Unit 4 A 课时同步训练-大单元话题与写作-【初中必刷题】2025-2026学年八年级下册英语同步课件(外研版·新教材)
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摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“帮助他人”主题写作,系统涵盖话题词汇、佳句仿写、范文模板及实战演练,通过链接教材知识(如public详解见狂K重点)、教材原句仿写(如There must be…句型),构建从基础储备到综合应用的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作技能。
其亮点在于分阶段辅导与核心素养融合,语言能力方面通过话题词汇、佳句仿写提升表达准确性,思维品质上借助“总—分—总”范文结构培养逻辑思维,如高分范文赏析中用“not only… but also…”升华主题。采用中考真题演练(如2025北京一模题),学生能提升写作能力与应试技巧,教师可直接利用系统资源优化教学流程。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 WY
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Unit 4 Helping out
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.公众的;大众的 ________
public
【解析】链接狂K
public的详细讲解见狂K重点P18。
2.无家可归的 __________
3.反对 _________
homeless
against
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4.好意;亲善;友善 __________
5.温暖 ________
6.服务 _______
7.筹集资金 _____________
8.由于……的帮助 _____________________
goodwill
warmth
serve
raise money
with the help of...
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】There must be something for me to do.(There must be…)
→仿写:一定有我们能做的事来帮助这些无家可归的动物。
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There must be something we can do to help these homeless animals.
10.【教材原句】Let’s give him a hand.(give sb a hand)
→仿写:他拿的箱子太多了,所以我帮了他一把。
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He was carrying too many boxes, so I gave him a hand.
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11.【教材原句】I still remembered the warmth of those helping hands 12 years
ago.(the warmth of)
→仿写:社区支持的温暖帮助这家人度过了艰难时期。
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_________________
The warmth of the community’s support helped the family go through a
difficult time.
12.【教材原句】Love leads to love, and so creates a circle of goodwill and
kindness.(lead to)
→仿写:帮助那些有需要的人可以营造一个更友好和谐的社会。
_______________________________________________________________________
__________
Helping those in need can lead to a friendlier and more harmonious
society.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Helping othersis a good act. When we give others a hand, we feel good and
happy.(开门见山,点明主题)
There are lots of little things that we can do to help others.(常用的列举式
开头语) For example, we can sit down with our friends and listen to their
stories when they feel down.Or we may give our seats to those in need when
we are in a crowded bus.(用For example和Or列举具体事例)
Helping others is an easy act. What we have to do is just to have a willing
heart.By helping others, we help to build a better world.(呼应开头,升华主题)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Helping Builds a Better World”为题的征文活
动。请你用英语写一篇短文向专栏投稿,叙述一次你帮助别人解决问题、克服困
难的经历及感悟。
要求:1.词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
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第一步 审
体裁:记叙文
时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:帮助他人的经历及感悟
写作结构:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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Helping Builds a Better World
In our daily lives, a simple act of helping
can make a big difference ①.
Last summer vacation, I went to a community
library to do volunteer work. One day, I noticed a
little girl sitting ② at a table. She was staring at a
pile of maths homework with tears in her eyes.I
walked over and asked her what was wrong.I sat
down beside her and started to explain the
problems one by one. After about an hour, she
finally finished all her maths homework. ③ ________________________________
①make a big difference的使
用为文章增添色彩;
②notice sb doing sth结构使
叙事过程更加生动形象;
③讲述帮助别人的经历,逻
辑性较强,有层次性;
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This experience made me realise that helping
others not only solves their problems but also
④ gives me a great sense of satisfaction. ④“not only… but also…”结
构的使用总结了帮助他人的
意义,升华主题。
这篇习作运用了“总——分——总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,
全面讲述了自己帮助别人的经历。文中make a big difference、walked over、one
by one、“not only… but also…”等表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些
短语和句型也是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025北京一模】某英语网站正在开展以“青春志愿”为主题的征文活
动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享你生活中一次难忘
的志愿服务经历,并谈谈你的收获。词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入
总词数)。
提示词语:help、take part in、kindness、satisfaction
内容提示:1.What was your unforgettable volunteer experience?
2.What have you learnt from this experience?
Volunteering is a good way to spend our free time.____
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【参考范文】
Volunteering is a good way to spend our free time.I would like to
share my experience as a volunteer.
Last term, I took part in an after-school reading programme.I met a
girl named Lisa who was a slow reader.I tried different methods to help
her.At first, I chose some books which she was interested in and read
with her patiently.Gradually, she became confident and began reading
faster.I could see the joy on her face when she made progress, which
gave me a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement.
From this experience, I’ve learnt that being a volunteer not only
brightens others’ days but also enriches our own lives.So, let’s
always be ready to spread kindness and love!
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