Unit 5 作文讲义 2025-2026学年冀教版英语七年级下册

冀教版7下unit 5作文专练 Write about the changes in your neighborhood 题目一：书信（给外地朋友的信） 题目： 假设你是李华，你小时候在外地生活，后来搬回了家乡。你的朋友Tom想知道你的家乡有什么变化。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你家乡社区的变化。内容包括： 1. 说明你的家乡在哪里，你离开了多久； 2. 描述家乡发生的变化（至少2点，如新修了路、建了公园、老房子变新楼等）； 3. 谈谈你对这些变化的感受（喜欢哪些变化，或怀念哪些老样子）。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写这封信的核心是：变化要说具体、感受要真实。“写变化”对初一学生来说，关键是教会他们用对比的方法：过去是什么样，现在是什么样。比如“以前这条路很窄，现在变宽了”。同时要引导他们表达自己的真实感受——是高兴还是怀念？这样文章才会有感情，而不是干巴巴地罗列变化。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：介绍家乡和离开的时间 先告诉朋友你家乡在哪里，以及你离开多久了。例如：“My hometown is a small town in Hunan Province. I moved away when I was six, and now I am back.”“I lived in another city for three years, and I just came back last month.”这段要让读者知道“你离开了一段时间，所以你才能看到变化”。 第二段：描述具体的变化 至少写出2点变化，每一点都要用“过去 vs 现在”的对比。可以从这些方面写：道路（窄→宽、土路→柏油路）、建筑（旧房子→新楼房、空地→商场）、环境（脏乱→干净、多了公园和花坛）、设施（多了路灯、健身器材、图书馆）。例如：“There used to be an empty field near my home. Now it is a beautiful park with a playground and many trees.”“The streets were very dirty before, but now they are clean and there are flowers everywhere.”对比越具体，读者越能感受到变化。 第三段：谈谈感受 写出你对这些变化的真实感受。可以喜欢变化：“I am very happy to see these changes. Now life is more convenient.”“The park is my favorite place now. I go there every weekend.”也可以怀念以前的样子：“I am happy about the new buildings, but I also miss the old days when we played on the empty field.”两种感受都可以，关键是真实。最后可以简单总结，比如“Everything is changing, but I still love my hometown.” 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。写变化时常用“There used to be...”“Before, it was... Now, it is...”“...has changed a lot.”等句型。可以用“I was surprised to see...”来表达看到变化时的惊讶。 重要句型与词组 · I am back in my hometown now. It has changed a lot. · I lived in... for... years, and now I am back. · There used to be..., but now there is... · Before, it was... Now, it is much more... · The biggest change is that... · I am happy to see these changes because... · I also miss the old days when... · Everything is different now, but I still love my neighborhood. · used to, empty field, a big change, more convenient, miss the old days 高分范文 Dear Tom, I am back in my hometown now. I lived in another city for three years with my parents, and we just moved back last month. My hometown has changed a lot. I was surprised to see so many new things. The biggest change is the new park near my home. There used to be an empty field with tall grass. Children never played there because it was dirty. But now, it is a beautiful park. There are green trees, colorful flowers, and a small playground. I go there to run and play every weekend. Another change is the road. Before, the road was very narrow and had many holes. Now it is wide and smooth. Cars and buses can pass easily, and it is much safer to walk. I am very happy to see these changes. Life is more convenient and fun now. But I also miss the old days a little. Everything is different, but I still love my hometown. I hope you can come and visit someday. I will show you the new park. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：倡议书（呼吁共同维护社区环境） 题目： 假设你是社区小志愿者，你发现社区虽然变漂亮了，但有些人不爱护环境，乱扔垃圾、踩踏草坪。请你以社区小志愿者的名义写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家共同维护社区环境。内容包括： 1. 描述社区的变化（变得干净了、新建了花园等）； 2. 指出现在存在的问题（至少2点，如垃圾乱扔、草坪被踩等）； 3. 提出具体建议（至少2条），呼吁大家一起保护社区环境。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书，属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。这份倡议书的核心是：先说变化多美好，再说问题多可惜，最后说我们应该怎么做。初一学生写这个题目的难点在于“指出问题”时要注意语气——不能只批评，要用“我们做得还不够好，改进后会更好”的方式去说。倡议书的目的不是指责，而是号召大家一起行动。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：描述社区的美好变化 先写出社区变得更好了，让读者感到“我们的社区变漂亮了，这是好事”。例如：“Our neighborhood has become much cleaner and more beautiful. New flowers have been planted and the roads are wider now.”“A new garden was built near the library. Many families go there to relax.”这段是铺垫，让读者对社区产生喜爱和自豪感，为后面的呼吁做准备。 第二段：指出存在的问题 至少写出2个问题，语气要客观、委婉。不要直接说“你们太坏了”，而是说“Some people are not careful about...”“However, we can still see some problems.”例如：“Some people throw rubbish on the ground instead of putting it in the bin”“People walk on the grass and make it flat, even though there is a sign that says ‘Keep off the grass’”“Some children pick flowers from the garden.”问题要具体，这样建议才能有针对性。 第三段：提出建议并呼吁 至少写出2条具体的建议，要简单可行。例如：“Please always put your rubbish into the bin. If you see rubbish on the ground, you can help pick it up.”“Please do not walk on the grass. Use the path instead.”“If you see someone picking flowers, you can kindly tell them to stop.”最后用号召句结尾，例如：“Let’s work together to keep our neighborhood beautiful. Everyone can help. Join us and make a difference!” 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear neighbors,”或“Dear friends,”，结尾用号召性语言。语气要礼貌、积极，多用“Please...”而不是“Don’t...”。指出问题时可以用“We can still see some problems that need our attention”这样温和的表达。最后号召时用“Let’s...”这样有感染力的句子。 重要句型与词组 · Our neighborhood has changed a lot and become more beautiful. · We are all proud of these wonderful changes. · However, we still have some problems that need our attention. · Some people... This is bad for our environment. · Please remember to... · Let’s work together to... · Every small action makes our neighborhood better. · Join us and help keep our community clean and beautiful. · throw rubbish, keep off the grass, pick flowers, put rubbish in the bin, work together 高分范文 Dear neighbors, Our neighborhood has changed a lot and become much more beautiful. The roads are wider and cleaner. New trees and flowers have been planted. A small garden was built near the supermarket. Many families go there to walk and relax after dinner. We are all proud of these wonderful changes. However, we still have some problems that need our attention. Some people throw rubbish on the ground instead of putting it into the bins. This makes our beautiful streets look dirty. Also, some people walk on the grass in the garden, even though there is a sign that says “Please keep off the grass.” When too many people walk on the grass, it will die. These small bad habits hurt our neighborhood. So let’s work together to keep our neighborhood clean and beautiful. Please always put your rubbish into the bin. If you see rubbish on the ground, you can help pick it up. Please do not walk on the grass. Use the path instead. Let’s be good neighbors and take care of our home. Join us and help make our neighborhood even better. Every small action makes a big difference! A Young Volunteer 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $