Unit 4 Adversity And Courage Using language—Writing 伤疤里的光芒-读后续写 课件-2025-2026学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第三册

读后续写——伤疤里的光芒 20260515 LISA We cannot choose our past, but we can choose to shine on our own. 我们无法选择自己的过去，却可以选择独自发光。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kenny Matthews was just three when the flat he lived in went up in smoke in 1991. The accident left him with burns to 70% of his body. Despite being very young when he suffered his burns, Kenny can still remember the day of the accident. He was playing with his toys and watching TV on the floor in the living room while his grandfather was sleeping on the living room couch. All of a sudden, he heard a sudden noise from the window and that was when the window caught fire. He had no idea what caused the window to burst like that, but all he remembered was the apartment filling up with gas and smoke from the fire. He could do nothing but panic (恐慌). His grandfather, who had been asleep, woke up because of the smoke. He tried to save Kenny’s life, but he couldn’t really do much because he was weak. Picking Kenny up under his arms, he carried him over the window — unfortunately, that’s how Kenny got burnt by the fire. Kenny and his grandfather were rushed to the hospital. His grandfather whose arms were badly burned, was hospitalized for a while and then discharged (出院). Kenny went through numerous surgeries over the next few decades, which he described as a very painful journey. Now, after having been through so much over the years, Kenny’s treatment is finally done. The 36-year-old man has shared online how his burns and scars (伤疤) have affected his life as an adult. “People don’t really care about personality — they just want somebody to look good or attractive physically, and honestly, I don’t fit that description,” Kenny says. There was a guy who once said to him. “It is hard to feel attracted to someone like you because of your scars and burns.” Kenny understands it’s not their fault. He’s smart enough to know not every person is the same, even though he’s not actively looking for a partner. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Kenny now has 2.4 million followers on the Internet. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ People always ask him how he remains positive. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1．角色： Kenny Matthews, his grandfather, online followers, a guy who criticized his appearance 2．视角：第________人称 三 3.时空线： From the fire accident (1991)---______________ ---present (36 years old) hospitalization and surgeries over decades 4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 How did the fire start?：______________________________________________ How was Kenny burned?：____________________________________________ What challenges has Kenny faced?：_____________________________________ What did people say about his scars?：___________________________________ How does Kenny react to criticism?：_____________________________________ How did the fire start? A sudden noise from the window, which then caught fire; the apartment filled with gas and smoke. How was Kenny burned? His grandfather carried him over the burning window to save him, which caused his burns. What challenges has Kenny faced? Numerous painful surgeries over decades; social judgment due to his scars. What did people say about his scars? “It is hard to feel attracted to someone like you because of your scars and burns.” How does Kenny react to criticism? He understands it's not others' fault and accepts that people are different. 5．情节线：Kenny was burned in a fire at 3. → He endured decades of painful surgeries. → As an adult, he shared his struggles online. → People criticized his appearance. → Kenny accepted their views. →（续写）He gains 2.4 million followers. → People ask about his positivity. 6．情感线：I：panicked (during the fire)→painful (after surgeries)→disappointed (due to criticism)→understanding (toward others)→hopeful (after gaining followers)→inspiring (when sharing positivity) 7.综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） Kenny was severely burned in a fire at age 3 and went through decades of painful treatment. As an adult, he shared online how his scars affected his life; though criticized for his appearance, he understood and accepted others' views. Now with 2.4 million followers, people often ask him about his positivity. 中文：Kenny 三岁时因公寓火灾严重烧伤，经历了数十年的痛苦治疗。成年后，他在网上分享伤疤对生活的影响，虽有人批评他的外貌，但他选择理解和接受。如今他拥有 240 万粉丝，人们常好奇他如何保持积极。 第一段（以“粉丝量”开头） - 情节方向：从“网络走红”切入，写Kenny如何用自己的经历影响他人，打破偏见。 - 关键场景设计： 1. 粉丝的反馈：陌生人的感谢、被鼓舞的故事 2. Kenny的行为：分享日常、传递正能量、回应外界偏见 3. 情感落点：从被偏见伤害，到主动用力量治愈他人 第二段（以“保持乐观”开头） - 情节方向：回应他人的疑问，揭示Kenny乐观的根源，升华主题。 - 关键场景设计： 1. Kenny的回答：不是天生乐观，而是选择接纳自己 2. 动作/神态细节：攥紧旧照片、望向窗外等 3. 主题升华：疤痕不是缺陷，而是他活着的勋章，是传递力量的证明 读后续写万能句型 可直接摘抄版 1. 触景生情·回忆涌上心头 句型公式 At the sight of / At the sound of …, the memory of … came rushing back, bringing with it … 例句 At the sight of the comment, the memory of his lonely days came rushing back, bringing with it a strong sense of purpose. 翻译 一看到这条留言，孤独岁月的回忆涌上心头，随之生出强烈的使命感。 2. 观察所见·心生感慨 句型公式 Noticing …, sb realized that … 例句 Noticing many lives he had touched, Kenny realized his pain had turned into power. 翻译 看到自己影响了很多人，肯尼意识到苦难已化作力量。 3. 语言+微动作 人物描写 句型公式 “……” he whispered, his fingers brushing / clutching … 例句 “It wasn’t easy at first,” he whispered, his fingers brushing over the old scar. 翻译 “一开始真的很难。”他低声说着，手指轻轻拂过陈旧的伤疤。 4. 瞬间顿悟 心理升华 句型公式 It was then that a thought suddenly struck sb: … 例句 It was then that a thought suddenly struck him: scars could not defeat his spirit. 翻译 就在那一刻，他突然顿悟：伤疤无法打败他的精神。 5. 景物烘托+结尾主旨升华 句型公式 Above …, sunlight / starlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was … that truly illuminated one’s world. 例句 Above the street, starlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was his courage that truly illuminated his world. 翻译 街道上空，星光洒满天际。而真正照亮他人生的，是内心的勇气。 6. 动作伴随情绪 渲染心情 句型公式 His fingers clutched … tightly, with a wave of … sweeping over him. 例句 His fingers clutched the photo tightly, with a wave of gratitude sweeping over him. 翻译 他紧紧攥住照片，心中涌起一阵浓浓的感激。 Paragraph 1 Kenny now has 2.4 million followers on the Internet.肯尼如今在网上拥有240万粉丝。 His videos, where he shares his painful experiences and daily life, soon warm the hearts of millions of viewers.他在视频里分享自己的痛苦经历与日常生活，很快温暖了无数网友的心。 His fingers clutched his sleeve tightly, with a wave of gratitude sweeping over him.他紧紧攥着自己的衣袖，心中涌起一阵浓浓的感激之情。 At the sight of a girl’s comment saying she no longer hides her scars, the memory of his lonely teenage days came rushing back, bringing with it a strong sense of purpose.一看到一位女孩留言说自己不再遮掩伤疤，年少孤独的岁月瞬间涌上心头，随之生出了强烈的使命感。 He decided to share more of his feelings online and encourage those trapped by their physical flaws.他决定在网上分享更多心声，鼓励那些因自身缺陷而自卑的人。 Noticing many lives he had touched, Kenny realized his pain had turned into power.看到自己影响了这么多人，肯尼意识到曾经的苦难已然化作了前行的力量。 Gradually, he became a role model for young people who lacked self-confidence.渐渐地，他成了无数自卑年轻人的榜样。 Paragraph 2 People always ask him how he remains positive. 人们总是问他，为何能一直保持乐观。 “It wasn’t easy at first,” he whispered, his fingers brushing over the old scar on his wrist. “一开始真的很难。”他低声说道，手指轻轻拂过手腕上陈旧的伤疤。 He once suffered huge pressure and even wanted to give up, but he chose to hold on to hope. 他也曾承受巨大压力，甚至想过放弃，但他选择坚守希望。 It was then that a thought suddenly struck him: the fire had taken his perfect appearance, but it could never defeat his inner spirit. 就在那一刻，他突然顿悟：大火夺走了他完好的容貌，却永远无法击垮他内心的意志。 He began to accept his scars and regard them as special medals of life. 他开始坦然接纳自己的伤疤，把它们视作人生独特的勋章。 Above the quiet street outside his window, starlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was his unyielding heart that truly illuminated his world. 窗外静谧的街道上空，星光洒满辽阔夜空。但真正照亮他整个人生的，是他那颗永不屈服的心。 Paragraph 1 Kenny now has 2.4 million followers on the Internet.His videos, where he shares his painful experiences and daily life, soon warm the hearts of millions of viewers.His fingers clutched his sleeve tightly, with a wave of gratitude sweeping over him.At the sight of a girl’s comment saying she no longer hides her scars, the memory of his lonely teenage days came rushing back, bringing with it a strong sense of purpose.He decided to share more of his feelings online and encourage those trapped by their physical flaws.Noticing many lives he had touched, Kenny realized his pain had turned into power.Gradually, he became a role model for young people who lacked self-confidence. 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