Unit 5 Section B 3a–3d单元话题作文指导2025-2026学年人教版英语八年级下期

该初中英语学习任务单聚焦“自然的脾气”单元自然灾害相关写作，涵盖描述灾害、经历及避险方法，以审题明确文体与内容要求为起点，通过写作提纲构建时间顺序逻辑，选词组句提供词汇支持，结合高分作文示例与好句背诵，形成从基础到应用的写作学习支架。 资料特色在于分文体精准指导，记叙文注重事件顺序与情感表达，邮件写作融合说明与叙述，强化语言能力。通过“审题-提纲-组句”步骤培养思维品质，范文与好句提供模仿范例提升学习能力，习题贴合单元目标，助力学生掌握英语写作逻辑与表达技巧。

Unit 5 Nature's Temper 作文话题指导 一、单元话题背景 本单元的话题是“自然的脾气”，与此相关的写作一般是描述常见的自然灾害（台风、地震、洪水、暴风雪等）、讲述自然灾害中的经历，或介绍自然灾害来临时的应急避险方法与自救技巧。 写作时，可以先引出自然灾害的突发性与影响，然后描述具体灾害的场景、应对方法，最后表达对自然灾害的认识、面对灾害的态度及学会自救的重要性。 2、 经典例题（记叙文） 新人教版八年级下册Unit5 Nature's temper单元写作任务Write a story about your day. 根据3a中马丽糟糕一天的示例，写一篇关于自己某一天的故事。                                                                                             思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题 文体：记叙文，讲述自己某一天的经历。 内容：描述一天中发生的一系列事件，要按照事件发生的先后顺序。 可以像3a一样，先说明这一天开始就很糟糕（或其他整体感受），然后详细叙述具体事件。 第二步：写作提纲 开头：直接点明这一天的情况，比如是糟糕的、难忘的等。 中间：按照时间顺序，依次描述发生的事情，如早上做什么，接着发生了什么意外等。可以描述自己的感受和心情变化。 结尾：总结这一天的感受或结果。 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释： terrible very bad 糟糕的 Rush to move quickly 匆忙 suddenly quickly and unexpectedly 突然 Land slide a large mass of rock and earth falling down a slope 山体滑坡 out of breath breathing with difficulty 上气不接下气 高 分 作 文 高分作文一： Last Saturday was a really terrible day for me. In the morning, I overslept because my alarm clock didn't ring. I quickly got dressed and rushed to the bus stop without having breakfast. When I got to the bus stop, I found I had left my bus card at home. I was so worried. Then I decided to walk to the bookstore. On the way, it started to rain heavily. I got all wet. When I finally arrived at the bookstore, it was closed. What a bad day! 上周六对我来说真是糟糕的一天。早上，我睡过头了，因为我的闹钟没响。我没吃早饭，迅速穿好衣服，匆忙赶往公交站。 当我到达公交站时，我发现我把公交卡忘在家里了。我非常着急。然后我决定步行去书店。在路上，开始下起大雨。我全身都湿透了。 当我终于到达书店时，它已经关门了。多么糟糕的一天啊！ 高分作文二： Last Sunday was an unforgettable day. I planned to go to the park with my friends. But in the morning, my mother asked me to do a lot of housework. I was a bit unhappy. After finishing the housework, I hurried to the bus stop. However, the bus was full and I had to wait for the next one. When I got to the park, my friends had already been there for a long time. Although I was late, we still had a great time together. It was a day with both trouble and joy. 上周日是难忘的一天。我计划和朋友们去公园。但早上，我妈妈让我做很多家务。我有点不开心。 做完家务后，我匆忙赶到公交站。然而，公交车上坐满了人，我不得不等下一辆。当我到达公园时，我的朋友们已经在那里等了很久了。 虽然我迟到了，但我们仍然一起玩得很开心。这是既有烦恼又有快乐的一天。 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： 1. Last Saturday was a really terrible day for me. 上周六对我来说真是糟糕的一天。 理由:直接点明时间和对这一天的整体感受，开篇简洁明了，让读者迅速了解文章主题。 2. I overslept because my alarm clock didn't ring.我睡过头了，因为我的闹钟没响。 理由:清晰地说明了睡过头的原因，“because”引导原因状语从句，使句子逻辑清晰，是常见的表达因果关系的方式。 3. On the way, it started to rain heavily.在路上，开始下起大雨。 理由:“on the way”表示“在路上”，“start to do sth.”表示“开始做某事”，这两个表达都很基础且实用，生动地描述了途中遇到的突发情况。 4. Last Sunday was an unforgettable day. 上周日是难忘的一天。 理由: 简单直接地引出主题，表明这一天有特殊意义，吸引读者继续阅读以了解为何难忘。 5. Although I was late, we still had a great time together. 虽然我迟到了，但我们仍然一起玩得很开心。 理由:“although”引导让步状语从句，体现了转折关系，说明尽管有迟到这个小插曲，但整体结果还是不错的，使文章情感有起伏。 6. It was a day with both trouble and joy. 这是既有烦恼又有快乐的一天。 理由:对这一天进行了总结，“both... and...”结构使用恰当，简洁地概括了这一天的特点。 3、 经典例题（记叙文+说明文） 你的澳大利亚网友Jason对自然灾害很关注，他给你发来邮件，询问中国常见的自然灾害以及灾害来临时的应急避险方法。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍相关内容，并分享一次你或身边人经历自然灾害的简短经历。 要求：1.邮件必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.不少于100词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Jason, I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. ___________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Ming 审题： 1. 要点：介绍中国常见自然灾害、灾害来临时的应急避险方法、分享一次自然灾害经历 2. 人称：介绍方法时用第二人称，讲述经历时用第一人称，描述灾害时用第三人称 3. 时态：介绍灾害特点、避险方法用一般现在时，讲述过往经历用一般过去时 4. 文体：应用文（邮件） 二阶段谋篇布局 一、开篇点题：I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. 二、具体介绍自然灾害、避险方法及经历： 1. 中国常见自然灾害：Firstly, common natural disasters in China include...They often happen in...and can bring... 2. 应急避险方法：Secondly, it’s important to know how to keep safe when disasters come. When there is a..., you’d better...You shouldn’t...Besides, remember to...before the disaster starts. 3. 分享经历：Thirdly, I once experienced a...When it happened, I was...Luckily, we...and we all stayed safe. 三、表达感受： I hope...Please feel free to... / Learning how to keep safe in natural disasters is very important. It can help us protect ourselves and our families. 三阶段积句成篇 开头句 1. Natural disasters can happen suddenly and bring great trouble, so it’s necessary to learn how to keep safe when they come. 2. I’m so glad to hear from you and I’m happy to tell you about common natural disasters in China and safety tips. 3. Many kinds of natural disasters may happen in our life, such as typhoons, earthquakes and floods. We should know how to protect ourselves. 4. It’s important to learn about natural disasters and emergency measures. I’d like to share some with you. 中间句 1. Typhoons and floods are common in some parts of China. They can break windows, damage houses and even cause traffic problems. 2. When an earthquake happens, you shouldn’t run out of the building quickly. You’d better hide under a desk or table to keep safe. 3. Before a typhoon comes, we should cover our windows, move things off the floor and store enough food and water. 4. When there is a snowstorm, it’s dangerous to travel outside. You’d better stay at home and keep warm. 5. I once experienced a small typhoon. When it hit, my family and I were staying at home and we closed all the windows tightly. 6. Firstly, pay attention to weather reports to know about natural disasters in advance; secondly, learn some self-rescue skills to protect yourself. 7. When a flood comes, you should move to higher places quickly and don’t walk through deep water. 结尾句 1. Learning self-rescue skills in natural disasters is very important. It can help us stay safe when danger comes. 2. I hope you can learn these safety tips and know how to protect yourself when natural disasters happen. 3. Although natural disasters are terrible, we can keep safe if we take the right measures. Let’s learn more about them together. 4. I’m looking forward to hearing your opinions about natural disasters and sharing more safety tips with you. 名言警句 1. Knowledge can mean the difference between life and death. 知识可能意味着生死之别。 2. It’s better to be prepared than sorry. 有备无患。 3. Quick thinking and calmness can save lives. 敏捷的思维和冷静的态度能拯救生命。 三、范文欣赏 Dear Jason, I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked about common natural disasters in China and how to keep safe when they happen. Now I’d like to tell you something about them. Firstly, common natural disasters in China include typhoons, floods and earthquakes. Typhoons often happen in summer and autumn, and they can break windows and damage houses. Secondly, it’s important to know safety tips. Before a typhoon comes, you’d better cover windows, store food and water and stay inside. When an earthquake starts, hide under a desk and don’t run out. Thirdly, I once experienced a typhoon. When it hit, my family and I were having dinner at home. We closed all windows tightly and didn’t go out. Luckily, we were all safe after the typhoon. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $