摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级下册Unit 1“Animal Friends”写作教学,从话题词汇(如save, clever, in danger)和教材原句仿写(如so表结果、be good for结构)切入,搭建从词句积累到篇章写作的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作逻辑。
其亮点在于通过“高分词句储备—经典范文模板—高分范文赏析—实战演练”四阶训练提升语言能力,如佳句仿写强化表达,范文赏析中“总-分-总”结构分析培养思维品质,实战演练(如企鹅自我介绍)锻炼学习能力。教师可借助系统资源高效教学,学生能提升写作技能和逻辑思维。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 人教版
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Unit 1 Animal Friends
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How are animals part of
our lives?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.救;保存 ______
2.聪明的 ______________
3.盲的 _______
4.处于危险之中 ___________
save
clever/smart
blind
in danger
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5.在某些方面 ______________
6.照顾 __________________________________
in some ways
take care of/look after/care for
【解析】链接狂K
care的详细讲解见狂K重点P2。
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】It’s very cold there, so they often stand close together.(so表结果)
→仿写:许多动物濒临灭绝,所以我们应该尽力保护它们。
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Many animals are in danger of extinction, so we should try to protect them.
8.【教材原句】It’s not good for them.(be good for)
→仿写:和动物们一起玩耍对孩子们有好处。
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Playing with animals is good for children.
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9.【教材原句】They are also a symbol of good luck here.(a symbol of)
→仿写:在一些文化中,人们认为蛇是智慧的象征。
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In some cultures, people consider the snake a symbol of wisdom.
10.【教材原句】They look after other elephants when they don’t feel well.
(look after)
→仿写:我一直照顾我们的宠物猫。
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I always look after our pet cat.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
My name is Han Lin. My uncle has a big farm.
There are many animals on the farm (介绍动物).They are white
sheep,brown cows and black horses (展开介绍动物).There are also . .some trees
and colourful flowers (介绍植物).I always . .help my uncle . .feed the animals
on the farm (帮助做事).It is meaningful for me to do such things (感受).
Do you see that house? That’s my uncle’s home. It’s beautiful.Do you like
my uncle’s farm (询问读者是否喜欢)?
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
某英文杂志向中学生征稿,请同学们以“My Favourite Animal”为题,根据以
下提示,介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。
(1)What animal do you like best?
(2)Why do you like it?
(3)…
要求:
(1)词数60左右;
(2)短文意思连贯,符合逻辑;
(3)所给提示词仅供选用。
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提示词:cute;clever;helpful;friendly
My Favourite Animal
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:介绍最喜欢的动物
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, the dog is my
favourite animal.
I like dogs best because ① they can not
only help guard our houses, but also ② be our
good friends. They are so clever that ③ they
can understand us when we talk to them. And
some dogs can help blind people in many
ways, and even save their lives when they are
in danger. ________________________________
①because 引导原因状语从句,
贴合本单元所学,提升句子档
次。
②“not only… but also…”用于
连接两个并列成分,可避免文
章出现过多的简单句,使文章语
言简洁流畅。
③“so… that…”结构的使用为文
章增加了亮点。
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In a word ④ , dogs are my favourite
animals, and they are our friends in my heart. ④In a word 总结全文,使文章
脉络清晰,结构完整。
这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,句式
高级,多处使用状语从句,提高了文章的可读性。文中in many ways、 be in
danger、 in my heart等凸显了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文
中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025浙江嘉兴期中】动物是人类的朋友。某动物园正在征集小小解说员。
假设你想应聘该职位,请根据以下名片内容,以企鹅的口吻进行自我介绍。
Look black and white; cute
Home Antarctica
Food fish and small sea animals
Ability swim fast
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Daily routine √6:30 a.m.get up
√7:00 a.m.have breakfast
√8:00 a.m.—9:00 a.m.take a walk
√3:00 p.m.—4:00 p.m.swim in the pool
√7:30 p.m.go to sleep
要求:(1)文章需要包括名片中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯;
(3)词数不少于70(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
续表
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Hello! I’m a penguin in this big zoo. I’m so happy to tell you something
about myself.
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【参考范文】
Hello! I’m a penguin in this big zoo. I’m so happy to tell you
something about myself.
I have black and white feathers, which make me look really cute,
right? My hometown is Antarctica, a cold but beautiful place. I love
eating fish and small sea animals—they’re so delicious! I’m good at
swimming fast in water.
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Let me tell you my daily routine. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day.
At 7:00 a.m., I have my breakfast. From 8:00 a.m. to 9:00 a.m., I take
a walk around my home. Then, from 3:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m., I enjoy
swimming in the pool. Finally, I go to sleep at 7:30 p.m.
Isn’t my life interesting? I hope you can come to see me often!
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Value statement:Animals are our best friends.
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