Unit 1 The Changing World.（写作提升）-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册基础知识专项讲练（新教材人教版）

**基本信息** 系统构建"总-分-总"写作框架，通过今昔对比法实现变化主题的精准表达，融合语言能力培养与思维品质提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |典例导引|1个核心框架|提出"总-分-总"结构，明确时态与人称运用规则|从写作结构到语言要素，构建完整写作方法论| |思维导图|1个结构模板|提供"开头-中间-结尾"三段式写作框架，细化三个变化维度|建立"总述-分述-总结"的逻辑链条，实现内容有序展开| |范文介绍|1篇完整范文|展示Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly连接词使用，used to结构对比表达|通过亮点点评揭示高分写作技巧，实现方法可视化| |专项训练|10道梯度题目|融合图表描述、书信写作等变式题型，强化方法迁移应用|从基础描述到综合表达，形成能力递进训练体系|

Unit 1 The Changing World. (写作提升） 如何介绍变化的世界 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 [教材典句] ①Now great changes have taken place. ②The road used to be narrow and dirty. ③This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry. ④There used to be sandstorms all the time,and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 家乡是我们成长的地方，承载着美好的回忆，也见证着时代的变迁。近年来，随着社会的不断发展，你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面发生了哪些变化呢？现在，某英文杂志社正在举办题为Great Changes in My Hometown的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家乡的变化，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。 Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ Great Changes in My Hometown 开头：总述家乡发生了巨大变化 Over the last...years,great changes have taken place in my hometown./ In the past...years,my hometown has changed a lot. 中间：从三个方面描述变化 Firstly,the living environment...In the past,there was/were...Now, there is/are... Secondly,the transportation...The roads used to...Now...streetlights make it...to do...The high-speed railway has made... Thirdly,people's daily lives... 结尾：总结感受，展望未来。 I'm amazed by...It's amazing...I believe/hope... ⭐范文介绍⭐ Great Changes in My Hometown Over the last few years,great changes have taken place in my hometown. Firstly,the living environment has improved greatly.In the past,there were few trees and flowers.Now there are more parks and green plants in the city.Secondly,the transportation has also improved.The roads used to be narrow and dirty.Now they have become wider,and new streetlights make it safer to walk at night.The high-speed railway has made traveling faster and easier. Thirdly, people's daily lives have changed with the development of technology.Even my grandmother,who didn't know much about phones,can now make video calls and shop online. I'm amazed by the changes in my hometown.I believe it will become better and better in the future. [亮点点评] ①开篇用.great changes have taken place,点明家乡发生了大变化。 ②用Firstly,Secondly和Thirdly条理清晰地描述了家乡在三个方面的变化。 ③用used to be..结构描述道路过去的状况。 ④用“make it+形容词+to do sth”结构描述新装的路灯的作用。 ⑤用better and better生动表达对家乡未来的美好期望。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 词汇积累 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 change v.&n. 改变；变化 develop v. 发展；成长 improve v. 改善；提升 modern adj. 现代的 traditional adj. 传统的 convenient adj. 便利的 different adj. 不同的 rapid adj. 迅速的 society n. 社会 life n. 生活 technology n. 科技 communication n. 交流 transportation n. 交通 lifestyle n. 生活方式 progress n. 进步 hometown n. 家乡 online adj. 线上的 crowded adj. 拥挤的 comfortable adj. 舒适的 amazing adj. 令人惊叹的 短语积累 ① in the past 在过去 ② at present 目前；现在 ③ years ago 多年前 ④ take place 发生 ⑤ great changes 巨大变化 ⑥ live a better life 过上更好生活 ⑦ keep up with 跟上 ⑧ with the development of 随着…… 的发展 ⑨ used to do 过去常常做 ⑩ nowadays 如今；现今 ⑪ become more and more 变得越来越…… ⑫ convenient and fast 便捷又快速 ⑬ way of life 生活方式 ⑭ make progress 取得进步 ⑮ bring much convenience 带来许多便利 句型积累 开头句 Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 中间句 People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 结尾句 I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 谚语名句 Time changes all things. 时光改变一切。 The world is always changing. 世界永远在变化。 Progress comes from change. 进步源于改变。 Never stop changing and improving. 永不停下改变与进步的脚步。 Change is the only constant in life. 变化是人生唯一不变的事。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．（2026·湖北孝感·二模）假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Changes in My Hometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. _________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2026·贵州黔南·一模）马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26九年级上·广西河池·期末）近年来，随着国家乡村振兴政策的实施，中国许多乡村发生了巨大的变化。请根据你的观察和了解，以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述你家乡的变化。内容包括： 1. 至少写出主要的三点变化； 2. 简单说说变化的主要原因； 3. 对于这些变化，谈谈你的个人感受。 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. _____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24九年级上·内蒙古兴安·期末）某英文报举办以“我家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以The Changes in My Hometown为题写一篇短文。词数80个左右。 过去 1.生活贫困，房屋破旧； 2.污染严重，垃圾遍地； 3.交通不便，游客很少。 现在 1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车； 2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝……； 3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。 将来 请你展望家乡的未来 要求:1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分； 2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small.______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26九年级上·山东泰安·期末）自从2021年我国全面建成小康社会以来，我们的家乡在环境、设施、生活和人们的精神面貌上发生了许多美好的变化。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 环境变化 干净宽阔的道路、漂亮的公园出现在各处，到处是绿树鲜花 生活设施 建成现代化的超市、医院……生活方便 居住条件 住进了新房，街道夜晚明亮 文化活动 去图书馆、各种俱乐部 人们状态 生活更富裕，笑容更多，乐于助人 提示词：方便的convenient 要求：1、80-100词左右； 2、语法正确，要点齐全；可适当发挥，语意连贯； 3、不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Changes in My Hometown ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）作为 “晋江经验”发源地——晋江的市民，我们为家乡的蓬勃发展深感自豪。假设你是李华，你的外国好友Judy对晋江很感兴趣，请根据以下信息写一封信给他，介绍家乡的变迁。词数 80 左右。 Basic information ♥Location: in the southeast of … ♥History: over 1000 years ♥Population: more than 2.09 million Past ♥Clean rivers, green mountains ♥A poor life, narrow roads Now ♥Progress: booming (蓬勃发展的) shoe industry, more jobs ♥Transportation: shared bikes, cars ♥Problems and solutions (解决): … Feelings … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Judy, How is everything going? I’m pleased to know that you are interested in Jinjiang.______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 7．（25-26九年级上·重庆永川·期末）蜕变从来都不是瞬间的奇迹，是无数次小改变堆成的惊喜。请以“My Changes”为题，根据提示，结合自身经历写一篇英语短文，介绍你在外貌、性格等方面的变化和经历，并谈谈你的感受。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（25-26九年级上·四川泸州·期中）时光飞逝，转眼间进入中学已经两年多了。随着时间的流逝，你的好朋友李华发生了一些变化，请你根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语文章来介绍一下她的变化。 Li Hua 两年前 现在 体貌特征 胖，长卷发 瘦，短直发 性格 安静，害羞 幽默，外向 爱好 玩电脑游戏，看电视 打篮球，学英语 生活方式 常吃汉堡等垃圾食品 吃蔬菜、水果等健康食品 要点提示：灵活运用所学短语used to 要求：1. 词数100词左右；2. 短文需包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，不要逐词翻译。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（25-26九年级上·山西临汾·期末）成长就像一场奇妙的旅行，我们每天都在悄悄地改变，不管是外貌、性格、习惯、处事方式还是内心想法等。改变的最大意义在于遇见更好的自己，让人生更加精彩。你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Unforgettable Change”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或者生活当中最难忘的一次改变及感受。 内容包括： ●describe your unforgettable change ●talk about your experience ●show your feelings 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（25-26九年级上·宁夏银川·期中）假如你是李华，你和你的笔友Tina已经将近三年没见了，这三年来你在外貌、性格、爱好、学习等方面都发生了很大的变化。请你认真阅读Tina的来信，然后用英语写一封回信回答她信中的问题，并介绍你这三年的变化，简要说一下你对这些变化的感受。 注意： 1. 信中需包括所给提示内容，并适当拓展； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 词数100左右，信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：confident (自信)，serious，hard-working，careless (粗心的) Dear Li Hua, How is it going? It has been almost three years since we last saw each other. You are in Grade 9, aren’t you? Are you busier than before? I think you must have changed a lot. How have you changed? What’s your biggest change? And what do you think of the changes? I’m really looking forward to your reply! Yours, Tina Dear Tina, I’m so glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua $Unit 1 The Changing World. (写作提升） 如何介绍变化的世界 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 [教材典句] ①Now great changes have taken place. ②The road used to be narrow and dirty. ③This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry. ④There used to be sandstorms all the time,and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 家乡是我们成长的地方，承载着美好的回忆，也见证着时代的变迁。近年来，随着社会的不断发展，你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面发生了哪些变化呢？现在，某英文杂志社正在举办题为Great Changes in My Hometown的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家乡的变化，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。 Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ Great Changes in My Hometown 开头：总述家乡发生了巨大变化 Over the last...years,great changes have taken place in my hometown./ In the past...years,my hometown has changed a lot. 中间：从三个方面描述变化 Firstly,the living environment...In the past,there was/were...Now, there is/are... Secondly,the transportation...The roads used to...Now...streetlights make it...to do...The high-speed railway has made... Thirdly,people's daily lives... 结尾：总结感受，展望未来。 I'm amazed by...It's amazing...I believe/hope... ⭐范文介绍⭐ Great Changes in My Hometown Over the last few years,great changes have taken place in my hometown. Firstly,the living environment has improved greatly.In the past,there were few trees and flowers.Now there are more parks and green plants in the city.Secondly,the transportation has also improved.The roads used to be narrow and dirty.Now they have become wider,and new streetlights make it safer to walk at night.The high-speed railway has made traveling faster and easier. Thirdly, people's daily lives have changed with the development of technology.Even my grandmother,who didn't know much about phones,can now make video calls and shop online. I'm amazed by the changes in my hometown.I believe it will become better and better in the future. [亮点点评] ①开篇用.great changes have taken place,点明家乡发生了大变化。 ②用Firstly,Secondly和Thirdly条理清晰地描述了家乡在三个方面的变化。 ③用used to be..结构描述道路过去的状况。 ④用“make it+形容词+to do sth”结构描述新装的路灯的作用。 ⑤用better and better生动表达对家乡未来的美好期望。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 词汇积累 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 change v.&n. 改变；变化 develop v. 发展；成长 improve v. 改善；提升 modern adj. 现代的 traditional adj. 传统的 convenient adj. 便利的 different adj. 不同的 rapid adj. 迅速的 society n. 社会 life n. 生活 technology n. 科技 communication n. 交流 transportation n. 交通 lifestyle n. 生活方式 progress n. 进步 hometown n. 家乡 online adj. 线上的 crowded adj. 拥挤的 comfortable adj. 舒适的 amazing adj. 令人惊叹的 短语积累 ① in the past 在过去 ② at present 目前；现在 ③ years ago 多年前 ④ take place 发生 ⑤ great changes 巨大变化 ⑥ live a better life 过上更好生活 ⑦ keep up with 跟上 ⑧ with the development of 随着…… 的发展 ⑨ used to do 过去常常做 ⑩ nowadays 如今；现今 ⑪ become more and more 变得越来越…… ⑫ convenient and fast 便捷又快速 ⑬ way of life 生活方式 ⑭ make progress 取得进步 ⑮ bring much convenience 带来许多便利 句型积累 开头句 Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 中间句 People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 结尾句 I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 谚语名句 Time changes all things. 时光改变一切。 The world is always changing. 世界永远在变化。 Progress comes from change. 进步源于改变。 Never stop changing and improving. 永不停下改变与进步的脚步。 Change is the only constant in life. 变化是人生唯一不变的事。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．（2026·湖北孝感·二模）假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Changes in My Hometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. _________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. First, the environment has become much better. Streets are wide and clean with many trees and flowers on both sides. Tall buildings and new communities have appeared. People enjoy walking in the parks after dinner. Second, people’s life has improved a lot. More families have their own cars, so travelling is easier than before. Some families even drive to visit other cities on weekends. I feel proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will become more beautiful in the future. Let’s work together to make it better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：讲稿（家乡变化介绍），用现在完成时和一般现在时 明确要点：环境变化（街道宽阔干净、绿化、高楼社区）、人们生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车） 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第一人称复数（we） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，开头已给出，词数80左右，注意演讲稿的正式性和号召力 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 第一段：已给出，总述家乡近年发生巨大变化 第二段：环境变化（街道宽阔干净、两边有树有花、高楼新社区出现、饭后在公园散步） 第三段：人们生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车、出行更方便、周末自驾去其他城市） 第四段：表达感受（为变化感到骄傲）、期望（希望家乡更美丽）并呼吁行动 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：环境变化 变化一：streets are wide and clean with many trees and flowers on both sides/roads have become wider and cleaner等 要点二：人们生活变化 变化一：more families have their own cars/more and more families own cars/an increasing number of families have cars等 要点三：感受与期望 感受表达：feel proud of these changes/proud of my hometown等 期望表达：hope my hometown will become more beautiful/become better and better等 呼吁表达：work together to make it better/build a better hometown together等 2．（2026·贵州黔南·一模）马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has had great changes. Now let me share some with you. The environment has changed a lot. The houses are newer and brighter, and the roads are wide and clean with beautiful flowers on both sides. As for people, they live a happier life. They are more confident and kind. Our farm products are rich and sell well online, bringing more money to us. I am proud of these changes. I love my hometown and hope it will become more and more beautiful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（李华） 注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出） 主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化 结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：people 变化描述：happier / more confident / kinder / more hardworking / more united等 具体表现：wear nicer clothes / smile more often / help each other / work together / live a better life等 要点二：houses, roads 房屋变化：newer / brighter / taller / more beautiful / modern等 道路变化：wider / cleaner / smoother / lined with trees / with street lights等 位置/环境描述：on both sides of the road / in front of houses / around the village等 要点三：farm products 产品种类：rice / fruits / vegetables / tea / honey / flowers等 销售方式：sell well online / shipped to big cities / sold in supermarkets / exported abroad等 带来好处：bring more money / improve living standards / make farmers proud等 要点四：your feelings 感受词汇：proud / happy / excited / hopeful / thankful / amazed等 3．（25-26九年级上·广西河池·期末）近年来，随着国家乡村振兴政策的实施，中国许多乡村发生了巨大的变化。请根据你的观察和了解，以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述你家乡的变化。内容包括： 1. 至少写出主要的三点变化； 2. 简单说说变化的主要原因； 3. 对于这些变化，谈谈你的个人感受。 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. _____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. Firstly, the roads were very narrow and dirty in the past. But now they are wider and cleaner. Secondly, the houses used to be old and low. But now many tall buildings have been built in my hometown. Thirdly, the environment has improved greatly. Many green trees and beautiful flowers were planted everywhere. Thanks to the support of the Party and the help of the government, people in my hometown are leading a happy life. I am very glad to see these great changes and I’m going to study hard to try to make my hometown even more beautiful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，围绕家乡的变化展开描述 明确要点：写出至少三点主要变化，说明变化原因，表达个人感受 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：语言流畅，书写规范，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数90词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：承接给定开头，点明家乡近年发生了巨大变化 主体段：分点描述家乡的三点主要变化，包括道路、住房、环境 结尾段：说明变化的主要原因，即党和政府的支持；表达个人对家乡变化的感受，以及未来建设家乡的决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的三点主要变化 道路变化：the roads were very narrow and dirty in the past/wider and cleaner asphalt roads 住房变化：the houses used to be old and low/bright and tall residential buildings 环境变化：rubbish everywhere and poor greening/lush green trees and colorful flowers 交通变化：only slow bicycles and walking/convenient shared bikes and new buses 生活变化：hard and simple life/rich and comfortable life 要点二：变化的主要原因 核心原因：the support of the Party/the help of the government 政策背景：rural revitalization policy/national development strategy 要点三：个人感受与未来打算 个人感受：very glad/proud/deeply moved and excited 未来打算：study hard/make hometown more beautiful and prosperous 4．（23-24九年级上·内蒙古兴安·期末）某英文报举办以“我家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以The Changes in My Hometown为题写一篇短文。词数80个左右。 过去 1.生活贫困，房屋破旧； 2.污染严重，垃圾遍地； 3.交通不便，游客很少。 现在 1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车； 2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝……； 3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。 将来 请你展望家乡的未来 要求:1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分； 2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small.______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small. People had a poor life and lived in old small houses. Pollution was serious with rubbish everywhere. The traffic was inconvenient, so only a few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place. The environment becomes much more beautiful, with greener mountains, clearer rivers and bluer sky. Trees, flowers and grass can be seen everywhere. People live in large bright houses and many have private cars. Thousands of visitors around the world come every year. I believe my hometown will become better and better. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，介绍家乡变化，以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：从过去、现在、将来三个维度，围绕生活、环境、交通旅游的变化展开写作 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得出现真实地名，词数80词左右，标题和开头不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，引出家乡过去的面貌 主体段：详细对比家乡过去的落后状态与现在的巨大变化 结尾段：展望家乡的未来发展 [第三步：要点展开] 要点：家乡变化 过去：very small hometown/poor life/old and small houses/serious pollution/rubbish everywhere/inconvenient traffic/few visitors 现在：great changes/more beautiful environment/greener mountains/clearer rivers/bluer sky/trees flowers and grass everywhere/better life/large and bright houses/own cars/thousands of visitors from all over the world 将来：become better and better in the future 5．（25-26九年级上·山东泰安·期末）自从2021年我国全面建成小康社会以来，我们的家乡在环境、设施、生活和人们的精神面貌上发生了许多美好的变化。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 环境变化 干净宽阔的道路、漂亮的公园出现在各处，到处是绿树鲜花 生活设施 建成现代化的超市、医院……生活方便 居住条件 住进了新房，街道夜晚明亮 文化活动 去图书馆、各种俱乐部 人们状态 生活更富裕，笑容更多，乐于助人 提示词：方便的convenient 要求：1、80-100词左右； 2、语法正确，要点齐全；可适当发挥，语意连贯； 3、不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Hometown Since 2021, my hometown has changed a lot. First, the environment is better. There are clean wide roads and beautiful parks with green trees and flowers everywhere. Second, life facilities have improved. Modern supermarkets and hospitals make our life more convenient. Third, people now live in new houses and streets are bright at night. Besides, we have more cultural activities like going to libraries and clubs. Finally, people are richer and happier. They smile more and are always ready to help others. I love my hometown and feel proud of these changes. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：材料作文（家乡变化）； ②时态：一般现在时为主，部分用现在完成时； ③提示：需涵盖环境、设施、居住、文化、人们状态五方面变化，适当发挥。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步：总述变化，引出主题； 第二步：按提示分点描述变化（环境→设施→居住→文化→人们状态）； 第三步：总结感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ①environment 环境 ②facilities 设施 ③convenient 方便的 ［高分句型］ ①There are clean wide roads and beautiful parks with green trees and flowers everywhere.（运用with复合结构作后置定语） ②Modern supermarkets and hospitals make our life more convenient.（运用make+宾语+形容词补语结构） ③They smile more and are always ready to help others.（运用并列谓语结构） 6．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）作为 “晋江经验”发源地——晋江的市民，我们为家乡的蓬勃发展深感自豪。假设你是李华，你的外国好友Judy对晋江很感兴趣，请根据以下信息写一封信给他，介绍家乡的变迁。词数 80 左右。 Basic information ♥Location: in the southeast of … ♥History: over 1000 years ♥Population: more than 2.09 million Past ♥Clean rivers, green mountains ♥A poor life, narrow roads Now ♥Progress: booming (蓬勃发展的) shoe industry, more jobs ♥Transportation: shared bikes, cars ♥Problems and solutions (解决): … Feelings … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Judy, How is everything going? I’m pleased to know that you are interested in Jinjiang.______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Judy,      How is everything going? I'm pleased to know that you are interested in Jinjiang. Jinjiang lies in the southeast of Fujian. It has a history of over 1,000 years and a population of more than 2.09 million. In the past, it had clean rivers and green mountains, but people lived a poor life and roads were narrow. Now, its shoe industry is booming, creating more jobs. Transportation has improved with shared bikes and cars everywhere. However, pollution has come along, so we’re planting more trees to protect the environment. I’m proud of its progress and love my hometown deeply.      Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时（介绍晋江的现状、地理位置、人口等）、一般过去时（描述晋江过去的情况）； ③提示：李华给朱迪回信，因对方对晋江感兴趣而介绍这座城市——位于福建东南部，有1000多年历史，人口超209万；过去有青山绿水，但人们生活贫困、道路狭窄；现在制鞋业繁荣带来更多工作，交通改善（共享单车和汽车随处可见），但存在污染问题，因此在多种树保护环境，为家乡的进步自豪且深爱家乡。 [写作步骤] 第一步：问候对方，表明因对方对晋江感兴趣而进行介绍； 第二步：介绍晋江的地理位置、历史、人口，对比过去与现在的状况（环境、生活、产业、交通及存在的问题和应对措施）； 第三步：表达对家乡进步的自豪和热爱。   [亮点词汇] ①lie in位于 ②population人口 ③booming繁荣的 ④transportation交通 ⑤progress进步   [高分句型] ①In the past, it had clean rivers and green mountains, but people lived a poor life and roads were narrow.（用“but”转折对比过去晋江的自然环境与人们的生活、交通状况，信息全面且对比鲜明） ②However, pollution has come along, so we’re planting more trees to protect the environment.（用“however”转折引出问题，“so”说明应对措施，逻辑清晰，体现对家乡发展的关注） 7．（25-26九年级上·重庆永川·期末）蜕变从来都不是瞬间的奇迹，是无数次小改变堆成的惊喜。请以“My Changes”为题，根据提示，结合自身经历写一篇英语短文，介绍你在外貌、性格等方面的变化和经历，并谈谈你的感受。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Changes Time flies. I have changed greatly since I became a middle school student. I used to be short and very shy. I was even afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. But now, I am tall and much more outgoing. One day, I took part in a school singing competition. At first, I was nervous, but my teacher encouraged me and told me to believe in myself. She also helped me practice carefully. Thanks to her help, I did well in the competition and won a prize. I am more confident now and able to face new challenges. I think these changes are valuable gifts for my growth. I should keep working hard to be my best self in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时对比为主 明确要点：外貌、性格、爱好的变化；促成变化的具体经历；个人感受与成长规划 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数控制在80-120词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括自身整体变化，引出过去与现在的对比 主体段：详细描述参与活动的经历及他人的鼓励 结尾段：抒发当下感受，总结变化带来的意义，提出后续的努力方向 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：外貌与性格变化 过去状态：short, short hair, very shy, afraid of speaking in front of classmates, quiet, timid, keep silent, nervous easily 现在状态：tall, long hair, much more outgoing, make many friends, active, confident, talk with others actively, get along well with classmates 要点二：校园成长经历 事件选择：took part in a school singing competition,speech contest, sports meeting, talent show 过程描写：nervous, teacher encouraged me, believe in myself, helped me practice, gave me warm advice, practiced over and over again, cheered me up 结果收获：did well in the competition, won a priz, made great progress, gained a lot, overcame fear   要点三：成长感悟与未来期许 感悟表达：more confident, able to face new challenges, valuable gifts, make me a better person, learn a lot from experience, grow up gradually, become braver 未来展望：keep working hard, try to be my best self, stick to my goals, face difficulties bravely, pursue my dreams 8．（25-26九年级上·四川泸州·期中）时光飞逝，转眼间进入中学已经两年多了。随着时间的流逝，你的好朋友李华发生了一些变化，请你根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语文章来介绍一下她的变化。 Li Hua 两年前 现在 体貌特征 胖，长卷发 瘦，短直发 性格 安静，害羞 幽默，外向 爱好 玩电脑游戏，看电视 打篮球，学英语 生活方式 常吃汉堡等垃圾食品 吃蔬菜、水果等健康食品 要点提示：灵活运用所学短语used to 要求：1. 词数100词左右；2. 短文需包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，不要逐词翻译。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Time flies, and it’s over two years since we entered middle school. My good friend Li Hua has changed a lot. She used to be fat with long curly hair, but now she is thin and has short straight hair. She used to be quiet and shy, but now she is humorous and outgoing. In the past, she enjoyed playing computer games and watching TV. Now, her hobbies are playing basketball and learning English. She used to eat junk food like hamburgers often, but now she prefers healthy food such as vegetables and fruits. I’m glad to see her positive changes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：围绕表格要点（体貌特征、性格、爱好、生活方式）展开，灵活运用used to短语。