摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦“购物”话题写作,从话题词汇(如size, pay)和佳句仿写(如it’s+adj.+to do sth句型)入手,通过经典范文模板、高分范文赏析到实战演练,搭建从基础积累到综合应用的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作技能。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过词汇句型储备夯实基础,结合范文结构分析(如“总—分—总”)提升思维品质,实战演练引导学生主动运用策略发展学习能力。例如高分范文赏析中对山东淄博期末题的体裁、时态分析及名师点评,既助学生理解写作要点,也为教师提供系统教学资源,提升教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
六年级下册 LJ
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Unit 7 Go Shopping
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we buy things in
different ways?
Period 5 2a—2b(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.恰当的;正确的 ________
proper
2.大小;尺码 ______
size
3.支付;付费 _____
pay
4.现金 ______
cash
5.产品;制品;商品 _________
product
6.方便的;便捷的 ____________
convenient
7.马上;立刻 ____________
right away
8.降价出售;出售;上市 _________
on sale
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s fun to go to the shops.(it’s+adj.+to do sth)
→仿写:买正确的东西是重要的。
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It’s important to buy the right things.
10.【教材原句】My mother often buys things on the internet, because online
shopping is very convenient.(because+从句)
→仿写:我买这本书,因为里面有有趣的故事。
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I buy the book because it has interesting stories inside.
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11.【教材原句】She doesn’t have to spend much time going to the shopping
malls.(spend time doing sth)
→仿写:我经常在周末花时间在商场里挑选衣服。
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I often spend time choosing clothes in the mall at/on weekends.
12.【教材原句】However, it is important to buy what you need, not what you
want.(what+从句)
→仿写:我们仅仅需要买我们真正需要的东西。
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We only need to buy what we really need.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over online food ordering
(点明话题).
There are both advantages and disadvantages.(利弊对比型文章常用开头语)
On the plus side, it’s very convenient. We can order food anywhere, anytime
with our phones. Also, there are many food options from different restaurants.
(用“On the plus side… Also…”列举原因)
But, as the saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”(列举弊端常用开头语)
The quality of food might not be good. Sometimes, the food may look different
from the pictures. Also, spending too much money is easy when ordering online.
In my opinion, we should make the most of its benefits and minimize the
drawbacks to use it better.(在段尾进行总结)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025山东淄博期末]请根据图示信息写一篇不少于80个词的英语短文,介
绍自己的购物习惯与喜好,不要出现本人真实姓名和学校等信息。
I’m a student from Sunshine Middle School.
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:购物的习惯与爱好等,并讲述喜欢网上购物或线下购物的原因
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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I’m a student from Sunshine Middle School. I
enjoy shopping very much.
Usually, I go shopping with my parents once a
month ① .We often go to the mall near our home
because it’s convenient ② .Sometimes, I also shop
online, especially when I’m busy or looking for
something specific ② .I think online shopping is great ________________________________
①once a month表明作
者与家人去商场购物的
频率;
②用because、when及
what引导不同的从句使
正文部分句式丰富多
样,行文流畅;
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because I can buy things with low prices easily ② .My
favourite things to buy are books and clothes. I
choose what I like and what suits me best ② .
Shopping is fun, and I always look forward to
③ it! ③结尾简短有力,用短
语look forward to表明喜
爱购物之情,与首段
enjoy shopping呼应。
这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的三段式写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介
绍了自己的相关情况。文中once a month、convenient、especially、be busy、
look for、choose、look forward to等词汇和短语表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的
能力,这些高频词汇和短语及复合句也是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025福建龙岩期末】正确的消费观很重要,学校常常利用各种平台引导大
家形成正确的消费观念。你们学校的英文校刊本月的征文主题是“How to Be a
Smart Shopper”。请你结合下面的图示信息,给校刊投稿。
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注意事项:(1)文中须包含以上图示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数60左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Be a Smart Shopper
Shopping wisely can help us save money and buy better things. And how
can you be a smart shopper? Let me share some tips!_______
Follow these steps, and you will become a smart shopper!
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【参考范文】
How to Be a Smart Shopper
Shopping wisely can help us save money and buy better things.And
how can you be a smart shopper? Let me share some tips!
First, make a shopping list before you go out.You should only buy
what’s on the list, because this can help you save time and
money.Second, check the ads to look for things on sale in the shop.That
way, you can find some cheap and good things.Third, always check the
prices of the same things at different stores.Finally, share something
with your friends so that you won’t spend money buying the same thing.
Follow these steps, and you will become a smart shopper!
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Value statement: Buy what you need, not what you want.
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