内容正文:
When it comes to space, what would you think of?
What if it were free? Would you like to go to space?
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Life is not just making a living from day to day;
it's also about poetry and faraway places.
生活不只是眼前的苟且,
还有诗和远方。
The same goes for the space cause.
1. What type of text is it?
A. Argumentative essay(议论文)
B. Narrative essay(记叙文)
C. Expository essay(说明文)
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realise how exploring space helps us.
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.
Second, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all.
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world's problems and even to find ways to solve them.
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits.
Part 1
Introduction
Part 2
Body
Part 3
Conclusion
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world's poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realise how exploring space helps us.
手机是否入校?
1.引出话题: We had a heated discussion about whether...
2. 陈述针对此话题不同的观点:Some argue that...While others...
3. 亮明我的观点:As far as I'm concerned,...
手机是否入校?
1.引出话题: We had a heated discussion about whether...
2. 陈述针对此话题不同的观点:Some argue that...While others ...
3. 亮明我的观点: As far as I'm concerned,...
试写:我们就是否学生应该被允许带手机进学校进行了热烈的讨论。一些人认为手机会分散学生的学习注意力,而另一些人则认为它们是实用的学习工具。就我而言,只要合适的规则制定好,学生可以带手机进学校。
We had a heated discussion about whether students should be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Some argue that phones distract students from learning, while others consider them practical learning tools. As far as I'm concerned, students can bring phones to school as long as proper rules are made.
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger. It has directly resulted in the many satellites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth. After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth's increasing population.
论证你的观点。
好处一:
试写:首先,手机可以让学生在紧急情况发生时立即与父母取得联系。
First, mobile phones allow students to get in touch with parents right away when emergencies occur.
exploring space
fight against world hunger
How?
launch satellites
transmit and analyse data
provide advice for farmers
安全联系
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all. High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration. For example, space technologies have helped the research and development of different types of new material. They have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use. Today, space technologies are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products such as GPS, memory foam pillows, and smartphone cameras are changing our lives.
2. How does the author develop the second argument (space exploration promotes technological improvements)?
A. By listing numbers.
B. By giving examples.
C. By comparing two opinions.
D. By telling a personal story.
论证你的观点。
好处二:
试写:其次,智能手机在日常学习中充当有用的学习工具。例如,每当我遇到不熟悉的英语单词时,我可以立刻查一下。
Second, smartphones act as useful learning tools in daily study. For example, whenever I come across unfamiliar English words, I can look them up immediately.
学习辅助
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world's problems and even to find ways to solve them. Seeing pictures of our planet as an island in a black sea made people realise that our planet's resources are limited. In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home. The greatest attention at present is on Mars because it is closer to Earth. In the future, humans may live on both planets.
论证你的观点。
好处三:
试写:最重要的是,在学校明智地使用手机有助于我们培养自律,这是一项能让我们终身受益的宝贵技能。
Above all, using phones wisely at school helps us build self-discipline, which is a valuable skill benefiting us lifelong.
培养自律
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits. Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new and better solutions to people's short-term and long-term problems.
第三段:总结
试写:总之,如果我们正确使用手机,它们会是帮手而不是麻烦。因此,我们应该给学生机会来提高他们的自控能力。
In closing, mobile phones will be helpful instead of troublesome if we use them correctly. Thus, we should give students chances to improve their self-control.
第一段 引出话题,不同观点我的观点 支持但又规则 We had a heated discussion about whether...
Some argue that..., while others consider...
As far as I'm concerned, ...
distract students from learning 让学生学习分心, practical learning tools 实用的学习工具, as long as 只要, proper rules 合适的规则
第二段 分论点1 安全联系 get in touch with parents 和父母取得联系, right away 立刻, emergencies occur 紧急情况发生
分论点2
学习辅助 act as useful learning tools 充当有用的学习工具, in daily study 在日常学习中, whenever 每当, come across unfamiliar English words 遇到不熟的英语单词, look them up 查阅它们, immediately 立刻
分论点3
培养自律 Above all 最重要的是, using phones wisely 明智地使用手机, build self-discipline 培养自律, a valuable skill 一项宝贵的技能, benefiting us lifelong 让我们终身受益
第三段 重申观点 用好则利 In closing 总之, helpful instead of troublesome 是帮手而不是麻烦, use them correctly 正确使用它们, Thus 因此, give students chances 给学生机会, improve their self-control 提高其自控能力
Should Students Be Allowed to Bring Mobile Phones to School?
First,
Second,
Above all,
In closing
We had a heated discussion about whether students should be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Some argue that phones distract students from learning, while others consider them practical learning tools. As far as I'm concerned, students can bring phones to school as long as proper rules are made.
First, mobile phones allow students to get in touch with parents right away when emergencies occur. Second, smartphones act as useful learning tools in daily study. For example, whenever I come across unfamiliar English words, I can look them up immediately. Above all, using phones wisely at school helps us build self-discipline, which is a valuable skill benefiting us lifelong.
In closing, mobile phones will be helpful instead of troublesome if we use them correctly. Thus, we should give students chances to improve their self-control.
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