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英 语
六年级下册 LJ
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Unit 6 Eat Well
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we make healthy
eating choices?
Period 5 2a—2c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.羊肉 ________
2.饺子 __________
3.有……味道;尝 _______
4.渴的 _________
5.搭配;相配 _________
6.均衡的饮食 _______________
mutton
dumpling
taste
thirsty
go with
balanced diet
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】 It is easy to feel sleepy and find it hard to focus on our work
or studies if we don’t eat breakfast.(find it+adj.+to do sth)
→仿写:我发现对我来说很容易感觉疲倦和增加体重。
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I find it easy for me to feel tired and gain weight.
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8.【教材原句】Maybe they don’t feel hungry in the morning, or they are too
busy to eat anything.(too… to…)
→仿写:对我来说,它们太甜了,我喝不了。
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They are too sweet for me to drink.
【解析】知识拓展
sweet意为“糖果”时,作可数名词;sweet也可泛指“甜食;甜点”,此时其既
可作可数名词,也可作不可数名词。
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’d like to talk about why healthy eating habits are important. A
balanced diet gives us energy to study and exercise.It also helps us stay away
from diseases. (点明健康饮食的重要性)
My good habit is eating breakfast every day and drinking enough water.I
often choose fresh fruits and vegetables.(介绍自己的好的饮食习惯) However, I
sometimes eat junk food like chips after school. I also drink too much cola
instead of sugar-free drinks. They are so sweet.(介绍自己的坏的饮食习惯) To
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improve, I’ll try to eat more whole grains and fish.I plan to replace snacks with
nuts and fruits.From now on, I’ll choose sugar-free drinks and limit junk food to
once a week.(介绍自己的计划)
Let’s grow strong together! Thank you!#1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江西上饶期中]为了让减肥的小伙伴们吃得好,国家卫健委发布了
《儿童青少年肥胖食养指南(2024年版)》。不健康的饮食会导致很多生理和心
理问题,假设你是李华,请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文,向大家介绍你的
饮食习惯。
写作要点:(1)How many good eating habits do you have? What are they?
(2)Do you have poor eating habits? And why do you have them?
(3)What problems do the poor eating habits cause? And how to improve?
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要求:(1)条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Eating Habits
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua._____
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称
内容要点:好的饮食习惯、坏的饮食习惯及原因、问题及改进措施
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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My Eating Habits
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I have
some good eating habits. Also, I have
some bad ones. ________________________________
①Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly是衔接
词,借此分别阐述了自己的好的饮
食习惯,层次分明,逻辑连贯。
②have breakfast with eggs and
milk和eat vegetables and fruits等细
节,生动描绘了健康饮食的日常实
践,使内容真实可信。
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Firstly ① , I always have breakfast with
eggs and milk ②.Secondly ① , I eat
vegetables and fruits ②every day.Thirdly ① ,
I don’t have sugary drinks.Instead ③ , I
drink enough water. However, I sometimes
eat fast food when I’m busy because it’s
convenient. So I find it easy for me to
feel tired and gain weight ④ .To improve
health, I should choose healthy snacks and
plan meals ahead.
Let’s build good habits together! ③Instead的使用使句子之间的逻辑关
系更加清晰,增强了表达的连贯
性。
④“find it+ adj.+ for sb to do sth”
这一结构的运用,提升了句式的复
杂度,展现了作者一定的语法功
底。
续表
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这篇习作采用“总—分—总”结构,首段以“I have some good eating habits. Also,
I have some bad ones.”总起,开门见山地点明主题;中间段落通过Firstly、
Secondly、Thirdly分述具体习惯,并用However转折,引出问题,形成对比;结
尾以“Let’s build good habits together!”升华主题,呼吁行动。全文框架清晰,
层层递进,符合英语作文的写作逻辑。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
如今,很多人喜欢在网上点餐。老师要求你们在下周一的英语课上就网上点
餐这一现象,谈谈它的利与弊。请你根据写作要求,谈谈你的看法。
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Advantages
(优点) 方便(convenient)快捷,品种多样,节省时间
Disadvantages
(缺点) 塑料包装袋(plastic bags)对环境(environment)不利,经
常吃外卖食品(takeaway)对健康不好
Your idea ……
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写作要求:(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
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【参考范文】
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it’s good to order food online because it is
convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and
delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from.
However, other people have different ideas. They say eating
takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh
food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
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【解析】温馨提示
动名词作主语,表示一个整体的时候,谓语动词一般用第三人称单数形式。
Value statement: Food is life.
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