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英 语
八年级下册 JJ
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Unit 8 Natural disasters
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.大量的 ___________
2.密切注意 _________________
3.使崩溃 ____________
4.少于 ___________
5.半小时 ______________
6.采取行动 _____________
7.与……作斗争 _______________
plenty of
keep an eye out
bring down
less than
half an hour
take action
fight against
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二、佳句仿写
8.【教材原句】Floods are huge amounts of water covering an area.
(huge amounts of)
→仿写:人类错误的行为会带来很多危害。
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The human’s wrong actions can bring huge amounts of danger.
9.【教材原句】The PLA troops fought against this terrible flood and protected
millions of people from drowning.(protect sb from doing sth)
→仿写:我们应该尽全力保护自己免受伤害。
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We should try our best to protect ourselves from hurting.
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10.【教材原句】Floods are common natural disasters.(common natural disasters)
→仿写:地震是普遍的自然灾害。
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Earthquakes are common natural disasters.
11.【教材原句】By controlling the water levels, the dam keeps people safe.
(by doing sth)
→仿写:通过选择正确的行为,人们能够在火灾中保持安全。
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By choosing proper actions, people are able to keep safe in the fire.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Natural disasters can be very scary, but we can learn to stay safe!
Floods are common natural disasters.They bring huge amounts of water and
can be dangerous.(介绍了洪水的危害)Earthquakes are common natural disasters,
too. They can shake the ground and make buildings fall.
When there’s a disaster, we should remember some rules. We should try our
best to protect ourselves from hurting. If there’s a flood, stay away from deep
water. Find high places.(介绍了洪水发生时的正确处理方式) For earthquakes,
hide under a strong desk and don’t run around. (介绍了地震发生时的正确处理
方式)
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By choosing proper actions, people are able to keep safe. Listen to adults,
follow safety plans, and stay calm.
Let’s learn about natural disasters and practice safety drills. We can stay safe
and happy!#1.4
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是8(三)班李华,为了让学生了解地震的危害以及如何正确保护自己,
昨天你的班级进行了主题班会,同学们对地震中如何保护自己进行讨论,最后班
主任进行总结发言。请你用英语介绍该主题班会的内容。
写作要点:(1)What’s the purpose of the class meeting?
(2)How to keep safe in the earthquake?
(3)How do you feel about the earthquake?
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写作要求:(1)短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My name is Li Hua.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据所给提示叙述班会内容
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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My name is Li Hua.In order to make
students learn more about the earthquake, our
class held the class meeting. ①
During the meeting, we discussed ways to
stay safe in an earthquake.If we’re indoors, we
should hide under a strong desk or table and stay
away from windows.If we’re outdoors, we need to
move to an open area, like a playground, and
keep away from buildings. ② ①开头引入:文章开头直接
点题,简洁明了地介绍了这
次班会的目的。
②方式介绍:用If引导的条件
状语从句具体介绍了地震中
的不同情况。
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Earthquakes are really scary, but if we know
what to do, we can stay safe. Our headteacher
also summed up, telling us to always be careful
and remember these safety tips.
After the meeting, we all understand that
learning earthquake safety is very important. ③ ③文章升华:通过“After the
meeting, we all understand
that learning earthquake
safety is very important.”进
行总结,明白了了解地震安
全的重要性。
本文在介绍主题班会时,使用了现在分词作伴随状语、宾语从句等句式结构,让
句子结构丰富多样,避免了重复。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
期盼已久的寒假即将到来,为了能够度过一个愉快而又安全的假期,阳光中
学英文网站将举行“防灾减灾,守护安全”短视频创作比赛。假如你是阳光中学的
李华,你打算参加本次活动。请根据以下流程图为你的短视频写一篇英文旁白。
注意事项:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章应包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi, everyone! ___
That’s all for my video. Thanks for your watching.
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【参考范文】
Hi, everyone.I’m Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle
School.Today I want to share how to keep yourself safe during an
earthquake.When an earthquake happens, there will be loud
noise.Buildings will fall down because of the shaking of the earth and
people may be trapped.
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Now I’d like to give you some tips in case there’s an
earthquake.Hide under a table if you’re at home.If possible, you can
also go to an open space.Remember to stay away from buildings, or
you’ll get hurt.
That’s all for my video.Thanks for your watching.
【解析】知识拓展
其反义词为impossible,意为“不可能的”。
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