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沪教版五四七下unit 3作文专练 A thank you letter 题目一：感谢信（感谢朋友在你生病时的帮助） 题目： 假设你是李华，上周你生病在家休息，你的好朋友王明每天帮你记笔记、发作业，还打电话鼓励你。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 描述你生病的情况（时间、症状、不能上学的原因）； 2. 描述王明具体帮助你的行为（至少2点）； 3. 表达你的感谢，并表示以后也会同样帮助他。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为感谢信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写感谢信的核心是：事情要具体、行为要清楚、感谢要真诚。这是学生日常生活中可能真实发生的场景，容易写出真情实感。信中要详细写出朋友做了什么，让对方感受到“我的帮助被看见了、被记住了”。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：描述生病的情况 写出你什么时候生病、有什么症状、为什么不能上学。例如：“Last Monday, I caught a bad cold. I had a high fever and a terrible cough. The doctor asked me to stay at home for three days.” 这段让读者了解背景，理解为什么你需要帮助。 第二段：描述朋友的具体帮助 至少写出2点帮助行为。例如：“First, you took careful notes for me in every class. You wrote down all the important points. Second, you sent me photos of the homework every day so I could finish it on time. Third, you called me every evening to cheer me up.” 行为越具体，感谢信越真诚。 第三段：表达感谢并回报 直接表达感谢，例如：“Thank you so much for everything you did for me.” 然后表示以后你也会同样帮助他：“I will never forget your kindness. When you need help, I will be there for you, too.” 最后可以祝福朋友。 三、语言与格式提醒 感谢信格式：称呼（Dear Wang Ming,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。用过去时描述已经发生的事情。表达感谢时可以用“I really appreciate...”“Thanks to your help...”“I am so lucky to have a friend like you.”等句式。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to thank you for your help when I was sick. · Last week, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home. · You did so many things for me, and I want to say thank you. · First, you took careful notes for me in every class. · Second, you sent me photos of the homework every day. · You also called me to cheer me up. · Thanks to your help, I didn’t fall behind. · I will never forget your kindness. · I hope I can help you in the same way one day. · catch a cold, stay at home, take notes, fall behind, cheer up 高分范文 Dear Wang Ming, I am writing to thank you for your help when I was sick last week. Last Monday, I caught a bad cold. I had a high fever and a terrible cough. The doctor asked me to stay at home for three days. I was worried because I didn’t want to fall behind in my studies. But you were there for me. You did so many things for me, and I want to say thank you. First, you took careful notes for me in every class. You wrote down all the important points so I could read them later. Second, you sent me photos of the homework every day through WeChat. That helped me finish my homework on time. You also called me every evening to cheer me up and tell me what happened at school. Your calls made me feel less lonely. Thank you so much for everything you did for me. Thanks to your help, I didn’t fall behind at all. I will never forget your kindness. When you need help, I will be there for you, too. I am so lucky to have a friend like you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：感谢信（感谢英语老师的耐心辅导） 题目： 假设你是张丽，上学期你的英语成绩不太好，后来在英语李老师的耐心帮助下，你的成绩提高了。请你给李老师写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 描述你之前英语学习的困难（如单词记不住、不敢开口说等）； 2. 描述老师具体帮助你的方法（至少2点）； 3. 表达感谢，并说明你会继续努力。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为感谢信，对象是老师。初一学生写给老师的感谢信核心是：尊敬、真诚、具体。信中要写出老师具体做了什么，以及这些帮助带来了什么改变。语气要恭敬但不夸张，感谢要发自内心。这个题目也让学生学会表达对老师的感恩之情。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：描述之前的学习困难 写出你在英语学习上遇到了什么问题。例如：“Before, I had many problems with English. I couldn’t remember new words for more than two days. When I tried to speak English, I was too shy to say a word.” 这段让老师回忆起你的情况，也让感谢更有针对性。 第二段：描述老师的具体帮助 至少写出2点老师帮助你的具体方法。例如：“First, you taught me a good way to remember words — by making word cards and reviewing them every day. Second, you encouraged me to speak in class. You never laughed at my mistakes. You always said, ‘Try again, you can do it.’ Third, you gave me extra exercises after school and helped me check my answers.” 这些细节能让老师感到自己的付出被学生看见了。 第三段：表达感谢并承诺努力 感谢老师的付出，例如：“Thank you for being so patient and kind to me.” 然后承诺会继续努力：“I will keep practicing and I won’t let you down.” 最后祝福老师。 三、语言与格式提醒 感谢信格式：称呼（Dear Ms. Li,）、正文、结束语（Yours respectfully, 或 Yours sincerely,）、签名。语气要尊敬，用“you taught me”“you encouraged me”等句式。用一般现在时描述现状，一般过去时描述之前的情况。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to thank you for your patient help with my English. · Before, I had many problems with English. · I couldn’t remember new words for long. · I was too shy to speak in class. · You taught me how to learn better. · First, you showed me how to use word cards. · Second, you encouraged me to speak and never laughed at my mistakes. · You also gave me extra help after school. · Thanks to you, my English has improved a lot. · I will keep working hard and never give up. · patient, remember words, too shy, encourage, make progress 高分范文 Dear Ms. Li, I am writing to thank you for your patient help with my English. Before, I had many problems with English. I couldn’t remember new words for more than two days. Every time I tried to remember, I would forget them quickly. I was also too shy to speak in class. When you asked me questions, my face turned red and I couldn’t say a word. But you never gave up on me. You taught me how to learn better. First, you showed me how to use word cards. You told me to review the cards every morning and evening. That really helped me remember words. Second, you encouraged me to speak in class. You always said, “Don’t be shy. Try again. You can do it.” You never laughed at my mistakes. After school, you also gave me extra exercises and helped me check my answers one by one. Thanks to you, my English has improved a lot. Now I can remember more than 20 new words a week, and I am not afraid to speak in class. I will keep working hard and never let you down. Thank you for being such a wonderful teacher. Yours respectfully, Zhang Li 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $