2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---丛林惊魂一课 导学案

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Guided by my love of mountain-bike riding, I founded Synergy Trails, a company specializing in building narrow, winding dirt-bike trails for weekend riders. It was dusty, dirty work, but with the trees providing shade and the only noise coming from my team and the local birds, there wasn't any place I’d rather be.

Over the years, I had encountered all sorts of dangerous animals, including venomous (有毒的) spiders and snakes. However, I knew how to distinguish the non-threatening ones from the dangerous ones. I was trained in first aid, though I never seriously thought I'd need it. The bush was my office, and I thought I understood all its secrets.

It was a hot mid-afternoon just before the 2016 Easter long weekend in New South Wales, Australia. My crew mate, Phil, and I were working close by each other, and the sound of our tools echoed through the humid forest.

With the weekend approaching, I had only a small digging job left. My mind was already halfway home, eager to finish as quickly as possible. I glanced at the distance. My shovel and gloves were in my vehicle, parked about 100 meters away, but the job was so small that only a light dig was necessary.

In a moment of confidence, I didn't reach for them. I felt certain that nothing could go wrong in such a short time. So, I used my bare hands instead. I knelt on the dusty ground, my fingers reaching into the cool, damp shadows beneath a pile of leaves.

I pushed aside the leaves with ease, not thinking about the hidden dangers. Suddenly, just as my fingers slid under the leaves, I felt a sharp, deep pain in my left hand. I quickly pulled out my hand and was shocked to see a Sydney funnel-web, the deadliest spider in Australia, wrapped around my finger.

续写开头

Paragraph 1: Blood started to stream down my index finger.

Paragraph 2: Phil drove me to the nearest hospital as fast as he could.

一、文本分析

1.角色

________________________________________________________

2.视角

第________人称

3.时空线page number 0

 

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The author founded a trail-building company and worked in the forest--- _________________ --- He was experienced in distinguishing dangerous creatures and trained in first aid--- _________________ --- He wanted to finish the last tiny job quickly before the weekend--- _________________ --- He chose to work barehanded out of overconfidence--- He was bitten by the deadliest Australian spider

4. 细节问答

What did the author do for a living? :___________________________________

What skills and experience did the author have?:_________________________________

Why didn’t the author wear gloves or use tools?:________________________________________________

What creature bit the author? How dangerous is it?:__________________________________________

Where did the accident take place?:_____________________________________________

What led to the terrible accident?:_________________________________________________

What would the author learn from this experience?:________________________________________________________

What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________

5.情节线

作者热爱山地骑行,创办赛道修建公司,常年在丛林工作→_________________ →作者经验丰富、掌握急救知识,自认熟知丛林危险→复活节周末前夕,仅剩一点收尾小工作→_________________ →因过度自信、贪图省事,徒手作业未戴工具→_________________ →作者被澳洲剧毒漏斗网蜘蛛咬伤,危机骤生→(续写)伤口出血、毒性发作,身体迅速不适→(续写)同伴紧急送医,作者脱险并吸取深刻教训

6.情感线

I: passionate and confident→___________→careless and overconfident→___________→panicked and painful→___________

7. 综合概括(中英各一句)

中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________page number 1

 

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英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8. 句式

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

9. 本文主题

成长警示类:_______________________________________

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Blood started to stream down my index finger.

衔接句1——What symptoms did the author have? What did he and Phil do immediately?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2: Phil drove me to the nearest hospital as fast as he could.

衔接句2——How was the author treated? What lesson did he gain from the accident?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

三.段落续写框架

第一段:Blood started to stream down my index finger.

→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;

第二段:Phil drove me to the nearest hospital as fast as he could.

→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。

四. 段落续写

Blood started to stream down my index finger. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________page number 2

 

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