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Worksheet for 7B Unit 6 Writing
Class: Name:
By the end of this class, I can:
1. Know about the language features and writing style of saving and safely using electricity.
2. Apply the the knowledge learned in this unit to write a speech on saving and safely using electricity at school .
3. Understand the thematic meaning in the writing task.
Activity 1: Think and answer
Activity 2: Analyse & outline
If you want to write a speech about using electricity safely and wisely, how many parts should it have?
What should each part talk about?
Part1: ____________________________________
Part2: ____________________________________
Part3: ____________________________________
Part4: ________________________________
Activity 3: Discuss & speak
Discuss in groups how to use electricity safely and wisely at school based on the scenes in the envelopes and share with us.
Scene 1: Classroom
Scene 2: Hallway & Washroom
Scene 3: Library
显示屏:monitor
节能灯泡:energy-saving LED bulbs 自然光:natural light
插头:plugs 拔插座:unplug
走廊灯:hallway light
饮水机:water dispenser
干手器:hand dryer
打印机:printer
关闭:turn off
开关:switches
Activity 4: Organize & use
Organize the outline and add details.
Part1: Introduction
· Electricity is all around us. It gives us power. It is very important in our daily lives....
Linking words:
· First,second.....
· Besides,what’s more, in addition
· Last but not least
· However, not only ...but also...
Part 2: Body
· We mustn’t touch electrical appliances with wet hands.
· We need to make sure all cables are safe to use.
· You’d better do .../You’re supposed to ...
Part 3: Body
· We should switch off the lights when we leave the classroom.
· Don’t turn on the air conditioner when the window is open
· Remember to ...
Part 4: Ending
· It’s important for us to ...
· Let’s take action to ...
Group report :
Hello everyone, I’m from Group_________, I want to share how to use electricity safely and wisely at ________________.
To use electricity safely, we should/can/must ______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
To use electricity wisely,we ___________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Activity 5. Write the draft
请你写一篇关于“How to use electricity safely and wisely at school” 的国旗下演讲稿。
提示:1.电的重要性和现状
2.如何节约用电和安全用电
3.号召大家
How to Use Electricity Wisely and Safely at School
Dear students,
I’m very happy to give a speech on how to use electricity wisely and safely at school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Activity 6. Assessment & present
评分维度
具体评价要求
分值
1 自评
总分
红笔标注
2 互评
总分
3 班评
Content
内容
1.写作目的及问候
2
①
2.如何安全用电(2点)
2
②
3.如何节约用电(2点)
2
③
4.结尾和号召
2
④
2.
语言
质量
(3')
2.1 语法:拼写、人称、时态、语态、标点正确(错 1 处-0.5’)
1
√ , X
2.2 好词:使用情态动词
1
2.3 佳句:能使用祈使句等句型
1
3.
语篇
质量(3')
3.1 结构:4段式
1
P1, P2, P3
3.2 衔接:使用两个及以上连接词
1
☆
3.3 字数:80-100 词左右
1
达标
4.卷面 质量(1')
4.1 书写:卷面整洁,书写规范
(美观 1 ,一般 0.5 ,待改进 0)
1’
美观
总分
15’
15’
Give the score and share the reasons :(作文点评模板参考):
We want to give this writing_____ marks. Our reasons are as follows.
Student 1 : First, this writing (wrote/didn’t write ) the importance of electricity, how to use it safely and wisely and calls to action.
Student 2: Second, there (are/aren’t ) some tense/grammar/ punctuation/spelling mistakes.
For example, ...
It also (added/didn’t add ) some new ideas, like ...
It (wrote/didn’t write) a (very/really) good beginning and ending
Student 3: What’s more, there are ____ paragraphs in it, and there (are/aren’t) some linking
words, for example ...
Student 4: In addition,this writing (has/doesn’t have) beautiful and neat handwriting.
Homework
Polish your draft into a final version.
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