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头用1—2句话引入主题，说明时间流逝和李华的总体变化； 第二步：详细描述四个方面的变化（体貌特征、性格、爱好、生活方式），使用used to对比过去和现在； 第三步：结尾用1句话表达感想或总结。 [亮点词汇] ①humorous 幽默的 ②outgoing 外向的 ③healthy 健康的 [高分句型] ①She used to be fat with long curly hair, but now she is thin and has short straight hair.（运用了but连接的并列句） ②She used to eat junk food like hamburgers often, but now she prefers healthy food such as vegetables and fruits.（运用了such as举例） 9．（25-26九年级上·山西临汾·期末）成长就像一场奇妙的旅行，我们每天都在悄悄地改变，不管是外貌、性格、习惯、处事方式还是内心想法等。改变的最大意义在于遇见更好的自己，让人生更加精彩。你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Unforgettable Change”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或者生活当中最难忘的一次改变及感受。 内容包括： ●describe your unforgettable change ●talk about your experience ●show your feelings 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Unforgettable Change The most unforgettable change for me was overcoming my fear of speaking in public. I used to be too shy to speak up in class. Last term, I pushed myself to join a school speech contest. I practiced my speech day and night, in front of the mirror and for my family. On the contest day, I was nervous but I did it. My voice was clear and I finished smoothly. This experience changed me. I learned that true courage means facing your fears. Now I feel more confident. This change helped me find a braver self. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：完整覆盖所有内容要点：描述改变、谈论经历、表达感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：首句开门见山，直接点明“最难忘的改变”； 第二步：简述过去的状态，形成对比基础，然后交代关键事件，并描述为此付出的具体努力； 第三步：结尾明确表达此经历带来的深层影响以及你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①overcome one’s fear 克服某人的恐惧 ②speak up 大声说出来；发言 ③push oneself to... 迫使/鼓励自己去做…… [高分句型] ①I used to be too shy to speak up in class.（运用了“used to do”结构） ②I learned that true courage means facing your fears.（运用了“that”引导的宾语从句） 10．（25-26九年级上·宁夏银川·期中）假如你是李华，你和你的笔友Tina已经将近三年没见了，这三年来你在外貌、性格、爱好、学习等方面都发生了很大的变化。请你认真阅读Tina的来信，然后用英语写一封回信回答她信中的问题，并介绍你这三年的变化，简要说一下你对这些变化的感受。 注意： 1. 信中需包括所给提示内容，并适当拓展； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 词数100左右，信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：confident (自信)，serious，hard-working，careless (粗心的) Dear Li Hua, How is it going? It has been almost three years since we last saw each other. You are in Grade 9, aren’t you? Are you busier than before? I think you must have changed a lot. How have you changed? What’s your biggest change? And what do you think of the changes? I’m really looking forward to your reply! Yours, Tina Dear Tina, I’m so glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tina, I’m so glad to hear from you. I have changed a lot. In appearance, I am taller and have short hair now—it’s easier to take care of. In character, I used to be careless, but now I am more serious and hard-working. My biggest change is that I’ve become more outgoing. For hobbies, I started playing basketball and reading books. Basketball makes me strong, and books let me know more interesting things. In study, I work harder and get better grades. I often ask teachers for help when I’m stuck. I think these changes make me more confident. I feel happy about them. How about you? I miss you and hope to see you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：书信作文； ②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：需覆盖外貌、性格、爱好、学习的变化，使用提示词，并表达感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：回应来信并概述整体变化，引出话题； 第二步：分点描述四个方面的变化（外貌、性格、爱好、学习），使用提示词拓展细节； 第三步：表达对变化的感受，并结束信件，询问对方近况。 [亮点词汇] ①take care of照顾 ②more confident更自信 ③ask teachers for help向老师求助 [高分句型] ①I used to be careless, but now I am more serious and hard-working.（but连接两个句子，表示转折） ②I think these changes make me more confident.（that引导的宾语从句） $