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英 语
七年级下册 RJ
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Unit 5 Here and Now
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we share our
lives with others?
Period 5 2a—3c (大单元话题与写作)
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.现在;此刻 _______________
2.做;从事 _________
3.世界各地 __________________
4.现在;立刻 ___________
at the moment
work on
around the world
right now
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二、佳句仿写
5.【教材原句】Some people are rushing to get home from work. But others are
not in a hurry! (Some… others…)
→仿写:一些人在拍照,另一些人躺在海滩上。
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Some are taking photos, and others are lying on the beach.
【解析】链接狂K
现在进行时的详细讲解见狂K重点P34。
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6.【教材原句】People are eating delicious food, such as Chongqing hot pot and
noodles.(such as)
→仿写:跑步、打球、骑自行车之类的体育运动都有利于健康。
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Sport, such as running, playing balls and riding bikes, are good for
health.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
What Are My Family Doing?
It’s a sunny Saturday, and my family and I are having a great time at home.
(介绍时间和地点)
My father is in the living room. He’s watching a documentary about nature
on TV, full of interest. My mother is in the kitchen, baking a cake.The sweet
smell fills the whole house. I’m sitting on the balcony, reading a science-fiction
book, lost in the amazing plots.(介绍家人分别在什么地点做什么活动)
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My favourite family activity is playing board games together in the
evening.It’s a time when we can all laugh, compete and cooperate. We share
jokes and stories during the game, which makes our relationship closer.
(介绍喜欢的活动及意义)
Family time is invaluable.It gives me a sense of belonging and makes me
feel loved. I really enjoy these moments with my family.(表达感受)#1.4
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025湖南永州期中]假如你是李华,收到远在多伦多的好友 Tony分享生活
的邮件。此刻,你正坐在电脑前,准备回复邮件向他分享自己与家人此刻正在做
的事情,并提及大家保持健康的方式。
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内容提示:
Who What are they doing? How do they keep fit?
Dad wash the car play tennis
Mum watch TV eat vegetables and fruit
Youngerbrother play the toy car sleep for 9 hours a day
Li Hua write an email …
要求:(1)内容必须包含提示中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)词数不少于90,已给出部分不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
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Dear Tony,
Long time no see. I’m happy to get your email.____
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以现在进行时和一般现在时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:描述正在进行的活动及保持健康的方式
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写作框架:
总述 Now let me tell you about our lives and how we keep fit.
分述 washing the car…
watching TV…
playing his red toy car…
We all believe that…
总述 writing an email…
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第二步 列
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Dear Tony,
Long time no see. I’m happy to get your email.Now let
me tell you about our lives and how we keep fit. ① ________________________________
①表明写作意图,
引出话题。
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Right now, my dad is washing the car in the yard. He
stays healthy by playing tennis twice a week.Meanwhile, my
mum is watching TV.She’s enjoying a comedy show. Her
secret to fitness is eating vegetables and fruit every day.My
younger brother is playing his red toy car on the floor.
Surprisingly, he keeps fit by sleeping for 9 hours daily! As
for me, I’m writing this email to you. To stay healthy, I go
jogging every morning and drink plenty of water. ② ②具体阐述活动及
方式:分享自己与
家人此刻正在做的
事情,并提及大家
保持健康的方式。
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We all believe that small daily habits make a big
difference. ③ How about your family? Looking forward to
your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua ③书写结语。恰当
运用宾语从句“We
all believe that
small daily habits
make a big
difference.”表达自
己的感悟。
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这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,描述人们正在
从事的活动及保持健康的方式。文中“I’m happy to…”“As for…” “To stay
healthy…”等短语和句型表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些也是文中的
亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是李华,在当地电视台担任主播,正在播报世界上不同城市的人们此
刻丰富多彩的生活。请根据图片提示完善此次播报的主要内容。
要求:(1)内容丰富,语句通顺,结构完整,语法正确;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数,词数80左右。
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Good evening, everyone! This is Li Hua. Welcome to STV Channel. Now
it’s time to tell you what people are doing around the world.
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【参考范文】
Good evening, everyone! This is Li Hua. Welcome to STV Channel. Now
it’s time to tell you what people are doing around the world.
It’s 8 p.m. in Beijing, China. Some people are having fun reading
books. It’s 1 p.m. in Paris, France. Some people are lying in the sun
to enjoy sunshine. It’s 12 p.m. in London, the UK. People are having
lunch with their family or colleagues. It’s 6 o’clock in the morning
in Houston, the USA. People are ready to get up. It’s 11 o’clock in
the evening in Sydney, Australia. Some people are lying in bed.
Value statement:Living in a global village, we should think like a global
citizen.
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