Unit 2 写作专项讲义 2025-2026学年译林版七年级英语下册

本初中英语讲义聚焦“社区”话题写作专项提优，核心知识点涵盖社区环境、活动及邻里关系的介绍与讨论。学习支架从话题分析明确写作方向，到范文赏析提供例题、写作策略（如环境之美、文化之美、人之美及情感表达），再到写作积累（话题词汇、佳句翻译）和实战演练（书信写作任务及范文、思路梳理），形成从输入到输出的完整学习脉络。 该资料特色在于“输入-内化-输出”闭环设计，通过表格要点引导学生结构化表达以培养思维品质，话题词汇与佳句积累提升语言能力，思路梳理指导写作步骤发展学习能力。课中辅助教师高效引导写作方法，课后学生可借助词汇、佳句及范文自主练习，有效查漏补缺。

写作专项提优 【话题分析】 本单元的写作话题是“社区”，主要描写社区环境、社区活动和邻居情况。其主要的命题形式是让学生介绍一个社区或者讨论如何建设一个友好的社区。 【范文赏析】 一、例题 和谐互助的邻里关系如同温情纽带，将人们紧紧相连。内涵丰富的社区文化更是邻里关系的调和剂。请以“My Golden Neighbourhood”为题，描述你所在美好社区的环境之美，人之美，文化之美。 My Golden Neighbourhood - The beauty of its environment 1. What is your neighbourhood like? 2. What do you think of your neighbourhood? - The beauty of its culture 1. Introduce some interesting cultural activities in your neighbourhood. 2. How do you feel during these activities? 写作要求： 1. 文章需要涵盖所给表格中的要点； 2. 表达清楚，详略突出；语法正确，上下文连贯； 3. 词数不少于90。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、写作策略 本文围绕“我的黄金社区”展开，内容要涵盖表格中的内容，即社区环境、文化活动以及学生对这些的感受。除此之外，学生应当注意描写题目中的“人之美”，“人之美”可以理解为友好的邻里关系。学生在表达感受时，要强调社区不仅是居住的地方，更是充满爱与欢乐的家。 三、范文 My neighbourhood is a lively and friendly place. In the centre of the neighbourhood, there is a beautiful park. Everyone greets each other with warm smiles every day. 第一段开篇点题，点明环境之美和人之美。 I love my neighbourhood because it is warm and fun. Neighbours often chat in the parks or try to help each other in their free time. Some interesting cultural activities in my neighbourhood make it special. Every autumn, we hold a Folk Art Festival. People gather to make traditional crafts like paper-cuts or lanterns. These activities teach us teamwork and keep our traditions alive. 第二段详写人之美，融合文化之美。 During these events, I always feel happy and proud. Our golden neighbourhood isn’t just a place to live—it’s a home filled with love and joy. 第三段抒发情感，总结三种美的核心价值。 【写作积累】 一、话题词汇 1. 帮助某人做某事 2. 有需要的人 3. 为某事筹集资金 4. 回馈我们的社区 二、佳句翻译 1. 我们的工程师会在这里帮助您解决这些问题！ 2. 我们很幸运能生活在这样一个美丽的社区里。 3. 让我们携手努力，让我们的社区变得更美好。 三、实战演练 Ⅷ. 书面表达 Celine 将搬家到江苏一个名为 Garden Community 的社区，请根据图表提示，帮助 Garden Community 给她写一封信，向她介绍一下 Garden Community 这个社区。 要求： 1. 条理清楚，语句通顺； 2. 包含图表所提供的信息并适当发挥； 3. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Celine, Thank you for coming to our community! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day! Garden Community 写作专项提优 一、话题词汇 1.help sb with sth 2.people in need 3.raise money for sth 4.give back to our community 二、佳句翻译 1.Our engineers are here to help you deal with these problems! 2.We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood. 3.Let's work together to make our community a better place. 三、实战演练 Dear Celine, Thank you for coming to our community! It's in the south-west of Jiangsu. Life here is comfortable and easy. The air is fresh because there are so many trees. The road is so clean because everyone loves the community and keeps it clean. It is not far from the city centre and you can get anywhere easily. There is a shopping mall and a post office in Garden Community. There are also some beautiful parks for kids to have fun. The neighbours are kind and helpful. They often share different skills and help people with all kinds of problems. It's good to start your new life in a neighbourhood like this. We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day! Garden Community 思路梳理 总体分析:①题材:本文是一篇介绍信,用于向 Celine 介绍 Garden Community 社区;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,用于描述社区的相关情况;③提示:写作要点已给出,包括“位置”“环境”“周边设施”“邻里关系”,学生应注意围绕这些要点展开,适当添加细节,以展现社区的优势与魅力。 写作步骤:第一步,开篇表示欢迎。在开头直接向 Celine 表达欢迎来到社区的心情。第二步,具体阐述写作内容。围绕“位置”“环境”“周边设施”“邻里关系”这几个方面,详细描述 Garden Community 社区,展现社区的优势。第三步,书写结语。表达对 Celine 在社区未来生活的美好祝愿,使信件情感更温暖。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $