内容正文:
热点素材1中国机车双冠加冕,燃爆世界赛场!
近日,在世界超级摩托车锦标赛(WSBK)葡萄牙站WorldSSP组别中,
一个中国摩托车制造商在该站赛事双回合正赛中相继夺冠。该制造商的创始
人张雪远在重庆观看直播,热泪盈眶。回望来路,张雪的逆袭诠释了“热爱
可抵万难,奋斗终能圆梦”的道理。
命题前瞻
假设你是李华,最近你了解到一个中国摩托车制造商的创始人张雪,为
了自己热爱的机车事业坚持不懈、努力拼搏,最终实现梦想的故事。请你结
合自身经历及以下要点与要求,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
人称:以第一人称为主时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
要点:
1.你的爱好:明确表明自已的一项爱好(如阅读、运动、绘画等);
2.付出的努力:结合具体事例,说明为了这项爱好你做了哪些努力(如利用
课余时间练习、克服遇到的困难等);
3.收获与感悟:结合张雪的故事,谈谈坚持爱好带来的收获,以及你的感悟。
要求:
1.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确:
2.包含所有提示要点,结合自身经历,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
4.100词左右。
构思点拨
开头
简要提及张雪的事迹,明确点出自己的爱好是什么
爱
中间
阐述自己为爱好付出的努力,给出具体事例
好
结尾
总结自己的收获与感悟,升华主题
妙语积累
passion激情
strive奋斗
be fond of喜欢
make efforts努力
learn about了解
overcome difficulties克服困难
keep on继续
the key to success成功的关键
At first,I found it difficult to...,so I made up my mind to practise
起初,我发现做…很困难,所以我下定决心去练习。
No matter how hard it was,I never thought about giving up.
无论多难,我从未想过放弃。
佳作赏析
Recently,,I learnt about Zhang Xue,who worked hard for◆用定语从句介绍
his love of motorcycles and achieved his dream.It makes me
张雪的身份,使
think of my own hobby-reading
句子更加高级
I love reading very much because it enriches my
knowledge.At first,I couldn't finish a book easily.To improve,
I spent 30 minutes reading every day after school,even at
weekends.When I met new words,I looked them up in the
dictionary and took notes.Like Zhang Xue,I never gave up.
Now I can read different kinds of books smoothly.Zhang
Xue's story and my own experience tell me that love and
连续使用并列结
perseverance are important.As middle school students,we
构,强调自己的
should stick to our hobbies and work hard.It will bring us great
收获,升华文章
gains and help us grow better.
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