2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---友情胜于竞技 导学案

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Grace and Ellen, both promising in their school’s dance competition, were fierce competitors. They both had great passion for dancing and dreamed of bigger stages. They were both friends and competitors. They had similar taste in music and had similar dressing styles. They even wore shoes of the same size. They had both committed themselves to preparing for the upcoming contest.

Grace’s journey to the competition was marked by countless hours of practice and determination. She would rise before the sun, and the studio lights were her only company. Every movement was perfected with unwavering commitment. She knew that this competition wasn’t just about personal success; it was also about upholding her school’s honour. “Grace, you’re incredible!” Grace’s dance instructor, Mrs Anderson, often praised her. “Your hard work will pay off.”

Ellen had been practising hard for this competition as well. Her love for dance was her driving force. After school, she would head straight to the dance studio, tirelessly perfecting every step and twirl. Her dance shoes had become an extension of her feet, and her heart burned with a strong desire for victory. “Ellen, you’re a natural,” her fellow dancers would often say. “You’ve got this”

The day of the competition finally arrived, and there were five competitors fighting for the championship title. Ellen was scheduled to perform before Grace.

As Ellen stood backstage, the butterflies in her stomach seemed to have turned into a whirlwind (漩涡). She checked her dance shoes one last time and realised a huge mistake. The shoes themselves were a size too small. It turned out she took her little sister’s shoes by mistake. Panic set in as her mind raced for a solution.

“Ellen, you’re up next” the stage manager announced. In the dimly lit (昏暗的) backstage area, Grace overheard Ellen’s whispers to her friend, Sarah. “I brought the wrong shoes, Sarah,” Ellen’s voice trembled. “They are too small. What am I going to do?” Grace’s heart sank as she overheard the conversation.

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Grace knew her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated.

Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen’s eyes as she slipped into Grace’s shoes.

一、文本分析

1.角色

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2.视角page number 0

 

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第________人称

3.时空线

Grace and Ellen were dance competitors and best friends--- _________________ --- Grace practiced diligently for the contest--- _________________ --- The competition day came--- _________________ --- Ellen took the wrong tiny dance shoes and fell into panic--- Grace overheard her trouble and felt upset

4. 细节问答

What was the relationship between Grace and Ellen? :___________________________________

What did the two girls do to prepare for the dance contest?:_________________________________

What problem did Ellen meet backstage before her performance?:________________________________________________

Why was Ellen extremely panicked?:__________________________________________

What advantage did Grace have to help Ellen?:_____________________________________________

What was Ellen’s state when facing the problem?:_________________________________________________

What choice would Grace make between competition and friendship?:________________________________________________________

What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________

5.情节线

Grace和Ellen是亦敌亦友的舞蹈爱好者,一同备战校园舞蹈大赛→_________________ →两人刻苦训练,都对比赛胜利充满渴望→_________________ →比赛当天,Ellen先上场,却误拿妹妹的小号舞鞋→陷入极度慌乱、无计可施→_________________ →(续写)Grace在竞争与友情间挣扎,最终选择成全朋友→(续写)Ellen顺利完成比赛,二人收获珍贵友谊

6.情感线

Two girls: passionate and ambitious→___________→anxious and desperate→___________→grateful and touched→___________

7. 综合概括(中英各一句)page number 1

 

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中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8. 句式

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9. 本文主题

温情成长类:_______________________________________

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Grace knew her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated.

衔接句1——What was Grace’s inner struggle? What did she finally do?

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Paragraph 2: Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen’s eyes as she slipped into Grace’s shoes.

衔接句2——How did Ellen perform? What was the final ending and their friendship?

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三.段落续写框架

第一段:Grace knew her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated.

→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;

第二段:Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen’s eyes as she slipped into Grace’s shoes.

→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。

四. 段落续写

Grace knew her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________page number 2

 

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