摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕Unit 7 Outdoor fun话题展开写作训练,从话题词汇(如hiking, picnic)、核心句型(如It takes sb some time to do sth)储备入手,通过教材原句仿写搭建基础,过渡到经典范文模板和高分范文赏析,最终以实战演练(如vlog脚本)实现知识应用,形成层层递进的学习支架。
其特色在于采用分层训练模式,通过“高分词句储备-范文模板-范文赏析-实战演练”四阶设计,培养学生语言能力(如仿写句型、运用话题词汇)和思维品质(如“审体裁、列结构”的写作步骤)。例如佳句仿写环节链接教材原句,范文赏析拆解写作框架,助力学生系统提升写作能力,同时为教师提供结构化教学资源,提高教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 YL
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Unit 7 Outdoor fun
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration(Ⅱ)& Assessment & Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.担心的 _________
2.幸运地 _________
3.徒步旅行 ________
4.野餐 ________
5.出发 _________
worried
luckily
hiking
picnic
set off
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6.查明;弄清 __________
find out
【解析】链接狂K
find out的详细讲解见狂K重点P38。
7.为……感到骄傲 _____________
8.最好 ____________
be proud of
had better
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】At first, I could not even stand up on my skates.(at first)
→ 仿写:起初,我觉得划船很无聊。
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At first, I thought rowing a boat was very boring.
10.【教材原句】It took us about three hours to get to the top.(It takes/took sb
some time to do sth)
→ 仿写:我花了好几个月学习如何骑马。
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It took me several months to learn how to ride a horse.
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11.【教材原句】I went camping for the first time last weekend.(for the first
time)
→ 仿写:上周末我第一次尝试自己徒步旅行。
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Last weekend, I tried hiking on my own for the first time.
12.【教材原句】It was a great chance to be close to nature.(a chance to do sth)
→ 仿写:我在夏令营期间有机会骑马。
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I had a chance to ride a horse during the summer camp.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Last Saturday, our class had a trip to the park.. .(交代时间、地点、人物、
事件等)Most of us took part in the trip.Wang Tao and Li Ming were ill, so
they didn’t go there.(说明两人没有参加活动的原因)
We met at the school gate at eight in the morning. (交代集合时间和地点)
Then we went to the park on foot. (交代交通方式) First we played games
and chatted there. Then we had a picnic at noon. After that, we sang songs
together and took some photos.(介绍主要活动) We went back to school at
three in the afternoon. (交代返回的时间) We all felt tired but very happy.
(表达感受)
I hope to have a trip like this again. (提出希望)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025河北廊坊期末]假如你是李明,请你根据下
面记录的一日活动手账图写一篇英语日记。
注意:
1.日记中必须包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展;
2.日记中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Saturday, 7th June, Sunny
Today was a great Saturday.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:时间、地点、人物、活动、感受等
写作框架:
开头 点明日期、天气等
正文 详细叙述当天的主要活动
结尾 表达感受
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第二步 列
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Saturday, 7th June, Sunny
Today was a great Saturday. I got up ① at 7:00 in
the morning. After that, I had breakfast. Then I did
my homework ② .It took me about one hour to finish it.
③ Then I ate a delicious lunch. I ate vegetables and
fish.
In the afternoon, I visited a farm. I saw many
cows and other animals. There I rode a horse
and talked with ④ the farmers about their life. It was
so interesting! Later, I played basketball with my
friends. ________________________________
①②④⑤等短语体现了
作者运用语言的能力。
③运用“It takes/took sb
some time to do sth.”句
型,准确自然地描述了
活动用时。
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We had a lot of fun ⑤ .In the evening, I helped
my mum cook dinner at home. After dinner, we
watched a funny movie and enjoyed a relaxing time.
What a wonderful Saturday! ⑥ ⑥运用感叹句,表明了
作者愉快的心情。
本文围绕“时间线”组织语言,按“早上→下午→晚上”的顺序写作,描述具体活
动,展现一天的丰富与快乐,结构紧凑,层次分明。文中get up、do one’s
homework、talk with sb、have a lot of fun等短语及画线句型展现了作者运用语
言的能力。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025湖北武汉期末】假如你是李明,你的英国朋友Harry对你的生活很感兴
趣,尤其是你如何度过周末,你打算拍vlog告诉他。请根据以下提示问题,从天
气、活动及感受等方面描述你的周末生活,并拟写视频脚本。
How was the weather?
What did you see or do?
How did you feel about your weekend?
Something more about your weekend.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词
数)。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my weekend vlog!
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my weekend vlog!
It was sunny and warm last Saturday.In the morning, I helped my mum
clean the house, and then I rode my bike to the park with my
friends.The most interesting thing was flying kites! We made a
colourful kite together, and it flew so high that everyone cheered.I
felt proud because it was my first time making a kite.
On Sunday, I visited my grandparents.We cooked dumplings and
watched a funny movie.I felt relaxed and happy all weekend.Oh, one more
thing—I found a cute ladybug in the garden! It was a small but
wonderful surprise.
Thanks for watching! Bye for now!
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【解析】链接狂K
ride的详细讲解见狂K重点P4。
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