内容正文:
让你的作文不再简单
定语从句
在英语写作中的应用
Aims:
1. Review the attributive clause.
2. Learn how to use the attributive clause in writing.
3. Improve our confidence in writing by using the attributive clause.
Key and difficult points:
1. Distinguish the relative pronouns and relative adverbs.
2.Improve students’ writing skills by using the attributive clause.
Learning methods:
Self-inquiry and group cooperative learning methods.
Using Attributive Clause
in Writing
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Lead-in
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Pre-learning
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While-learning
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Post-learning
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Summary
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Homework
CONTENTS
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Lead-in
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If you had to use a few words to describe this place,
what would you say?
Big?
People Mountain, people sea?
Beautiful?
The sports meeting of Zhengzhou University, which is filled with cheers and youthful passion, presents a lively and spectacular scene on the playground.
让你的定从
无懈可击!
Writing
定从
名从
连词
非谓语
状从
高考
以下语法结构美化你的书面表达
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Pre-learning
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Revision
1.构成要素
先行词:被定语从句修饰的 ______ 或 ______
关系词:分为________ 和________
定语从句:修饰 ____或 _____的从句,一般紧跟在________的后面。
2.结构: ______词+______词+从句
3.分类:____________ 和 非限制性定语从句
4.应用:可以用来描述_______ 和_______
5.翻译:“……的”
6.关系词分类:
名词
代词
名词
代词
关系副词
关系代词
先行词
关系
先行
事物
人物
限制性
人:who/that/whom/whose
物:which/that/whose
副词:where (地点)/when (时间)/why (原因)
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While-learning
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1.I am a student from AAA Senior High School, _______ is located in Xu Chang.
2.The reason ______I want to introduce my school is that it offers the most practical way of education for every student.
3.There are modern playgrounds and basketball courts _________are available (可利用的)for us to take exercise.
4.I can well remember there was a time ______ all students read English loudly together.
5.What’s more, there are many friendly classmates with _________ I could get along well.
6.More importantly, I have met a great number of excellent teachers _________ devote themselves to teaching.
7.I will never forget the classroom _____ we study together.
Part 1
1. I am a student from AAA Senior High School, _______ is located in Xu Chang.
which
2. The reason ______I want to introduce my school is that it offers the most practical way of education to every student.
why
3. There are modern basketball courts and playgrounds ___________are available for us to take exercise.
that/which
4. I can well remember there was a time ______ all students read English loudly together.
when
5. What’s more, there are many friendly classmates with _________ I could get along well.
whom
6. More importantly, I have met a great number of excellent teachers _________ devote themselves to teaching.
that/who
7. I will never forget the classroom ________ we study together.
where
如何写出定语从句?
Sentence combination
1. Our class is a big family.
2. The family consists of 44 girls and 13 boys.
family
The family
我们班是一个包括44个女孩和13个男孩的大家庭
Our class is a big family, which consists of 44 girls and 13 boys.
discussion
Part 2
1.Luo Yang is a famous historic city.
2.We can visit a large number of historic spots in the city.
洛阳是一个我们可以参观大量历史古迹的历史名城。
city
the city
Luo Yang is a famous historic city, where we can visit a large number of historic spots.
pair work
① Lijiang is a charming town.
② Many young people go there to experience slow life.
丽江是一个许多年轻人去体验慢生活的迷人小镇。
Lijiang is a charming town, where many young people go to experience slow life.
there
town
①The girl will go abroad for further study.
②You invited her to your party.
The girl whom you invited to your party will go abroad for further study.
你邀请参加派对的女孩将出国深造。
The girl
The girl
方法:
1、确定主句与从句;
2、确定先行词(相同的人或 物)
3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分
4、确定关系词;
注意:从句放在所修饰名词后面
Translation 翻译句子
Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses
用定语从句翻译句子
Part 3
1. 这就是我们最喜欢的地方。
This is the place ________________________.
pair work
which/that we like most
2. 我不会忘记我们一起玩的那些日子。
I will never forget those days __________________.
pair work
when we played together.
3. 我想去视频中提到的那所大学。
I want to go to the university_________________
________________________.
that/which is mentioned in the video.
pair work
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Post-learning
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Writing 活学活用小作文
我们学校是一所绿树环绕的美丽的学校。这里是我生活和学习了三年的地方。这里有许多有着丰富教学经验的优秀教师。作为AAA高级中学的学生我感到很自豪。我永远不会忘记我在这努力学习的美好时光。
注意:尽量使用定语从句。
Group work
Use attributive clause to write a passage.
Our School is a beautiful school ______________. This is the place _______for three years. More importantly, there are a great number of excellent teachers ________________. I am a student of AAA High School,______________. I will never forget the wonderful days ______________________.
Interactive assessment
学生互评环节
1. give a score 评分
2. write simple remarks 写出简短的评语
3. show your composition 展示作品
4. select the best author and the best assessor
评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者
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定语从句在写作中的运用的评价表
(Writing Assessment)(共10分)
评价内容 Assessment Items 成绩scores
所有要点齐全(5分)
all information included
定语从句运用正确(先行词、关系词、结构)(4分)
using attributive clauses correctly
书写漂亮,卷面整洁(1分)
good handwriting
总分total scores
评语:________________
评卷者:________
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Our school is a beautiful school which/that is surrounded by many green trees. This is the place where I have lived and studied for three years. More importantly, there are a great number of excellent teachers that/who have rich teaching experience. I am a student of AAA High School, which makes me proud. I will never forget the wonderful days when I studied hard in AAA High School.
A possible version 参考范文
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Summary
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What key takeaways have we gained from today’s learning?
一、知识回顾:牢牢记住定语从句核心
修饰对象:先行词(名词 / 代词),从句紧跟先行词。
关系词
关系代词:who/whom/that/which/whose(指代人或物,作主语 / 宾语 / 定语)
关系副词:when/where/why(作状语,表时间 / 地点 / 原因)
两大类型:限制性定语从句、非限制性定语从句(逗号隔开,补充说明)。
二、写作用法:4 步写出高分定语从句
找主句,确定要修饰的先行词
看先行词在从句中作什么成分
选对关系词
从句语序用陈述语序
三、写作价值:让作文告别简单句
1.两个简单句合并成长句,句式更丰富。
2.精准描述人、事物、地点、时间、原因,表达更流畅。
3.高考书面表达加分句型,快速提升作文档次。
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Homework
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你的一位英国朋友想要了解你打算考取的学校(郑州大学),请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 郑州大学是一所具有70年历史的重点大学。
2. 校园环境优美、绿树环绕。
3. 学校设备优良,有图书馆、计算机室和实验室等。
4. 学校有很多经验丰富的优秀教师。
注意:1. 词数100字左右。
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节。
3.至少使用3个定语从句。
注意:把优秀的作文贴在教室给大家欣赏
Homework
THANKS
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