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英 语
七年级下册 RJ
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Unit 6 Rain or Shine
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we feel about
the weather?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.暴风雨;暴风雪 _______
2.风 ______
3.温暖干燥 ______________
4.待在家里 _________
5.感觉像 ___________
6.在顶端 ____________
storm
wind
warm and dry
stay in
feel like
at the top
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I’m sunbathing at the moment! (sb+be+动词-ing 形式+其他.)
→仿写:我爸爸和我哥哥正在海里游泳。
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My dad and my brother are swimming in the sea.
8.【教材原句】Although the weather is bad, many people here are still in high
spirits.(although 引导的让步状语从句)
→仿写:虽然天气很热,但我们玩得很开心。
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Although the weather is hot, we are having a great time.
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9.【教材原句】I’m tired and hungry, but it feels good to be at the top!
(but 连接的并列句)
→仿写:虽然我们很累,但是大家都情绪高涨。
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We are tired, but everyone is in high spirits.
10.【教材原句】Some of them are taking photos, and some are skating.
(Some… and some…)
→仿写:一些人在玩沙子,一些人在玩沙滩排球。
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Some are playing with sand, and some are playing beach volleyball.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
It’s Sunday today.It’s snowing outside, and it’s very cold.(描述天气情况)
Many people are staying in the house to keep warm. But some children are
wearing their warm clothes and playing in the snow excitedly.
Look at the children outside! Some are skating on the ice, some are running
in the snow, some are having a snowball fight, and others are building a
snowman. There’s a boy taking a carrot with him.It is the snowman’s nose!
(具体阐述孩子们的活动)
Although the weather is cold, all of the children feel very happy.(表达孩子
们的感受)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,请你根据下面的提示,给你的好朋友Sarah写一封信,告诉她
此时你们一家人在公园里的活动情况。
写作要点:(1)What time is it now and how is the weather?
(2)What are your families doing?
(3)How do you feel about it?
要求:(1)短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数70左右。
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时和现在进行时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:描述天气、时间、家人的活动及自身感受
写作框架:
总述 … I’m happy to tell you about my vacation.
分述 It is sunny today… My father is taking photos… she is talking with…
My sister is having a… I’m writing…
总述 How about your vacation?
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第二步 列
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Dear Sarah,
How is it going with you? I’m happy to tell you
about my vacation. ① ________________________________
①先引出要谈论的话
题。
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It is sunny today, just right for vacation. It’s nine
o’clock. I am in the park with my family.My father is
taking photos of flowers ② .Where is my mother? Oh,
she is talking with a woman under a tree ② .My sister is
having a good time playing with my cousin. What
about me? I’m writing the letter to you by the lake.
We’re all having a great time. I feel relaxed and
happy. ②具体介绍一家人正在
做什么和阐述自己的感
受。恰当运用短语take
photos of、talk with和
have a good time
doing sth。
续表
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How about your vacation? Can you tell me? ③
Yours,
Li Hua ③书写结束语,用
“How about…?”询问
对方的情况。
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这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的写作结构,语言表达流畅,一幅清晰的“度假休
闲图”跃然纸上。作者使用所学词汇,正确运用现在进行时,描述了度假期间一
家人的活动。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025山西太原调研】假如你是李华,你正在为太原文旅创作短视频脚本,
你想为这座历史悠久的城市拍摄哪些画面呢?漫步迎泽公园,捕捉晨练者踏歌而
行;移步汾河之畔,可见垂钓者静守一杆悠然;骑行者追风掠影而过,野餐家庭
铺展美食共享温馨……请选择一个时间点,描述一下当时的天气及人们的活动与
感受。太原的鲜活与诗意,正在你的笔下慢慢展开。
要点:(1)What time is it now and how’s the weather in Taiyuan?
(2)What are people doing and how do they feel?
(3)What do you think of Taiyuan?
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要求:(1)内容包括以上所有要点,可适当补充,语句通顺,行文连贯;
(2)词数不少于60;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
It’s eight o’clock on Sunday morning. The weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many people in the park.
They all feel relaxed and comfortable. Some people are doing morning
exercises. Some people are playing the erhu. Some people are dancing.
Some people are playing basketball. Some people are running. Some
people are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both beautiful and suitable
for living.
Value statement:Enjoy your day, come rain or shine.
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