Unit 5 Here and Now 作文写作指导 2025-2026学年人教版英语七年级下册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“描述正在发生的事情”核心话题，围绕现在进行时的运用，构建“总—分—总”写作框架，提供活动类词汇（如play basketball、do homework）、常用表达（如sb be doing...、be busy doing sth.）及写作思路点拨（点明时间、分述活动、总结感受），以学习支架形式帮助学生搭建写作逻辑。 该资料突出语言能力与思维品质培养，通过具体实例（如Kate家庭活动描述）展示不同细节表达，结合范文引导学生规范运用现在进行时。设计梯度练习（从Kate到Grace的写作任务），课中辅助教师分层教学，课后助力学生自主迁移运用，查漏补缺，有效提升学习能力。

Unit 5 Here and Now. (话题写作指导) 【话题分析】 描述正在发生的事情 本单元的话题为“此时此地”,要求能写一篇有关人们正在做的事情的短文。写作时,一般采用“总一分—总”的形式,即先总述后分述,最后写一个总结性的结尾。写此类作文时,通常使用现在进行时态,要注意正确使用动词的现在分词。 参考词汇 1. 活动类: play basketball / football 打篮球/踢足球 play the piano/guitar/violin 弹钢琴/吉他/小提琴 play Chinese Kung fu 练中国功夫 watch TV 看电视 do homework 做家庭作业 walk the dog 遛狗 2. 常用表达:sb be doing... 某人正在做某事 What am/is/are sb doing? 某人正在做什么? be busy doing sth. 忙于做... play with sb./sth. 与某人、某物玩 have a good time / have fun/ enjoy oneself 玩得开心/愉快 Play hard,study hard,laugh hard and live well. 努力玩耍,努力学习,放声大笑,好好生活。 There’ s no place like home. 没有比家更好的地方。 【写作实例】 假如你是你们学校《校园之声》英文栏目的撰稿人。现在是晚上7点,请根据Kate提供的信息,用现在进行时描述一下 Kate 一家人的活动情况。 爸爸:读书 妈妈:看电视 爷爷:听收音机 奶奶:打扫房间 凯特:做作业 贝蒂:玩游戏 _ 【思路点拨】 审题:主题:描述一下 Kate 一家人的活动情况 文章类型:记叙文 时态:现在进行时 人称:第一人称和第三人称 2.写作框架: 第一段:点明时间,引出话题。 第二段:主体——介绍每个家庭成员的活动。 第三段:表达自己的感受、心情。 第一段:点明时间,引出话题。 1. It is 7:00 p.m. now. Kate’s family are all at home. 现在是晚上7点,Kate的家人都在家里。 2. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Everyone is at home. 现在是晚上7点,每个人都在家。 3. It’s 7:00 p.m. now. The sky is getting dark, but Kate’s home is full of warmth. 现在是晚上7点,天色渐渐暗了下来,但Kate的家里充满了温暖。 第二段:主体——介绍每个家庭成员的活动。 1. Kate’s father is reading a book. Kate’s mother is watching TV. Kate’s grandparents are listening to the radio. Kate is doing her homework. Kate’s sister is playing games. Kate的爸爸在看书,妈妈在看电视,爷爷奶奶在听收音机,Kate在做作业,Kate的妹妹在玩游戏。 2. Everyone is doing different things at home now. Kate’s father is reading. Kate’s mother is cleaning the room. Kate is studying. Kate’s sister Betty is playing games. 现在每个人都在家里做不同的事。Kate的爸爸在看书,妈妈在打扫房间,Kate在学习,Kate的妹妹贝蒂在玩游戏。 3. Kate’s father is reading a book on the sofa. Kate’s mother is watching her favourite TV show in the living room.Kate’s grandfather is listening to the news on the radio. Kate’s grandmother is cleaning the room carefully. Kate is doing her homework. Kate’s sister is playing games happily. Kate的爸爸在沙发上看书,妈妈在客厅看她最喜欢的电视节目,Kate的爷爷在听收音机里的新闻,奶奶正认真地打扫房间,Kate在做作业,Kate的小妹妹在开心地玩游戏。 第三段:表达自己的感受、心情。 Kate's family are happy. She loves her family very much. 凯特的家人很开心,她非常爱她的家人。 They are busy but happy. Kate loves her warm family very much. She thinks there’ s no place like home. 他们很忙碌但很快乐,凯特非常爱她温暖的家。她认为没有比家更好的地方。 【范文】 It is seven o'clock in the evening. Kate's family are all staying at home now. Everyone is busy with different activities. Her father is reading books quietly on the sofa. Her mother is watching TV in the living room. Her grandfather is listening to the radio happily and her grandmother is cleaning the room carefully. What is Kate doing now? Kate is doing her homework carefully at her desk and her sister is playing games. They are all busy but happy. Kate loves her warm family very much. She thinks there’ s no place like home. 现在是晚上七点,凯特一家人都待在家里。每个人都忙着做不同的事情。 她的爸爸安静地坐在沙发上看书,妈妈在客厅看电视,爷爷正在开心地听收音机,奶奶在仔细地打扫房间。凯特现在正在干嘛呢?凯特在书桌前认真写作业,妹妹在玩游戏。 他们很忙碌但很快乐,凯特非常爱她温暖的家。她认为没有比家更好的地方。 2.现在是晚上七点钟,假如你是Grace,请根据表格内容,以“What are my family doing?”为题,用英文写一篇短文,描述你的一家人正在做的活动。 Who What Father Drink tea Mother Clean the room I Listen to music Brother Play games Grandparents Watch TV What are my family doing? _ 【思路点拨】 审题:主题:描述家人的活动情况 文章类型:记叙文 时态:现在进行时 人称:第一人称和第三人称 2.写作框架: 第一段:点明时间,引出话题。 第二段:主体——介绍每个家庭成员的活动。 第三段:表达自己的感受、心情。 第一段:点明时间,引出话题 1. It is 7:00 p.m. now. My family are all at home. 现在是晚上7点,我的家人都在家里。 2. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Everyone is at home. 现在是晚上7点,每个人都在家。 3. It’s 7 o’clock in the evening. The sky is getting dark, but my home is full of warmth. 现在是晚上7点,天色渐渐暗了下来,但我的家里充满了温暖。 4. It’s 7 p.m. on a weekday evening. Most people are relaxing at home, and my family is no different. 这是工作日晚上的7点,大多数人都在家放松,我的家人也不例外。 第二段:主体——介绍家庭成员的活动 1. Everyone is doing different things. My father is drinking tea. My mother is cleaning the room. My grandparents are watching TV. My brother is playing games. I am listening to music. 每个人都在做不同的事。爸爸在喝茶,妈妈在打扫房间,爷爷奶奶在看电视,弟弟在玩游戏,我在听音乐。 2. All my family members are busy with their own things. My father is relaxing. My mother is cleaning. My grandparents are watching TV. I am listening to music. 我的所有家人都在忙自己的事。爸爸在放松,妈妈在打扫,爷爷奶奶在看电视,我在听音乐。 3. My father is drinking tea in the living room. My mother is cleaning the room carefully to keep it tidy. My grandparents are watching their favourite TV shows on the sofa. My brother is playing games happily in his room. I am listening to music quietly in my bedroom and Pop music is my favorite. 爸爸在客厅喝茶,妈妈正认真打扫房间,让家里保持整洁。爷爷奶奶在沙发上看他们喜欢的电视节目,弟弟在他的房间里开心地玩游戏,我在卧室里安静地听音乐, 流行乐是我的最爱。 4. My father is sitting in the living room and enjoying a cup of tea. My mother is cleaning the room carefully. My grandparents are watching TV on the sofa and they like all kinds of programs. What is my brother doing?My brother is playing games happily in his room. And I am listening to my favourite music in my bedroom and it helps me relax. 爸爸坐在客厅里,慢慢喝着一杯茶。妈妈正认真打扫房间,让家里的每个角落都明亮整洁。爷爷奶奶在沙发上看电视,他们喜欢各种节目。我的弟弟在干什么呢?弟弟在他的房间里开心地玩游戏,我在卧室里听着最喜欢的音乐,音乐帮助我放松。 第三段:表达自己的感受、心情 1. We are happy. I love my family. 我们很开心,我爱我的家人。 2. Everyone is busy but happy. This is my family and I love my family very much. I think there’ s no place like home. 每个人都很忙碌,但都很开心。这就是我的家,我爱我的家人 我认为没有比家更好的地方。 This evening makes me feel so warm and peaceful. Even though we are doing different things, the love in our home is always there. I am so happy to have such a loving family. 这个安静的夜晚让我感到温暖又平静。虽然我们在做不同的事,但家里的爱一直都在。能有这样一个充满爱的家,我觉得很幸福。 【范文】 What are my family doing? My name is Grace. It’s 7 o’clock in the evening. The sky is getting dark, but my home is full of warmth. In my family,everyone is doing different things . My father is sitting in the living room and enjoying a cup of tea. My mother is cleaning the room carefully. My grandparents are watching TV on the sofa and they like watching all kinds of programs. What is my brother doing?He is playing games happily in his room. And I am listening to my favourite music in my bedroom and it helps me relax. Everyone is busy but happy. This is my family and I love my family very much. I think there’ s no place like home. 我的名字叫Grace,现在是晚上7点,天色渐渐暗了下来,但我的家里充满了温暖, 每个人都做着不同的事情。 爸爸坐在客厅里,慢慢喝着一杯茶。妈妈正认真打扫房间,让家里的每个角落都明亮整洁。爷爷奶奶在沙发上看电视,他们喜欢看各种各样的节目。我的弟弟在干什么呢?弟弟在他的房间里开心地玩游戏,我在卧室里听着最喜欢的音乐,音乐帮助我放松。 每个人都很忙碌,但都很开心。这就是我的家,我爱我的家人 我认为没有比家更好的地方。 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $