专题07 应用文写作（期末真题汇编，四川专用）高二英语下学期

**基本信息** 高二下英语应用文写作专题汇编，精选四川多地期末真题，涵盖投稿征文、告知信等四大主题，情境贴近学生生活与时代热点，如爱眼日倡议、AI课堂应用、革命英雄故事等，注重语言实践与文化渗透。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |应用文写作|16篇/每篇80词左右|投稿征文（爱眼日、抗战英雄、传统工艺），告知信（社会实践、运动会、戏剧节），推荐信（AI教学、学习计划、社团建议），其他（暑假安排、留学建议、捡跑活动）|情境具时代性（如AI技术、绿色生活），问题设计含基础表达（事迹描述）与观点评价（感想看法），适配期末写作能力考查，体现语言运用与跨文化意识|

专题07 应用文写作 参考答案 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 Dear schoolmates, Our school is launching an activity themed “National Eye Care Day”, which falls on 6 June each year to remind us of the necessity of caring for our eyes. No one can deny the fact that eyes are extremely important to us. Eyes are the windows for us to see the world. Without good eyesight, we are bound to have a limited life experience. Therefore, it is necessary for us to care for our eyes. First of all, do eye exercise, take a rest or go outside after studying or watching screens for a long time, which relaxes our eyes and avoids eye exhaustion. Besides, we ought to have our eyes examined regularly to seek professional advice. Living a happy life begins by caring our eyes. Let’s take action now. Passage 2 My Most Admired Hero In the Anti-Japanese War, Qiu Shaoyun remains my most admired hero. In October 1952, during a covert operation near Wonsan, an enemy incendiary bomb landed beside him, setting his camouflage uniform and surrounding grass ablaze. Though the flames engulfed his body, he clenched his teeth and lay motionless for over 30 minutes—afraid even the slightest twitch would reveal the platoon’s position. At just 26, he sacrificed his life to safeguard the mission’s success. Qiu’s extraordinary self-discipline and willingness to prioritize the collective over personal survival are deeply moving. His silent endurance embodies the revolutionary spirit of unwavering loyalty, proving that true heroism lies in sacrificing one’s all for the nation’s future. His story continues to ignite patriotism in every generation. Passage 3 Recently our school carried out a survey about “Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down” among the students. Facing the question, the surveyed students hold different opinions. The survey shows the students offering a positive answer account for 78.8%. Most of them think helping the elderly is a Chinese traditional virtue. On the contrary, 21.2% are unwilling to offer help. Some think they lack first-aid knowledge, which may even cause further injuries. Another reason may be that they’re afraid of being involved in unnecessary trouble. In my opinion, it’s our responsibility to help the old, such as helping them by calling their family or 120. Give someone in need a hand, and we’ll have a harmonious society full of love. 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 Dear Jim, Glad to know that you want to know my experience in the social practice activity. It was organized by our school's English Club last week, whose theme was “living in harmony with nature” The event started with an assembly where our headmaster emphasized the importance of living in harmony with nature. After that, we were divided into groups, each tasked with a specific project related to environment conservation, such as planting trees and flowers around the school grounds and collecting trash at local parks. This experience was truly meaningful. Not only did it deepen my understanding of nature but also inspired me to live more sustainably. Let me know if you've had similar experiences! Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you about the sports meeting at my school. It was held last week and turned out to be a success. I took part in the 100-meter race. When the starting gun went off, I sprinted as fast as I could. Finally, I finished second, which made me really excited. What even made me happier was that I was awarded a prize medal. This sports meeting taught me that perseverance was key. It also strengthened the friendship among classmates. What about sports events in your school? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 Dear Michael, Glad to share how AI benefits our classes. Teachers use AI-powered platforms to assign customized tasks, like grammar drills or reading comprehension tailored to each student’s level. Interactive tools analyze our performance instantly, highlighting weak points. Students also leverage AI translation apps during language learning and virtual labs for science experiments. I believe AI makes learning efficient and personalized. It saves teachers’ time on repetitive tasks, allowing them to focus on guiding us. However, we must use it wisely to avoid over-dependence. What’s AI’s role in your school? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 Dear Peter, I’m glad I can help. Making a specific plan for your life and study is a good way to improve yourself. The plan can work as a reminder of your goals and keep you focused on what you truly value. To make the plan effective, you need to establish short-term and long-term goal for study and figure out what you need to do for each subject. Then prioritize the tasks and divide up available time. Also, set aside time for relaxing activities and physical exercise. Once your plan is made, stick to it! Yours, Li Hua 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 Dear Jackson, I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of some help to you. Frankly, I hold the view that it makes good sense to study abroad. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process engaging and effective. Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my perspective. All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life. Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 Dear Mike, I’m writing to share with you my voluntary work you are interested in. The activity, with the theme of Green Life, Healthy Plogging, was aimed at promoting a green lifestyle and raising environmental awareness. It started with a brief introduction to plogging by the organizers. Afterwards, we went jogging along the way while picking up litter. What impressed me most was the waste sorting competition, where we gained more knowledge of waste classification and recycling. This experience was truly tiring but rewarding. It not only made us more conscious of environmental issues, but also improved our physical fitness, helping us to realize that even small actions can make a big difference. Yours, Li Hua 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 The Art of Paper-Cutting Chinese paper-cutting, a delicate traditional craft, involves creating vivid designs by cutting red paper with scissors or knives. Often used during festivals or at the wedding, it symbolizes good luck and happiness. Take “双 喜”（double happiness）for example, its symmetrical form reflects the Confucian ideal of harmony. I highly recommend paper-cutting for its cultural significance and accessibility. Mastering basic techniques is simple, yet the creativity it fosters is limitless. Additionally, paper-cutting serves as a bridge between Chinese folk arts and aesthetics. Finally, through this art form, students can also appreciate the harmony between patience, precision, and artistic expression. Passage 2 Home is where you are loved the most and act the worst. This profound saying unveils home’s unique magic: it’s the safest haven where we’re showered with unconditional love, yet paradoxically, the only place where we let our true, unpolished selves show — snapping over trivial matters, slacking off, or pouring out frustrations without fear of rejection, knowing forgiveness is always there. It strikes a chord with me. Family love isn’t a license to be careless but a gift to cherish. I resolve to be more mindful: to offer patience instead of impatience, and to share warmth instead of coldness. For the ones who love us most deserve our gentlest hearts, not our unguarded worst. Let’s nurture home with the care it gives us. Passage 3 A Memorable Summer Sports Day Last Friday, an exciting Summer Sports Meeting was held in our school. It was filled with energy and sweat, and featuring various track and field events as races, high and long jumps, shot-putting and so on. 300 student and teacher “athletes” participated actively, with all people in the school as enthusiastic audiences. As for me, the most unforgettable scene was that when an player fell on the ground and struggle to his feet, cheers and applause from the audience rang throughout the entire field. The encouragement from all of us urged him to accomplish the whole race. I think that was what sports spirit really means: perseverance and team spirit. The sports meeting will remain a shining memory in my heart. 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share my exciting and unforgettable experience at the school’s drama festival last week. I played the role of Sun Wukong, the Monkey King from “Journey to the West.” Known for his cleverness, bravery, and magical abilities, he is one of the most famous characters in Chinese classic literature. Wearing a golden head band and holding a magic staff, I tried hard to bring his lively spirit to life on stage, which was both challenging and amazing. Not only did this experience help me understand classic literature better, but it also helped build my confidence. And working with my classmates to bring this story to life was meaningful. I’m already looking forward to the next drama festival! Best wishes, Li Hua Passage 2 Dear Mark, I heard you’re leaving soon. I’ve prepared a gift for you — a small and exquisite hand-made Chinese knot. Its red color symbolizes good luck in our culture, and the knotting technique, dating back to centuries, carries the wisdom of our ancestors. I chose it because it’s small enough to take home easily, yet it holds the memories of our time together. Whenever you see it, I hope it reminds you of China and our friendship. Wish you a safe journey and all the best for your future! Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 An Experience During the May Day During the May Day, I participated in the labor organized by our community. The project focused on cleaning and beautifying our local park. The process involved several tasks, including cleaning up litter and planting new flowers. We started early in the morning, equipped with trash bags and gardening tools. The most challenging part was digging and planting. It was not until dusk that we finished our task and went home. The experience made me appreciate the value of community. Seeing the tidy park, I felt a sense of fulfillment. 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to propose the establishment of a Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society at our school. In our school, an increasing number of students are curious about China driven by the growing fascination with Chinese culture on campus. This society can offer a platform where students engage in activities like Chinese calligraphy shows, tea ceremonies and traditional festival celebrations. It will certainly serve as a bridge for English students to experience Chinese culture closely, allowing hands-on exploration and promoting cross-cultural exchange. Hopefully, the Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society could motivate learning and unity at our school as well as intensify mutual understanding of China and the UK. Looking forward to your favorable consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 To whom it may concern, Learning that the Students’ Union is collecting creative items for the upcoming fun sports meeting, I can’t wait to recommend the three-legged race. In a three-legged race, two students form a pair, standing side by side, with one of their legs tied together, thus creating the amusing “two people, three legs” scene. The champion goes to those who reach the finish line first. Easy as it may sound, the race requires effective cooperation and team spirit, which are crucial to everyone in the long term. Hope you will find my recommendations beneficial. Anticipating your prompt reply. Yours, Li Hua 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 Dear Ryan, I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. Having scored only 14 for my continuation writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons. For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word. I even wrote some compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage. In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me an explanation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 After discussion, we firmly believe that physical bookstores will not disappear, despite the rapid development of e-books and high operating cost. The reasons are listed as follows. To start with, physical bookstores offer us irreplaceable offline experiences, where we can touch real books and enjoy finding new books by chance. Besides, they are warm places to develop a sense of belonging among readers, in which people meet, read and share ideas face to face. These experiences can’t be replaced by digital platforms. In all, we’re convinced that as long as people seek sensory joy and human interaction, physical bookstores will continue to thrive. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题07 应用文写作 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳市·期末） 1．六月六日是全国爱眼日，你校以此为主题举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 眼睛的重要性； 2. 保护眼睛的倡议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文首句已为你写好。 Dear schoolmates, Our school is launching an activity themed “National Eye Care Day” _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear schoolmates, Our school is launching an activity themed “National Eye Care Day”, which falls on 6 June each year to remind us of the necessity of caring for our eyes. No one can deny the fact that eyes are extremely important to us. Eyes are the windows for us to see the world. Without good eyesight, we are bound to have a limited life experience. Therefore, it is necessary for us to care for our eyes. First of all, do eye exercise, take a rest or go outside after studying or watching screens for a long time, which relaxes our eyes and avoids eye exhaustion. Besides, we ought to have our eyes examined regularly to seek professional advice. Living a happy life begins by caring our eyes. Let’s take action now. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。六月六日是全国爱眼日，考生所在校以此为主题举办英语征文比赛，要求考生写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 提醒：remind→alert 否认：deny→reject 建议：advice→suggestion 重要的：important→vital 2.句式拓展： 同义句 原句：Besides, we ought to have our eyes examined regularly to seek professional advice. 拓展句：Besides, what we ought do is to have our eyes examined regularly to seek professional advice. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】No one can deny the fact that eyes are extremely important to us.（运用that引导的同位语） 【高分句型 2】First of all, do eye exercise, take a rest or go outside after studying or watching screens for a long time, which relaxes our eyes and avoids eye exhaustion.（运用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川达州市·期末） 为纪念抗日战争胜利八十周年，你校英文报正在举行“用英语讲革命英雄故事”的征文比赛，请你以“My Most Admired Hero”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.该英雄的主要事迹； 2.你的评价。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Most Admired Hero __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Most Admired Hero      In the Anti-Japanese War, Qiu Shaoyun remains my most admired hero. In October 1952, during a covert operation near Wonsan, an enemy incendiary bomb landed beside him, setting his camouflage uniform and surrounding grass ablaze. Though the flames engulfed his body, he clenched his teeth and lay motionless for over 30 minutes—afraid even the slightest twitch would reveal the platoon’s position. At just 26, he sacrificed his life to safeguard the mission’s success.       Qiu’s extraordinary self-discipline and willingness to prioritize the collective over personal survival are deeply moving. His silent endurance embodies the revolutionary spirit of unwavering loyalty, proving that true heroism lies in sacrificing one’s all for the nation’s future. His story continues to ignite patriotism in every generation. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就学校英文报正在举行“用英语讲革命英雄故事”的征文比赛，以“My Most Admired Hero”为题写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 隐蔽的：covert→ stealth 着陆：land→touch down 令人感动的：moving→touching 激发：ignite→inspire 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：At just 26, he sacrificed his life to safeguard the mission’s success. 拓展句：At just 26, he sacrificed his life, which safeguarded the mission's success. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Though the flames engulfed his body, he clenched his teeth and lay motionless for over 30 minutes—afraid even the slightest twitch would reveal the platoon’s position. （运用了though引导的让步状语从句） 【高分句型2】His silent endurance embodies the revolutionary spirit of unwavering loyalty, proving that true heroism lies in sacrificing one’s all for the nation’s future. （运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句） Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川遂宁市·期末） 最近，你校就“Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down”进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校报的Ethics and Laws专栏投稿。 “Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down” 调查对象学生 态度 比例 原因 会 78.8% 中华传统美德…… 不会 21.2% 急救知识不足…… 你 ？ ？ 注意:  1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Recently our school carried out a survey about “Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down” among the students. Facing the question, the surveyed students hold different opinions. The survey shows the students offering a positive answer account for 78.8%. Most of them think helping the elderly is a Chinese traditional virtue. On the contrary, 21.2% are unwilling to offer help. Some think they lack first-aid knowledge, which may even cause further injuries. Another reason may be that they’re afraid of being involved in unnecessary trouble. In my opinion, it’s our responsibility to help the old, such as helping them by calling their family or 120. Give someone in need a hand, and we’ll have a harmonious society full of love. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down”这一话题的问卷调查结果进行描述，并发表个人观点，向英语校报的Ethics and Laws专栏投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 调查：survey→investigation 不愿意：unwilling→reluctant 缺乏：lack→be short of 依我看来：in my opinion→from my point of view 2. 句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Give someone in need a hand, and we’ll have a harmonious society full of love. 拓展句：If we give someone in need a hand, we’ll have a harmonious society full of love. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Some think they lack first-aid knowledge, which may even cause further injuries. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Another reason may be that they’re afraid of being involved in unnecessary trouble. (运用了that引导的表语从句) 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳中学实验学校·期末） 假如你是李华，上周你校英语社开展了以“living in harmony with nature”为主题的社会实践活动。你的英国朋友Jim来信请你分享这次经历。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1．活动过程； 2．你的感想。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, Glad to know that you want to know my experience in the social practice activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Glad to know that you want to know my experience in the social practice activity. It was organized by our school's English Club last week, whose theme was “living in harmony with nature” The event started with an assembly where our headmaster emphasized the importance of living in harmony with nature. After that, we were divided into groups, each tasked with a specific project related to environment conservation, such as planting trees and flowers around the school grounds and collecting trash at local parks. This experience was truly meaningful. Not only did it deepen my understanding of nature but also inspired me to live more sustainably. Let me know if you've had similar expеriences! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信，分享学校英语社团开展的以“living in harmony with nature”为主题的社会实践活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 强调：emphasize →attach importance to 重要性：importance →significance 和……有关：related to →associated with 激励：inspire →motivate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：After that, we were divided into groups, each tasked with a specific project related to environment conservation, such as planting trees and flowers around the school grounds and collecting trash at local parks. 拓展句：After that, we were divided into groups, each tasked with a specific project that is related to environment conservation, such as planting trees and flowers around the school grounds and collecting trash at local parks. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was organized by our school's English Club last week, whose theme was “living in harmony with nature”（运用了whose引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only did it deepen my understanding of nature but also inspired me to live more sustainably. （运用了“not only...but also...”连接两个并列结构，且not only位于句首引出部分倒装句） Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川南充市·期末） 假定你是李华，最近你们学校举办了运动会，请你给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1.你参与的项目和表现； 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you about the sports meeting at my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you about the sports meeting last week. It was held last week and turned out to be a success. I took part in the 100-meter race. When the starting gun went off, I sprinted as fast as I could. Finally, I finished second, which made me really excited. What even made me happier was that I was awarded a prize medal. This sports meeting taught me that perseverance was key. It also strengthened the friendship among classmates. What about sports events in your school? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件，分享学校举办运动会的经历，包括自己参与的项目、表现以及感想。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参加：take part in → participate in 冲：sprint → dash 兴奋的：excited → thrilled 加强：strengthen → reinforce 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This sports meeting taught me that perseverance was key. It also strengthened the friendship among classmates. 拓展句：Not only did this sports meeting teach me that perseverance was key, but also it strengthened the friendship among classmates. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, I finished second, which made me really excited.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】What even made me happier was that I was awarded a prize medal.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川省达州市·期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Michael发来邮件，想了解AI技术在你校课堂教学中的运用。请你写一封邮件回复他，内容包括： 1. 使用情况； 2. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michael, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Michael,       Glad to share how AI benefits our classes. Teachers use AI-powered platforms to assign customized tasks, like grammar drills or reading comprehension tailored to each student’s level. Interactive tools analyze our performance instantly, highlighting weak points. Students also leverage AI translation apps during language learning and virtual labs for science experiments.       I believe AI makes learning efficient and personalized. It saves teachers’ time on repetitive tasks, allowing them to focus on guiding us. However, we must use it wisely to avoid over-dependence.       What’s AI’s role in your school? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件回复你的美国笔友Michael，介绍AI技术在你校课堂教学中的运用。其内容包括：使用情况和你的看法。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 立即地：instantly → immediately 专注于：focus on → concentrate on 回复：reply → response 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Interactive tools analyze our performance instantly, highlighting weak points. 拓展句：Interactive tools analyze our performance instantly, which highlight our weak points. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe AI makes learning efficient and personalized. （运用了省略that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】It saves teachers’ time on repetitive tasks, allowing them to focus on guiding us.（运用了现在分词作状语） Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳市南山中学双语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter准备为本学期制定一个学习计划，于是发邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括: 1.制定计划的好处; 2.计划应包含合理的学习、锻炼和娱乐时间; 3.坚持最重要。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m glad I can help. Making a specific plan for your life and study is a good way to improve yourself. The plan can work as a reminder of your goals and keep you focused on what you truly value. To make the plan effective, you need to establish short-term and long-term goal for study and figure out what you need to do for each subject. Then prioritize the tasks and divide up available time. Also, set aside time for relaxing activities and physical exercise. Once your plan is made, stick to it! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给留学生好友Peter回一封邮件，建议如何制定一个学习计划。其内容包括：制定计划的好处、计划应包含合理的学习、锻炼和娱乐时间和坚持最重要。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad →delighted 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 而且： also→moreover 坚持：stick to→persist in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Making a specific plan for your life and study is a good way to improve yourself. 拓展句：It is obvious that making a specific plan for your life and study is a good way to improve yourself. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 The plan can work as a reminder of your goals and keep you focused on what you truly value.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Once your plan is made, stick to it!（运用了once引导的条件状语从句） 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川广安市广安区·期末） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意：1. 词数：80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, How is everything going?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生以李华的名义，你的美国朋友Tom写一封回信，解释未及时回信的原因以及你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 【详解】由于要求解释未及时回信的原因以及你假期的打算，故全文主要使用一般过去时和一般将来时，并以一、二人称为主。 第1步：审题。本文是一封书信，要注意书信的格式和惯用表达，同时注意使用一般过去时和一般将来时，并以一、二人称为主。 第2步：组织要点。1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句（prepare for为...做准备；specific details具体的细节。do a part-time job做兼职； broaden my horizons拓宽我的视野；make a great contribution 做出巨大贡献。），注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，可尝试使用一些复合句以提升文章总体水平。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本篇范文内容完整，简单易读，表达地道，展现出良好的语言素质。 范文涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，没有中国式英语。文章结构清晰，富有条理。考生运用了多样式的高级的句型结构，让整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。如定语从句…which is able to enrich my life.文章中多次使用动名词做主语，如doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society等；第二段doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.一句既包含了动名词做主语，还有because引导的原因状语从句，以及not only引出的部分倒装，堪称本文的点睛之句，体现出作者的较高的语言驾驭能力。在第二部分中作者还使用了较多的连接成分，如To start with、In addition、What is more,等。 Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川成都石室中学·期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jackson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jackson, I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of some help to you. Frankly, I hold the view that it makes good sense to study abroad. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process engaging and effective. Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my perspective. All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jackson写一封电子邮件，阐述关于留学的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 认为：hold the view that→think/believe 有帮助的：be of some help→be helpful 高兴的：delighted→glad 重要的：important→vital 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. 拓展句：Moreover, if we can be bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process engaging and effective. (运用了while引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my perspective. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市东坡区·期末） 假定你是李华，你校举办了一场以“Green Life, Healthy Plogging”为主题的志愿者活动。你的外国笔友Mike对此很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动内容； 3.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：plogging捡跑(在慢跑过程中捡拾垃圾的运动) Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, I’m writing to share with you my voluntary work you are interested in. The activity, with the theme of Green Life, Healthy Plogging, was aimed at promoting a green lifestyle and raising environmental awareness. It started with a brief introduction to plogging by the organizers. Afterwards, we went jogging along the way while picking up litter. What impressed me most was the waste sorting competition, where we gained more knowledge of waste classification and recycling. This experience was truly tiring but rewarding. It not only made us more conscious of environmental issues, but also improved our physical fitness, helping us to realize that even small actions can make a big difference. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向外国笔友Mike介绍学校举办的以“Green Life, Healthy Plogging”为主题的志愿者活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 对……感兴趣：be interested in → be keen on 意识：awareness → consciousness 以……开始：start with → begin with 有意识的：conscious → aware 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The activity, with the theme of Green Life, Healthy Plogging, was aimed at promoting a green lifestyle and raising environmental awareness. 拓展句：The activity, whose theme was Green Life, Healthy Plogging, was aimed at promoting a green lifestyle and raising environmental awareness. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share with you my voluntary work you are interested in. (运用了省略关系词that的定语从句) 【高分句型2】What impressed me most was the waste sorting competition, where we gained more knowledge of waste classification and recycling. (运用了what引导的主语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句) 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川省雅安市·期末） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Chinese Culture”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项中国传统工艺，内容包括： 1.介绍这项传统工艺； 2.说明推荐理由。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version The Art of Paper-Cutting Chinese paper-cutting, a delicate traditional craft, involves creating vivid designs by cutting red paper with scissors or knives. Often used during festivals or at the wedding, it symbolizes good luck and happiness. Take “双 喜”（double happiness）for example, its symmetrical form reflects the Confucian ideal of harmony. I highly recommend paper-cutting for its cultural significance and accessibility. Mastering basic techniques is simple, yet the creativity it fosters is limitless. Additionally, paper-cutting serves as a bridge between Chinese folk arts and aesthetics. Finally, through this art form, students can also appreciate the harmony between patience, precision, and artistic expression. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报“Chinese Culture”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项中国传统工艺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 生动的：vivid→lively 象征：symbolize→represent 培养：foster→nurture 无限的：limitless→boundless 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Chinese paper-cutting, a delicate traditional craft, involves creating vivid designs by cutting red paper with scissors or knives. 拓展句：Chinese paper-cutting, which is a delicate traditional craft, involves creating designs that are vivid and full of cultural meaning by cutting red paper with scissors or knives. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Often used during festivals or at the wedding, it symbolizes good luck and happiness.（运用了过去分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Mastering basic techniques is simple, yet the creativity it fosters is limitless.（运用了that或which引导的定语从句，that或which被省略） Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川成都市·期末） 你校英文报正在开展征文活动，请结合以下引言写一篇短文投稿，要点如下： 1. 你对该引言的理解； 2. 你所受到的启示。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Home is where you are loved the most and act the worst. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Home is where you are loved the most and act the worst.      This profound saying unveils home’s unique magic: it’s the safest haven where we’re showered with unconditional love, yet paradoxically, the only place where we let our true, unpolished selves show — snapping over trivial matters, slacking off, or pouring out frustrations without fear of rejection, knowing forgiveness is always there.       It strikes a chord with me. Family love isn’t a license to be careless but a gift to cherish. I resolve to be more mindful: to offer patience instead of impatience, and to share warmth instead of coldness. For the ones who love us most deserve our gentlest hearts, not our unguarded worst. Let’s nurture home with the care it gives us. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合引言“Home is where you are loved the most and act the worst”写一篇短文投稿。其内容包括：你对该引言的理解和你所受到的启示。 【详解】1.词汇积累 深刻的：profound→deep 揭示：unveil→reveal 珍惜：cherish→treasure 决定： resolve→determine 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Family love isn’t a license to be careless but a gift to cherish. 拓展句：Family love is not a license that allows us to be careless, but rather a gift that we should cherish. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 This profound saying unveils home’s unique magic: it’s the safest haven where we’re showered with unconditional love, （运用了where引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】 For the ones who love us most deserve our gentlest hearts, not our unguarded worst.（运用了who引导的定语从句） Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川乐山市·期末） 假定你是李华，你校上周五举行了夏季运动会。你向学校英文报投稿，描述你的感受。内容包括： 1.运动会情况简要描述； 2.描述你最难忘的一幕。 注意： 1.词数不少于80，题目、开头和结尾已写出，不计入总数； 2.可适当加入细节使内容更加充实，行文连贯。 A Memorable Summer Sports Day Last Friday, an exciting Summer Sports Meeting was held in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The sports meeting will remain a shining memory in my heart. 【答案】A Memorable Summer Sports Day Last Friday, an exciting Summer Sports Meeting was held in our school. It was filled with energy and sweat, and featuring various track and field events as races, high and long jumps, shot-putting and so on. 300 student and teacher “athletes” participated actively, with all people in the school as enthusiastic audiences. As for me, the most unforgettable scene was that when an player fell on the ground and struggle to his feet, cheers and applause from the audience rang throughout the entire field. The encouragement from all of us urged him to accomplish the whole race. I think that was what sports spirit really means: perseverance and team spirit. The sports meeting will remain a shining memory in my heart. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿，要求考生向学校英文报投稿，描述上周五举行的夏季运动会。 【详解】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：various→a variety of 参加：participate→take part 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 毅力：perseverance→persistence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It was filled with energy and sweat, and featuring various track and field events as races, high and long jumps, shot-putting and so on. 拓展句：It was filled with energy and sweat, and featuring various track and field events which included races, high and long jumps, shot-putting and so on. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As for me, the most unforgettable scene was that when an player fell on the ground and struggle to his feet, cheers and applause from the audience rang throughout the entire field. (运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2] I think that was what sports spirit really means: perseverance and team spirit. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that和what引导的表语从句) 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市·期末） 假定你是李华，你在学校上周开展的戏剧节中参加了演出。请你给你的美国朋友Chris写 一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括： (1) 你扮演的角色； (2) 你的感想。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share my exciting and unforgettable experience at the school’s drama festival last week. I played the role of Sun Wukong, the Monkey King from “Journey to the West.” Known for his cleverness, bravery, and magical abilities, he is one of the most famous characters in Chinese classic literature. Wearing a golden head band and holding a magic staff, I tried hard to bring his lively spirit to life on stage, which was both challenging and amazing. Not only did this experience help me understand classic literature better, but it also helped build my confidence. And working with my classmates to bring this story to life was meaningful. I’m already looking forward to the next drama festival! Best wishes, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Chris写信分享自己在学校戏剧节中的演出经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动人心的：exciting → thrilling 著名的：famous → well-known 帮助：help → assist 期盼：look forward to → expect 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to share my exciting and unforgettable experience at the school’s drama festival last week. 拓展句：Since I had an exciting and unforgettable experience at the school’s drama festival last week, I’m writing to share it with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Wearing a golden head band and holding a magic staff, I tried hard to bring his lively spirit to life on stage, which was both challenging and amazing. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Not only did this experience help me understand classic literature better, but it also helped build my confidence. (运用了not only...but also...引导的并列句以及not only置于句首的倒装句) Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川广元市·期末） 假定你是李华，你校交换生Mark即将学成回国，作为他的好朋友，你将送他一个含有“中国元素”的礼物做纪念，请写封邮件告知他此事，内容包括： 1. 选取该礼物的原因； 2. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mark, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mark, I heard you’re leaving soon. I’ve prepared a gift for you — a small and exquisite hand-made Chinese knot. Its red color symbolizes good luck in our culture, and the knotting technique, dating back to centuries, carries the wisdom of our ancestors. I chose it because it’s small enough to take home easily, yet it holds the memories of our time together. Whenever you see it, I hope it reminds you of China and our friendship. Wish you a safe journey and all the best for your future! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给即将回国的交换生Mark写一封邮件，告知他你送的一个含有“中国元素”的礼物做纪念，并说明选取该礼物的原因以及表达祝愿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 精致的：exquisite → delicate 象征：symbolize → represent 追溯到：date back to → date from 想起：remind sb. of sth. → bring sth. to mind 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’ve prepared a gift for you — a small and exquisite hand-made Chinese knot. 拓展句：I’ve prepared a gift for you, which is a small and exquisite hand-made Chinese knot. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Its red color symbolizes good luck in our culture, and the knotting technique, dating back to centuries, carries the wisdom of our ancestors.（运用了and连接的并列句以及现在分词短语dating back to centuries作定语） 【高分句型2】Whenever you see it, I hope it reminds you of China and our friendship.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川省四川达州外国语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，“五一”期间，你积极参加了社区组织的劳动。请你在校英文报上分享一下你的劳动经历，内容包括： 1. 劳动项目； 2. 劳动过程； 3. 劳动感触。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右，标题已给出，不计入总数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 An Experience During the May Day ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 An Experience During the May Day During the May Day, I participated in the labor organized by our community. The project focused on cleaning and beautifying our local park. The process involved several tasks, including cleaning up litter and planting new flowers. We started early in the morning, equipped with trash bags and gardening tools. The most challenging part was digging and planting. It was not until dusk that we finished our task and went home. The experience made me appreciate the value of community. Seeing the tidy park, I felt a sense of fulfillment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写短文在校英文报上分享一下你的劳动经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in→attend 完成：finish→complete 欣赏：appreciate→admire 成就感：a sense of fulfillment→a sense of achievement 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：During the May Day, I participated in the labor organized by our community. 拓展句：During the May Day, I participated in the labor, which was organized by our community. 【点睛】【高分句型1】During the May Day, I participated in the labor organized by our community.（运用了过去分词作定语） 【高分句型2】It was not until dusk that we finished our task and went home.（运用了强调句） 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川德阳市高中·期末） 假设你是在英国某校就读的中国交换生李华，你校学生会计划新增一个社团，现面向全校征集建议。请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一个社团； 2. 阐述推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数80词左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your favorable consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to propose the establishment of a Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society at our school. In our school, an increasing number of students are curious about China driven by the growing fascination with Chinese culture on campus. This society can offer a platform where students engage in activities like Chinese calligraphy shows, tea ceremonies and traditional festival celebrations. It will certainly serve as a bridge for English students to experience Chinese culture closely, allowing hands-on exploration and promoting cross-cultural exchange. Hopefully, the Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society could motivate learning and unity at our school as well as intensify mutual understanding of China and the UK. Looking forward to your favorable consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Mr.Smith写一封推荐邮件，就校学生会计划新增一个社团一事给予建议，推荐一个社团并阐述推荐理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 建议：suggest → propose 提供：offer → provide 参加：engage in → take part in 增强：intensify → enhance 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I am writing to propose the establishment of a Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society at our school. 拓展句：I’m writing to propose that we should establish a Chinese Cultural Enrichment Society at our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This society can offer a platform where students engage in activities like Chinese calligraphy shows, tea ceremonies and traditional festival celebrations. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It will certainly serve as a bridge for English students to experience Chinese culture closely, allowing hands-on exploration and promoting cross-cultural exchange. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市彭山区第一中学·期末） 假定你是李华，在美国某校学习交流期间，该校拟举办趣味运动会（fun sports meeting），校学生会向全校师生征集有创意的运动项目。你打算给学生会写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你的创意项目； （2）你的推荐理由； 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 To whom it may concern, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】To whom it may concern, Learning that the Students’ Union is collecting creative items for the upcoming fun sports meeting, I can’t wait to recommend the three-legged race. In a three-legged race, two students form a pair, standing side by side, with one of their legs tied together, thus creating the amusing “two people, three legs” scene. The champion goes to those who reach the finish line first. Easy as it may sound, the race requires effective cooperation and team spirit, which are crucial to everyone in the long term. Hope you will find my recommendations beneficial. Anticipating your prompt reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封邮件介绍自己的创意项目以及你的推荐理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 收集：collect→gather 到达：reach→get to 有效的：effective→efficient 重要的：crucial→important 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In a three-legged race, two students form a pair, standing side by side, with one of their legs tied together, thus creating the amusing “two people, three legs” scene. 拓展句：In a three-legged race, two students form a pair and stand side by side while one of their legs is tied together, which consequently creates the amusing and unique ‘two people, three legs’ scene that is both entertaining and challenging. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that the Students’ Union is collecting creative items for the upcoming fun sports meeting, I can’t wait to recommend the three-legged race.(运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Easy as it may sound, the race requires effective cooperation and team spirit, which are crucial to everyone in the long term.(运用了as引导让步状语从句和部分倒装，which引导的非限制性定语从句) 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳外国语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中，你的得分为14分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Ryan用英语写一份邮件，内容包括： 1.说明问题； 2.给出理由。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 参考词汇：读后续写 continuation writing Dear Ryan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Possible version 1: Dear Ryan, I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. Having scored only 14 for my continuation writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons. For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word. I even wrote some compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage. In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me an explanation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Possible version 2: Dear Ryan, I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. I received a score of 14 out of 25, and I believe this score is unreasonably low. Firstly, I carefully followed the guidelines and requirements of the competition. I made sure to address the given topic and structure my writing appropriately. Secondly, I also paid attention to grammar, vocabulary, and coherence in my composition. Therefore, I believe my writing should have been evaluated more favorably. In conclusion, I feel that my score of 14 does not accurately represent my writing abilities. I kindly request you to reconsider my score and provide me with a fair evaluation. Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教评委Ryan写邮件，反映读后续写竞赛中得分偏低的问题并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 满足：meet → satisfy    首先：to begin with → first of all 此外：additionally → furthermore 总之：in a word → in short 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest. 拓展句：For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements that were put forward in the contest. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. (运用了why引导的宾语从句) Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川省凉山州·期末） 假设你是李华，你班英语老师在课堂上要求大家分组对问题Will Physical Bookstores Disappear?开展讨论，请你代表小组发言。内容包括： 1. 表明观点； 2. 陈述理由。 注意： 1. 词数应为80个左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入词数。 After discussion, we firmly believe that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    After discussion, we firmly believe that physical bookstores will not disappear, despite the rapid development of e-books and high operating cost.     The reasons are listed as follows. To start with, physical bookstores offer us irreplaceable offline experiences, where we can touch real books and enjoy finding new books by chance. Besides, they are warm places to develop a sense of belonging among readers, in which people meet, read and share ideas face to face. These experiences can’t be replaced by digital platforms.     In all, we’re convinced that as long as people seek sensory joy and human interaction, physical bookstores will continue to thrive. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在课堂上就问题“Will Physical Bookstores Disappear?”代表小组发言，陈述观点及理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 尽管：despite → in spite of 首先：to start with → first of all 此外：besides → in addition 交流思想：share ideas → exchange ideas 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：After discussion, we firmly believe that physical bookstores will not disappear, despite the rapid development of e-books and high operating cost. 拓展句：After discussion, we hold the firm belief that physical bookstores will not disappear, though e-books are developing rapidly and the operating cost is high. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, physical bookstores offer us irreplaceable offline experiences, where we can touch real books and enjoy finding new books by chance. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】In all, we’re convinced that as long as people seek sensory joy and human interaction, physical bookstores will continue to thrive. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及as long as引导状语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题07 应用文写作 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳市·期末） 1．六月六日是全国爱眼日，你校以此为主题举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 眼睛的重要性； 2. 保护眼睛的倡议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文首句已为你写好。 Dear schoolmates, Our school is launching an activity themed “National Eye Care Day” _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川达州市·期末） 为纪念抗日战争胜利八十周年，你校英文报正在举行“用英语讲革命英雄故事”的征文比赛，请你以“My Most Admired Hero”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.该英雄的主要事迹； 2.你的评价。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Most Admired Hero __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川遂宁市·期末） 最近，你校就“Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down”进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校报的Ethics and Laws专栏投稿。 “Whether you’ll help the old when they fall down” 调查对象学生 态度 比例 原因 会 78.8% 中华传统美德…… 不会 21.2% 急救知识不足…… 你 ？ ？ 注意:  1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳中学实验学校·期末） 假如你是李华，上周你校英语社开展了以“living in harmony with nature”为主题的社会实践活动。你的英国朋友Jim来信请你分享这次经历。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1．活动过程； 2．你的感想。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, Glad to know that you want to know my experience in the social practice activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川南充市·期末） 假定你是李华，最近你们学校举办了运动会，请你给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1.你参与的项目和表现； 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you about the sports meeting at my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川省达州市·期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Michael发来邮件，想了解AI技术在你校课堂教学中的运用。请你写一封邮件回复他，内容包括： 1. 使用情况； 2. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michael, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳市南山中学双语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter准备为本学期制定一个学习计划，于是发邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括: 1.制定计划的好处; 2.计划应包含合理的学习、锻炼和娱乐时间; 3.坚持最重要。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川广安市广安区·期末） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意：1. 词数：80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, How is everything going?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川成都石室中学·期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jackson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市东坡区·期末） 假定你是李华，你校举办了一场以“Green Life, Healthy Plogging”为主题的志愿者活动。你的外国笔友Mike对此很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动内容； 3.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：plogging捡跑(在慢跑过程中捡拾垃圾的运动) Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题01 投稿征文 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川省雅安市·期末） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Chinese Culture”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项中国传统工艺，内容包括： 1.介绍这项传统工艺； 2.说明推荐理由。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川成都市·期末） 你校英文报正在开展征文活动，请结合以下引言写一篇短文投稿，要点如下： 1. 你对该引言的理解； 2. 你所受到的启示。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Home is where you are loved the most and act the worst. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川乐山市·期末） 假定你是李华，你校上周五举行了夏季运动会。你向学校英文报投稿，描述你的感受。内容包括： 1.运动会情况简要描述； 2.描述你最难忘的一幕。 注意： 1.词数不少于80，题目、开头和结尾已写出，不计入总数； 2.可适当加入细节使内容更加充实，行文连贯。 A Memorable Summer Sports Day Last Friday, an exciting Summer Sports Meeting was held in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The sports meeting will remain a shining memory in my heart. 主题02 告知信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市·期末） 假定你是李华，你在学校上周开展的戏剧节中参加了演出。请你给你的美国朋友Chris写 一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括： (1) 你扮演的角色； (2) 你的感想。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川广元市·期末） 假定你是李华，你校交换生Mark即将学成回国，作为他的好朋友，你将送他一个含有“中国元素”的礼物做纪念，请写封邮件告知他此事，内容包括： 1. 选取该礼物的原因； 2. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mark, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25学年高二下四川省四川达州外国语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，“五一”期间，你积极参加了社区组织的劳动。请你在校英文报上分享一下你的劳动经历，内容包括： 1. 劳动项目； 2. 劳动过程； 3. 劳动感触。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右，标题已给出，不计入总数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 An Experience During the May Day ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川德阳市高中·期末） 假设你是在英国某校就读的中国交换生李华，你校学生会计划新增一个社团，现面向全校征集建议。请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一个社团； 2. 阐述推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数80词左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your favorable consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川眉山市彭山区第一中学·期末） 假定你是李华，在美国某校学习交流期间，该校拟举办趣味运动会（fun sports meeting），校学生会向全校师生征集有创意的运动项目。你打算给学生会写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你的创意项目； （2）你的推荐理由； 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 To whom it may concern, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题04 其他类 Passage 1 （24-25学年高二下四川绵阳外国语学校·期末） 假定你是李华，在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中，你的得分为14分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Ryan用英语写一份邮件，内容包括： 1.说明问题； 2.给出理由。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 参考词汇：读后续写 continuation writing Dear Ryan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高二下四川省凉山州·期末） 假设你是李华，你班英语老师在课堂上要求大家分组对问题Will Physical Bookstores Disappear?开展讨论，请你代表小组发言。内容包括： 1. 表明观点； 2. 陈述理由。 注意： 1. 词数应为80个左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入词数。 After discussion, we firmly believe that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $