Unit 2 Amazing China 单元主题写作讲练讲义 2025-2026学年译林版八年级英语下学期

Unit 2 Amazing China单元同步写作课讲义 一、单元主题和写作要求 本单元围绕“Amazing China（魅力中国）”展开，介绍了南京、洛阳、西安等历史文化名城以及国内多个著名景点（如喀纳斯湖、香港海洋公园、兵马俑等），引导学生了解中国丰富的旅游资源，感受中华文化的魅力。 通过本单元学习，学生需能够准确运用与旅游相关的词汇（如 attraction, ancient capital, must-see, be worth a visit, natural landscape等）、现在完成时（have/has been, have/has gone）以及描述景点、表达感受、提出建议的句型，来介绍一个国内旅游景点，分享旅行经历，或制定旅行计划。同时，学生需具备信息整合、细节描写和情感表达的能力，为中考书面表达中“旅游”“家乡介绍”“节日活动”等话题奠定坚实基础。 二、出题方向和命题形式 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点（如城市、自然景观、历史遗迹等）。（信息介绍类说明文） （1）命题形式： · 命题作文（如 “A Popular Attraction in China” “Welcome to My Hometown”）； · 提示类作文（给出景点名称和要点，要求补充细节）； · 宣传稿/导游词（如为学校旅游节写一篇景点介绍）。 （2）考察重点： · 信息组织能力（按位置、特色、可做活动等顺序介绍）； · 现在完成时的运用（描述旅行经历或景点的知名度）； · 描写生动性（使用形容词、比喻等使语言形象）。 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历，描述所见所闻所感。（叙事文） （1）命题形式： · 日记（如 “An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an”）； · 博客/游记（如 “My Wonderful Holiday” “A Trip to Luoyang”）； · 邮件（给朋友写信分享旅行经历）。 （2）考察重点： · 过去时态和现在完成时态的混合运用（叙述行程+分享感受）； · 细节描写能力（景物、活动、心情）； · 情感真实性（表达兴奋、惊叹、怀念等）。 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点或城市，说明各自的特色并表达偏好。（观点对比类议论文） （1）命题形式： · 话题作文（如 “Nanjing and Luoyang: Which City Do You Prefer?”）； · 材料作文（根据教材中南京和洛阳的文章进行对比并发表看法）； · 辩论稿（如 “Natural Landscapes vs. Historical Sites: Which Is Better?”）。 （2）考察重点： · 对比类句型运用（both, while, similar to, different from, however）； · 观点表达与论证能力（说明偏好及理由）； · 文化理解能力（理解不同景点的文化内涵）。 三、典型范文分析 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点 Welcome to the Potala Palace Have you ever been to Tibet? If not, I strongly recommend the Potala Palace in Lhasa. It is a must-see attraction in China. The Potala Palace rests on the Red Hill in Lhasa. It was built in the 7th century and has a history of over 1,300 years. The palace is famous for its beautiful white and red walls, golden roofs, and thousands of rooms. Inside, you can see many ancient artworks, such as statues, paintings and Buddhist treasures. What makes the Potala Palace so amazing? First, it is one of the highest palaces in the world. Second, it shows the wisdom and skill of ancient Chinese people. I have been there once, and I will never forget its beauty. It is well worth a visit. Come and see it for yourself! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 信息介绍类说明文：以宣传推荐的口吻介绍布达拉宫，目标读者为对西藏或中国文化感兴趣的游客，吸引读者前往参观。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：以问句引入，直接推荐。 正文（分述）：位置与历史 → 外观与内部 → 两个突出特色（海拔高、古人智慧）。 结尾（总结）：分享个人经历并再次推荐。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Have you ever been to Tibet? If not, I strongly recommend...（互动式开头，亲切自然） ②It is a must-see attraction in China.（must-see为教材核心词汇） ③...rests on the Red Hill...（rests on生动形象） ④What makes the Potala Palace so amazing? First... Second...（设问+分点，条理清晰） ⑤It is well worth a visit.（教材重点句型） ⑥Come and see it for yourself!（祈使句号召，有力收尾） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用First, Second等词；段落间用What makes...设问过渡。 隐性逻辑：从“是什么”到“有什么”再到“为什么特别”，层层推进。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（介绍客观事实）；现在完成时（Have you ever been, I have been there once）引出经历；一般将来时（will never forget）表达情感。 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历 My Trip to Luoyang Last summer holiday, my parents and I went to Luoyang, an ancient capital in Henan Province. It was an unforgettable experience. We visited the Longmen Grottoes first. I was amazed by the thousands of Buddha statues carved into the rocks. Some were huge and some were very small, but all of them were beautiful. My dad told me that they were built over 1,500 years ago. The next day, we went to see the peonies in Luoyang. The flowers were in full bloom. They were pink, red, white and purple. I have never seen such beautiful flowers before! Many painters and poets have loved them since the Tang Dynasty. During the trip, I also tasted local snacks like beef soup and spicy noodles. They were delicious! I have been to many cities, but Luoyang is my favourite. I will never forget the grottoes and the peonies. I hope to go there again. 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 叙事文（游记）：按时间顺序叙述一次洛阳之旅，重点描写景点和感受，分享快乐经历并激发他人兴趣。 （2）篇章结构 时间顺序结构： 开头：交代时间、地点、人物和总体感受（unforgettable）。 正文：第一天（龙门石窟）→ 第二天（牡丹）→ 美食体验。 结尾：总结感受并表达重返的愿望。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Last summer holiday, my parents and I went to...（经典叙事开头） ②I was amazed by the thousands of Buddha statues...（amazed表达惊讶） ③Some were huge and some were very small, but all of them were beautiful.（对比+转折，描写细致） ④I have never seen such beautiful flowers before!（现在完成时强调前所未有） ⑤Many painters and poets have loved them since the Tang Dynasty.（引用教材原句，学以致用） ⑥I have been to many cities, but Luoyang is my favourite.（对比突显喜爱） （4）逻辑衔接 按时间顺序：Last summer holiday → first → the next day → During the trip。使用also, but等连接。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述过去的行为：went, visited, was amazed, tasted）；现在完成时（强调经历和结果：have never seen, have been to, will never forget）。 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点 Nanjing vs. Luoyang: Which City to Choose? Nanjing and Luoyang are both ancient capitals of China. They have rich history and culture, but each has its own charm. Nanjing rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. It is famous for its city wall, which is the longest in the world. You can also visit the Confucius Temple and take a boat trip on the Qinhuai River at night. It is a good way to enjoy the old-time feel. Luoyang, on the other hand, lies on the banks of the Yellow River. It is known for the Longmen Grottoes and peonies. If you love nature and art, Luoyang is a perfect choice. The sea of clouds on Baiyun Mountain is a real treat. In my opinion, both cities are worth visiting. If I had to choose, I would pick Luoyang because I love peonies and ancient stone carvings. But you can’t go wrong with either city! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 观点对比类议论文：对比南京和洛阳的景点特色，并表达个人偏好，帮助做出选择。 （2）篇章结构 对比结构： 开头：点明两城市共同点（都是古都，有历史文化）。 正文：第一段介绍南京的特色（城墙、夫子庙、秦淮河）；第二段介绍洛阳的特色（龙门石窟、牡丹、白云山）。 结尾：表达个人偏好并给出建议。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Nanjing and Luoyang are both ancient capitals of China. They have rich history and culture, but each has its own charm.（总起，both...but...） ②Nanjing rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.（教材原句） ③It is a good way to enjoy the old-time feel.（教材原句） ④Luoyang, on the other hand, lies on the banks of the Yellow River.（on the other hand对比衔接） ⑤The sea of clouds on Baiyun Mountain is a real treat.（a real treat生动表达） ⑥If I had to choose, I would pick Luoyang...（虚拟语气，委婉表达偏好） ⑦...you can’t go wrong with either city!（地道表达，友好建议） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：both, but, on the other hand, In my opinion, If I had to choose。 隐性逻辑：先共同点，再分别介绍，最后选择偏好，符合认知顺序。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（介绍事实和观点）。虚拟语气（I would pick）用于假设选择。 四、素材积累和写作支架 1. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的词汇替换练习： 原句 替换词汇 替换后的句子 This place is good to visit. great / fantastic / wonderful This place is wonderful to visit. It is a famous place. well-known / popular It is a well-known place. There are many old buildings. plenty of / a number of There are plenty of old buildings. You can see beautiful flowers. admire / enjoy You can admire beautiful flowers. The city has a long history. has got / owns The city owns a long history. I liked the trip very much. enjoyed / loved I loved the trip very much. The park is very beautiful. amazing / breath-taking The park is breath-taking. 2. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的句子扩写练习： （1）引出主题/表明意图 Have you ever been to...? Let me introduce this amazing place to you. 你去过……吗？让我给你介绍这个神奇的地方。 Today, I’d like to share my travel experience in... 今天，我想分享我在……的旅行经历。 If you are planning a trip, I strongly recommend... 如果你在计划旅行，我强烈推荐…… （2）列举例子/描述景点 For example, you can see the Terracotta Warriors in Xi’an. 例如，你可以在西安看到兵马俑。 The city is famous for its beautiful peonies, which have been loved since the Tang Dynasty. 这座城市以美丽的牡丹闻名，自唐代以来就备受喜爱。 There are many exciting rides, such as roller coasters and water slides. 有许多刺激的游乐设施，比如过山车和水滑梯。 （3）发表观点/感受和感悟 In my opinion, this place is well worth a visit. 在我看来，这个地方非常值得一游。 I believe that travelling opens our eyes and enriches our minds. 我相信旅行能开阔眼界、丰富思想。 It was truly an unforgettable experience. 那真是一次难忘的经历。 （4）表达情感 I was amazed by the beauty of the natural landscapes. 我被自然景观的美震撼了。 I felt so proud of our country’s rich culture. 我为我们国家丰富的文化感到自豪。 I will never forget the moment when I first saw the Great Wall. 我永远不会忘记第一次看到长城的那一刻。 （5）对比观点/文化差异 Both cities have a long history, but they offer different experiences. 两个城市都有悠久历史，但它们提供的体验不同。 Unlike Nanjing, Luoyang is better known for its peonies. 与南京不同，洛阳更以牡丹闻名。 While the Potala Palace is a religious site, the Summer Palace is a royal garden. 布达拉宫是宗教圣地，而颐和园是皇家园林。 （6）衔接句子 First... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… What’s more... 而且…… However... 然而…… On the other hand... 另一方面…… 3. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的整篇仿写练习： 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点 Welcome to ________ Have you ever been to ________? If not, I strongly recommend ________. It is a ________ attraction in China. ________ rests in ________. It was built ________ and has a history of ________ years. The place is famous for its ________. Inside, you can see ________. What makes it so amazing? First, ________. Second, ________. I have been there once, and I will never forget its beauty. It is well worth a visit. Come and see it for yourself! 挖空提示词： the Great Wall / Beijing / must-see / The Great Wall / northern China / over 2,000 years ago / over 2,000 / long walls and watchtowers / thousands of steps and beautiful views / it is one of the seven wonders of the world / it shows the wisdom of ancient Chinese people 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历 My Trip to ________ Last ________, my ________ and I went to ________. It was an ________ experience. We visited ________ first. I was amazed by ________. My ________ told me that ________. The next day, we went to ________. The ________ were/was ________. I have never seen such ________ before! During the trip, I also tasted ________. They were ________! I have been to many places, but ________ is my favourite. I will never forget ________. I hope to go there again. 挖空提示词： summer holiday / parents / Hangzhou / unforgettable / West Lake / the green water and ancient bridges / dad / the lake has a history of over 1,000 years / Lingyin Temple / temples / peaceful / beautiful temples / local fish and tofu / delicious / Hangzhou / the beautiful sunset over the lake 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点 ________ vs. ________: Which City to Choose? ________ and ________ are both ________. They have ________, but each has its own charm. ________ rests in ________. It is famous for ________. You can also ________. It is a good way to ________. ________, on the other hand, lies in ________. It is known for ________. If you love ________, ________ is a perfect choice. In my opinion, both cities are worth visiting. If I had to choose, I would pick ________ because ________. But you can’t go wrong with either city! 挖空提示词： Beijing / Shanghai / big cities in China / rich history and modern life / Beijing / northern China / the Great Wall and the Forbidden City / try Peking duck / enjoy traditional Chinese culture / Shanghai / eastern China / its modern skyline and Disneyland / city life and shopping / Shanghai / I love the night view of the Huangpu River 五、能力达标练 1．假如你是李明，你的笔友Dave计划这个暑假来中国游玩。请你根据表格中的信息给他写封邮件介绍中国的基本情况并向他推荐北京、遂宁的名胜 (各2个)，同时谈谈推荐的原因及自已参观的感受 (至少2点)。 Facts of China Location East Asia Population 1,400,000,000 Size 9,600,000 km2 History more than 5,000 years Places of interest & The reasons to recommend (推荐) Beijing:  1. … 2. … Suining:  1. … 2. … The feelings 1. … 2. … 要求: 1. 书写规范，包含全部要点，要有适当的开头和结尾，可合理增加细节； 2. 注意恰当运用现在完成时态、比较级、最高级； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名及人名； 4. 90词左右。 Dear Dave, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 【答案】 例文： Dear Dave, Welcome to China this summer! Located in East Asia, China has a population of 1.4 billion and covers 9.6 million km². It boasts a history of over 5,000 years. In Beijing, I highly recommend the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is the longest defensive wall globally, offering breathtaking views. The Forbidden City, the largest ancient palace, reveals royal secrets. I’ve been there twice and felt deeply amazed. In Suining, visit the Lingquan Temple and Guangde Temple. They’re the most tranquil places I’ve ever seen, perfect for relaxation. I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable trip here! Li Ming 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性邮件，用一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：中国基本情况（位置、人口、面积、历史）、北京和遂宁名胜（各2个）、推荐原因、参观感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（China/it等） 注意事项：不得透露真实校名和人名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：欢迎对方来中国，概括介绍中国基本情况 主体段：分别介绍北京和遂宁的名胜及推荐原因、参观感受 结尾段：总结期待，表达祝福 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：中国基本情况 位置：Located in East Asia/Situated in the eastern part of Asia 人口：has a population of 1.4 billion/with a population of over 1.4 billion 面积：covers 9.6 million km²/spans an area of 9.6 million square kilometers 历史：boasts a history of over 5,000 years/has a long history of more than 5,000 years 要点二：北京名胜及推荐原因、参观感受 名胜选择：the Great Wall/the Summer Palace；the Forbidden City/Tiananmen Square 推荐原因：the longest defensive wall globally, offering breathtaking views/a symbol of Chinese ancient civilization, attracting countless tourists；the largest ancient palace, reveals royal secrets/a precious cultural heritage, showing the grandeur of the past 参观感受：I’ve been there twice and felt deeply amazed/I visited it last year and was deeply impressed by its magnificent architecture 要点三：遂宁名胜及推荐原因、参观感受 名胜选择：the Lingquan Temple/the Longfeng Temple；the Guangde Temple/the Sihai Temple 推荐原因：They’re the most tranquil places I’ve ever seen, perfect for relaxation/They have beautiful scenery and a peaceful atmosphere, suitable for meditation；they have a long history and unique cultural connotations 参观感受：I went there with my family and had a great time enjoying the natural beauty and cultural charm/I visited them during the holiday and felt relaxed and refreshed 2．假设你是李华，暑假期间参与了当地某机构组织的“感受大美中国”的旅游活动。你拍了许多满意的照片，准备写一段英文配文，向朋友介绍这个景点和你的感受。 写作要点： 1. 景点提示； 2. 介绍美景与参与的活动； 3. 表达感受，说明推荐的理由。 要求：正确使用时态和句型，包含所有要点，篇幅在80词以上。 A Trip to _________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Trip to Mount Huang I went to Mount Huang with my family during the summer holiday. To see the breathtaking sunrise, we got up at 4 a.m. and took the cable car up the mountain. The sea of clouds and strange rocks looked like a fairyland. Walking on the mountain paths, I felt on top of the world. I also took many photos with my phone. If you love nature, I believe Mount Huang is a must-go attraction for you. It’s such a wonderful place that I want to visit again! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：游记类记叙文，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：景点提示、介绍美景与参与活动、表达感受（推荐理由） 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：正确使用时态和句型，包含所有要点，篇幅在80词以上 [第二步；构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，交代去旅行的景点 主体段：介绍美景与参与的活动 结尾段：表达感受，推荐理由 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行景点 时间、地点、人物：during the summer holiday/Mount Huang/with my family 要点二：介绍美景与参与活动 展开描述：the breathtaking sunrise/took the cable car up the mountain/The sea of clouds/strange rocks/looked like a fairyland/took many photos with my phone 要点三：表达感受，推荐理由 展开描述：felt on top of the world/believe Mount Huang is a must-go attraction/such a wonderful place 3．中国西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷（the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon）不仅是世界上最长的峡谷，还是世界上最深的峡谷。请你根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，简要介绍一下雅鲁藏布大峡谷。 长度：500千米以上，比美国大峡谷长50多千米； 深度：6009米（最深处） 美誉：“植物博物馆（the plant museum ）” “动物王国（the animal kingdom）”； 最佳旅游季节：春季和秋季。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon in Xizang, China, is a famous natural wonder. It’s both the longest and deepest canyon in the world. It is over 500 kilometers long. That’s more than 50 kilometers longer than the Grand Canyon in America! The deepest part reaches 6,009 meters. That’s really deep! Many plants and animals live here. People call it “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. The best time to visit is spring and autumn. You can see very beautiful views here. Come and see this wonderful place! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主 ​ 明确要点：雅鲁藏布大峡谷的长度、深度、美誉、最佳旅游季节 ​ 确定人称：第三人称（ It/The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon ） ​ 注意事项：词数80词左右，不得出现无关信息，语言简洁自然    [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构： ​ 开头段：总起句，点明雅鲁藏布大峡谷的地位与特殊性 ​ 主体段：分别介绍峡谷的长度、深度、美誉和最佳旅游季节 ​ 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题，赞美自然之美并发出邀请    [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：峡谷的基本信息（地位、长度与深度）    地位描述：The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon in Xizang, China, is a famous natural wonder./is one of the world’s greatest natural wonders等 长度表达：It is over 500 kilometers long./It stretches more than 500 kilometers等 深度表达：The deepest part reaches 6,009 meters./Its deepest point is 6,009 meters below the surface等 要点二：峡谷的美誉与生态特点    生态描述：Many plants and animals live here./home to thousands of plant and animal species/has a rich variety of wildlife and plants等 美誉：people call it “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”/It is known as “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”等 要点三：最佳旅游季节与总结    季节表达：The best time to visit is spring and autumn./Spring and autumn are the best seasons to visit等 结尾升华：Come and see this wonderful place!/It is a natural treasure worth visiting等 4．五一假期是出游的好时候，你打算邀请你的好友来宿迁游览，请以英语导游的身份，写一篇英语短文向朋友介绍这座城市。 1．宿迁这些年变化很大，它从一个穷困的小镇发展成一座现代化的城市。现在高楼林立，处处可见宽阔、干净的马路。…… 2．它蕴含丰富的历史和文化。它是项羽的出生地，参观项王故里（Hometown of Xiang Yu）可以了解他的历史故事。 3．如果喜欢自然风光，三台山森林公园（Santai Mountain Forest Park）和骆马湖（Luoma Lake）都是不错的选择。在这里不仅可以欣赏美景，还可以泛舟湖上。 4．每年都有数百万游客来宿迁游览，它确实是让人们放松的好地方。 5．未来展望：…… 要求： 1．词数90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Suqian has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： Suqian has changed a lot over the years. It has grown from a poor town into a modern city with tall buildings, wide and clean roads everywhere. It is rich in history and culture as the birthplace of Xiang Yu. Visiting the Hometown of Xiang Yu helps learn his stories. For nature lovers, Santai Mountain Forest Park and Luoma Lake are great choices. You can enjoy views or go boating. Millions of tourists visit Suqian every year. It’s truly a relaxing place. In the future, Suqian will become even better. You will love it! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：宿迁的变化、历史和文化、自然风光、游客情况、未来展望 确定人称：第三人称（it/Suqian） 注意事项：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起句，引出宿迁的变化 主体段：分别介绍宿迁的历史和文化、自然风光、游客情况 结尾段：总结感受，对未来进行展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：宿迁的变化 变化描述：has grown from a poor town into a modern city/has transformed from a small, underdeveloped town to a bustling metropolis等 具体表现：with tall buildings, wide and clean roads everywhere/with numerous skyscrapers, spacious and tidy streets all around等 要点二：宿迁的历史和文化 历史地位：as the birthplace of Xiang Yu/as the hometown of a famous historical figure等 文化体验：Visiting the Hometown of Xiang Yu helps learn his stories/Paying a visit to the Hometown of Xiang Yu enables you to delve into his historical anecdotes等 要点三：宿迁的自然风光 景点推荐：Santai Mountain Forest Park and Luoma Lake/Santai Mountain Scenic Area and Luoma Lake Resort等 活动内容：You can enjoy views or go boating/You can appreciate the beautiful scenery or take a boat ride等 要点四：宿迁的游客情况 游客数量：Millions of tourists visit Suqian every year/A large number of tourists flock to Suqian annually等 游客感受：It’s truly a relaxing place/It’s really a place where people can unwind等 要点五：未来展望 展望内容：In the future, Suqian will become even better/Looking ahead, Suqian is poised to become even more prosperous and attractive等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Amazing China单元同步写作课讲义 一、单元主题和写作要求 本单元围绕“Amazing China（魅力中国）”展开，介绍了南京、洛阳、西安等历史文化名城以及国内多个著名景点（如喀纳斯湖、香港海洋公园、兵马俑等），引导学生了解中国丰富的旅游资源，感受中华文化的魅力。 通过本单元学习，学生需能够准确运用与旅游相关的词汇（如 attraction, ancient capital, must-see, be worth a visit, natural landscape等）、现在完成时（have/has been, have/has gone）以及描述景点、表达感受、提出建议的句型，来介绍一个国内旅游景点，分享旅行经历，或制定旅行计划。同时，学生需具备信息整合、细节描写和情感表达的能力，为中考书面表达中“旅游”“家乡介绍”“节日活动”等话题奠定坚实基础。 二、出题方向和命题形式 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点（如城市、自然景观、历史遗迹等）。（信息介绍类说明文） （1）命题形式： · 命题作文（如 “A Popular Attraction in China” “Welcome to My Hometown”）； · 提示类作文（给出景点名称和要点，要求补充细节）； · 宣传稿/导游词（如为学校旅游节写一篇景点介绍）。 （2）考察重点： · 信息组织能力（按位置、特色、可做活动等顺序介绍）； · 现在完成时的运用（描述旅行经历或景点的知名度）； · 描写生动性（使用形容词、比喻等使语言形象）。 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历，描述所见所闻所感。（叙事文） （1）命题形式： · 日记（如 “An Unforgettable Trip to Xi’an”）； · 博客/游记（如 “My Wonderful Holiday” “A Trip to Luoyang”）； · 邮件（给朋友写信分享旅行经历）。 （2）考察重点： · 过去时态和现在完成时态的混合运用（叙述行程+分享感受）； · 细节描写能力（景物、活动、心情）； · 情感真实性（表达兴奋、惊叹、怀念等）。 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点或城市，说明各自的特色并表达偏好。（观点对比类议论文） （1）命题形式： · 话题作文（如 “Nanjing and Luoyang: Which City Do You Prefer?”）； · 材料作文（根据教材中南京和洛阳的文章进行对比并发表看法）； · 辩论稿（如 “Natural Landscapes vs. Historical Sites: Which Is Better?”）。 （2）考察重点： · 对比类句型运用（both, while, similar to, different from, however）； · 观点表达与论证能力（说明偏好及理由）； · 文化理解能力（理解不同景点的文化内涵）。 三、典型范文分析 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点 Welcome to the Potala Palace Have you ever been to Tibet? If not, I strongly recommend the Potala Palace in Lhasa. It is a must-see attraction in China. The Potala Palace rests on the Red Hill in Lhasa. It was built in the 7th century and has a history of over 1,300 years. The palace is famous for its beautiful white and red walls, golden roofs, and thousands of rooms. Inside, you can see many ancient artworks, such as statues, paintings and Buddhist treasures. What makes the Potala Palace so amazing? First, it is one of the highest palaces in the world. Second, it shows the wisdom and skill of ancient Chinese people. I have been there once, and I will never forget its beauty. It is well worth a visit. Come and see it for yourself! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 信息介绍类说明文：以宣传推荐的口吻介绍布达拉宫，目标读者为对西藏或中国文化感兴趣的游客，吸引读者前往参观。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：以问句引入，直接推荐。 正文（分述）：位置与历史 → 外观与内部 → 两个突出特色（海拔高、古人智慧）。 结尾（总结）：分享个人经历并再次推荐。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Have you ever been to Tibet? If not, I strongly recommend...（互动式开头，亲切自然） ②It is a must-see attraction in China.（must-see为教材核心词汇） ③...rests on the Red Hill...（rests on生动形象） ④What makes the Potala Palace so amazing? First... Second...（设问+分点，条理清晰） ⑤It is well worth a visit.（教材重点句型） ⑥Come and see it for yourself!（祈使句号召，有力收尾） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用First, Second等词；段落间用What makes...设问过渡。 隐性逻辑：从“是什么”到“有什么”再到“为什么特别”，层层推进。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（介绍客观事实）；现在完成时（Have you ever been, I have been there once）引出经历；一般将来时（will never forget）表达情感。 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历 My Trip to Luoyang Last summer holiday, my parents and I went to Luoyang, an ancient capital in Henan Province. It was an unforgettable experience. We visited the Longmen Grottoes first. I was amazed by the thousands of Buddha statues carved into the rocks. Some were huge and some were very small, but all of them were beautiful. My dad told me that they were built over 1,500 years ago. The next day, we went to see the peonies in Luoyang. The flowers were in full bloom. They were pink, red, white and purple. I have never seen such beautiful flowers before! Many painters and poets have loved them since the Tang Dynasty. During the trip, I also tasted local snacks like beef soup and spicy noodles. They were delicious! I have been to many cities, but Luoyang is my favourite. I will never forget the grottoes and the peonies. I hope to go there again. 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 叙事文（游记）：按时间顺序叙述一次洛阳之旅，重点描写景点和感受，分享快乐经历并激发他人兴趣。 （2）篇章结构 时间顺序结构： 开头：交代时间、地点、人物和总体感受（unforgettable）。 正文：第一天（龙门石窟）→ 第二天（牡丹）→ 美食体验。 结尾：总结感受并表达重返的愿望。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Last summer holiday, my parents and I went to...（经典叙事开头） ②I was amazed by the thousands of Buddha statues...（amazed表达惊讶） ③Some were huge and some were very small, but all of them were beautiful.（对比+转折，描写细致） ④I have never seen such beautiful flowers before!（现在完成时强调前所未有） ⑤Many painters and poets have loved them since the Tang Dynasty.（引用教材原句，学以致用） ⑥I have been to many cities, but Luoyang is my favourite.（对比突显喜爱） （4）逻辑衔接 按时间顺序：Last summer holiday → first → the next day → During the trip。使用also, but等连接。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述过去的行为：went, visited, was amazed, tasted）；现在完成时（强调经历和结果：have never seen, have been to, will never forget）。 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点 Nanjing vs. Luoyang: Which City to Choose? Nanjing and Luoyang are both ancient capitals of China. They have rich history and culture, but each has its own charm. Nanjing rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. It is famous for its city wall, which is the longest in the world. You can also visit the Confucius Temple and take a boat trip on the Qinhuai River at night. It is a good way to enjoy the old-time feel. Luoyang, on the other hand, lies on the banks of the Yellow River. It is known for the Longmen Grottoes and peonies. If you love nature and art, Luoyang is a perfect choice. The sea of clouds on Baiyun Mountain is a real treat. In my opinion, both cities are worth visiting. If I had to choose, I would pick Luoyang because I love peonies and ancient stone carvings. But you can’t go wrong with either city! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 观点对比类议论文：对比南京和洛阳的景点特色，并表达个人偏好，帮助做出选择。 （2）篇章结构 对比结构： 开头：点明两城市共同点（都是古都，有历史文化）。 正文：第一段介绍南京的特色（城墙、夫子庙、秦淮河）；第二段介绍洛阳的特色（龙门石窟、牡丹、白云山）。 结尾：表达个人偏好并给出建议。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Nanjing and Luoyang are both ancient capitals of China. They have rich history and culture, but each has its own charm.（总起，both...but...） ②Nanjing rests in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.（教材原句） ③It is a good way to enjoy the old-time feel.（教材原句） ④Luoyang, on the other hand, lies on the banks of the Yellow River.（on the other hand对比衔接） ⑤The sea of clouds on Baiyun Mountain is a real treat.（a real treat生动表达） ⑥If I had to choose, I would pick Luoyang...（虚拟语气，委婉表达偏好） ⑦...you can’t go wrong with either city!（地道表达，友好建议） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：both, but, on the other hand, In my opinion, If I had to choose。 隐性逻辑：先共同点，再分别介绍，最后选择偏好，符合认知顺序。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（介绍事实和观点）。虚拟语气（I would pick）用于假设选择。 四、素材积累和写作支架 1. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的词汇替换练习： 原句 替换词汇 替换后的句子 This place is good to visit. great / fantastic / wonderful It is a famous place. well-known / popular There are many old buildings. plenty of / a number of You can see beautiful flowers. admire / enjoy The city has a long history. has got / owns I liked the trip very much. enjoyed / loved The park is very beautiful. amazing / breath-taking 2. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的句子扩写练习： （1）引出主题/表明意图 Have you ever been to...? Let me introduce this amazing place to you. 你去过……吗？让我给你介绍这个神奇的地方。 Today, I’d like to share my travel experience in... 今天，我想分享我在……的旅行经历。 If you are planning a trip, I strongly recommend... 如果你在计划旅行，我强烈推荐…… （2）列举例子/描述景点 For example, you can see the Terracotta Warriors in Xi’an. 例如，你可以在西安看到兵马俑。 The city is famous for its beautiful peonies, which have been loved since the Tang Dynasty. 这座城市以美丽的牡丹闻名，自唐代以来就备受喜爱。 There are many exciting rides, such as roller coasters and water slides. 有许多刺激的游乐设施，比如过山车和水滑梯。 （3）发表观点/感受和感悟 In my opinion, this place is well worth a visit. 在我看来，这个地方非常值得一游。 I believe that travelling opens our eyes and enriches our minds. 我相信旅行能开阔眼界、丰富思想。 It was truly an unforgettable experience. 那真是一次难忘的经历。 （4）表达情感 I was amazed by the beauty of the natural landscapes. 我被自然景观的美震撼了。 I felt so proud of our country’s rich culture. 我为我们国家丰富的文化感到自豪。 I will never forget the moment when I first saw the Great Wall. 我永远不会忘记第一次看到长城的那一刻。 （5）对比观点/文化差异 Both cities have a long history, but they offer different experiences. 两个城市都有悠久历史，但它们提供的体验不同。 Unlike Nanjing, Luoyang is better known for its peonies. 与南京不同，洛阳更以牡丹闻名。 While the Potala Palace is a religious site, the Summer Palace is a royal garden. 布达拉宫是宗教圣地，而颐和园是皇家园林。 （6）衔接句子 First... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… What’s more... 而且…… However... 然而…… On the other hand... 另一方面…… 3. 与本单元写作主题（Amazing China）相关的整篇仿写练习： 方向1：介绍一个中国的旅游景点 Welcome to ________ Have you ever been to ________? If not, I strongly recommend ________. It is a ________ attraction in China. ________ rests in ________. It was built ________ and has a history of ________ years. The place is famous for its ________. Inside, you can see ________. What makes it so amazing? First, ________. Second, ________. I have been there once, and I will never forget its beauty. It is well worth a visit. Come and see it for yourself! 方向2：分享一次难忘的旅行经历 My Trip to ________ Last ________, my ________ and I went to ________. It was an ________ experience. We visited ________ first. I was amazed by ________. My ________ told me that ________. The next day, we went to ________. The ________ were/was ________. I have never seen such ________ before! During the trip, I also tasted ________. They were ________! I have been to many places, but ________ is my favourite. I will never forget ________. I hope to go there again. 方向3：比较两个不同的旅游景点 ________ vs. ________: Which City to Choose? ________ and ________ are both ________. They have ________, but each has its own charm. ________ rests in ________. It is famous for ________. You can also ________. It is a good way to ________. ________, on the other hand, lies in ________. It is known for ________. If you love ________, ________ is a perfect choice. In my opinion, both cities are worth visiting. If I had to choose, I would pick ________ because ________. But you can’t go wrong with either city! 五、能力达标练 1．假如你是李明，你的笔友Dave计划这个暑假来中国游玩。请你根据表格中的信息给他写封邮件介绍中国的基本情况并向他推荐北京、遂宁的名胜 (各2个)，同时谈谈推荐的原因及自已参观的感受 (至少2点)。 Facts of China Location East Asia Population 1,400,000,000 Size 9,600,000 km2 History more than 5,000 years Places of interest & The reasons to recommend (推荐) Beijing:  1. … 2. … Suining:  1. … 2. … The feelings 1. … 2. … 要求: 1. 书写规范，包含全部要点，要有适当的开头和结尾，可合理增加细节； 2. 注意恰当运用现在完成时态、比较级、最高级； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名及人名； 4. 90词左右。 Dear Dave, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 2．假设你是李华，暑假期间参与了当地某机构组织的“感受大美中国”的旅游活动。你拍了许多满意的照片，准备写一段英文配文，向朋友介绍这个景点和你的感受。 写作要点： 1. 景点提示； 2. 介绍美景与参与的活动； 3. 表达感受，说明推荐的理由。 要求：正确使用时态和句型，包含所有要点，篇幅在80词以上。 A Trip to _________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．中国西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷（the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon）不仅是世界上最长的峡谷，还是世界上最深的峡谷。请你根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，简要介绍一下雅鲁藏布大峡谷。 长度：500千米以上，比美国大峡谷长50多千米； 深度：6009米（最深处） 美誉：“植物博物馆（the plant museum ）” “动物王国（the animal kingdom）”； 最佳旅游季节：春季和秋季。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．五一假期是出游的好时候，你打算邀请你的好友来宿迁游览，请以英语导游的身份，写一篇英语短文向朋友介绍这座城市。 1．宿迁这些年变化很大，它从一个穷困的小镇发展成一座现代化的城市。现在高楼林立，处处可见宽阔、干净的马路。…… 2．它蕴含丰富的历史和文化。它是项羽的出生地，参观项王故里（Hometown of Xiang Yu）可以了解他的历史故事。 3．如果喜欢自然风光，三台山森林公园（Santai Mountain Forest Park）和骆马湖（Luoma Lake）都是不错的选择。在这里不仅可以欣赏美景，还可以泛舟湖上。 4．每年都有数百万游客来宿迁游览，它确实是让人们放松的好地方。 5．未来展望：…… 要求： 1．词数90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Suqian has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $