2026届高考英语读后续写写作指导 课件

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“读后续写”专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了情感转变、善意传递等核心考查方向，明确情节衔接、细节描写、主题升华三大评分维度，通过真题案例归纳“冲突-善意-转变”类常考题型，构建针对性备考框架。 课件亮点在于“微技能突破+范文示范+思维训练”策略，如通过“说”的准确动词（whisper/murmur）和状语（with a smile/in a soft voice）训练提升语言能力，结合情感转变逻辑分析培养思维品质。提供结构模板与评分关键，助力学生掌握答题技巧，教师可据此实施精准教学，高效冲刺高考。

高考英语读后续写 写作指导 “情感转变+善意传递”类读后续写题 Mark and Elena were finally in their seats. They had been looking forward to this trip to Rome for months, saving every cent they could. As the plane took off, the steady hum of the engines seemed to promise a long, peaceful flight. Elena put on her sleep mask, and Mark adjusted his headphones, ready to watch a movie and relax. “We finally made it, honey,” Mark said, leaning back with a sigh of relief. But the peace didn’t last long. Just after the pilot turned off the seat belt sign, a baby began to cry in the row behind them. It wasn’t just a soft whimper; it was a loud, sharp cry that echoed through the small cabin. Mark took off his headphones and frowned. He looked at his watch and then at Elena, his face showing his frustration. Around them, other passengers were starting to whisper and glance back with annoyed expressions. The calm mood of the flight had disappeared. Removing the sleep mask, Elena turned around and saw a young woman traveling alone. She looked completely exhausted. With one hand, she was trying to rock the baby, and with the other, she was searching through a messy bag for something. In her hurry, she accidentally dropped the pacifier（安抚奶嘴）, which rolled down the aisle and stopped right at Mark’s feet. The baby cried even louder. Mark stared at the pacifier. “I can’t believe this,” he muttered, reaching for the call button to complain to the flight attendant. He felt that after paying so much for the tickets, he deserved a quiet flight. However, Elena placed her hand over his, stopping him. She unbuckled her seat belt, reached down to pick up the pacifier and wiped it clean. “Do you need help?" Elena asked, handing the pacifier back to the woman. Mark's frustration melted away as he saw how Elena cared for the baby. 这道题是典型的情感转变+善意传递类读后续写题，核心是Mark从烦躁不满到被妻子Elena的善意打动，完成人物成长。 一、题目核心要素拆解 1. 原文情节梳理 人物：Mark（一开始烦躁不满）、Elena（温柔善良）、带宝宝的疲惫妈妈 冲突：Mark和Elena期待安静的罗马之旅，却被后排宝宝的哭声打破；Mark想投诉，Elena却主动伸出援手。 关键伏笔：宝宝妈妈独自带娃、疲惫不堪。安抚奶嘴掉落，哭声更大◦ Mark的不满 vs Elena的善意，形成强烈对比。 续写任务： 两段开头固定，第一段写Elena帮助妈妈的过程，第二段写Mark的转变与升华 2. 续写评分关键（必拿分点） 1). 衔接自然：严格贴合两段开头，情节和原文逻辑一致 2). 细节描写：动作、神态、语言和环境描写，避免干巴巴的叙述 3). 情感转变：Mark的情绪变化要合理，从frustration到温暖、愧疚、主动帮忙 4). 主题升华：结尾点出“善意比抱怨更能解决问题”的主题 5). 词数控制：两段共150词左右，误差不超过10% 套用结构模版 这类“冲突-善意-转变”的续写题，可以直接套用这个结构： 1. 第一段：帮助细节+对方回应+矛盾缓解例：Elena offered to hold the baby, the mother thanked her gratefully, the baby calmed down 2. 第二段：主角情绪转变+主动行动+主题升华例：Mark felt guilty, offered to help too, realized kindness is better than complaint Version 1 Do you need help?“ Elena asked, handing the pacifier back to the woman. The woman, whose eyes were red with tiredness, nodded gratefully and whispered a shaky "Thank you". She explained that her husband was away on business, and she was traveling alone with her sick baby. Seeing how she struggled to hold the baby and search through her bag at the same time, Elena gently offered to hold the baby for a while. She sat the little boy on her lap, rocking him softly and humming a quiet lullaby. Gradually, the baby stopped crying and closed his eyes, the cabin finally falling into a peaceful silence. Mark's frustration melted away as he saw how Elena cared for the baby. He felt a wave of guilt washing over him for his earlier rudeness. Without a word, he stood up and fetched a glass of warm water for the young mother. When she thanked him, he smiled and said it was nothing. The rest of the flight was no longer about his own comfort. Instead, he and Elena took turns caring for the baby, sharing smiles with the mother. As the plane landed in Rome, Mark realized that the best part of the trip wasn't the quiet he wanted, but the warmth of helping someone in need. Version 2 “Do you need help?” Elena asked, handing the pacifier back to the woman. The young mother, head drooping with exhaustion, looked up with tears of relief. “Thank you so much,” she murmured weakly, her voice trembling. Elena gently took the baby into her arms, rocking it slowly and humming a soft lullaby. “You’re doing great, little one,” she whispered, brushing the baby’s cheek with her thumb. No sooner had she done this than the baby’s sharp cries faded into quiet gurgles. Around them, the annoyed whispers of passengers died down, replaced by soft smiles. Mark’s frustration melted away as he saw how Elena cared for the baby. Tears of gratitude glistening in her eyes, the young mother let out a long sigh and leaned back in her seat. Mark leaned over, offering her a bottle of water and adjusting her overhead bag for her. It was not until then that Mark realized how a small act of kindness could turn a ruined flight into a warm, unforgettable moment. Exhausted as they were, they felt their effort worthwhile, knowing they’d turned tension into connection. That day’s experience would bloom like an everlasting flower in their memories forever. Version 3 “Do you need help?” Elena asked, handing the pacifier back to the woman. With her hands trembling and eyes bursting into tears, the young mother nodded gratefully. “Thank you so much.” She whispered in a grateful tone. Elena smiled gently and offered to hold the baby so the woman could take a rest. Tapping the baby’s back gently with her fingertips, Elena soon calmed the little baby down. The baby, having felt the steady taps, finally stopped crying and began a peaceful sleep. Having witnessed the touching scene, the passengers all relaxed their tight faces, wearing soft and understanding smiles. Mark’s frustration melted away as he saw how Elena cared for the baby. Ashamed of earlier anger, he realized that kindness could turn a stressful situation around. He leaned over to help the young woman adjust her seat and the three of them chatted softly for the rest of the flight. The cabin, once filled with annoyed whispers, was full of warm expressions. What was supposed to be a ruined trip turned into a heartwarming moment that Mark would remember for a long time. By the time the plane landed in Rome, Mark learned that a little compassion and patience could make a difference. Version 4 "Do you need help?" Elena asked, handing the pacifier back to the woman. The young mother looked up, her eyes red and tired. "I'm so sorry for the noise," she said quietly. “My babe won't stop crying, and I can't find his milk." Elena smiled warmly. "Let me hold him for a moment while you get organized." Carefully, she took the baby, gently rocking him in her arms. To everyone's surprise, the baby slowly calmed down, his crying fading into soft breaths. Version 4 Mark’s frustration melted away as he saw how Elena cared for the baby. Watching his wife patiently hum, he felt a shift within himself. He unbuckled his seat belt and turned to the mother. "Do you need some warm water?" he offered. The woman nodded gratefully. Soon, other passengers joined in—offering a blanket or snacks. The cabin, once filled with annoyance, now felt warm and connected. Mark smiled at Elena. Sometimes, a little kindness could change everything. 读后续写微技能之“说” 读 后 续 写 17 use accurate verbs 第1类：轻声说 whisper (低声说出) 常指耳语窃窃私语 murmur/mutter (喃喃自语) 多指不易听到的低语 gossip 小声地悄悄地传开,八卦 moan/complain/grumble　 抱怨着说 mumble/grunt 咕哝 comfort 安慰说 18 His voice died away in a __________. 他的声音渐渐变为了小声低语。 He turned and _________something to the professor 他转身对教授小声说了些什么。 There has been much ________ about the possible reasons for his absence 关于他缺席的原因有很多传言。 whisper murmured gossip use accurate verbs whisper murmur/mutter gossip moan/complain/grumble　 mumble/grunt comfort 19 I _______that I was hurt。 我抱怨着说，自己受伤了。 Jack _______his responses to the questions。 杰克嘟哝着说出问题的答案。 He ________so badly that they couldn’t understand him。 他喃喃自语，以至于大家都没理解他的意思。 moaned mumbled muttered use accurate verbs whisper murmur/mutter gossip moan/complain/grumble　 mumble/grunt comfort 20 use accurate verbs 第2类：大声说 call 喊叫 cry　 哭喊 shout 大喊 scream 惊吓地尖叫 yell 喊叫着说 roar 咆哮 growl 低沉的怒吼 exclaim 惊叫 21 She _______out the answer。 她大声喊出答案。 The boys ________as they dived into the cold water。 当男孩们把手伸进冷水里时，他们尖叫起来。 “OUT!” _______Uncle Vernon slamming the kitchen door behind them. “出去！”弗农姨夫咆哮道,砰的一声关上了厨房门。 shouted screamed use accurate verbs call cry　 shout scream yell roar growl exclaim roared 22 use accurate verbs 第3类：建议说 advise/propose/suggest/ offer/recommend 建议 argue　 认为 caution/warn　 警告 23 I would strongly _______against going out on your own. 我要极力奉劝你别单独外出。 I ______that smoking, by its very nature, is addictive. 我认为抽烟从本质上说就具有成瘾性。 Peter ___________the children to be careful。 皮特提醒孩子们注意安全。 advise argue use accurate verbs cautioned advise/ propose /suggest/ offer/ recommend argue　 caution/ warn　 24 use accurate verbs 第4类：权威说 announce/declare　 宣布 claim/state　 声称 order　 命令 25 The teacher __________the exam at the end of the week。 老师宣布，考试在周末进行。 Jane ________ her rights as a voter。 简以选举人的身份宣告了自己的权力。 The police _________the protesters away from the area。 警察命令抗议者撤离。 announced declared use accurate verbs ordered announce/ declare　 claim/state　 order　 26 use accurate verbs 第5类：问与答 ask / inquire/ enquire　 询问 reply/answer/respond　 回答 27 use accurate verbs 第6类：结巴地说 stammer/stutter/stumble 　 结结巴巴地说 Before Tony could stammer out his thanks, she walked away. 没等托尼结结巴巴地说出一声谢谢，她已经走开了。 28 use accurate verbs 第7类：突然说 blurt　　 　 （脱口而出） gasp　 (喘着气说话）喘气，倒吸气 snap （厉声说） 29 Alison _________out the answer。 艾莉森将答案脱口而出。 “I’m a what?” ________ Harry. 哈利倒抽一口冷气：“我是一个什么？” blurted gasped use accurate verbs blurt　　 　 gasp　 snap 30 use accurate verbs 第8类：其他“说” add 补充说道 protest　 抗议道 retort 反驳道 sob 哭诉道 explain 解释道 agree 同意地说 state 陈述道 comfort 安慰道 promise 承诺道 assure 保证道 insist 坚持说 repeat 重复地说 gasp 气喘吁吁地说 chorus 齐声说 groan 呻吟着说 continue 继续说道 31 use accurate verbs 1.Hearing this, the tree smiled with relief, ________: “My dying trunk is the right one for you. Please come here and have a seat.” 2.Omar _________ with pain and opened his eyes, “What’s the matter, son?” 3.Omar moistened his lips and ________ in a cracked voice, “Help! Help! I’m down here.” adding groaned shouted 32 use accurate verbs 4.She greeted James and _________, “Are you ready for our field trip?” James didn’t respond. 5.I picked up the ball one last time and _________endlessly with children about the sudden ball, “Please just come to get the damn ball.” 6.A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, _______ that he had spotted the murderer. inquired grumbled declaring 33 use accurate verbs 7. “Hi, Landy. I’m sorry about the spaghetti thing.” Catherine __________an apology, her face reddening. 8. “Here, Mum! Here!” Reuben __________in a high-pitched voice as he ran to her side. 9.Next, he turned to Mike and _______, “Give me a rock!” 10.Then Ashley _________, “Well, let’s go and see!” murmured exclaimed yelled continued 34 use accurate verbs 11.She __________, “I’m your secret friend and I’m sorry about the gift.” 12.“Nobody could understand me!” Andy ________, burying his face in his hands. 13.She tiptoed into the room and ___________to me, “I looked at every plant and I know I got the best one!” admitted sobbed whispered 35 use accurate verbs 1.“How dare she,” he _______________________.（轻声嘀咕道） 2.Omar _______________ （痛苦地呻吟）and opened his eyes, “What’s the matter, son?” 3.Omar moistened his lips and ________________________, （用嘶哑的声音高喊）“Help! Help! I’m down here.” muttered under his breath groaned with pain shouted in a cracked voice 36 use accurate verbs 4.With a violent effort she conquered her grief and replied in a calm voice, “Ben _______________________ to me.”（结结巴巴地向某人道歉） 5.Rose _______________________________ for being naughty.（轻轻/重重责备某人） 6.The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody ______________________________. （声嘶力竭地大喊） stammered out an apology scolded the child gently/ sharply shouting at the top of his voice 37 add proper adverbials 1 sb said + adverbs 2 sb said + prepositional phrases 38 sb said + adverbs sadly 伤心地 briskly 轻快地 bitterly 伤心地 sweetly 欢快地 gloomily 忧郁地 brightly 高高兴兴地 sourly 不友善地 proudly 骄傲地 politely 礼貌地 softly 轻轻地 dreamily 神情恍惚地 gently 温柔地 quietly 轻声地 eagerly 渴望地 add proper adverbials 39 sb said + adverbs vaguely 心不在焉含糊地 thoughtfully 若有所思地 lightly 漫不经心地 meekly 温顺地;逆来顺受地 triumphantly 得意洋洋地 hoarsely 嘶哑地说道 slowly 慢慢地 sternly 严厉地 add proper adverbials 40 sb said + prepositional phrases with a smile 笑着 with absolute certainty 斩钉截铁地 with false enthusiasm 故作热情地 with great seriousness　 特别严肃地 with sudden resolution 突然坚决地 with passion 充满激情地 add proper adverbials 41 sb said + prepositional phrases in a low tone/voice 低声地 in a soft/gentle/mild tone 用温柔的语气说 in a soft voice 以温柔的口吻 in an excited/angry voice　 以兴奋/生气的口吻 in a whisper 低声说 in surprise 惊奇地 add proper adverbials 42 sb said + prepositional phrases through gritted teeth 咬牙切齿地 mutter between teeth 低声含糊地说 roar with laughter 大笑着说 let out a scream of horror　 发出恐惧的尖叫 words of comfort 安慰的话 utter a cry of joy/grief 发出快乐/悲痛的叫声 add proper adverbials 43 说着，泪如雨下→ said through tears "We thought she was dead," the aunt said through a shower of tears. “我们以为她死了，”婶母说着，泪如雨下。 "Mom," the little boy said through his tears, "you just don't understand." “妈妈，”小男孩含着泪水说道，“你就是不明白。” 44 坚定地说→ said without the slightest hesitation He replied that everything would be smooth without the slightest hesitation. 他坚定地说：“一切都会好起来”。 45 大声呼喊→ shout at the top of one's lungs The desperate couple shouted to the giant bear at the top of their lungs. 那对绝望的夫妻冲着这个巨大的熊大声呼喊。 46 用……语气说→ say in a ...tone/voice "Don't called the cop, or..." The robber said in a threatening voice.“别叫警察，否则···”强盗用恐吓的声音说。 "Everyone plays a significant role, sweetie." Mom said in a tender tone. “每个人都扮演着重要的角色，亲爱的。”妈妈温柔地说。 47 打断说 → cut in/ break in "Forget it!” she cut in. “算了吧！”她插嘴道。 She longed to break in on their conversation but didn't want to appear rude. 她很想打断他们的谈话，但又不愿显得粗鲁。 48 $