内容正文:
第四部分 书面表达
类型一 写人叙事类
A
假定你是李华。校英文报“STORY”专栏正在征集稿件,请你根据下面表格中的信息,以第一人称,用英语写一个故事投稿。
When
last Friday morning
Where
school sports ground
Who
I, my classmate
What
take part in, help, feel proud
注意:
1. 短文须包含表格中的关键词,请增加细节以使故事完整;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100。
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B
假定你是校英文报记者冀方,外国学生Alice上周五在你校体验了一节体育课,请根据你对她的采访记录写一篇英语短文发给校报。
What Alice did:
·learn about ping-pong
·practice ping-pong
·…
Alice's feelings:
·about the PE teacher
·…
注意:
1. 短文须包括记录中所有信息(含需要补充的两处内容),可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Alice, a student from abroad, had a PE class in our school last Friday. __________________________________
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C
每一天都是生活的馈赠,用心感受,你会发现凡事皆为宝藏。假如你是李华,你校英语报社正在举行主题为“A Special Day to Remember”的征文活动。请参考图文信息,积极投稿。
要求:
1. 短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
A Special Day to Remember
1. What made the day special?
√When? √Who? √What happened?
2. How did you feel on that day?
A Special Day to Remember
Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get. _________________________________
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D
生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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E
学校开展以“Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下材料写一篇英语短文投稿。从材料中找出宋濂的优秀品质,结合自身经历讲述你的故事,并谈谈你的感悟与体会。
要求:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等个人信息。
余幼时即嗜学。家贫,无从致书以观,每假借于藏书之家,手自笔录,计日以还。天大寒,砚冰坚,手指不可屈伸,弗之怠。录毕,走送之,不敢稍逾约。以是人多以书假余,余因得遍观群书。
——摘选自《送东阳马生序》
材料大意:
宋濂自幼热爱读书,因家境贫寒买不起书,常借别人的书抄阅,约定日期送还。天气严寒时,砚台中的墨水冻成了冰,手指不能屈伸,他仍坚持抄书,抄完后马上归还,从不超过约定期限。因此,很多人把书借给他,他得以博览群书。
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F
近期你校英语校刊正在举办以“团结就是力量(Many Hands Make Light Work)”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
The Story of Three Monks
参考词汇:monk和尚,temple寺庙,break out爆发,put out扑灭
要求:
1. 短文应包括图示中的所给信息并拟题目;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥,使内容充实;
3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;
4. 词数80左右。
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G
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以“Every Small Step Counts!(每一小步都算数!)”为主题的征文活动。请从以下你的生活情境中任选一个,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
其他情境要点如下:
1. 讲述故事;
2. 分享感悟。
写作要求:
1. 100词左右;
2. 不得出现个人真实信息。
Every Small Step Counts!
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H
良好的情绪管理有助于人的身心健康。学会正确处理负面情绪,可以更好地应对生活中的各种困难和挑战。某英语报刊正在以“Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions (负面情绪)”为题向广大中学生征文,请你结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文,谈谈正确处理负面情绪的方法及重要意义,向报刊投稿。提示如下:
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3. 词数80~100。
Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
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I
“细微处见光芒”。生活中总有一些事对你产生了影响,促使你成长。你校微信公众号以“That Made a Difference to Me”为题征稿,请联系自己亲身经历的一件事写一篇英语短文,向公众号编辑部投稿。
写作要点:
1. 简要描述事情经过;
2. 事情对你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含以上要点,不得出现真实姓名和校名;
2. 语言流畅,层次清晰,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3. 词数80左右,文章标题已给出,不计入总词数。
That Made a Difference to Me
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J
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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第四部分 书面表达
类型一 写人叙事类
A
【高分范文】
A memorable story
Life is full of unforgettable moments, whether they're about success, challenges or kindness. One story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on me.
It was a bright morning on the school sports ground filled with cheers. During the 100-meter race, a classmate suddenly fell. As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water. Other classmates comforted him while we waited for the staff to arrive. Fortunately, he was fine after receiving treatment.
However, I missed my own event in the process. At first, I felt a little disappointed, but that emotion soon turned into pride. I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful. Sometimes, the greatest victories aren't won on the track, but felt in the heart.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头引出本文主题;第二步,讲述故事发生的地点、时间和经过;第三步,介绍从这个故事中得到的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满 ②leave a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻印象 ③wait for等待
[高分句型]
①As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water.(as引导原因状语从句)
②I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful.(that引导宾语从句)
B
【高分范文】
Alice, a student from abroad, had a PE class in our school last Friday. She learned many things about ping-pong, for example, the history and rules of the game. Alice tried her best to learn skills and she practiced ping-pong for nearly 20 minutes. And then she shared her school life. At last, she said the PE teacher was very patient and she expressed her thanks to the teacher. She also said the students were very lovely and friendly. "I'm so lucky to have the chance to take the PE class," she said excitedly.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般过去时为主;
③提示:作文需包含采访记录中所有信息(含两处需补充内容),适当添加细节,保持逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述Alice的课堂活动;第二步,描写Alice的感受;第三步,结尾引用Alice的总结性话语。
[亮点词汇]
①for example比如 ②patient耐心的 ③have the chance to do sth.有机会做某事
[高分句型]
She also said the students were very lovely and friendly.(宾语从句)
C
【高分范文】
A Special Day to Remember
Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get. Last winter, I experienced an unforgettable day.
It was my 14th birthday, and I thought it would be ordinary. However, my classmates surprised me with a secret party during lunch break. They decorated the classroom with balloons and gave me handmade cards. Even my teacher joined in, bringing a cake!
I felt overjoyed and deeply touched. Their kindness made me realize how lucky I was to have such warm friendships. That day taught me that small acts of love can turn ordinary moments into treasures.
