Unit 6 作文专练 2025-2026学年冀教版七年级英语下册

冀教版7下unit 6作文专练 Describe how to make a handicraft 题目一：书信（教朋友做手工） 题目： 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对做手工艺品很感兴趣，他想学折纸鹤（paper crane）。请你给他写一封回信，教他如何制作。内容包括： 1. 说明做纸鹤需要准备什么材料（如一张正方形纸）； 2. 描述制作步骤（至少3步，用First, Next, Then, Finally等词）； 3. 鼓励他尝试，并表达希望看到他作品的心情。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写“教做手工”的核心是：材料清楚、步骤清晰、语言简单。折纸是学生比较熟悉的手工，步骤可以用顺序词（First, Next, Then, Finally）来组织，让读者容易跟着做。写信的语气要耐心、友好，像在面对面教朋友一样。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：说明材料和准备 先回应朋友的请求，然后告诉他需要准备什么材料。例如：“I’m happy to teach you how to make a paper crane. You only need a piece of square paper. Any color is fine.” 材料要简单，让朋友觉得很容易准备。 第二段：描述制作步骤 至少写出3个步骤，用顺序词连接。例如： · First, fold the paper in half to make a triangle, then open it. · Next, fold it in half the other way to make another triangle, and open it again. Now you have a cross shape on the paper. · Then, push the sides in to make a smaller square (this is called a “base”). · Finally, fold the two sides to the center to make the wings, then pull the head and tail up carefully. 步骤要简化，不要太复杂。可以省略一些细节，因为初一学生无法用英语描述太精确的折纸步骤。重点是让对方明白大致怎么做，并感受到乐趣。 第三段：鼓励并表达期待 鼓励朋友去尝试，告诉他即使第一次不成功也没关系。例如：“Don’t worry if it doesn’t look perfect the first time. Just keep trying. You can watch videos online to help you.” 最后表达希望看到他作品的心情：“I can’t wait to see your paper crane. Please send me a photo when you finish.” 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。描述步骤时多用顺序词（First, Next, Then, After that, Finally）。可以用“make sure that...”提醒注意事项。语气要耐心、亲切。 重要句型与词组 · I’m happy to teach you how to make... · You will need a piece of square paper. · First, fold the paper in half. · Next, unfold it and fold it the other way. · Then, push the sides to make a smaller square. · Finally, fold the wings and pull the head up. · Don’t worry if it’s not perfect. Practice makes perfect. · Have fun and let me know how it goes. · I can’t wait to see your work. · paper crane, fold, unfold, square paper, step by step 高分范文 Dear Tom, I’m happy to teach you how to make a paper crane. It is a traditional Japanese origami handicraft. You only need one thing: a piece of square paper. Any color is fine, but red or white looks beautiful. Here are the steps. First, fold the paper in half to make a triangle. Then open it and fold it the other way to make another triangle. Now you will have a cross shape on the paper. Next, push the two sides toward the center to make a smaller square. This is called the “base”. Then, fold the right and left corners of the top layer to the center. Turn it over and do the same on the other side. Finally, fold the two long parts up to make the wings. Pull the head and tail out carefully. Now you have a paper crane! Don’t worry if your first crane is not perfect. Just keep trying. You can also watch a video to help you. Have fun making it, and please send me a photo when you finish. I can’t wait to see your paper crane! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：申请书（申请加入手工社团） 题目： 假设你是王小明，学校手工社团正在招募新成员。你想加入社团，学习更多手工艺品制作。请你给社团负责老师写一封申请书，内容包括： 1. 说明你想加入社团的意愿和原因； 2. 介绍你已有的手工技能（至少1种，如折纸、编织、剪纸等）和一次成功经历； 3. 说明如果被录取，你会努力学习并帮助他人，表达期待。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为申请书，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写申请书的核心是：态度诚恳、证明自己有能力、承诺会努力。学生需要说明自己为什么想加入，并且展示自己已经会一点手工（哪怕很简单），证明自己不是一时兴起。最后要表达对社团的珍惜和贡献的愿望。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：说明意愿和原因 直接写出你想加入手工社团，并说明原因。例如：“I am writing to apply for the Handicraft Club. I really love making things by hand.” 原因可以写：“I want to learn more skills like paper cutting and clay modeling”“I think making handicrafts is fun and relaxing”。态度要积极、诚恳。 第二段：介绍已有的手工技能和经历 至少写出一项你会的手工技能，并写一次成功的小经历。例如：“I already know how to make paper cranes. Last month, I taught my little brother to make one, and he was very happy.”“I can make simple bracelets with colorful strings. I made one for my mom on her birthday, and she loved it.” 不需要很复杂的手工，重要的是展示你对手工的热爱和一点点基础。 第三段：承诺和期待 说明如果被录取，你会怎么做。例如：“If I am lucky enough to join the club, I will work hard and learn from others. I will also help new members who have difficulties.” 最后表达期待：“I would be very happy if you could give me this chance. Thank you for considering my application.” 三、语言与格式提醒 申请书格式：称呼（Dear Mr./Ms. + 姓氏 或 Dear Teacher）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely）、签名。语气要礼貌、自信、谦虚。多用“I would like to...”“I am able to...”“I promise I will...”等句式。不要夸大自己的技能，诚实最重要。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to apply for the Handicraft Club. · I am very interested in making things by hand. · I already know how to make... · For example, I once made a... for my... · I enjoy it because it makes me feel proud and relaxed. · If I am accepted, I will learn carefully and help others. · I would be very happy to be a member of your club. · Thank you for considering my application. · learn new skills, paper folding, be good with hands, a sense of achievement 高分范文 Dear teacher, I am writing to apply for the Handicraft Club. I really love making things by hand. I think handicraft is not only fun but also helps me relax after school. I want to learn more skills, such as paper cutting and clay modeling. I already know how to make paper cranes. Last month, I made ten paper cranes in different colors and hung them on a string. I gave it to my grandma as a birthday gift. She was so happy that she put it above her bed. That experience made me feel very proud. I also learned to make simple bracelets with strings. I believe I am good with my hands and can learn new handicrafts quickly. If I am lucky enough to join the club, I promise I will come to every meeting and listen carefully. I will practice hard and help other members who may find some steps difficult. I would be very happy to be part of your team. Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Wang Xiaoming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $