Unit 4 Our Memory.（写作提升）-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册基础知识专项讲练（新教材人教版）

**基本信息** 以“提高记忆力”话题为载体，构建“结构框架+逻辑连接+语言素材”三位一体写作提升体系，系统培养语言表达能力与逻辑思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |典例导引|1|用first等顺序词分点介绍，结尾表祝愿|从写作结构入手，建立“总-分-总”框架认知| |思维导图|1|开篇点题-分述方法-结尾祝愿|梳理写作逻辑链条，明确各部分内容要素| |范文解析|1|“the+比较级”结构、It is+adj.+to do句型|展示方法实际应用，强化语言表达规范性| |素材积累|词汇20+短语15+句型20+谚语10|开头引入、中间论证、结尾总结句型模板|从词汇到句型递进，夯实语言基础| |专项训练|10|建议类写作通用框架迁移|通过变式练习巩固方法，提升思维迁移能力|

Unit 4 Our Memory. (写作提升） 写一则介绍如何提高记忆力 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元以“记忆力”为话题，要求我们能够了解常用的提高记忆力的方法，并能够向别人介绍一些提高记忆力的方法。写这类作文时，可用表示顺序的first,second,what's more,last but not least来逐条介绍提高记忆力的方法，最后表达自己的希望或祝福。 [教材典句] 1、To start with,it is important to under-stand how memory works. 2、First,pay attention. 3、The more you review what you learn,the more likely you will remember it. 4、Last but not least,boost your memory by staying healthy. 　 ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假设你是Mary的好友Bill, Mary昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何才能提高记忆力，请你根据以下提示，给Mary回复一封电子邮件。 提示：改变日常习惯；努力记忆新东西 饮食均衡；睡眠充足 其他提高记忆力的方法（请补充） 要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实个人信息。 Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bill ⭐思维导图⭐ 提高记忆力 开篇点题：提高记忆力的重要性 Thank you for..., important to improve, There are many ways... 展开表述：介绍提高记忆力的方法 First: try to change your daily habits; Second: keep a balanced diet,get enough sleep; What's more: learn to relax, take exercise; Last but not least: connect...with... enough time, a balanced diet 结尾:表达自己的祝愿 I believe, improve your memory ⭐范文介绍⭐ Dear Mary, Thank you for your email! It is important to improve your memory.There are many ways to improve it. First,try to change your daily habits.The more you try to remember new things,the better your memory will be.Second,it's important to keep a balanced diet and get enough sleep,because they give your brain enough energy.What's more,you should learn to relax and take exercise often to reduce stress.Last but not least,you can connect new information with what you already know,which helps you remember things longer.I believe that you can improve your memory soon. Yours, Bill [亮点点评] ①用“It is+形容词+to do sth.”点明了提高记忆力的重要性。 ②用First,..Second, ...What's more,... Last but not least,..层次分明地介绍了改善记忆的方法。 ③用“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构说明努力记忆新东西的好处。 ④用“I believe+that从句”给予鼓励，让朋友有成功的信心。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 核心单词 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ①memory n. 记忆力 ②improve v. 提高；改善 ③brain n. 大脑 ④healthy adj. 健康的 ⑤relax v. 放松 ⑥rest n.&v. 休息 ⑦exercise n.&v. 锻炼 ⑧repeat v. 重复 ⑨review v. 复习 ⑩focus v. 集中注意力 ⑪enough adj. 充足的 ⑫sleep n. 睡眠 ⑬diet n. 饮食 ⑭mind n. 心思；头脑 ⑮skill n. 技巧 ⑯daily adj. 日常的 ⑰knowledge n. 知识 ⑱forget v. 忘记 ⑲remember v. 记住 ⑳confidence n. 信心 必备短语 ①improve memory 提高记忆力 ②do sports 做运动 ③have enough sleep 拥有充足睡眠 ④keep healthy 保持健康 ⑤relax oneself 放松自己 ⑥take regular exercise 坚持规律锻炼 ⑦repeat many times 多次重复 ⑧review in time 及时复习 ⑨pay attention to 集中注意力 ⑩have a balanced diet 均衡饮食 ⑪develop good habits 养成好习惯 ⑫clear one’s mind 理清思绪 ⑬learn by heart 牢记；背诵 ⑭daily practice 日常练习 ⑮stay active 保持思维活跃 句型积累 开头句 ①It’s very important for students to improve memory. 对学生来说提升记忆力十分重要。 ②Good memory makes our study easier and more effective. 好的记忆力让我们学习更轻松高效。 ③Many students are troubled by poor memory in study. 许多学生苦于学习中记忆力差。 ④There are plenty of useful ways to develop our memory. 有许多实用方法可以培养记忆力。 ⑤A strong memory helps us learn more knowledge quickly. 超强记忆力助我们快速掌握更多知识。 中间句 ①We need to sleep over eight hours every single day. 我们每天需要保证八小时以上睡眠。 ②Doing sports can make our brain become stronger. 坚持运动能让我们的大脑更强健。 ③We should eat more fruits and vegetables for health. 我们应多吃蔬果，保持饮食健康。 ④When studying, we must focus our attention fully. 学习时我们一定要全身心集中注意力。 ⑤Repeating texts properly is good for long-term memory. 适度背诵利于形成长久记忆。 ⑥It is wise to go over learned knowledge in time. 及时温习已学知识是明智之举。 ⑦We can remember things well by reasonable association. 我们可以借助合理联想牢记事物。 ⑧Never stay up late, it will badly affect memory. 切勿熬夜，这会严重影响记忆力。 ⑨Taking short breaks can refresh our tired brain. 短暂休息能让疲惫的大脑恢复活力。 ⑩We should keep using our brain every day actively. 平日里我们要勤于动脑、活跃思维。 结尾句 ①In a word, good habits are the best way to improve memory. 总之，好习惯是提升记忆力最好的途径。 ②As long as we stick to these ways, we will get better memory. 只要坚持这些方法，我们的记忆力定会变好。 ③I decide to change my lifestyle to build good memory. 我决定调整生活方式，练就良好记忆力。 ④Better memory will bring us great progress in study. 良好的记忆力会让我们在学习中取得巨大进步。 ⑤Let’s take action now and make our memory better and better. 让我们即刻行动，让记忆力越来越好。 英语谚语 ① Recite often, remember long. 常背诵，记得牢。 ② Review old things to learn new knowledge. 温故而知新。 ③ Keep your brain active, keep memories fresh. 勤于用脑，记忆长存。 ④ Proper rest sharpens your memory. 适度休息，增强记忆。 ⑤ Association helps easy memory. 联想记忆，事半功倍。 ⑥ Never stop using your mind. 常用头脑，不忘不忘。 ⑦ Good mood improves learning and memory. 心情愉悦，益于记诵。 ⑧ Little by little one goes far; day by day memory grows. 日积月累，记忆渐强。 ⑨ Clear thoughts bring clear memories. 思路清晰，记忆分明。 ⑩ Early learning stays longer in mind. 早学知识，经久不忘。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示： （1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求： （1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, eat more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They are good for your brains. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory. If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容详细介绍如何提高记忆力，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示要点详细介绍如何提高记忆力； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go over复习 ②in time及时 ③such as例如 ④the key to doing sth.做某事的关键 [高分句型] ①Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导的条件状语从句) 2．根据要求完成大作文：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题“The Ways to Improve Memory”的短文。 （1）集中精神做事；(focus your attention) （2）要想记得长久，必须先理解文章； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （5）多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 The Ways to Improve Memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. _______________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                        The Ways to Improve Memory     Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it.     Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, have more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They can improve your memory. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory.     If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍提高记忆的方法； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示内容，不要遗漏，要求语法正确，语句通顺连贯。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，承接短文开头，引入主题； 第二步，介绍提高记忆的五种方法； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇］ ①focus one’s attention集中某人注意力 ②think about考虑 ③go over复习 ④in time及时 ⑤It’s the key to doing sth是做某事的关键 [高分句型］ ①Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导条件状语从句，what引导宾语从句) 3．某英文报刊为中学生开辟专栏，请以“How to improve your memory”为题目写一篇英语短文，为报社投稿。 内容提示： 1. 记忆力很重要； 2. 改善记忆力的方法。 要点： 1. 词数 80-100； 2. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范； 3. 短文包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to improve your memory Memory is very important. If you want to have a better memory, here is some advice for you. First, you’d better understand it before you remember something. You can imagine a picture of it in your mind. Second, it’s important to exercise every day. When you exercise your body, you also exercise your brain. Third, live a healthy life. You must have a balanced diet and have enough time to rest every day. If you have these good habits, your memory will be improved. You will do better in your studies and in your life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中给出的关键信息，以“How to improve your memory”写一篇短文。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍记忆力的重要性并引出如何改善记忆力； 第二步，分条介绍如何改善记忆力； 第三步，给出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①imagine 想象 ②have a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食 [高分句型] ①If you want to have a better memory, here is some advice for you.（if引导条件状语从句） ②First, you’d better understand it before you remember something.（before引导时间状语从句） 4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。 要求： 1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory._________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First of all, in order to train your brain, it’s a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What’s more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can’t focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need. I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍锻炼大脑的方法； 第二步，介绍健康生活的方法； 第三步，介绍保持放松的方法并注意适当补充。 [亮点词汇] ①makes sense有道理 ②a balanced diet平衡饮食 ③focus专注 [高分句型] ①Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day.（which引导定语从句） ②What’s more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can’t focus on your study the next day.（suggest后接同位语从句） 5．你的朋友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下内容要点，以“How to improve your memory”为题，给Tom一些建议。 要点：1. 在你记忆之前，最好先理解它； 2. 记的时候可以试着在脑海里形成画面； 3. 健康的饮食、充足的睡眠和适当的运动对提高记忆力也很有帮助。 提示词：想象imagine　活跃的active　放松的relaxed 要求：1. 80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 How to improve your memory ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to improve your memory If you want to have a better memory, here is some advice for you to improve your memory. First, you’d better understand it before you remember something. You can imagine a picture of it in your mind. Second, it’s important to exercise every day. When you exercise your body, you also exercise your brain. Third, live a healthy life. You must have a balanced diet and have enough time to rest every day. If you have these good habits, your memory will be improved. You will do better in your studies and in your life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：记叙文 ②时态：一般现在时 ③提示：题目要求根据提示给汤姆提一些提高记忆力的建议，写作时注意分清条理，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表明写作目的。 第二步，根据所给要点，依次提出提高记忆力的建议。 第三步，最后表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①improve one’s memory提高某人的记忆力 ②live a healthy life过健康的生活 ③have a balanced diet拥有平衡的饮食 [高分句型] ①First, you’d better understand it before you remember something.（用had better提出建议） ②Second, it’s important to exercise every day.（用it作形式主语） ③If you have these good habits, your memory will be improved.（用if引导条件状语从句） 6．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需包括以下要点。 注意：    1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory._____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First, before you remember something, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second, it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory. I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出主题； 第二步，根据提示内容给出相应的建议； 第三步，希望自己的建议能有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more 并且 ②be important for 对……重要 ③had better do sth 最好做某事 [高分句型] ①I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语） ②I hope my advice will help you.（宾语从句） 7．假设你是李华，你们班要举行一个关于“如何提高记忆力”的讨论会，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇发言稿。 内容提示： 1. 多锻炼大脑: 尝试学一门新的语言或玩一种新的乐器; 2. 记忆东西时，可反复记忆； 3. 过健康的生活：均衡饮食，充足睡眠; 4. 自己补充一条方法。 注意：1. 词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。        2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：乐器instrument    Dear friends,     Hello, everyone! I think memory is very important in our lives. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】 Dear friends, Hello, everyone! I think memory is very important in our lives. Here are some practical ways to improve our memory. First of all, we need to exercise our brain regularly to keep it active. For example, we can try learning a new language or playing a new musical instrument. Besides, to better memorize something in a short time, we had better memorize it for several times. In addition, if we want our brain to work well, living a healthy life is worth a try. We should have a balanced diet and get enough sleep. They are good for our brain. Last but not least, we need to stay relaxed so that we can memorize things more quickly. Hopefully, my advice can be helpful to you. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述提高记忆力的方法。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提高记忆力的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 8．假如你是学生李华，想给学校《英语周报》学习与健康栏目稿就如何提高同学们的记忆力问题写一封建议信。要点如下： 1. 提高记忆力的好处； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（如锻炼大脑健康饮食充足睡眠等）； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, Memory plays an important part in studying. __________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear fellow students, Memory plays an important part in studying. I write this letter to express my ideas on the problem about how to improve students’ memory. If students have a good memory, we can study better and better. And besides, we can make the most of the time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork. Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory. First, we can exercise our brains more. Second, we should have a healthy diet. Last, we must have enough sleep. If so, all the students can do well in the subjects. I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】题干解读：题目要求给学校《英语周报》写一封建议信；要求包含所有要点提示。 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式：第一段：介绍提高记忆力的好处；第二段：介绍提高记忆力的方法；第三段：表达祝愿。 9．众所周知，记忆力是一个人学习、生活、工作的必备能力。学校英语俱乐部为帮助大家提高记忆力，将举办“How to improve our memory？”的征文比赛，请你根据征文要点和写作要求写一篇英语短文参赛。 写作要点： 1. Do you have a good memory? 2. Why do you think so? 3. Have you ever tried any good ways to improve your memory? How? 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80-120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Memory is very important in our life. Here I’d like to share something about my memory. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                    How to Improve Our Memory？     Memory is very important in our life. Here I’d like to share something about my memory.     I have a good memory. I can remember new words and knowledge easily every day because I have good living and studying habits. I keep healthy and study carefully.       I have tried some easy ways to improve my memory. First, I repeat things many times to remember them well. Second, I sleep well every night to make my brain active. Third, I often do sports to keep fit. Good health helps me have a better memory.       I believe if we keep practicing, our memory can get better step by step. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：征文说明文，以一般现在时为主，描述个人情况及日常习惯 明确要点：是否拥有良好记忆力以及原因、列举实用的记忆力提升方法 确定人称：第一人称（I /my） 注意事项：不出现真实人名和地名，词数控制在80-120 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明记忆力重要性，引出分享 主体段：表明有好记忆力并列举三种改善记忆力的方法 结尾段：总结升华，表达信心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自身记忆力情况 介绍：have a good memory/remember new words and knowledge easily等 原因：have good living and studying habits/keep healthy/study carefully等 要点二：改善记忆力的方法 方法介绍：repeat things many times/sleep well/do sports to keep strong等 10．假设你是李敏，你的英国笔友Danny记忆力不好，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他发一封电子邮件，给他提出一些提高记忆力的建议，100个单词左右。 【写作提示】 1) 锻炼你的大脑 (如，改变日常习惯，保持大脑活跃 active，努力学习新技能等) 2)过健康的生活(如，吃健康的食物，有足够的睡眠等等) 3)有好的记忆方法 (如，脑海想象图画，做笔记，写日记 keep a diary等等) 4)…… (补充一条你自己的想法) 文章开头已给出： Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forwards to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min 【答案】 Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory. Here are some suggestions for you. First, exercise your brain. You can change your daily habits to keep your brain active. Try to learn new skills. Second, live a healthy life. Eat healthy food like fresh vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat junk food and takeaway food. You must get enough sleep. It is important to keep good memory. Third, use good memory methods. For example, imagine pictures in your mind, take notes, and keep a diary and so on. Also, you can try to relax and reduce stress. Stress can affect your memory. Look forward to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“补充一条你自己的想法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述改善记忆力的方法； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①keep your brain active保持大脑活跃 ②live a healthy life过健康的生活 ③for example例如 ④and so on等等 [高分句型] ①You can change your daily habits to keep your brain active. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②It is important to keep good memory. (it固定句型) $Unit 4 Our Memory. (写作提升） 写一则介绍如何提高记忆力 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元以“记忆力”为话题，要求我们能够了解常用的提高记忆力的方法，并能够向别人介绍一些提高记忆力的方法。写这类作文时，可用表示顺序的first,second,what's more,last but not least来逐条介绍提高记忆力的方法，最后表达自己的希望或祝福。 [教材典句] 1、To start with,it is important to under-stand how memory works. 2、First,pay attention. 3、The more you review what you learn,the more likely you will remember it. 4、Last but not least,boost your memory by staying healthy. 　 ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假设你是Mary的好友Bill, Mary昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何才能提高记忆力，请你根据以下提示，给Mary回复一封电子邮件。 提示：改变日常习惯；努力记忆新东西 饮食均衡；睡眠充足 其他提高记忆力的方法（请补充） 要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实个人信息。 Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bill ⭐思维导图⭐ 提高记忆力 开篇点题：提高记忆力的重要性 Thank you for..., important to improve, There are many ways... 展开表述：介绍提高记忆力的方法 First: try to change your daily habits; Second: keep a balanced diet,get enough sleep; What's more: learn to relax, take exercise; Last but not least: connect...with... enough time, a balanced diet 结尾:表达自己的祝愿 I believe, improve your memory ⭐范文介绍⭐ Dear Mary, Thank you for your email! It is important to improve your memory.There are many ways to improve it. First,try to change your daily habits.The more you try to remember new things,the better your memory will be.Second,it's important to keep a balanced diet and get enough sleep,because they give your brain enough energy.What's more,you should learn to relax and take exercise often to reduce stress.Last but not least,you can connect new information with what you already know,which helps you remember things longer.I believe that you can improve your memory soon. Yours, Bill [亮点点评] ①用“It is+形容词+to do sth.”点明了提高记忆力的重要性。 ②用First,..Second, ...What's more,... Last but not least,..层次分明地介绍了改善记忆的方法。 ③用“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构说明努力记忆新东西的好处。 ④用“I believe+that从句”给予鼓励，让朋友有成功的信心。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 核心单词 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ①memory n. 记忆力 ②improve v. 提高；改善 ③brain n. 大脑 ④healthy adj. 健康的 ⑤relax v. 放松 ⑥rest n.&v. 休息 ⑦exercise n.&v. 锻炼 ⑧repeat v. 重复 ⑨review v. 复习 ⑩focus v. 集中注意力 ⑪enough adj. 充足的 ⑫sleep n. 睡眠 ⑬diet n. 饮食 ⑭mind n. 心思；头脑 ⑮skill n. 技巧 ⑯daily adj. 日常的 ⑰knowledge n. 知识 ⑱forget v. 忘记 ⑲remember v. 记住 ⑳confidence n. 信心 必备短语 ①improve memory 提高记忆力 ②do sports 做运动 ③have enough sleep 拥有充足睡眠 ④keep healthy 保持健康 ⑤relax oneself 放松自己 ⑥take regular exercise 坚持规律锻炼 ⑦repeat many times 多次重复 ⑧review in time 及时复习 ⑨pay attention to 集中注意力 ⑩have a balanced diet 均衡饮食 ⑪develop good habits 养成好习惯 ⑫clear one’s mind 理清思绪 ⑬learn by heart 牢记；背诵 ⑭daily practice 日常练习 ⑮stay active 保持思维活跃 句型积累 开头句 ①It’s very important for students to improve memory. 对学生来说提升记忆力十分重要。 ②Good memory makes our study easier and more effective. 好的记忆力让我们学习更轻松高效。 ③Many students are troubled by poor memory in study. 许多学生苦于学习中记忆力差。 ④There are plenty of useful ways to develop our memory. 有许多实用方法可以培养记忆力。 ⑤A strong memory helps us learn more knowledge quickly. 超强记忆力助我们快速掌握更多知识。 中间句 ①We need to sleep over eight hours every single day. 我们每天需要保证八小时以上睡眠。 ②Doing sports can make our brain become stronger. 坚持运动能让我们的大脑更强健。 ③We should eat more fruits and vegetables for health. 我们应多吃蔬果，保持饮食健康。 ④When studying, we must focus our attention fully. 学习时我们一定要全身心集中注意力。 ⑤Repeating texts properly is good for long-term memory. 适度背诵利于形成长久记忆。 ⑥It is wise to go over learned knowledge in time. 及时温习已学知识是明智之举。 ⑦We can remember things well by reasonable association. 我们可以借助合理联想牢记事物。 ⑧Never stay up late, it will badly affect memory. 切勿熬夜，这会严重影响记忆力。 ⑨Taking short breaks can refresh our tired brain. 短暂休息能让疲惫的大脑恢复活力。 ⑩We should keep using our brain every day actively. 平日里我们要勤于动脑、活跃思维。 结尾句 ①In a word, good habits are the best way to improve memory. 总之，好习惯是提升记忆力最好的途径。 ②As long as we stick to these ways, we will get better memory. 只要坚持这些方法，我们的记忆力定会变好。 ③I decide to change my lifestyle to build good memory. 我决定调整生活方式，练就良好记忆力。 ④Better memory will bring us great progress in study. 良好的记忆力会让我们在学习中取得巨大进步。 ⑤Let’s take action now and make our memory better and better. 让我们即刻行动，让记忆力越来越好。 英语谚语 ① Recite often, remember long. 常背诵，记得牢。 ② Review old things to learn new knowledge. 温故而知新。 ③ Keep your brain active, keep memories fresh. 勤于用脑，记忆长存。 ④ Proper rest sharpens your memory. 适度休息，增强记忆。 ⑤ Association helps easy memory. 联想记忆，事半功倍。 ⑥ Never stop using your mind. 常用头脑，不忘不忘。 ⑦ Good mood improves learning and memory. 心情愉悦，益于记诵。 ⑧ Little by little one goes far; day by day memory grows. 日积月累，记忆渐强。 ⑨ Clear thoughts bring clear memories. 思路清晰，记忆分明。 ⑩ Early learning stays longer in mind. 早学知识，经久不忘。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示： （1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求： （1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．根据要求完成大作文：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题“The Ways to Improve Memory”的短文。 （1）集中精神做事；(focus your attention) （2）要想记得长久，必须先理解文章； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （5）多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 The Ways to Improve Memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. _______________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．某英文报刊为中学生开辟专栏，请以“How to improve your memory”为题目写一篇英语短文，为报社投稿。 内容提示： 1. 记忆力很重要； 2. 改善记忆力的方法。 要点： 1. 词数 80-100； 2. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范； 3. 短文包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。 要求： 1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory._________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 5．你的朋友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下内容要点，以“How to improve your memory”为题，给Tom一些建议。 要点：1. 在你记忆之前，最好先理解它； 2. 记的时候可以试着在脑海里形成画面； 3. 健康的饮食、充足的睡眠和适当的运动对提高记忆力也很有帮助。 提示词：想象imagine　活跃的active　放松的relaxed 要求：1. 80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 How to improve your memory ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需包括以下要点。 注意：    1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory._____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 7．假设你是李华，你们班要举行一个关于“如何提高记忆力”的讨论会，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇发言稿。 内容提示： 1. 多锻炼大脑: 尝试学一门新的语言或玩一种新的乐器; 2. 记忆东西时，可反复记忆； 3. 过健康的生活：均衡饮食，充足睡眠; 4. 自己补充一条方法。 注意：1. 词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。        2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：乐器instrument    Dear friends,     Hello, everyone! I think memory is very important in our lives. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     That’s all. Thank you! 8．假如你是学生李华，想给学校《英语周报》学习与健康栏目稿就如何提高同学们的记忆力问题写一封建议信。要点如下： 1. 提高记忆力的好处； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（如锻炼大脑健康饮食充足睡眠等）； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, Memory plays an important part in studying. __________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．众所周知，记忆力是一个人学习、生活、工作的必备能力。学校英语俱乐部为帮助大家提高记忆力，将举办“How to improve our memory？”的征文比赛，请你根据征文要点和写作要求写一篇英语短文参赛。 写作要点： 1. Do you have a good memory? 2. Why do you think so? 3. Have you ever tried any good ways to improve your memory? How? 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80-120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Memory is very important in our life. Here I’d like to share something about my memory. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是李敏，你的英国笔友Danny记忆力不好，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他发一封电子邮件，给他提出一些提高记忆力的建议，100个单词左右。 【写作提示】 1) 锻炼你的大脑 (如，改变日常习惯，保持大脑活跃 active，努力学习新技能等) 2)过健康的生活(如，吃健康的食物，有足够的睡眠等等) 3)有好的记忆方法 (如，脑海想象图画，做笔记，写日记 keep a diary等等) 4)…… (补充一条你自己的想法) 文章开头已给出： Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forwards to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min $