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英语读后续写练习题 最暖心的惊喜来自于最爱你的人 “ ” by Rick Analysis of the plot I woke up with a start and looked at the clock in front of me — 5:00 am. The whole night I had been dreaming and planning various things I wanted to do. After all, it was my 16th birthday! Yesterday, none of my family had shown any sign to indicate that they’ d remembered the fact that my birthday was only 24 hours away. They might have been planning a surprise for me! 回扣 a surprise my 16th birthday Analysis of the plot I raced downstairs. “Well, you’ re up early,” my dad said, his eyes fixed upon the newspaper. My mother, who was cooking breakfast, paid me no attention. “Have they forgotten about me?” I wondered. “No, they would never do that.” “Mama, I was wondering if you could cook me some pancakes,” I said in a cheerful tone. “Jessie, I am in a hurry today. I am afraid I don’t have time to make you pancakes,” my mother said. Analysis of the plot None of them seemed to be aware of my special day. At least for my sake, they could’ve given it some importance. And none of my brothers seemed to be interested in my birthday either. I felt a bit down. For months we had been planning events for my birthday — shopping, games, decorations and so much more— but now, they all seemed to have forgotten about my birthday. I felt a bit down . 回扣 have forgotten about my birthday. Analysis of the plot Lunch was boring, with nothing special cooked for my special day. Everyone sat talking about random (随意的) things, not once mentioning my birthday. Analysis of the plot Disappointed, I climbed up the stairs to my room and lay down in bed. Suddenly, Mom called out to me. I dashed (急奔) towards her, hoping to hear something cheerful. But my optimism (乐观) disappeared when she said, “Me, your dad and your brothers are attending a dinner. Since you woke up early, we thought you might need some sleep. If you feel hungry, there’s food in the fridge. Call if you need help. Bye, and be a good girl.” Disappointed 回扣 lay down in bed Some useful information about the story. Main characters: Main ideas: I (Jessie is a girl who would celebrate her 16th birthday) relationship? family members I thought that my family forgot my birthday , feeling down and disappointed.But in fact, my parents and brothers had planned the birthday party secretly to give me a big surprise. My family (my dad, ,my mother, my brothers) 如何想？ Analysis of the coherence Paragraph 1: They all waved goodbye one by one, leaving me alone in the house. 衔接： 过渡： 衔接： What did I feel at that moment? What did I do after I thought all of my family forgot my 16th birthday? What about my feelings? It turned out to be my family. Analysis of the coherence 如何想？ Paragraph 2: “Surprise!” a lot of voices called out. 衔接： 过渡： 主题： What did a lot of voices come from? What did all my family do for me? After figuring out it, how did I feel? Please remember: the warmest surprise comes from the people who love you best. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 1: 1. 在那时，我感到比之前更失望了。（At that moment） At that moment, I felt more disappointed than before. 2.那是因为我的家人已经忘了我十六岁的生日。 That was because all my family had forgotten my 16th birthday. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 1: 3.我冲到我的卧室，躺在床上。 I rushed to my bedroom and lay down in bed. 4.我突然想到家里没有人爱我和关心我。（It occurred to me that ...) It occurred to me that nobody in my family loved and cared about me. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 1: 5.一想到这，我的眼泪止不住的往下流。（my tears couldn’t be stopped flowing down.） At the thought of it, my tears couldn’t be stopped flowing down. 6.我感到如此生气以至于一句话都说不出来。（utter a single word） I was so upset that I couldn’t utter a single word. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 1: 7. 突然有人敲门。 Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. 8. 然后，我打开门。结果是我的家人。（ It turned out to be...) Then , I opened it. It turned out to be my family. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 2: 1.我的妈妈进来了，手里拿着个又大又漂亮的生日蛋糕。（with + O.+ O.C) My mother came in with a big and beautiful birthday cake in her hand. 2.我的爸爸和哥哥送生日礼物给我。（It was ...who) It was my dad and brothers who sent me the birthday gifts. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 2: 3.他们紧紧地抱住我，祝我生日快乐。（wish me a happy birthday) They hugged me tightly , wishing me a happy bithday. 4.实际上，他们没有忘记我的生日。 In fact , they hadn’t forgotten my birthday. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 2: 5.而是他们想要给我一个大的惊喜。（Instead,...) Instead, they just wanted to give me a big surprise. 6. 喜悦的泪水在我眼里涌出来。（Tears of joy well up in one's eyes.) Tears of joy welled up in my eyes. 根据汉语意思，将下列句子翻译成英语： Para 2: 7.请记住：最暖心的惊喜来自于最爱你的人。 Please remember: the warmest surprise comes from the people who love you best. Writing Sample: They all waved goodbye one by one, leaving me alone in the house. At that moment, I felt more disappointed than before. That was because all my family had forgotten my 16th birthday. I rushed to my bedroom and lay down in bed. It occurred to me that nobody in my family loved and cared about me. At the thought of it, my tears couldn’t be stopped flowing down. I was so upset that I couldn’t utter a single word. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. Then , I opened it. It turned out to be my family. Writing Sample: “Surprise!” a lot of voices called out. My mother came in with a big and beautiful birthday cake in her hand.It was my dad and brothers who sent me the birthday gifts. They hugged me tightly , wishing me a happy bithday. In fact , they hadn’t forgotten my birthday. Instead, they just wanted to give me a big surprise. Tears of joy welled up in my eyes. Please remember: the warmest surprise comes from the people who love you best. Goodbye! Thank you! “ ” $