Now, whenever I feel down, I recall that special day and smile. Life's sweetness often hides in simple surprises!
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主,辅以一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍那天的时间、人物以及发生了什么;第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①overjoyed欣喜若狂 ②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ③feel down感到沮丧
[高分句型]
Their kindness made me realize how lucky I was to have such warm friendships.(宾语从句)
D
【高分范文】
Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect.
Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me.
Love is about caring about others' feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I'll do the same for them.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容完成写作,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你眼中的爱是什么;第二步,讲述一个你被爱的故事;第三步,分享这个故事对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论 ②to my surprise令我惊讶的是 ③fill with充满
[高分句型]
Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach.(现在分词作状语,宾语从句)
E
【高分范文】
Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times
Song Lian was poor, but he loved reading. He borrowed books, copied them in the cold, and always returned them on time. I have learned a lot from his hard work and honesty.
Last month, I needed a science book but had no money. I borrowed one from my teacher and promised to give it back in three days. I read it and took notes every evening. My arm was sore, but I kept going. I returned the book on time, and the teacher lent me more books.
I have learned that we should work hard and keep promises if we want to succeed.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般过去时为主;
③提示:介绍宋濂的优秀品质,结合自身经历讲述你的故事,并谈谈你的感悟与体会,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍宋濂的优秀品质;第二步:回忆自己借书并按时归还的经历;第三步:谈谈你的感悟与体会。
[亮点词汇]
①on time按时 ②take notes做笔记 ③keep promises遵守承诺
[高分句型]
I have learned that we should work hard and keep promises if we want to succeed.(that引导的宾语从句,if引导的条件状语从句)
F
【高分范文】
The Story of Three Monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire. After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:主要为一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏图片中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇铺垫,介绍故事初始场景;
第二步,推进情节,展现和尚们“团结”与“不团结”的对比;
第三步,以“失火”为情节高潮,描述“三和尚放下矛盾、合作灭火”的行为,表明感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①live peacefully平静地生活 ②run out of用完;耗尽 ③break out爆发 ④work together合作
[高分句型]
①But things changed when a fat monk arrived.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.(who引导的宾语从句)
G
【高分范文】
Every Small Step Counts!
Last Sunday, on my way to the library, I saw an elderly man struggling to cross the street. Without hesitation, I rushed to help him. At first, he was a bit nervous, but when he felt my assistance, he relaxed. Step by step, we made it to the other side. The man thanked me repeatedly. This experience made me realize that every small act of kindness matters. Just like taking small steps, these little deeds can bring warmth and make a difference. No matter how tiny our efforts seem, they are valuable in making the world better.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:看图作文,诠释“每一小步都算数!”的主题;
②时态:一般过去时(讲述过去发生的事件)与一般现在时(表达感悟部分);
③提示:紧扣“讲述故事+分享感悟”要求,从生活情境出发,体现主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,引出故事背景,交代时间和场景,自然引入要讲述的事件;
第二步:详细叙述故事过程。描述看到老人过马路困难,自己主动帮忙,以及过程中老人的状态变化和最终结果,让故事完整生动;
第三步:分享感悟,升华主题。引出对“每一小步都算数!”的理解,点明小行动的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①without hesitation毫不犹豫 ②make a difference有影响;起(重要)作用
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday, on my way to the library, I saw an elderly man struggling to cross the street.(“see sb. doing sth.”结构)
②This experience made me realize that every small act of kindness matters.(宾语从句)
H
【高分范文】
Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt really sad.
To deal with these negative emotions, first, I communicated with my teacher. She gave me useful advice on study methods. Then, I started taking exercise regularly, like jogging in the morning. It helped me relax and regain energy. Dealing with negative emotions properly is important. It helps solve problems. By talking to others, we can get solutions. Also, it avoids causing more trouble. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.
Let's learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;第二步,具体介绍这次经历、处理负面情绪的方法和重要性;第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理 ②communicate with和……沟通
③take exercise regularly定期锻炼 ④solve problems解决问题
[高分句型]
①Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.(动名词作主语)
②If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.(条件状语从句)
I
【高分范文】
That Made a Difference to Me
Last year, I had a really hard time learning English. I couldn't remember new words and often felt very upset. One day, my English teacher, Mr. Li, noticed my problem. He came up to me and said, "Don't worry. Learning a language takes time. Why don't you try making flashcards to help you remember the words?" I followed his advice and started making flashcards. To my surprise, it really worked! I began to remember more words and my grades improved.
This experience taught me that asking for help is not a weakness. It also showed me that sometimes, a small change can make a big difference. Now, I am not afraid to ask for help when I need it, and I have become more confident in my studies.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己经历的一件让你成长的事情,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要描述事情经过;第二步,介绍事情对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①to my surprise令我惊讶的是 ②ask for help求助 ③make a big difference有大影响
[高分句型]
①This experience taught me that asking for help is not a weakness.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Now, I am not afraid to ask for help when I need it, and I have become more confident in my studies.(when引导的时间状语从句,and连接的并列句)
J
【高分范文】
Getting Close to Nature
Nature is the greatest gift to human beings. It is the source of our life and the most beautiful scenery in the world. It is very important for us to get close to nature.
First of all, getting close to nature can help us to relax. Second, getting close to nature can help us to build a healthy lifestyle. Finally, getting close to nature can help us to appreciate the beauty of nature.
In conclusion, getting close to nature is very important for us. We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:要求以“Getting Close to Nature”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明亲近自然的重要性;第二步,具体介绍亲近自然的好处;第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to nature 亲近自然 ②first of all首先 ③in conclusion总之 ④protect the environment保护环境
[高分句型]
①It is very important for us to get close to nature.(“It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.”固定句型)
②We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment.(并列结构)
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