摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Unit 5 Amazing nature”主题展开写作训练,从话题词汇(如“rainforest”“species”)和佳句仿写(如教材原句到“蓝鲸是海洋中最大的动物之一”的仿写)入手,搭建从词句储备到经典范文模板、高分范文赏析再到实战演练的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握自然主题写作的脉络。
其亮点在于分阶训练模式,通过话题词汇积累和佳句仿写提升语言能力,范文模板中“First/Second列举行为、For one thing/For another列举措施”的逻辑结构培养思维品质,实战演练(如“Save Water, Save Life”演讲稿)强化学习能力。学生能系统掌握写作技巧,教师可借助结构化资源提高教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 WY
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Unit 5 Amazing nature
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.破坏 ________________
2.雨林 ____________
3.物种 _________
4.气候 _________
5.在……中起作用 _____________________
6.砍伐 __________
7.停止做某事 ________________
8.诸如;例如 _____________________
destroy/attack
rainforest
species
climate
play a part/role in
cut down
stop doing sth
such as/for example
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It is famous for the world’s highest mountain.(be famous for)
→仿写:这片森林以其古树而闻名。
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This forest is famous for its ancient trees.
10.【教材原句】The plateau is quieter than the big cities.(比较级)
→仿写:珠穆朗玛峰比世界上任何山峰都高。
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Mount Qomolangma is higher than any other mountain in the world.
11.【教材原句】I’m proud to say that I’m from one of the most beautiful places
in the world.(one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
→仿写:蓝鲸是海洋中最大的动物之一。
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The blue whale is one of the largest animals in the ocean.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
In recent days, we’re facing a growing problem—we are damaging nature
badly. (提出话题)
First, we cut down forests, and this takes away animals’ homes.Second, we
dump waste into rivers and lakes, and this pollutes water and harms the creatures
living there.(用First及Second列举人类破坏自然的行为)
We need to take action.(过渡句,引出具体行动) For one thing, we
should plant more trees.For another, we must stop throwing litter into
water.Finally, we can spread ideas about protecting nature through education.
(用For one thing、For another及Finally列举保护自然的措施)
Let’s work together to protect nature. I believe we can create a better future
for the earth and all living things.(尾段进行总结)#1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025广东佛山质检]假如你刚从华山旅游归来,你的同班同学Daniel听说之
后非常向往。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文向Daniel介绍一下华山。
要点:
1.位于陕西境内;
2.由五座山峰组成;
3.以地势险峻而闻名,有许多悬崖峭壁和羊肠小道;
4.推荐活动:爬山,晚上在山顶野营,早上看日出……
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写作要求:
1.必须包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.词数80左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:山峰peak 悬崖cliff
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Huashan Mountain, an Amazing Wonderland
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第二人称为主
内容要点:介绍华山地理位置、各峰特色以及可以进行的活动。
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列#2.2
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Huashan Mountain, an Amazing
Wonderland
Huashan Mountain lies in ① Shaanxi
Province, northwest China. It is one of the
most well-known mountains in China and is
famous for its natural cliffs ② and narrow
paths ② .
Huashan Mountain is made up of five
great peaks. The East Peak is the best place
to see the sunrise. The North Peak is famous
for its sea of clouds. ________________________________
①使用lies in(位于)准确表达山
脉的地理位置。
②用 natural cliffs
(天然悬崖)、narrow paths
(狭窄山道)精准概括华山的自
然特点;highest peak
(最高峰)、a huge rock shaped
like a lotus flower(形似莲花的
巨石)等短语及结构具象化山峰
特征,画面感强。
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The South Peak is the highest peak ② of
Huashan. The West Peak has a huge rock
shaped like a lotus flower ② . The Middle
Peak is at the centre of the five peaks.
You can climb Huashan Mountain and
camp on the top at night. In this way, you
can watch the wonderful sunrise in the
morning.What an amazing view it will be! ③ I
truly recommend that you visit Huashan
Mountain. ③最后用 “What an amazing
view it will be!” 增强情感色
彩,与前文的客观描述形成对
比,突出推荐的语气。
续表
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这篇范文词汇选择贴合主题且实用,既用lies in、is famous for等固定搭配准确
描述地理位置与特征,又以natural cliffs、a lotus flower等词汇增强画面感,还
通过 well-known、famous避免重复。句式上以简单句为主,逻辑清晰,穿插感叹
句和祈使句调节语气,长短句结合使节奏舒缓,兼顾信息传递与表达效果。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025福建三明期中】水是生命之源,保护水资源是我们每个人的责任。学
校将举办以“Save Water, Save Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示,
写一篇演讲稿,呼吁更多同学节约用水,共同保护我们的蓝色家园。词数70词左右。
Save Water, Save Life
1.the source (来源) of…
2.be valuable for…
3.endless (无穷尽的) 1.turn off the tap
2.reuse water
3.collect rainwater
…
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注意事项:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,标题和开头已给出,不计入总
词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
Save Water, Save Life
Hello, everyone! As we all know,__________________________
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【参考范文】
Save water, Save Life
Hello, everyone! As we all know, water is the source of life and
very valuable for us all.However, fresh water resources are not endless
and are becoming scarce.
We should take action to save water.First, remember to turn off the
tap after using it.Second, we can reuse water, like using the water
from washing vegetables to water flowers.Third, collecting rainwater is
also a good way.
Let’s save water together to protect our blue planet!
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