Unit 6 Electricity everywhere 家庭节约用电规则（单元写作精练）英语新教材沪教版七年级下册

Unit 6 Electricity everywhere家庭节约用电规则 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元写作话题为“Writing rules for saving electricity at home”，结合本单元 “了解电的重要性、掌握安全用电及节电方法” 的核心目标，能写一篇 80-100 词的家庭节电规则短文。 内容包括：节电的必要性，家庭中 “应该做” 和 “不应该做” 的节电行为，体现本单元情态动词（must/must not）的用法。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 electricity, light bulb, computer, air conditioner, fridge, charger, natural light, energy-saving bulb，electrical appliances, washing machine, microwave, oven（烤箱）, charger, socket, plug（插头）... 短语 switch off / turn off, turn on, leave...open, save electricity, waste electricity,pull out the plug, use natural light,save electricity,lower the air conditioner temperature, set the air conditioner to 26℃, turn off the tap, close the fridge door... 句型 1. 开头引入（节电必要性） 1.Electricity is very important in our daily life, so it is necessary for us to save it at home. 2.Saving electricity is a simple but important way to protect the environment and cut down our family bills. 3.Many people waste electricity without noticing, so we need some clear rules to help us use electricity wisely. 2. 中间描述（Dos & Don’ts，必须含 must/must not） 应该做（Dos） 1.We must switch off the lights when we leave a room. 2.We must turn off the computer when we are not using it. 3.We must try to use natural light during the day instead of turning on lights. 4.We must use energy-saving light bulbs at home. 不应该做（Don’ts） 1.We must not turn on the air conditioner when the window is open. 2.We must not leave the fridge door open for a long time. 3.We must not leave the TV on standby when we are not watching it. 4.We must not leave the phone charger plugged in after charging. 3. 结尾总结（呼吁/升华） 1.Small actions can make a big difference. If we all follow these rules, we can save a lot of electricity every day. 2.By following these simple rules, we can not only save electricity but also protect our planet. 3.It is easy to save electricity if everyone does their part. Let’s start with these rules today! 名言 “Many hands make light work.” 众人拾柴火焰高（引申为：大家一起行动，节电效果会更好） “Every little helps.” 点滴皆有用（每一个小小的节电行为都有意义） “Save energy, save the future.” 节约能源，拯救未来 优美句子 仿 （先练习后背默） 1.开头句（引入话题） 1.电在我们的生活中必不可少，所以我们必须学会节约用电。 2.没有电我们的生活很不方便，所以我们一定要好好利用它。 2.正文句（节电做法） 3.离开房间时我们必须关灯，不能让电器一直开着。 4.我们不能开着窗户使用空调，也不能让冰箱门长时间敞开。 5.白天我们应尽量使用自然光，少开电灯。 6.手机充满电后，我们必须拔掉充电器。 7．我们必须合理设置空调温度，避免耗电过多。 8．看完电视或用完电脑后，要及时关闭电源，而不是让它们处于待机状态。 3. 结尾句（总结呼吁） 9.节约用电是每个人的责任，所以我们要从日常小事做起。 10.小小的行动能带来大改变，所以我们必须坚持节约用电。 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 主题：家庭节约用电规则 文体：应用文（规则 / 建议） 时态：一般现在时 要点：①阐明电的重要性 ②介绍家庭不同场景的具体节电方法 ③呼吁大家节约用电 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 总起全文，点明电的重要性，引出节电必要性 1. Electricity is important in our life, and we can’t live well without it. 2. It’s necessary for us to save electricity at home. 20 词左右 中间（3-4句） 分场景说明具体节电做法，用衔接词串联 1. First, we must switch off lights when leaving a room. 2. Second, we must not turn on the air conditioner with windows open. 3. Third, we should use natural light in the daytime. 4. Besides, we must unplug chargers after using them. 约50–60 词 结尾（2-3句） 总结呼吁，强化主题，号召共同节电 1. Saving electricity is our duty. 2. Let’s save every unit of electricity from now on. 20 词左右 Step 3 While-writing (串句成文) 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 Step 4 Post - writing ： 1.自我检查清单： ①语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 ②拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 ③语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 ④细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议（如：可增加活动过程的细节描述）。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误（如：爱好类作文时态混淆、活动类作文缺少过程描述）。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 题型通关 练 Passage 1 众所周知，电是非常重要的，它使我们的生活更加便捷，但在日常生活中我们必须注意安全用电。请以“Home rules for using electricity”为题写一篇英文短文，具体要求如下： 1.参考句型：We must…；We mustn’t…； 2.词数80；标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节，使文章连贯。 Home rules for using electricity As we all know, electricity is important and it makes our lives easier. But _____________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的短文。 针对学生生活中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的行为的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1.活动的目的； 2.节约用电的具体做法； 3.呼吁大家节约用电。 以下词汇仅供参考：join hands; take action 注意： 1.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 2.短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates, Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ Union 16 June Passage 3 我们都知道电在日常生活中是非常重要的。它帮助我们带动很多电器，但是同时在使用它的过程中还存在一定的危险，请根据下面的提示写一篇安全用电指引。 电的重要性及危险性 电器使得人们的生活更方便。但是如果不安全用电，有可能会带来危险，有可能伤害人或是引起火灾。 安全用电的注意事项 ●我们手湿时，不允许触碰电器； ●当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先关掉电源； 自行补充至少两点…… 总结呼吁 …… 要求： 1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：电源power supply；修理repair Electricity is very important in our daily life,__________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4（话题综合） 你校准备举行“保护地球， 从我做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，可适当拓展。 重要性 地球是个美丽的地方，它为我们提供空气，水和食物，它是我们的家，必须保护它。 不良现象 离开房间不关灯；没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉；乱扔塑料袋。 建议 1.节约用水、用电。请举出一个日常生活中节约用水或用电的例子。 2.自拟 3.自拟 注意； 1.参考词汇： 塑料袋（plastic bags）电（electricity）； 2.80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Hello, everyone! As we know, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 假定你是李辉，你校正在开展以“The importance of electricity”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括： (1)电的重要性; (2)如何节约电; (3)发出倡议。 注意： (1)词数80~100; (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 The importance of electricity ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 （U5+U6话题综合） 今天上午，教室里同学们正在上英语课，突然停水停电了……老师让同学们思考，如果没有水和电，对我们的生活会造成什么样的影响？同学们纷纷进行讨论……请根据以下提示写一篇短文 （1）水和电的重要性； （2）节水及节电的方法； （3）发出节水节电的倡议。 注意： 1. 必须结合情境，包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 词数：80词以上 Save Water and Electricity This morning, there was no water or electricity in our school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Electricity everywhere家庭节约用电规则 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元写作话题为“Writing rules for saving electricity at home”，结合本单元 “了解电的重要性、掌握安全用电及节电方法” 的核心目标，能写一篇 80-100 词的家庭节电规则短文。 内容包括：节电的必要性，家庭中 “应该做” 和 “不应该做” 的节电行为，体现本单元情态动词（must/must not）的用法。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 electricity, light bulb, computer, air conditioner, fridge, charger, natural light, energy-saving bulb，electrical appliances, washing machine, microwave, oven（烤箱）, charger, socket, plug（插头）... 短语 switch off / turn off, turn on, leave...open, save electricity, waste electricity,pull out the plug, use natural light,save electricity,lower the air conditioner temperature, set the air conditioner to 26℃, turn off the tap, close the fridge door... 句型 1. 开头引入（节电必要性） 1.Electricity is very important in our daily life, so it is necessary for us to save it at home. 2.Saving electricity is a simple but important way to protect the environment and cut down our family bills. 3.Many people waste electricity without noticing, so we need some clear rules to help us use electricity wisely. 2. 中间描述（Dos & Don’ts，必须含 must/must not） 应该做（Dos） 1.We must switch off the lights when we leave a room. 2.We must turn off the computer when we are not using it. 3.We must try to use natural light during the day instead of turning on lights. 4.We must use energy-saving light bulbs at home. 不应该做（Don’ts） 1.We must not turn on the air conditioner when the window is open. 2.We must not leave the fridge door open for a long time. 3.We must not leave the TV on standby when we are not watching it. 4.We must not leave the phone charger plugged in after charging. 3. 结尾总结（呼吁/升华） 1.Small actions can make a big difference. If we all follow these rules, we can save a lot of electricity every day. 2.By following these simple rules, we can not only save electricity but also protect our planet. 3.It is easy to save electricity if everyone does their part. Let’s start with these rules today! 名言 “Many hands make light work.” 众人拾柴火焰高（引申为：大家一起行动，节电效果会更好） “Every little helps.” 点滴皆有用（每一个小小的节电行为都有意义） “Save energy, save the future.” 节约能源，拯救未来 优美句子 仿 （先练习后背默） 1.开头句（引入话题） 1.电在我们的生活中必不可少，所以我们必须学会节约用电。 Electricity is necessary in our life, so we must learn to save it. 2.没有电我们的生活很不方便，所以我们一定要好好利用它。 We can’t live easily without electricity, so we must use it well. 2.正文句（节电做法） 3.离开房间时我们必须关灯，不能让电器一直开着。 We must turn off the lights when we leave a room and must not keep devices on. 4.我们不能开着窗户使用空调，也不能让冰箱门长时间敞开。 We must not use the air conditioner with windows open or leave the fridge door open for long. 5.白天我们应尽量使用自然光，少开电灯。 We should try to use natural light in the daytime and turn on lights less. 6.手机充满电后，我们必须拔掉充电器。 We must unplug the charger after our mobile phones are fully charged. 7．我们必须合理设置空调温度，避免耗电过多。 We must set the air conditioner to a proper temperature to avoid using too much electricity. 8．看完电视或用完电脑后，要及时关闭电源，而不是让它们处于待机状态。 After watching TV or using the computer, we should turn them off in time instead of leaving them on standby. 3. 结尾句（总结呼吁） 9.节约用电是每个人的责任，所以我们要从日常小事做起。 Saving electricity is everyone’s duty, so we must start from daily small things. 10.小小的行动能带来大改变，所以我们必须坚持节约用电。 Small actions make a big difference, so we must keep saving electricity. 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 主题：家庭节约用电规则 文体：应用文（规则 / 建议） 时态：一般现在时 要点：①阐明电的重要性 ②介绍家庭不同场景的具体节电方法 ③呼吁大家节约用电 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 总起全文，点明电的重要性，引出节电必要性 1. Electricity is important in our life, and we can’t live well without it. 2. It’s necessary for us to save electricity at home. 20 词左右 中间（3-4句） 分场景说明具体节电做法，用衔接词串联 1. First, we must switch off lights when leaving a room. 2. Second, we must not turn on the air conditioner with windows open. 3. Third, we should use natural light in the daytime. 4. Besides, we must unplug chargers after using them. 约50–60 词 结尾（2-3句） 总结呼吁，强化主题，号召共同节电 1. Saving electricity is our duty. 2. Let’s save every unit of electricity from now on. 20 词左右 Step 3 While-writing (串句成文) 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 Step 4 Post - writing ： 1.自我检查清单： ①语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 ②拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 ③语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 ④细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议（如：可增加活动过程的细节描述）。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误（如：爱好类作文时态混淆、活动类作文缺少过程描述）。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 题型通关 练 Passage 1 众所周知，电是非常重要的，它使我们的生活更加便捷，但在日常生活中我们必须注意安全用电。请以“Home rules for using electricity”为题写一篇英文短文，具体要求如下： 1.参考句型：We must…；We mustn’t…； 2.词数80；标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节，使文章连贯。 Home rules for using electricity As we all know, electricity is important and it makes our lives easier. But _____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Home rules for using electricity As we all know, electricity is important and it makes our lives easier. But in our daily lives we must be careful with electricity when we are using it. There are a lot of electrical appliances in our homes, so we must use them safely. First, we must keep electrical appliances away from water. Second, we mustn’t touch them with wet hands. Third, we must unplug them when we don’t use them. It’s very important to use electricity safely, so everyone must follow the rules. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕安全用电规则展开，使用“We must…”和“We mustn’t…”句型，内容完整、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明电的重要性，引出安全用电主题； 第二步：具体列举家庭安全用电规则，使用must和mustn’t结构； 第三步：总结全文，强调遵守规则的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①as we all know众所周知 ②in our daily lives在日常生活中 ③be careful with小心…… ④electrical appliances电器 ⑤keep…away from使……远离 [高分句型] ①But in our daily lives we must be careful with electricity when we are using it.（when引导时间状语从句） ②It’s very important to use electricity safely.（It’s+形容词+to do句型） Passage 2 根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的短文。 针对学生生活中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的行为的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1.活动的目的； 2.节约用电的具体做法； 3.呼吁大家节约用电。 以下词汇仅供参考：join hands; take action 注意： 1.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 2.短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates, Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ Union 16 June 【答案】参考范文 Dear schoolmates, Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity is from natural resources such as coal, and these resources are limited because they are not renewable. Therefore, we must save them, and my following suggestions will greatly reduce everyone’s electricity usage. First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. Second, try to use electronic products as little as possible and do not overuse them. Third, use new products that consume less electricity, such as new types of light bulbs. If everyone can do these things, the world will become better and better. Students’ Union 16 June 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节补充内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动目的； 第二步，介绍节约用电的具体做法； 第三步，呼吁大家节约用电。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②turn off关闭 ③as little as possible尽可能少地 [高分句型] ①I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity is from natural resources such as coal, and these resources are limited because they are not renewable. (原因状语从句) ②First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. (时间状语从句) Passage 3 我们都知道电在日常生活中是非常重要的。它帮助我们带动很多电器，但是同时在使用它的过程中还存在一定的危险，请根据下面的提示写一篇安全用电指引。 电的重要性及危险性 电器使得人们的生活更方便。但是如果不安全用电，有可能会带来危险，有可能伤害人或是引起火灾。 安全用电的注意事项 ●我们手湿时，不允许触碰电器； ●当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先关掉电源； 自行补充至少两点…… 总结呼吁 …… 要求： 1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：电源power supply；修理repair Electricity is very important in our daily life,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Electricity is very important in our daily life, but sometimes it is also very dangerous. So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them. First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them. Second, when we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must switch off the power supply. Third, we mustn’t let children touch some of the electrical appliances. Last, the electrical appliances can’t work too long and we should make them stop to have a rest. In a word, we must use electricity safely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，确保语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明电的重要性及危险性； 第二步，具体阐述安全用电的注意事项； 第三步，最后总结呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ① be careful with小心 ② switch off关掉 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] ① So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them.（if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 4（U5+U6话题综合） 你校准备举行“保护地球， 从我做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，可适当拓展。 重要性 地球是个美丽的地方，它为我们提供空气，水和食物，它是我们的家，必须保护它。 不良现象 离开房间不关灯；没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉；乱扔塑料袋。 建议 1.节约用水、用电。请举出一个日常生活中节约用水或用电的例子。 2.自拟 3.自拟 注意； 1.参考词汇： 塑料袋（plastic bags）电（electricity）； 2.80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Hello, everyone! As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! As we know, the earth is our home. It provides us with air, water and food. So we must protect her. Some people leave the room without turning off the lights. Some people throw the bottles without finishing drinking. Some people throw plastic bags everywhere. I want to give some advice on how to save water. First, we should save water and electricity. We should take a shower instead of taking a bath. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should go to school on foot or by bike. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据表格内容写一篇关于“保护地球， 从我做起”的英语短文。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，介绍地球对我们的重要性； 第二步，具体说明人们所做的不良现象，对地球的危害； 第三步，提出保护地球的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①provides sb with sth为某人提供某物 ②turn off关掉 ③take a shower洗澡 [高分句型] ①I want to give some advice on how to save water.（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构作介词on的宾语） Passage 5 假定你是李辉，你校正在开展以“The importance of electricity”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括： (1)电的重要性; (2)如何节约电; (3)发出倡议。 注意： (1)词数80~100; (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 The importance of electricity ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The importance of electricity Electricity is very important to us. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape nor chat online. That’s to say, electricity is closely related to our daily lives. We should try our best to save electricity. First, we must turn off the lights and other electrical appliances when we don’t use them. Second, we can use energy-saving electrical appliances. Most importantly, we should treat it as our duty and call on everyone to take action. Electricity is widely used in our daily lives, so why not save as much electricity as we can? 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 演讲稿类应用文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：电的重要性，节约用电的具体做法，发出倡议 确定人称：第一人称（we/our） 注意事项：文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主旨，讲电的重要性 主体段：给出生活中节约用电的具体做法 结尾段：发出倡议，呼吁大家行动 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：电的重要性 重要性：without electricity…/neither… nor…/be closely related to/light our homes/make our lives easy and convenient等 要点二：节约用电的具体做法 分点选择：first/second/most importantly/first of all/secondly/what’s more等 做法选择：turn off the lights/use energy-saving electrical appliances/call on everyone to…/choose energy-saving products等 要点三：发出倡议 倡议选择：why not save…/let’s take action…/every small action counts/make a big difference等 Passage 6（U5+U6话题综合） 今天上午，教室里同学们正在上英语课，突然停水停电了……老师让同学们思考，如果没有水和电，对我们的生活会造成什么样的影响？同学们纷纷进行讨论……请根据以下提示写一篇短文 （1）水和电的重要性； （2）节水及节电的方法； （3）发出节水节电的倡议。 注意： 1. 必须结合情境，包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 词数：80词以上 Save Water and Electricity This morning, there was no water or electricity in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Save Water and Electricity This morning, there was no water or electricity in our school. We couldn’t have classes normally and felt very uncomfortable. Water and electricity are very important in our life. We need water to drink and wash. We need electricity for lights, computers and many machines. Without them, our life will be very difficult. We must save them. When we leave the room, turn off the lights. Fix broken taps in time. Don’t leave water running when washing hands. Try to use less electricity every day. Let’s take action to save water and electricity. It’s our duty to protect our resources. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：水和电的重要性、节水及节电的方法、发出节水节电的倡议 确定人称：第一人称（we/our）和第三人称（it）结合 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需结合情境描述 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入情境，描述停水停电带来的不便 主体段：阐述水和电的重要性；介绍节水及节电的方法 结尾段：发出节水节电的倡议，强调责任 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：引入情境，描述停水停电带来的不便 情境描述：This morning, there was no water or electricity in our school. 不便表现：We couldn’t have classes normally and felt very uncomfortable./We couldn’t cook, clean, or even use the restroom properly, which made us realize how much we depend on these resources. 要点二：阐述水和电的重要性 水的重要性：We need water to drink and wash./Water is essential for our survival, as we need it to stay hydrated, clean ourselves, and grow food. 电的重要性：We need electricity for lights, computers and many machines./Electricity powers our homes, schools, and workplaces, enabling us to use lights, computers, appliances, and various machines that make our lives easier and more efficient. 总结强调：Without them, our life will be very difficult. 要点三：介绍节水及节电的方法 节水方法：Fix broken taps in time. Don’t leave water running when washing hands./We can also take shorter showers, collect rainwater for plants, and use a bucket instead of a hose to wash our cars. 节电方法：When we leave the room, turn off the lights. Try to use less electricity every day./We can unplug chargers when not in use, use energy-efficient appliances, and take advantage of natural light whenever possible. 要点四：发出节水节电的倡议，强调责任 倡议行动：Let’s take action to save water and electricity. 强调责任：It’s our duty to protect our resources./As responsible citizens, it’s our duty to conserve water and electricity for future generations. 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $