内容正文:
热点素材8告别趴睡,午休大升级
今年全国两会期间,全国人大代表、辽宁省鞍山
市第十三中学语文教师官启军带来一条建议—希望在
“十五五”时期,推动实现中小学生“躺平午睡”。
这份建议源自她在一线教学的深刻体会。看到学生们
在狭小的座位间,趴在硬邦邦的课桌上勉强午休,官启军
十分心疼:“中小学阶段正是孩子生长发育的关键时期,
睡眠不足会直接干扰生长激素分沁,还会影响大脑发育。”
命题前瞻
睡眠对人们至关重要。你校英语期刊正在以“Better Sleep,Better Life”
这一主题面向全体学生征稿,请你根据以下提示,谈一谈当下的睡眠问题及
解决措施,呼吁大家重视睡眠。
时态:一般现在时人称:以第三人称为主
Sleep problems
short of sleep,can only sleep on the desks...
Bad effects
make students feel tired,affect students'mood...
Measures
provide better nap facilities,sleep a little longer on weekends...
要求:
1.短文应包括表格中的所有要点;
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
4.词数100左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Better Sleep,Better Life
Sleep is very important for teenagers'physical and mental health.However,
many teenagers are facing some sleep problems nowadays.
构思点拨
Better
开头
点明青少年存在的睡眠问题及不良影响
Sleep,
中间
提出改善睡眠的具体建议
Better
Life
结尾
呼吁大家重视睡眠,养成良好的睡眠习惯
妙语积累
lead to导致
be bad for对…有害
be good for对…有好处
make up for弥补;补偿
develop a good habit养成一个好习惯
pay attention to关注
at weekends在周末
at the same time同时
have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
Meanwhile,students should sleep longer at weekends.
同时,学生们应该在周末多睡一会儿。
It is necessary for students to..对学生来说,…是有必要的。
佳作赏析
此处通过转折
Better Sleep,Better Life
强调后半句的“睡
Sleep is very important for teenagers'physical and mental
眠问题”,为下
health.However,many teenagers are facing some sleep problems◆文介绍问题、给
nowadays.
出解决措施做铺
Many students don't get enough sleep on weekdays because
垫,让文章结构
更有层次感
they have too much homework.Besides,some students can only
sleep on their desks at noon at school,which is not good for their
◆which在此处引
health.This makes them feel tired easily and even affects their mood.
导非限制性定语
To solve these problems,schools can provide better nap
从句,补充说明
“趴桌睡觉”的
facilities for students.At the same time,students can sleep a little
危害,让句式更
longer at weekends to make up for the lost sleep and form a good
高级
sleep habit
Good sleep is necessary for us.Let's pay more attention to our
sleep and keep healthy and energetic every day.
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