2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习机器人的价值续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Gabriel had always been fascinated by robots. His mother, however, did not think much of it. She often criticized him, urging him to focus on his schoolwork instead of those“ useless machines”, as she called them. She wanted him to spend more time on his books, and less time lost in the world of robotics. He, however, always worked quietly on parts, trying to create inventions that could solve everyday problems. One day, Gabriel came back from school, bursting through the front door, holding a shining award in his hand. The gas detection robot he had built for months had just won first place in the regional competition. His heart raced as he imagined his mother would be proud this time. “Mom! Look! I won!” he cried. His mother, standing at the kitchen counter, looked briefly. She sighed, “That’s nice, Gabriel, but I still don’t see what good it will do you. It’s not going to help you with your grades or get you into college. You need to focus on something more practical.” Her voice showed no interest. Gabriel remained quiet, determined to prove that what he was doing had value. One evening, as the delicious smell of dinner floated through the house, an unexpected danger was quietly closing. Gabriel’s mother had been busy in the kitchen but had forgotten to turn off the gas. Unaware of the coming threat, she had wandered into the living room, settling down comfortably in front of the TV. The gas continued to escape, silently filling the air. The house was on the edge of a disaster. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Gabriel loved robotics while his mom disapproved--- _________________ --- Gabriel won a competition with his gas detection robot--- _________________ --- Mom still thought his invention was useless and impractical--- _________________ --- A gas leakage accident happened at home 4. 细节问答 What was Gabriel’s hobby? ：___________________________________ Why did Gabriel’s mother criticize his hobby?：_________________________________ What invention helped Gabriel win the regional competition?：________________________________________________ How did Gabriel’s mother react to his award?：__________________________________________ What accident happened to the family one evening?：_____________________________________________ What was Gabriel’s determination after his mom’s criticism?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 加布里埃尔痴迷机器人发明，母亲认为毫无用处，一心让他专注学业→_________________ →他耗时数月制作的气体检测机器人斩获地区比赛一等奖→_________________ →母亲依旧不认可，认为发明不实用、对升学无益→家中意外发生煤气泄漏，危机悄然降临→（续写）机器人报警化解危机→（续写）母亲彻底改观，认可孩子的热爱与天赋 6．情感线 Gabriel: passionate and persistent→___________→silent and determined→___________ Mom: disapproving and indifferent→___________→grateful and supportive 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. 衔接句1——What happened after the alarm? What did mom do? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. 衔接句2——How did mom feel and change? What was the ending? ________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：突然，一阵响亮的警报声响彻全屋。 →①机器人触发警报，惊醒看电视的母亲→②母亲恍然大悟是煤气泄漏，紧急关闭煤气、开窗通风→③成功化解致命危机，内心满是愧疚与震撼； 第二段：加布里埃尔的母亲轻轻抱着机器人，等待他放学回家。 →①母亲静静等待，反思自己此前的偏见与否定→②加布里埃尔回家后，母亲真诚道歉并夸赞他的发明→③母亲全力支持他的爱好，认可热爱与创造的价值。 四、段落续写（考场作答区） Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Gabriel（热爱发明、专注坚持、敢于实践、默默证明自我的少年）；Gabriel’s mother（片面固执、重视学业，最终知错能改、懂得理解孩子的母亲） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Gabriel loved robotics while his mom disapproved--- Gabriel kept creating practical invention silently --- Gabriel won a competition with his gas detection robot--- Mom refused to recognize his achievement and underestimated his invention --- Mom still thought his invention was useless and impractical--- Gabriel decided to prove the value of his inventions --- A gas leakage accident happened at home 4. 细节问答 What was Gabriel’s hobby? ：He was fascinated by robots and loved creating inventions to solve daily problems. Why did Gabriel’s mother criticize his hobby?：She thought robot inventions were useless, which distracted Gabriel from his schoolwork. What invention helped Gabriel win the regional competition?：His self-made gas detection robot won the first prize. How did Gabriel’s mother react to his award?：She showed no interest, thinking the invention was impractical and useless for his study and college admission. What accident happened to the family one evening?：Gabriel’s mother forgot to turn off the gas, causing gas leakage and bringing huge danger to the house. What was Gabriel’s determination after his mom’s criticism?：He was determined to prove the practical value of his robot inventions. What does the story tell us?：Every hobby and creation has its value, and we should not judge things superficially. Persistent passion will eventually prove its meaning. 5．情节线 加布里埃尔痴迷机器人发明，母亲认为毫无用处，一心让他专注学业→他始终坚持钻研，制作能解决生活问题的发明 →他耗时数月制作的气体检测机器人斩获地区比赛一等奖→他满心期待得到母亲的认可，却惨遭否定 →母亲依旧不认可，认为发明不实用、对升学无益→家中意外发生煤气泄漏，危机悄然降临→（续写）机器人报警化解危机→（续写）母亲彻底改观，认可孩子的热爱与天赋 6．情感线 Gabriel: passionate and persistent→expectant and excited→silent and determined→relieved and gratified Mom: disapproving and indifferent→shocked and frightened→grateful and supportive 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少年加布里埃尔痴迷机器人发明却不被母亲认可，他凭借自制气体检测机器人获奖，最终在一次煤气泄漏事故中，用自己的发明化解危机，让母亲彻底改观。 英文：Gabriel was crazy about robot inventions but was always disapproved by his mother. His self-made gas detection robot won a competition and finally saved the whole family from a gas leakage disaster, making his mother recognize the value of his passion. 8. 句式积累 状语从句：As the delicious smell of dinner floated through the house, an unexpected danger was quietly closing. 非谓语动词：Unaware of the coming threat, she had wandered into the living room, settling down comfortably in front of the TV. 宾语从句：She didn’t see what good his robot invention would do to him. 定语从句：The gas detection robot he had built for months had just won first place. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：不要片面评判他人的热爱与追求，坚持初心、潜心创造，热爱终会绽放价值，平凡的发明也能守护生活。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. 衔接句1——What happened after the alarm? What did mom do? The robot’s sharp alarm alerted Mom to the gas leakage. Shocked and scared, she took immediate measures to avoid the disaster and realized how valuable Gabriel’s invention was. Paragraph 2: Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. 衔接句2——How did mom feel and change? What was the ending? Feeling guilty and regretful, Mom waited for Gabriel, intended to apologize sincerely and fully support his robot hobby from then on. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：突然，一阵响亮的警报声响彻全屋。 →①机器人触发警报，惊醒看电视的母亲→②母亲恍然大悟是煤气泄漏，紧急关闭煤气、开窗通风→③成功化解致命危机，内心满是愧疚与震撼； 第二段：加布里埃尔的母亲轻轻抱着机器人，等待他放学回家。 →①母亲静静等待，反思自己此前的偏见与否定→②加布里埃尔回家后，母亲真诚道歉并夸赞他的发明→③母亲全力支持他的爱好，认可热爱与创造的价值。 四、段落续写（满分范文） Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. The sharp, continuous sound cut through the quiet room, instantly startling Gabriel’s mother. It was Gabriel’s gas detection robot that sounded the alarm. Realizing the terrifying gas leakage, she froze for a second out of fear. Immediately, she rushed to the kitchen, turned off the gas valve tightly and opened all the windows wide to let the toxic gas flow out. Thanks to the robot’s timely warning, the potential disaster was avoided completely. Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. Staring at the small but invaluable robot, she was filled with deep regret and guilt for dismissing his efforts and inventions before. When Gabriel returned home, she walked up to him, eyes full of apology and pride. She sincerely praised his great invention and told him she would never doubt his hobby again. From then on, she fully supported his robot creation, knowing that every earnest passion deserved respect and encouragement. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $