内容正文:
抢分12 书面表达(抢分专练)
抢分预测 抢分秘籍 抢分特训
3年考情
抢分依据
命题预测
2025年
选择英语项目化小组 (A/B/C) 写申请信
2024年
选送礼物及贺卡写话
2023年
给社区负责人写邮件,对 "时间管理" 培训提建议
1. 贴近学生生活,强调实用性:近年真题多围绕校园生活、社会实践、个人成长等场景展开。
注重考查应用文体(书信、演讲稿、倡议书、日记等),要求语言简洁、逻辑清晰。
2. 价值观引导与社会责任感:题目常隐含“立德树人”导向,如弘扬传统文化(如介绍节日习俗)、倡导环保意识、鼓励团队合作等。
3. 跨学科融合与思辨能力:部分话题要求结合科学知识(如环保措施)、社会现象分析(如网络使用利弊),体现学科交叉性。
4. 开放性题型增多:如“如何解决校园浪费问题”,需提出具体建议并论证。
1. 社会热点与本土文化:结合上海特色:城市发展(如“垃圾分类成效”)、科技应用(如“人工智能在生活中的角色”);
传统文化:非遗保护(如剪纸、沪剧)、传统节日(如春节习俗)相关话题。
2. 预测2026年可能方向:
校园生活:如何应对学业压力、社团活动经历;
社会议题:青少年运动健康、低碳生活方式;
创新题型:为学校公众号写一篇“未来职业规划”的推文。
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)
3.观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构)
4."How to"类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、解决方法题型万能模板
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
模板:
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状). Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with(面临着)A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with(应对) the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
六、说明利弊题型万能模板
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
模板:
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------(A的优点之一). Besides ------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
抢分01方法与哲理
1.(2026·上海闵行·二模)假设你是花园学校初三学生李华,班级窗外的大树上有几处鸟窝,每天下午四点到五点半之间,成群的小鸟在窗口外叽叽喳喳,热闹非凡。眼下正值学习的关键阶段,部分同学认为鸟鸣聒噪,严重影响了自己的学习,向学校提议拆除鸟窝;但也有同学觉得此举并无必要。学校希望广泛听取同学们的意见,请你给负责此事的张老师写一封信,阐述你的立场与理由,并为解决此问题提出你的一条建议。
(注意:1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄本卷语篇不得分。)
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2.(2026·上海徐汇·二模)The Senior High School Entrance Examination is approaching. From the list below, choose one sentence that you think motivates you the most at the moment. Write a short essay of at least 60 words explaining which sentence you’ve chosen and why you chose this sentence. 中考即将临近,请从所给句子中选择一句你觉得最能激励你的话,并用不少于60个词谈一谈你选了哪句话以及你选择的理由。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)
Focus on the process, the result will follow.
One exam cannot define my whole life, but I will give it my all.
My future self will thank me for the hard work I put in now.
It does not matter how slowly I go as long as I do not stop.
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3.(2026·上海崇明·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你校的“同伴心理互助社Peer Psychological Support Society”正在招募新一届社员,旨在帮助同学们缓解学习压力、解决成长中的小烦恼。假设你是初三学生李华,请写一封申请邮件给社团指导老师周老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你想要加入社团的原因;
(2)你能为社团带来的帮助;
(3)你对社团活动的一个小设想。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分;
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4.(2026·上海杨浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据所给信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
为响应每天不少于两小时的学校综合体育活动要求,学校大队部正在策划30分钟的大课间活动内容。现向全校征集“金点子”,让活动更有趣、更受同学们欢迎。假设你是李华,请给大队部的辅导员张老师写一封邮件,提出你的设想。你需要:
1. 推荐一项你最希望开展的体育活动或游戏;
2. 简要描述该活动并说明推荐理由;
3. 提出建议,以使活动更有趣、更受学生欢迎。
以下词汇仅供参考(非必选):
Word bank:rope skipping (跳绳) shuttlecock kicking (踢毽子) fitness dance (健身舞)
frisbee (飞盘) hopscotch (跳房子) Kungfu (功夫)
(注意:1. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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抢分02科学技术
5.(2026·上海松江·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
玫瑰花园学校的校园论坛上正在讨论关于人工智能(Artificial Intelligence)的话题,假设你是该校学生,请围绕主题帖(What role does AI play in your life? What do you expect from AI in the future?) 结合亲身实例写一个网络回帖,谈谈人工智能在生活或学习中带来的益处以及未来对人工智能的畅想。
The following words are for reference:
AI translation tool, AI study assistant (Deepseek, Doubao…), smart voice assistant, smart sweeping robot, smart watch, smart home system…
(注意:1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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6.(2026·上海黄浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华,你们学校正在组织以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲活动,请你围绕主题撰写一篇发言稿。内容可以涵盖以下问题:
1. What is your favorite digital device, and why?
2. How does technology change your life?
3. What advice would you give your classmates for using technology in a better way?
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. Today I want to talk about how technology changes our life.
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抢分03人与自然
7.(25-26九年级上·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Favorite Season”(以“我最喜欢的季节”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
(要求:内容包括季节特点、喜欢的原因以及在这个季节常做的事情。)
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8.(25-26九年级上·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 80 words about the topic “How to Protect the Environment”(以“如何保护环境”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文,标点符号不占格)。
要求:内容包括环境问题、保护环境的重要性以及具体做法。
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抢分04中华文化
9.(2026·上海·三模) 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他来信询问上海春节期间的一项传统活动。请你写一封邮件回复他,介绍一项你喜欢的上海春节传统活动 (如:逛豫园灯会、去城隍庙祈福、看舞龙舞狮、吃汤圆等)。
邮件内容包括:
1. 简单介绍这项活动 (时间、地点、人们做什么)。
2. 说明你喜欢这项活动的原因 (至少两点)。
3. 邀请他有机会来上海亲身体验。
要求:
- 邮件格式正确,词数80-100词。
- 内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确。
- 可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
- 豫园灯会 Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair
- 城隍庙 City God Temple
- 舞龙舞狮 dragon and lion dances
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10.(2026·上海宝山·一模)Write at least 60 words according to the situation given (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格)
假设你是初三学生李华。你校文化社团为推广中国传统文化,举办了活动海报设计征集比赛。现有两份设计进入决赛,社团正征集推荐意见。请你选择其中一份海报,给社团负责老师Mr. Chen写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 描述该海报的核心设计元素;
(2) 阐述你推荐它的理由。
(注意:1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2:照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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抢分12 书面表达(抢分专练)
抢分预测 抢分秘籍 抢分特训
3年考情
抢分依据
命题预测
2025年
选择英语项目化小组 (A/B/C) 写申请信
2024年
选送礼物及贺卡写话
2023年
给社区负责人写邮件,对 "时间管理" 培训提建议
1. 贴近学生生活,强调实用性:近年真题多围绕校园生活、社会实践、个人成长等场景展开。
注重考查应用文体(书信、演讲稿、倡议书、日记等),要求语言简洁、逻辑清晰。
2. 价值观引导与社会责任感:题目常隐含“立德树人”导向,如弘扬传统文化(如介绍节日习俗)、倡导环保意识、鼓励团队合作等。
3. 跨学科融合与思辨能力:部分话题要求结合科学知识(如环保措施)、社会现象分析(如网络使用利弊),体现学科交叉性。
4. 开放性题型增多:如“如何解决校园浪费问题”,需提出具体建议并论证。
1. 社会热点与本土文化:结合上海特色:城市发展(如“垃圾分类成效”)、科技应用(如“人工智能在生活中的角色”);
传统文化:非遗保护(如剪纸、沪剧)、传统节日(如春节习俗)相关话题。
2. 预测2026年可能方向:
校园生活:如何应对学业压力、社团活动经历;
社会议题:青少年运动健康、低碳生活方式;
创新题型:为学校公众号写一篇“未来职业规划”的推文。
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)
3.观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构)
4."How to"类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、解决方法题型万能模板
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
模板:
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状). Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with(面临着)A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with(应对) the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
六、说明利弊题型万能模板
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
模板:
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------(A的优点之一). Besides ------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
抢分01方法与哲理
1.(2026·上海闵行·二模)假设你是花园学校初三学生李华,班级窗外的大树上有几处鸟窝,每天下午四点到五点半之间,成群的小鸟在窗口外叽叽喳喳,热闹非凡。眼下正值学习的关键阶段,部分同学认为鸟鸣聒噪,严重影响了自己的学习,向学校提议拆除鸟窝;但也有同学觉得此举并无必要。学校希望广泛听取同学们的意见,请你给负责此事的张老师写一封信,阐述你的立场与理由,并为解决此问题提出你的一条建议。
(注意:1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄本卷语篇不得分。)
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m writing to share my opinion about the bird nests. I think we should keep them.
Firstly, birds are our friends and they bring nature to our school. Secondly, their singing can help us relax after long study. However, some students find the noise disturbing. To solve this problem, I suggest we close the classroom windows during 4:00—5:30 pm. This can reduce the noise while protecting the birds.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤:
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文 (书信),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:阐述观点、提出建议
确定人称:以第一人称 (I/we) 叙述
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、学校等隐私信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明写信目的,直接提出核心观点
主体段:分点阐述理由,并针对反对意见给出具体解决方案
结尾段:礼貌收尾,表达对建议的期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:阐述观点
核心表达:birds are our friends and they bring nature to our school/their singing can help us relax after long study/it teaches us to respect and protect nature等
要点二:解决方案
解决建议:close the classroom windows during 4:00—5:30 pm/move the bird nests to quiet areas/hold class meetings to tell students about birds等
2.(2026·上海徐汇·二模)The Senior High School Entrance Examination is approaching. From the list below, choose one sentence that you think motivates you the most at the moment. Write a short essay of at least 60 words explaining which sentence you’ve chosen and why you chose this sentence. 中考即将临近,请从所给句子中选择一句你觉得最能激励你的话,并用不少于60个词谈一谈你选了哪句话以及你选择的理由。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)
Focus on the process, the result will follow.
One exam cannot define my whole life, but I will give it my all.
My future self will thank me for the hard work I put in now.
It does not matter how slowly I go as long as I do not stop.
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【答案】
例文:
The sentence that motivates me most is “My future self will thank me for the hard work I put in now.”
This sentence reminds me that every effort counts. When facing the Senior High School Entrance Examination, it’s easy to feel stressed. But thinking about my future self, I know that the hard work now will pay off. It gives me the strength to keep going and strive for a better future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:选择一句激励的话并说明选择理由
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
两段式结构:
开头段:直接表明所选句子
主体段:阐述选择该句子的理由
[第三步:要点展开]
交代选择:The sentence that motivates me most is/Nothing motivates me more than this sentence等
选择理由:
提醒意义:reminds me that every effort counts/reminds me of the importance of effort等
面对压力情况:When facing the Senior High School Entrance Examination, it’s easy to feel stressed/When confronted with difficulties, it’s normal to feel anxious等
积极影响:gives me the strength to keep going and strive for a better future/inspires me to persevere and pursue a brighter tomorrow等
3.(2026·上海崇明·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你校的“同伴心理互助社Peer Psychological Support Society”正在招募新一届社员,旨在帮助同学们缓解学习压力、解决成长中的小烦恼。假设你是初三学生李华,请写一封申请邮件给社团指导老师周老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你想要加入社团的原因;
(2)你能为社团带来的帮助;
(3)你对社团活动的一个小设想。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分;
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】
例文
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 3 student. I want to join the Peer Psychological Support Society because I care about classmates’ mental health. Having faced study stress myself, I understand their feelings.
I can help by listening patiently and sharing stress-relief methods. Also, I am good at organizing activities.
I have a small idea for our activities. We can hold sharing meetings regularly to let students talk about their feelings together.
I hope to be a member. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:邮件(申请类),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:包含三个方面——加入社团的原因、能为社团带来的帮助、对社团活动的一个小设想
确定人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)
注意事项:不得出现任何校名、人名;词数不少于60;格式规范
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
第一段:自我介绍,说明想加入社团的原因
第二段:说明能为社团带来的帮助
第三段:提出对社团活动的一个小设想
第四段:表达期待和感谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:加入社团的原因
原因:care about classmates’ mental health/want to help classmates relieve study pressure/have experienced growing pains and want to support others等
要点二:能为社团带来的帮助
能力方面:help by listening patiently and sharing stress-relief methods/be easy-going and always ready to cheer people up/can offer warm support to members in need等
具体帮助:organizing activities/share my experience to comfort others等
要点三:对社团活动的设想
设想内容:hold sharing meetings regularly/hold a weekly “heart-to-heart sharing session”/invite students to talk about their worries in a safe place等
4.(2026·上海杨浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据所给信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
为响应每天不少于两小时的学校综合体育活动要求,学校大队部正在策划30分钟的大课间活动内容。现向全校征集“金点子”,让活动更有趣、更受同学们欢迎。假设你是李华,请给大队部的辅导员张老师写一封邮件,提出你的设想。你需要:
1. 推荐一项你最希望开展的体育活动或游戏;
2. 简要描述该活动并说明推荐理由;
3. 提出建议,以使活动更有趣、更受学生欢迎。
以下词汇仅供参考(非必选):
Word bank:rope skipping (跳绳) shuttlecock kicking (踢毽子) fitness dance (健身舞)
frisbee (飞盘) hopscotch (跳房子) Kungfu (功夫)
(注意:1. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】
例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am glad to share my idea. I suggest organizing a 30-minute frisbee activity during the break. It is easy to learn and safe. Students can play in teams, which helps build teamwork. To make it more fun, we could hold friendly competitions between classes. Also, playing cheerful music during the activity will create a lively atmosphere. I believe many students will enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(邮件),用一般现在时为主
明确要点:推荐一项体育活动/游戏、描述活动并说明理由、提出优化建议
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,词数不少于60词
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:礼貌问候并表明写信目的
主体:推荐活动、描述活动并说明理由、提出优化建议
结尾:表达期待与感谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:推荐体育活动
活动选择:frisbee/rope skipping/shuttlecock kicking等
要点二:活动描述与推荐理由
活动特点:easy to learn/safe/team-based等
推荐理由:helps build teamwork/relax students after long study/keep fit等
要点三:优化建议
趣味建议:hold friendly competitions/play cheerful music/prepare small prizes等
氛围效果:create a lively atmosphere/make the activity more popular等
抢分02科学技术
5.(2026·上海松江·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
玫瑰花园学校的校园论坛上正在讨论关于人工智能(Artificial Intelligence)的话题,假设你是该校学生,请围绕主题帖(What role does AI play in your life? What do you expect from AI in the future?) 结合亲身实例写一个网络回帖,谈谈人工智能在生活或学习中带来的益处以及未来对人工智能的畅想。
The following words are for reference:
AI translation tool, AI study assistant (Deepseek, Doubao…), smart voice assistant, smart sweeping robot, smart watch, smart home system…
(注意:1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】
例文
AI plays a helpful role in my life. I often use AI study assistants to explain difficult English grammar, which makes my study easier. My smart watch also reminds me to take breaks.
In the future, I hope AI can help me make better study plans. I also wish it could help my parents with some housework.
AI is changing our life. I believe it will bring more good changes to us.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文类短文,用一般现在时(现状)+一般将来时(畅想)为主
明确要点:人工智能在生活/学习中的作用、对未来人工智能的期待
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得出现姓名/校名等个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明AI在生活中的重要作用
主体段:分述AI在学习、生活中的具体帮助
结尾段:表达对未来AI的期待,总结AI的积极影响
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:AI在当下的作用
学习方面:use AI study assistants to explain difficult grammar / make study more efficient等
生活方面:smart watch reminds me to take breaks / smart sweeping robot saves housework time等
要点二:对未来AI的期待
期待内容:help make better study plans / assist parents with daily housework / provide more personalized life support等
要点三:总结感受
核心感受:AI is changing our life / will bring more good changes等
6.(2026·上海黄浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华,你们学校正在组织以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲活动,请你围绕主题撰写一篇发言稿。内容可以涵盖以下问题:
1. What is your favorite digital device, and why?
2. How does technology change your life?
3. What advice would you give your classmates for using technology in a better way?
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. Today I want to talk about how technology changes our life.
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【答案】Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. Today I want to talk about how technology changes our life. My favorite digital device is a smartphone—it helps me study online and connect with friends easily. Technology makes my life more convenient: I can learn courses at home and finish tasks like paying bills quickly.
To use technology better, I advise you to limit screen time to 2 hours a day and use it for learning more than playing games. Let’s enjoy technology wisely!
Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:最喜欢的数字设备及原因;科技如何改变生活;给同学的使用建议
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:问候与自我介绍,引出主题“科技改变生活”
主体段:分别介绍最喜欢的设备及原因、科技对生活的改变、合理使用科技的建议
结尾段:总结呼吁,表达美好祝愿
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜欢的数字设备及原因
设备选择:smartphone/tablet/laptop/e-reader/smartwatch等
原因:help me study online/connect with friends easily/convenient for learning/fun to use/save time等
要点二:科技如何改变生活
变化方面:convenience/learning/communication/tasks等
具体表现:learn courses at home/finish tasks like paying bills/keep in touch with family/stay updated with news等
要点三:给同学的建议
建议内容:limit screen time/use for learning more than playing games/take breaks/protect personal information等
理由:avoid eye strain/stay healthy/use technology wisely等
抢分03人与自然
7.(25-26九年级上·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Favorite Season”(以“我最喜欢的季节”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
(要求:内容包括季节特点、喜欢的原因以及在这个季节常做的事情。)
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Season
My favorite season is spring. The weather becomes warm and the trees turn green. Flowers start to bloom and the air smells fresh. I like spring because it brings new life and hope. In spring, I often go to the park with my family. We fly kites, take photos and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Spring makes me feel happy and relaxed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山点明最喜欢的季节;
第二步:描述春季天气、景色等特点,说明喜欢的原因;
第三步:举例说明在春季常做的活动,结尾表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite season最喜欢的季节
②new life新生命
③fly kites放风筝
④enjoy the beautiful scenery欣赏美景
[高分句型]
①The weather becomes warm and the trees turn green. (并列句)
②I like spring because it brings new life and hope. (原因状语从句)
8.(25-26九年级上·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 80 words about the topic “How to Protect the Environment”(以“如何保护环境”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文,标点符号不占格)。
要求:内容包括环境问题、保护环境的重要性以及具体做法。
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【答案】
How to Protect the Environment
Our environment is facing problems like air pollution, water pollution and too much waste. Protecting the environment is very important for our health and future.
We can do many things to help. First, we should save resources. Turn off the lights when we leave a room and don’t waste water. Second, reduce waste. Use reusable bags instead of plastic ones and sort rubbish for recycling. Third, travel green. Walk, ride a bike or take a bus when possible. These small daily actions can make a big difference. Let’s start today to make our planet cleaner and healthier.
(词数统计:97词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,并突出重点,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明当前存在的环境问题及其重要性;
第二步,从节约资源、减少垃圾、绿色出行三个方面提出具体保护措施;
第三步,总结并呼吁大家立即行动。
[亮点词汇]
①save resources节约资源
②reduce waste减少浪费
③travel green绿色出行
④reusable bags可重复使用的袋子
[高分句型]
①Turn off the lights when we leave a room and don’t waste water. (when引导的时间状语从句,and连接的并列祈使句)
②Use reusable bags instead of plastic ones and sort rubbish for recycling. (instead of短语表示替代,and连接的并列祈使句)
抢分04中华文化
9.(2026·上海·三模) 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他来信询问上海春节期间的一项传统活动。请你写一封邮件回复他,介绍一项你喜欢的上海春节传统活动 (如:逛豫园灯会、去城隍庙祈福、看舞龙舞狮、吃汤圆等)。
邮件内容包括:
1. 简单介绍这项活动 (时间、地点、人们做什么)。
2. 说明你喜欢这项活动的原因 (至少两点)。
3. 邀请他有机会来上海亲身体验。
要求:
- 邮件格式正确,词数80-100词。
- 内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确。
- 可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
- 豫园灯会 Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair
- 城隍庙 City God Temple
- 舞龙舞狮 dragon and lion dances
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture. I’ll introduce one of my favorite Spring Festival activities in Shanghai—the Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair.
It is usually held from the first day of the Spring Festival to the Lantern Festival at Yuyuan Garden. During the fair, the garden is decorated with thousands of beautiful lanterns in different shapes, such as animals and flowers. People walk around, take photos, and guess riddles on the lanterns.
I love this activity for two reasons. First, the lanterns create a magical and happy atmosphere. Second, it’s a wonderful chance for families to get together and have fun.
Welcome to Shanghai to experience it yourself.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时
明确要点:介绍一项喜欢的上海春节传统活动,包括活动时间、地点、内容及喜欢的原因
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:邮件格式正确,词数80-100词
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,问候对方,说明要介绍的活动
主体段:介绍活动的时间、地点、内容和喜欢的原因
结尾段:邀请对方来亲自体验
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:传统活动
名称:the Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair等
地点:at Yuyuan Garden等
时间:from the first day of the Spring Festival to the Lantern Festival等
活动内容:is decorated with thousands of beautiful lanterns in different shapes、walk around, take photos, and guess riddles on the lanterns等
要点二:喜爱的原因
具体原因:the lanterns create a magical and happy atmosphere,it’s a wonderful chance for families to get together and have fun等
10.(2026·上海宝山·一模)Write at least 60 words according to the situation given (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格)
假设你是初三学生李华。你校文化社团为推广中国传统文化,举办了活动海报设计征集比赛。现有两份设计进入决赛,社团正征集推荐意见。请你选择其中一份海报,给社团负责老师Mr. Chen写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 描述该海报的核心设计元素;
(2) 阐述你推荐它的理由。
(注意:1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2:照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】
例文
Dear Mr. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I’d like to recommend Poster B. Its core elements include the large Chinese character “inheritance”, a dragon, a phoenix, and the Dragon Boat Festival rice dumpling.This poster clearly shows our cultural roots with its vivid symbols. The dragon and phoenix stand for traditional Chinese spirit, while the rice dumpling connects to our festivals. It’s eye-catching and helps more students understand and love our culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时(介绍推荐的海报及相关内容、意义);
③提示:李华给陈老师写书信,推荐海报B,说明其核心元素,阐述推荐原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步:自我介绍(九年级学生李华),表明想推荐海报B及介绍其核心元素;
第二步:说明海报通过生动符号展现文化根源,具体解释龙凤和粽子的象征意义;
第三步:阐述海报的优势(醒目,帮助学生理解热爱文化),完成推荐理由陈述。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②core核心的
③element元素
④inheritance传承
⑤vivid生动的
[高分句型]
①I’d like to recommend Poster B.(“I’d like to…”礼貌表达推荐意愿,符合书信的礼貌语气)
②The dragon and phoenix stand for traditional Chinese spirit, while the rice dumpling connects to our festivals.(“while”对比说明不同元素的意义,逻辑清晰,突出海报的文化内涵)
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