Unit7写作精讲：A Description of Yourself 2025-2026学年沪外教版七年级英语下册

沪外教七下Unit7写作精讲 A Description of Yourself 适用水平：七年级下册 字数要求：60—100词 教材依据：Unit 7 自我介绍写作 + ever/have been/have gone 语法 + 思维导图构思（mind maps） 第一步：审（审题） 1. 审任务：写一篇自我介绍，展示你的独特品质、优势和性格，需包含外貌、性格、爱好、有趣的事等方面，用思维导图梳理思路，体现“是什么让我们与众不同又美丽”的单元主题。 2. 审体裁：自我介绍类短文，结构清晰：开头（基本信息）→ 正文（外貌/性格/爱好/趣事）→ 结尾（自我认同）。 3. 审人称：以第一人称（I/my）为主，直接介绍自己。 4. 审时态： · 一般现在时：描述外貌、性格、爱好等常态（如：I have short hair. I like playing basketball.）。 · 现在完成时（have been/have gone/ever）：讲述过往经历（如：I have been to many museums. Have you ever tried magic tricks?）。 5. 审技能：要学会用思维导图构思写作，从不同维度（外貌、性格、爱好等）组织内容，并使用性格形容词（如 friendly, brave, creative）展现个性。 第二步：列（列提纲） 四段式结构（Intro—Appearance & Personality—Hobbies & Fun Fact—Conclusion） 第一段：开头（Introduction） 1. 基本信息：姓名、年龄、来自哪里（如：I'm Li Ming, a 13-year-old boy from Beijing.）。 第二段：外貌与性格（Appearance & Personality） 1. 外貌：简单描述长相（如：I have short black hair and wear glasses.）。 2. 性格：用形容词描述性格，并简单说明（如：I'm friendly and always ready to help others.）。 第三段：爱好与趣事（Hobbies & Fun Fact） 1. 爱好：介绍兴趣爱好，可加入经历（如：I love painting. I have been to many art museums.）。 2. 有趣的事：分享一个特别的技能或经历（如：A fun fact about me is that I can do magic tricks.）。 第四段：结尾（Conclusion） 1. 自我认同：表达对自己的接纳和自豪（如：I love being myself and am proud of who I am.）。 完整提纲示例 段落 详细要点 关键词 开头 1. 姓名：Li Ming 2. 年龄：13 3. 来自：Beijing Li Ming, 13-year-old, Beijing 外貌&性格 1. 外貌：short black hair, glasses 2. 性格：friendly, helpful, creative short hair, glasses, friendly, helpful, creative 爱好&趣事 1. 爱好：painting, have been to art museums 2. 趣事：can do magic tricks painting, art museums, magic tricks 结尾 1. 自我认同：love being myself, proud of my uniqueness love being myself, proud, unique 第三步：连（连句成篇） 用连接词和思维导图的逻辑把要点连成通顺的短文，符合七下水平。 常用连接词（七下重点） · 并列：and, also, as well as · 递进：what's more, a fun fact about me is · 因果：because, so 连句示范 1. 要点：I'm Li Ming. I'm 13. I'm from Beijing. → 升级：I'm Li Ming, a 13-year-old boy from Beijing. 2. 要点：I have short hair. I'm friendly. I help others. → 升级：I have short black hair and wear round glasses. I'm friendly and always willing to help others because I believe kindness matters. 3. 要点：I like painting. I've been to museums. I can do magic. → 升级：I love painting and have been to many art museums in China. A fun fact about me is that I can do cool magic tricks to amaze my friends. 第四步：美（美化语言） 在保证语法正确的基础上，用性格形容词和现在完成时让自我介绍更生动，符合教材要求。 1. 词汇升级（性格形容词） 普通词 升级词 例句 nice friendly / kind / warm-hearted I'm friendly and always ready to help others. good at talented / skilled I'm talented at playing the piano. interesting fun / amazing / unique I have a unique hobby—doing magic tricks. happy proud / confident I'm proud of who I am. 2. 句型升级（现在完成时+思维导图结构） · 基础句：I like painting. I went to museums. → 高分句：I love painting and have been to many art museums in China. It's my way to express my feelings. · 基础句：I can do magic. → 高分句：A fun fact about me is that I can do cool magic tricks, which never fails to amaze my friends. · 基础句：I like myself. → 高分句：I really love being myself and am proud of all the things that make me unique and special. 3. 格式美化 · 段落清晰：开头、外貌性格、爱好趣事、结尾各一段，逻辑分明。 · 思维导图构思：先画思维导图（中心：identity → 分支：appearance/personality/hobbies/fun fact），再写作。 · 用词精准：多用描述性格和爱好的词，展现独特性。 第五步：查（检查纠错） 写完后逐项检查，避免扣分： 1. 格式检查： · 确认结构清晰（开头—正文—结尾）。 · 确认覆盖了不同维度的身份信息（外貌/性格/爱好/趣事）。 2. 语法检查： · 确认人称一致（第一人称）。 · 确认时态正确（一般现在时讲常态，现在完成时讲经历）。 · 确认性格形容词使用恰当，没有拼写错误。 3. 内容检查： · 确认字数在60—100词之间。 · 确认要点齐全（基本信息+外貌+性格+爱好+趣事+自我认同）。 · 确认展现了自己的独特性，不是千篇一律的介绍。 完整范文 英文范文 This is Me! I'm Li Ming, a 13-year-old boy from Beijing. You'll recognise me by my short black hair and round glasses. I'm friendly and always ready to help others because I believe kindness can make a difference. I'm also creative and love thinking of new ideas. My biggest hobby is painting. I have been to many art museums in China to learn from great works. A fun fact about me is that I can do cool magic tricks, which always amazes my friends. I really love being myself and am proud of all the things that make me unique. 中文对照 这就是我！ 我是李明，一个来自北京的13岁男孩。你可以通过我的黑色短发和圆框眼镜认出我。 我为人友善，总是乐于帮助别人，因为我相信善意能带来改变。我也很有创造力，喜欢想出新点子。 我最大的爱好是绘画，我去过中国很多艺术博物馆向大师作品学习。关于我的一个趣事是，我会变很酷的魔术，总能让我的朋友们惊叹不已。 我真的很喜欢做自己，也为所有让我独一无二的地方感到自豪。 核心素材 好词 · 外貌类：short/long hair, straight/curly hair, glasses, tall/short, slim/strong · 性格类：friendly, kind, helpful, creative, brave, confident, patient, outgoing, shy · 爱好类：painting, playing basketball, reading, singing, dancing, doing magic, collecting stamps · 自我认同类：love being myself, be proud of, unique, special, one of a kind 好句 1. I'm ..., a ...-year-old boy/girl from ... 2. You'll recognise me by my ... 3. I'm ... and always ready to ... because ... 4. My biggest hobby is ... I have been to ... 5. A fun fact about me is that ... 6. I really love being myself and am proud of ... 学生填空练习版 This is Me! I'm ________, a ________-year-old boy/girl from ________. You'll recognise me by my ________. I'm ________ and always ready to ________ because ________. I'm also ________. My biggest hobby is ________. I have been to ________. A fun fact about me is that ________. I really love being myself and am proud of all the things that make me unique. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $