly kites, play the guitar, and sing songs. After dinner, we took a walk by the sea and enjoyed the beautiful sights. Besides, we took lots of photos to remember this special moment. As we were on the beach, we noticed how clean it was. Everyone helped collect the litter, including me. It’s really important to protect our environment. My hope in doing so is to let more people enjoy the lovely place.
I had a wonderful time and will never forget this trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍旅行的时间、地点和出行方式;
第二步,旅行地的介绍;
第三步,对这次经历的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②including包含
[高分句型]
①As we were on the beach, we noticed how clean it was. (as引导时间状语从句)
②It’s really important to protect our environment. (it句型)
Passage 5
(24-25八年级下·红桥区·期末)
假如你是李华,五月份你参加了学校组织的研学实践活动,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,描述这次活动。
2. 我和同学们一起种了番茄苗,老师给我们拍了照。
3. 我们学会了包饺子。
4. 老师教我们包饺子时,处处欢声笑语。
5. 在老师的帮助下,我亲手制作了一把木头梳子。
6. 我认为劳动最光荣。
参考词汇:番茄苗tomato seedlings木头梳子wooden comb劳动最光荣Work is a matter of honor.
要求:
7. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
8. 词数:60个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
9. 书写工整占1分。
Hands-on research activities
Last month, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hands-on research activities
Last month, I joined our school’s hands-on research activities. First, my classmates and I worked together to plant tomato seedlings, and teachers took photos of us. Then, we learned how to make dumplings. When teachers taught us, the room was full of laughter. Finally, with a teacher’s help, I made a wooden comb in person. I was proud of these hands-on experiences because I believe work is a matter of honor. These happy memories will stay with me forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述学校研学实践活动;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的研学实践活动内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“五月份参加了学校组织的研学实践活动”来引出下文重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“种番茄苗、包饺子、制作木头梳子”等几个方面重点介绍研学实践活动的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“认为劳动最光荣”的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①worked together一起工作
②full of充满
③be proud of对……感到自豪
④in person亲自
[高分句型]
I was proud of these hands-on experiences because I believe work is a matter of honor.(because引导原因状语从句)
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