内容正文:
报道
时态:一般过去时
注意:语言客观,避免使用第一人称I,使用 we我们,teacher老师,student学生,audience观众,participants参与者,this activity/event 这项活动。
· 标题 点明事件 用简练的语言概括报道核心。
注意: 标题应居中,首字母大写,力求吸引人。
· 导语(第一段) 5W1H某人在某时某地做了某事
开篇第一段,概括事件最重要的信息(When, Where, Who, What, Why, How)。
注意: 导语是全文的缩影,要确保信息完整、语言精炼。
• In order to... , our school successfully organized a... on...
为确保我校顺利 ... ,,我们组织了一场关于...的专题活动。
• Last Sunday witnessed见证了... , which aimed to...
上周日举行的 ... ,旨在……
• ... was launched/hosted in... , drawing the attention of...
...在...举行,成功吸引了广泛关注...
make students have a better understanding of...为了让学生更好地了解...
raise our awareness of ...提高我们...的意识
promote Chinese culture弘扬中华文化
inspire students ' interest in...激发对...的兴趣
strengthen our bodies增强体魄
reduce our study pressure 减轻学习压力
improve enthusiasm for...提高...的热情
· 正文(第二段) 细节与过程
按时间或逻辑顺序,详细描述事件的经过、亮点和参与者的表现。
注意: 描述要生动具体,可引用具体人物或细节,使用过去时态。
开场活动:an opening speech开幕致辞
an opening ceremony 开幕式
dance performance 舞蹈表演
• The activity kicked off with... , which was followed by... 活动以 ... 拉开序幕,随后展开……
• The event kicked off with以...开始 [开场环节],which immediately/at once/right away captured/caught everyone's attention.活动以[开场环节]拉开帷幕,立刻吸引了所有人的注意。
• What impressed the audience most was [令人印象深刻之处], which drew thunderous applause. (最让观众印象深刻的是[某处],赢得了雷鸣般的掌声。)
• The day was filled with various exciting activities, ranging from ... to ...这一天充满了各种令人兴奋的活动,从...到...
• During the event, participants poured their efforts into...在活动期间,参与者们倾注了大量努力……
• Despite the scorching sun/long course, no one gave up.尽管烈日当空/赛程漫长,却无人放弃。
• First,the activity began with__ . In addition, (补充活动内容). The highlight of the activity was , which everyone truly enjoyed.本次活动的亮点是,大家都非常享受。
· 结语 反响与意义
总结事件的结果、收获、反响或意义。
注意: 结尾部分可适当升华,点明活动的教育意义或社会价值。
• Through this activity, we have learned the importance of...
• Not only did the event... , but it also...该事件不仅...,还...
• It was widely agreed that the event was both meaningful and enjoyable.与会者普遍认为该活动既富有意义又令人愉悦。
• The activity turned out或proved to be a great success.该活动最终取得了巨大成功。
• With the students' active participation(参与) and teachers' enthusiastic(热情的/warm) support, the activity was undoubtedly(毫无疑问) a success. This activity was highly spoken of(高度评价) by students, for it motivated(=encouraged) them to______(影响).)• 在学生积极参与和教师热情支持下,本次活动无疑取得了圆满 毫无疑问 。(该活动广受学生好评,因为它激励了他们______
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了春游活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)活动内容;
(2)活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考范文:
A Memorable Spring Outing
Last Sunday, all Senior One teachers and students took part in a wonderful spring outing organized by our school.上周日,我校全体高一师生共同参与了由学校组织的精彩春季郊游活动。
Early in the morning, we set off for 出发;开始;赛跑;动身前往 a nearby scenic spot风景名胜区 where we were greeted by fresh air 清新空气and blooming flowers绽放的花. We participated in various outdoor games各种户外游戏, like tug-of-war 拔河 and relay races接力赛, which brought us closer together使我们更加紧密地团结在一起. After that, some students took a leisurely walk悠闲地散步 to admire the natural beauty欣赏自然美景 while others flew kites high in the sky.
This activity not only allowed us to get close to nature and relax from heavy study, but also strengthened the friendship between teachers and students.这项活动不仅让我们得以亲近自然、从繁重的学习中放松身心,还增进了师生之间的友谊。
句式积累:
Early in the morning, we set off for +地点,where we were greeted by fresh air and blooming flowers(定语从句).早上我们从某地出发,我们被清新的空气和盛开的花朵所迎接
We participated in various games, like .... and.... , which brought us closer together. 我们参加了各种游戏,像活动1和活动2,使我们更加紧密地团结在一起(定语从句)
After that, some students +活动while others +活动. 在那之后,一些学生做了什么,与此同时,其他学生在做什么。
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